读后续写：归还雨伞学案-高三英语写作

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学生稿

第二节:读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段。使之构

成一篇完整的短文。

StepIReadthefollowingpassageandunderline5to10key

words.

1wasasinglemotherinmy30swholiveddownandoutwithmy

daughterPeggyinasmallapartmentstrugglinghardtomakeour

needsmeet.

Oneday,1headedtothedowntownforaninterview,Isatdownin

thestreetcar,andthereagainstthoseatwasabeautifulsilkumbrella

withasilverhandledecoratedwithgoldscrollsamongwhichthere

wasanamecarved.

OnimpulseIdeterminedtofindtheownermyself.Igotoffthe

streetcarintheheavyrainandthankfullyopenedtheumbrellato

protectmyself.ThenIsearchedatelephonebookforthename.I

founditimmediatelyandcalledit,waitingpatiently,andthenalady

answered.

“Yes,"shesaidinsurprise,withextremeexcitement."Itwasmy

umbrellawhichhadbeenstolenayearago."

Soappealingwasherpleasurethat1forgotIwaslookingforajob

andwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.Shelooktheumbrellawith

tearyeyes,explainingwithchokingvoicethattheumbrellawas

givenbyherparents,nowdead.Herhappinessatretrieving（找

回）thisspecialpossessionwassuchthattohaveacceptedherreward

wouldhavespoiledsomething.So1refusedherofferandleft.

Thefollowingmonthswerehard.Icanonlyobtaintemporary

employment,forasmallsalary.Whatwasworse,Ihadjustloslmy

lastjobbeforeChristmas,withonlyfifteendollarsleft.Unlessa

miraclehappened,IwouldbehomelessinJanuary,foodlessand

jobless.1hadprayedsteadilyforweeks,andtherehadbeenno

answerbutthiscoldnessanddarkness.

TheairwasfullofChristmasmerriment,withthebellsringingand

childrenshoutinginthebitterduskoftheevening.Butthereshould

benoChristmasforme,Iknew,nogiftsnoremembrance

whatsoever.

Thinkingofthis,Icouldn'tcontrolmytearsonmywayhome,but1

managedasmilesoIcouldgreetmylittledaughter.Sheopenedthe

doorformeandthrowherselfinmyarms,dreamingjoyouslyand

demandingdesirablyforherChristmasgift.There1stood,frozen

overwhelmedbymisery.

注意

1.续写词数应为150左右：

2请按如下格式在谷题卡的相应位置作答。

Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyranfleetlytoanswerit,

callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.

Abruptly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.

StepII原文好词好句积累

StepIIISummarizethepassagewithin60words.Trytoinclude

thekeywordsyoulist.

StepIVDrawtheoutlineofthetwoparagraphsaccordingtothe

givensentences:(WritedownthekeywordseitherinEnglishor

Chinese.

StepVReadthesample,andfillintheblanks.

Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyranfleetlytoanswerit,

callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.ThenIhearda

man's(heart)voicecomingandwenttothedoor.Hewas

a(deliver)manwithhisarmsfullparcels."This

isamistake^^,Isaid,buthereadthenametheparcelsand

theywereme.Whenhehadgone,Ididn't

knowtodo.Subsequently,Peggyand1satonthe

floor,(look)ateach

other(unbelievable).asurprise!Isearchedfor

thenameofthe(send).

Abruptly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.Ipicked

upthenote,read“Thanksforyour(return)the

umbrella.MerryChristmas!”Itwastheladysentusthese

parcels.(hold)thenotetightly,Iwastheverge

oftears,astreamofwarmthspreadingacrossmy

body.thechillyChristmas,IforgotIhadno

moneytherentandonlyfifteendollarsinmypocket.We

justsatinoursmallapartment(unwrap)thegifts

oneoneinhappiness.Asweetpeacefloodedintomelike

a(bless),whichmademe(hope)again.

StepVIFinishyourwriting.

StepVII检测

A.“添枝加叶”(扩写句子)

1.1gotoffthestreetcarintheheavyrainandopened

theumbrellatoprotectmyself.

2.“Yes,"shesaidinsurprise,withexcitement.

3.Shetooktheumbrellawitheyes,explaining

withvoicethattheumbrellawasgivenbyherparents,

nowdead.

4.Sheopenedthedoorformeandthrowherselfinmyarms,

dreaminganddemandingforher

Christmasgift.

5.ThenIheardaman'svoicecomingandwenttothe

door.

6.Subsequently,Peggyand1satonthefloor,lookingateach

other.

7.Holdingthenote,Iwasonthevergeof

tears,acrossmybody.

8.Apeacefloodedintomelikea,

whichmademehopefulagain.

B.综合填空

1.1satdowninthestreetcar,andtheretheseatwasa

beautifulsilkumbrellawithasilverhandle

(decorate)withgoldscrolls(卷轴)amongtherewasa

name(carve).

2.Soappealingwasherpleasure1forgotIwaslooking

forajobandwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.

3.There1stood,(freeze),overwhelmedbymisery.

教师稿

第二节:读后续写(满分25分)

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段。使之构

成一篇完整的短文。

StepIReadthefollowingpassageandunderline5to10keywords.

1wasasinglemotherinmy30swholiveddownandoutwithmy

daughterPeggyinasmallapartmentstrugglinghardtomakeour

needsmeet.

Oneday,1headedtothedowntownforaninterview.Isatdownin

thestreetcar,andthereagainsttheseatwasabeautifulsilkumbrella

withasilverhandledecoratedwithgoldscrollsamongwhichthere

wasanamecarved.

OnimpulseIdeterminedtofindtheownermyself.Igotoffthe

streetcarintheheavyrainandthankfullyopenedtheumbrellato

protectmyself.ThenIsearchedatelephonebookforthename.I

founditimmediatelyandcalledit,waitingpatiently,andthenalady

answered.

“Yes,"shesaidinsurprise,withextremeexcitement."Itwasmy

umbrellawhichhadbeenstolenayearago."

Soappealingwasherpleasurethat1forgotIwaslookingforajob

andwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.Shetooktheumbrellawith

tearyeyes,explainingwithchokingvoicethattheumbrellawas

givenbyherparents,nowdead.Herhappinessatretrieving（找

回）thisspecialpossessionwassuchthattohaveacceptedherreward

wouldhavespoiledsomething.So1refusedherofferandleft.

Thefollowingmonthswerehard.Icouldonlyobtaintemporary

employment,forasmallsalary.Whatwasworse,Ihadjustlostmy

lastjobbeforeChristmas,withonlyfifteendollarsleft.Unlessa

miraclehappened,IwouldbehomelessinJanuary,foodlessand

jobless.1hadprayedsteadilyforweeks,andtherehadbeenno

answerbutthiscoldnessanddarkness.

TheairwasfullofChristmasmerriment,withthebellsringingand

childrenshoutinginthebitterduskoftheevening.Butthereshould

benoChristmasforme,Iknew,nogiftsnoremembrance

whatsoever.

Thinkingofthis,Icouldn'tcontrolmytearsonmywayhome,but1

managedasmilesoIcouldgreetmylittledaughter.Sheopenedthe

doorformeandthrowherselfinmyarms,dreamingjoyouslyand

demandingdesirablyforherChristmasgift.There1stood,

frozen,overwhelmedbymisery.

注意

1.续写词数应为150左右：

2请按如下格式在谷题卡的相应位置作答。

Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyranfleetlytoanswerit,

callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.

Abruptly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.

StepII原文好词好句积累

1.inmy30s

2.downandout

3.makeourneedsmeet

4.onimpulse

5.obtaintemporaryemployment

6.Whatwasworse

7.manageasmile

8.throwherselfinmyarms

1.在我30多岁的时候

2.穷困潦倒

3.满足我们的需求

4.冲动

5.临时就业

6.更糟的是

7.勉强一笑

8.扑到我怀里

1.1satdowninthestreetcar,andthereagainsttheseatwasa

beautifulsilkumbrellawithasilverhandledecoratedwithgold

scrolls（卷轴）amongwhichtherewasanamecarved.

2.1gotoffthestreetcarintheheavyrainandthankfullyopenedthe

umbrellatoprotectmyself.

3.“Yes,"shesaidinsurprise,withextremeexcitement.

4.Soappealingwasherpleasurethat1forgotIwaslookingforajob

andwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.Shetooktheumbrellawith

tearyeyes,explainingwithchokingvoicethattheumbrellawas

givenbyherparents,nowdead.

5.Sheopenedthedoorformeandthrowherselfinmyarms,

dreamingjoyouslyanddemandingdesirablyforherChristmasgift.

6.There1stood,frozen,overwhelmedbymisery.

L我坐在有轨电车上，靠着座位有一把漂亮的丝绸伞，银柄上装

饰着金色卷轴，其中刻着一个名字。

2.我在大雨中下车，感激地打开雨伞保护自己。

3.“是的，”她惊讶地说，极度兴奋。

4.她的快乐如此吸引人，以至于我忘了我在找工作，直接去了她

的小房子。她含泪拿起雨伞，用哽咽的声音解释说，雨伞是她父

母给她的，现在已经死了。

5.她为我打开门，扑到我的怀里，快乐地梦想着，渴望得到她的

圣诞礼物。

6.我站在那里，冻僵了，痛苦不堪。

StepIIISummarizethepassagewithin60words.Trytoincludethe

keywordsyoulist.

Oneday,XwasheadingtothedowntownforaninterviewwhenI

pickedupabeautifulumbrellaandmanagedtofindtheowner,

alady,whohaditstolenayearbeforeandwasmorethangladto

recoverit.Thefollowingmonthssawmestrugglingtosupport

myselfandmydaughterPeggy.BeforeChristmasIwasjoblesswith

only15dollarsleft,whichmadememiserable.

StepIVDrawtheoutlineofthetwoparagraphsaccordingtothe

givensentences:（WritedownthekeywordseitherinEnglishor

Chinese.

（略）

StepVReadthesample,andfillintheblanks.

Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyranfleetlytoanswerit,

callingthatitmustheSantaClaus.ThenIhearda

man'sheartyvoicecomingandwenttothedoor.Hewas

adeliverymanwithhisarmsfullofparcels."'Thisisamistake^^,I

said,buthereadthenameontheparcelsandtheywereforme.

Whenhehadgone,Ididn'tknowwhattodo.Subsequently,Peggy

and1satonthefloor,lookingateachotherunbelievably.Whata

surprise!Isearchedforthenameofthesender.

Abruptly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.Ipicked

upthenote,whichread“Thanksforyourreturningtheumbrella.

MerryChristmas!”Itwastheladywhosentusthese

parcels.Holdingthenotetightly,Iwasonthevergeoftears,witha

streamofwarmthspreadingacrossmybody.Onthechilly

Christmas,IforgotIhadnomoneyfortherentandonlyfifteen

dollarsinmypocket.Wejustsatinoursmall

apartmentunwrappingthegiftsonebyoneinhappiness.Asweet

peacefloodedintomelikeablessing,whichmademehopefulagain.

StepVIFinishyourwriting.

StepVII检测

A.“添枝加叶”（扩写句子）

1.1gotoffthestreetcarintheheavyrainandopened

theumbrellatoprotectmyself