2023届高考英语读后续写万能模板以及范文讲义

读后续写固定模板一、读后续写第一自然段第1句：情感描写，使用情感万能句：sb.feltagreatsenseof+情绪名词+wellingupinsb'sheartandsurgingthroughsb.表示“某人感到一股强烈的……在内心升腾、奔涌。”【分析】wellup表示“涌出。我们可以这样记忆well表示“好”以外，还可以表示“井”。“涌出”是用到T“井”这个含义。surge表示“汹涌”。这个句子的亮点是后半句wellingupinsb'sheartandsurgingthroughsb.,把情绪的描写形象化，具体化了。表示情绪的名词：①表不高兴delight高兴,joy高兴、relief欣慰，②表示激动excitement兴奋surprise/amazement惊讶③表示伤心失望sorrow悲伤grief悲伤disappointment失望depression/frustration沮丧sadness哀伤annoyance烦'庙④表示害怕fear/scare/fright/horror/terror⑤表示生气anger/rage愤怒⑥表示忧虑anxiety、worry,concern着急tension紧张⑦其他类guilt内疚，shame,羞耻satisfaction；茜足、puzzlement迷惑，regret后'悔"puzzlement/confusion困惑tiredness/exhaustion疲惫embarrassment尴尬gratitude感激relief如释重负shame羞愧练习1：Sunny感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。Sunnyfeltagreatsenseofhorrorwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.练习2：Jessica感到一股强烈的高兴，在她心中升腾，奔涌。Jessicafeltagreatsenseofdelightwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.第2句：细节描写，使用非谓语结构：⑴doingA,主语+谓语B(主语+谓语A,doingB)Burningwithanger,heglaredatmewithhisfrighteningeyes,yelling,"You'resuchanidiot.”(2)HavingdoneA...,主语+谓语B 已经・・・・,某人,•…Havingqueuedfor3hours,hewastoldthatthetickethadbeensoldout.(3)doneA,主语+谓语B,doingCEncouragedbytheteacher,Lucyraisedherhand,whispering,“Iwanttohaveatry.”第3句：细节描写，使用with复合结构Jennywalkedslowlytothefront,withherlegstremblingandherheartbeatingfast.Heturnedaround,withtearsrolling/streamingdownhischeeks.Thegirlstoodthere,shivering/tremblingwithcold,withdirtonherfaceandhair.第4句：细节描写，使用倒装句Nosoonerhadsbdonethansbdid【原句1Themomentmymotherfinishedherperformance,theaudiencebrokeintorapturousapplause.【咒’级］Nosoonerhadmymotherfinishedherperformancethantheaudiencebrokeintorapturousapplause.注意事项：l.haddone比did先发生2.Nosooner放句首第5句：过渡衔接句，使用时间状语从句或者定语从句或形容词作状语：如when,while,as,before,after引导的时间状语从句©WhenIarrivedthere,Iwalkedtothedoorandknocked.②AsIwaitedatthestop,Iheardabignoise.形容词作状语Thegirlstoodthere,staringatthefood,coldandhungry.Theysatonthebeach,enjoyingthesunshine,relaxedandhappy.定语从句Theyoungestkidwantedtogetapresent,buthewasrefusedbyhismother,whichmadehimcry.二、读后续写第二自然段第1句：情感描写，使用独立主格(with)+n+doing,一句话例如：l.Tearsstreamingdownmyfaceandblurringmyvision,Iwasthrownintotheabyss(深渊)ofgriefandsorrow.2.Laughterbubbling(洋溢，涌起)upinsidehim,herantowardshismother,第2句：结局，使用Notuntil结构［原句］Thevillagersdidn'trealizehowseriousthepollutionwasuntilallthefishdiedintheriver.［改写］Notuntilallthefishdiedintheriver,didthevillagersrealizehowseriousthepollutionwas.第3句：所感Exhausted/tired/coldasiwas,ifeltmytimeandeffortworthwhilejorIhavemademyowncontributiontoXXX.第4句：所悟Fromthisexperience/storyjhavelearnedthat/wecanlearnthat①XXXmightgoaway,butYYYendures©hardshipmightexist,butYYYendures第5句：难忘Thatday/experiencewassounforgettablethatitwouldstayinmymemoryforever.补充：可以在句子前面，适当的加上过渡词，来表示时间、地点和逻辑，使整篇的文章更加的立体丰富。immediately,WithouthesitationAfterashortwhile,afterthat,thenOnarrivalTwohourslaterAtthesightofwhathadhappendWithalltheworkaloneHowever;instead2023年聊城市高考模拟试题续写练习第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mrowwwwl!ThecatmeowedangrilyassheclawedatJennifer'sarm,drawingathinlineofblood.Justasquicklyasshestruckoutwithherclaw,theagile(灵活的)orangeand-whitecatleapedbacktoherhidingspaceunderJennifer'sbed.Fromthedarknessunderneaththebed,twogreeneyesproducedbrightlight,staringbackoutatJennifer.Jenniferwasstartingtofeeldiscouragedinamajorway.Shewasneveroneforgivingup;butithadbeenseveraldayslikethissincesheadoptedthecat一Darla-fromtheanimalshelter,strugglingtowinovertheyoungcafsaffectionthroughtreatsandsoftandgentlewhispers.Itwasduringhersummerbreak,soshehadplentyoftimetokeeptryingtowinovertheanimal.Butitwasn'ttimethatwastheissue-itwasJennifer'semotionsthatwerequicklyfading.IthadbeentwoyearssinceJennifer'sbelovedbrowntabby（斑猫）-Marlin-passedaway.Shenevercouldquitegetovertheshockandemptinesswhichremainedinherheartherechildlikejoyoncethrived.MarlinhadbeenJennifer'sfaithfulfriendandlovingcompanionroughallthepainsandtrialsofgrowingup.AfterMarlindied,thingswereneverquitethesameagainforJennifer.ItwasthefirstrealdeathtopierceJennifer'sheartandsignaledtheendofhercarefreechildhood.ShedesperatelywantedDarlatoloveherthewayMarlinhadandforeetoloveDarlajustthesame;butwhatwasJennifersupposedtodonow?Thecutonherarmwasallshehadtohowforhereffort.Jennifersatonthefloor,buryingherfaceinherhands,andherbodytrembledasshesoftlybegantocry.注意：1续写词数应为150左右Afterafewminutes,Jennifernoticedastrangefeeling-fur.Jenniferthenreachedoutherhandtowardthecat.参考范文（模板书写）：Afterafewminute,Jennifernoticedastrangefeeling-fur.第1句情感描写：Jenniferfeltagreatsenseofdelightwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.第2句乡田节描写：HavingstaredatDarlaforaminute,sheraisedherheadandkeptsilentforawhile.第3句乡田节描写：Nosoonerhadshemadeattempttoapproachthelittlecreaturethansherealizedthatshewasthepersonwhoneedcomfort.第4句名田节描写：Sheturnedaround,withtearsstreamingdownhercheeks