2022年广州市高三调研测试读后续写试题讲解+讲义 高三英语二轮复习

[文档标题]广州市高三年级调研测试英语读后续写试题第二节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Kathy’sfamilyvacationtothebeachwasusuallythe

highlightofhersummer.Thisyear,however,her

parentsannouncedanewrule:nocellphonesforthe

entireweek.“Butmyfriendswillbeexpectingupdatesaboutthetrip,”Kathycomplained.Kathy’smomgavehera

seriouslook.Unwillingly,Kathyhandedhercellphone

overandhermomlockeditaway.Thedrivetothebeachhousetookmostoftheday.

Astheyturnedoffthehighwayontocountryroads,the

cloudsdarkened.Rainstartedtopour.“Evenmore

beautifulintherain,”hermothersaid.“Whatdoyou

think,Kathy?”Kathyglaredathermom.“Beautiful,”shemuttered.Thatnightafterdinner,Kathywanderedintothe

kitchen,whereherfatherwaswashingdishes.Shegave

herfatheralovinglookandsaidinhersweetestvoice,

“Couldn’tIhavemycellphoneback,justforonesecond?JustsoIcantelleveryonewhatanamazingtime

I’mhaving?”“Can’t,”hesaid,“it’snothere.Remember?”Kathywasveryannoyed.Havingnothingbettertodo,

sheexaminedthedustybookcaseinthelivingroom.The

bookslookedasdullastheweather.Onthetopshelf,

however,shespottedapuzzle.Shetookit,emptiedthe

piecesonthetable,andbegantosortthem.Afterwhatseemedlikeafewminutes,shelooked

up.Itwaspastteno’clock.Shehadbeenworkingfor

almosttwohours!Sheyawned.Thepuzzlewasnothalf

done,butshewasexhausted.So,shewenttobed.WhenKathyawokethenextmorning,shejumpedoutofbedanddrewthecurtains.Ablazingsunwasrisingovertheblueocean.Theskywascloudless.The

sceneremindedKathyofaphotothatherfriendBetty

hadrecentlysenther.Thisviewwasevenbetter.Itwouldleaveeveryone

speechless.Kathydashedtoherbedsidetableand

reachedforhercellphone.Buttherewasnothingthere.

Shesighed.Still,shewanderedinfrontofthewindow,

admiringthesunrise.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1:Afteraquickbreakfast,Kathyheadedtothe

beach.Paragraph2:Appreciatingthefinishedpuzzle,sherealizedshe

hadn'tthoughtofhercellphoneforhours.【试题信息】试卷名称体裁主题语境词数广州市2022届高三年级调研测试记叙文人与自我正文英文词数362，无中文提示，续写第一段首句9个单词，续写第二段首句14个单词。【语篇分析】1.what（前文主旨）暑期，Kathy全家去海滩度假，这次她的父母不让使用手机。他们冒雨驾车到海滨别墅。晚饭后，Kathy向爸爸要手机被拒绝。她只得玩拼图，可是还没拼到一半，她就因太困上床睡觉了。早晨天气晴朗，天空万里无云，太阳从蓝色的海面冉冉升起。Kathy想起朋友Betty给她发的一张照片，急忙去找手机，但什么也没有，故事由此展开。2.why（故事主题）放下手机，享受现实生活。3.how（写作技巧）第三人称、记叙、描写4.具体内容（利用拉波夫叙事模式进行分析）点题这篇文章没有标题，作者将故事背景介绍浓缩在了第一段中。通过阅读第一段可知，本章讲述的是Kathy全家的海滩度假故事。指向本篇文章的指向就是第一二三段，无具体时间，地点就是在Kathy和家人一起去的海边，，主要人物是Kathy，次要人物是Kathy的父母。进展本文的进展是Kathy在度假时，多次索要手机无果，只能独自玩拼图和欣赏美景。结果/结局结局部分是需要学生续写的，通过前面的情节走向，再根据续写第一段的首句“Afteraquickbreakfast,Kathyheadedtothe

beach.”可知，Kathy第二天在没有手机的情况下，去了海边，此段落应包括Kathy对海边美景的叙述；而根据第二段首句“Appreciatingthefinishedpuzzle,sherealizedshe

hadn'tthoughtofhercellphoneforhours.”可知Kathy在独处中竟然忘却了手机，可构思第二段的续写思路：(1)她接下来做了什么？(2)她玩手机了吗？(3)通过这一经历，她体会到了什么？评议文章中多次叙述到Kathy向父母索要手机的情节，体现Kathy对此事的不满。回应原文中提到了Kathy沉浸与拼拼图而忘了时间的情节，说明Kathy是能做到不用手机的，因此第二段的续写中Kathy好几个小时都没用手机就顺利成章了。第二段续写中要具体描写Kathy对于此次度假的思考。5.语言人物角色1：Kathy性格：固执行为：多次向父母索要手机心理：unwilling--angry--annoyed--surprised角色2：Kathy的父母性格：坚定行为：坚持不给女儿手机心理：serious场景度假的海边语言风格语言风格比较生动，能较好地体现角色的情绪6.情节冲突Kathy想要与朋友分享生活却不被允许拥有手机。行动Kathy逐渐开始享受没有手机的时间。（续写第一段）解决Kathy意识到自己离开手机已经挺久时间了，并进行思考。（续写第二段）伏笔前文提到Kathy因为拼拼图而忘记时间，续写第二段也写到完成拼图后才意识到自己没有想起手机很久了。【素材积累】Para1highlight:(n.)最好(或最精彩、最激动人心)的部份announce:(v.)公布；发布Para2

unwillingly:(adv.)不情愿地Para3turnoff驶离，离开（…路);转弯;拐入旁路darken:(v.)变黑glare:(v.)怒目而视mutter:(v.)嘀咕；嘟囔Para4wanderinto慢慢走进Para5Havingnothingbettertodo,

sheexaminedthedustybookcaseinthelivingroom.动词的非谓语形式(现在分词形式)做原因状语。as...as...和……一样……spot:(v.)发现Para6awake(v.)醒来blazing(adj.)耀眼的；炙热的；强烈的remind...of...使某人想起……Para6speechless(adj.)（因气愤、震惊、惊讶等）说不出话的，无语的，哑口无言的dash(v.)冲去Still,shewanderedinfrontofthewindow,

admiringthesunrise.动词的现在分词形式作伴随状语【参考范文】Afteraquickbreakfast,Kathyheadedto

thebeach.Thereonthebeach,fishermenhad

alreadycarriedtheirharvestsbackandwere

sortingthemout.Thesunshineonthebeach,ontheseagullsandonKathyamazed

her.Everythingwasnaturalandsoothing.

Thesceneandwarmthsuddenlyreminded

Kathyoftheundonepuzzle,whichwas

supposedtobeabreathtakingpictureof

theseaside(which引导非限制性定语从句).Withsomeseashellsinhand(with复合结构),sheheadedbackandsettleddowntotheworkonthepuzzle.Afterwhatseemed

likeseveralhours(what引导宾语从句),

shefinallycompletedit.Appreciatingthefinishedpuzzle,she

realizedshehadn'tthoughtofhercellphonefor

hours.Shelookedoutofthewindow.Thesun

wasblazing.Maybeitwastimetoplanforthe

followingweek.Shenowknewthatshewould

notbeshortofthingstodo.Shelookedatthe

booksandfoundthemshiningwiththe

sunlightthroughthewindow(现在分词短语作宾语补足语)!Whatanamazingchange!Shesmiled.Withacellphone,we

candoalot.Butwithoutacellphone,alot

morethingsarewaitingtobeexplored.【范文赏读2】Afteraquickbreakfast,Kathyheadedto

thebeach.Itwasboundless,withthebright

sunaboveandsandslightlyticklingtravelers’outstretchedfeet.Kathystoodfeastingher

eyesontheview.Shefeltlikebeing

transportedtoaworldthatiswellworth

recordingandspontaneouslyreachedforher

cellphoneinthepocket.Again,therewas

nothing.Shegaveherselfalittlelaughand

draggedherfeetbacktothehouse.

Suddenlytheundonepuzzleinthelivingroom

cameintohersight.Itmightbeapictureofabeach!Shetookab