中考复习英语写作学案东片初中55作文课件

中考专题复习课Writing高邮市甘垛镇横泾初级中学 董娟Daily

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to

express

thanks”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。背景认为吃好穿好是应该的，缺失感恩意识。1.感谢父母……学会感恩2.感谢老师……3.感谢朋友……感想……（至少两点）要求：1.短文应包括所提供的所有内容，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；词数：100词左右。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；演讲稿中不得提及所在学校及本人姓名。Learning

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moring,boys

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topic

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连句成段结尾:与主题相呼应强劲有力2013年扬州市中考写作评分标准一档文17-20分：写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化，基本无语法错误（1-2个错误），或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。二档文13-16分：基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有少量语法错误（3-4个错误）。三档文9-12分：写出大部分内容要点，语言基本通顺，有一些语法和拼写错误，基本不影响意思表达。四档文5-8分：写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不太通顺，语法结构单调、错误较多，只有少数句子可读，影响理解。五档文0-4分：言不达意，不知所云；只有（1-2个）句子可读。Post-Task Feedback(当堂反馈)高分要诀要“养眼”要“爽心”范文展示Learning

to

express

thanksGood

moring,boys

and

girls!My

topic

today

is

‘Learningto

express

thanks’.

Do

you

tell

others

oftenhow

much

you

thank

them?

We

find

some

students

want

to

eat

well

andwearfashionable

clothes,

but

they

have

never

thought

of

saying

“thank

you”

to

theirparents.It’s

high

time

for

us

students

to

learn

to

express

our

heartfelt

thanks

tothose

around

us.

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can

try

to

write

a

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letter

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our

parentsforworking

hard

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