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例谈如何在续写前进行有效阅读浙江省湖州市教科研中心 费胜昌Nov.2017有效阅读是续写的前提——以2016年10月新高考首考试题为例阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。One
weekend
in
July,
Jane
and
her
husband,
Tom,had
driven
three
hours
tocampovernight
by
a
lake
in
the
forest.
Unfortunately,
on
the
way
an
unpleasant
subjectcame
up
andthey
started
to
quarrel.
By
the
time
they
reached
the
lake,
Jane
was
so
angry
that
she
said
toTom,
“I’m
going
to
finda
better
spot
for
us
tocamp”
and
walked
away.With
no
path
to
follow,
Jane
just
walked
on
for
quite
a
long
time.
After
she
had
climbed
toa
high
place,
she
turned
around,
hoping
to
see
the
lake.
To
her
surprise,
she
saw
nothingbutforestand,
far
beyond,
asnowcapped
mountain
top.
She
suddenly
realized
that
shewaslost.“Tom!”
she
cried.
“Help!”No
reply.
If
only
she
had
not
left
her
mobile
phone
in
that
bag
with
Tom.
Jane
keptmoving,but
the
farther
she
walked,
the
more
confused
shebecame.
As
night
was
beginning
to
fall,Janewas
so
tired
that
she
had
to
stop
for
the
night.
Lying
awake
in
the
dark,
Jane
wanted
very
muchto
be
withTom
and
her
family.She
wanted
to
hold
him
and
tell
him
how
much
she
loved
him.Jane
rose
at
the
break
ofday,hungry
and
thirsty.She
could
hear
water
trickling(滴落)somewhere
at
a
distance.
Quickly
she
followed
the
sound
to
a
stream.
To
her
great
joy,
she
alsosaw
some
berry
bushes.
She
drank
and
ate
a
few
berries.
Never
in
her
life
had
shetastedanything
better.
Feeling
stronger
now,
Jane
began
to
walk
along
the
stream
and
hope
itwouldlead
her
to
the
lake.As
she
picked
her
way
carefully
along
the
stream,
Jane
heard
a
helicopter.Is
that
for
me?Unfortunately,
the
trees
made
it
impossible
for
people
to
see
her
from
above.
A
few
minutes
later,another
helicopter
flew
overhead.Jane
took
off
her
yellow
blouse,
thinking
thatshe
should
gotoan
open
area
and
flag
them
if
they
came
backagain.Butnomorehelicopters
cameanditwasdark.
ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.
1.
Analyze
the
material⑴.Type
of
writingNarrative
记叙文⑵.
In
what
order
is
the
material
developed?⑶.Three
elements(要素)for
anarrative:CharacterSettingPlotJane,
TomIn
the
forestTimesequenceOne
weekend
in
July,
Jane…As
night
was
beginning
to
fall,
Jane…
Jane
rose
at
the
break
of
the
day,…But
…
and
it
was
getting
dark
again.It
was
daybreak
when
Jane
woke
up.方法1:绘制思维导图Beginningdrank
ate
stoppedmissed
(wanted)
lost
quarreledwalked
awaymissed
a
chance
(heard)got
a
plan
(thinking)ClimaxFind
out
the
key
verbs
showing
the
development
of
the
plot.PlotEndingquarreledwalked
awayBeginningdrank
lost
ate
nohelicoptersgetting
darkstopped
missed
missed
a
chancegot
a
planClimaxEndingwoke
upstruggle?fear?daybreak
rescue?Jane,
Tom,
lake,walked,
climbed,stream,
at
a
distance,to
her
greatjoy,helicopter,
yellowblouse2.Plot
Deduction(推理)Jane,
Tom,
lake,
walked,
climbed,
stream,
at
adistance,to
her
great
joy,
helicopter, yellow
blousekey
words
givenClue:
Characters:
Behavior:
Places:
ments:helicopter;
yellow
blouseJane;
Tom;walked;
climbedlake;
stream;
at
a
distanceto
her
great
joyTip:
Classify
the
10
key
words
to
help
plottingDifficulties:get
injured, cold
night,
wild
beasts,suffer,
tired,
lack
of
confidence…Qualities:
calm,
firm
belief,
courage,
cleverself-assured…Emotions:
regretful,
homesick,
miss,
in
despair,anxious,
give
up,
panic,
lonely,
desperate,
breakdown,
cheerful,
to
her
great
joy…Actions:
catch
sight
of,
wave,
flag,
laugh,
burst
intotears,
dash,
hug,
shout,
struggle,
attempt,
reunite…3.
Brainstorm
for
words
and
expressions4.
Writing
Tips★Let
the
surroundings
speakAmid
the
dreadful
darkness,
strange
sounds
of
wild
beastswere
heard.hugged
each
other
tightly
in
the
warm
light
of
the
setting
sun★Describe
actions
specificallyShe
rushed
to
the
rock,
climbed
onto
it
and
waited.She
waved
her
yellow
blouse
madly
to
the
passing
helicopter.★Add
proper
mental
activities1.
“If
it
weren’t
for that
stupid
quarrel,
I
wouldn’t
be
trapped
here,”she
thought
to
herself.develotpimede?1By
thetime…After
she
had
…As
night…to
fallAt
the
break
of
dayA
few
minuteslater…it
was
darkWhatHowOn
the
Hwaoy
w
isinthoqirusdarperearlesdosfagewalked
awayangrygot
lostscaredregretfulstopped…nightfound
a
streamand
berriesangry??excitedjoyful,
hopefulheard
a
helicoptertook
off
heryellow
blousehopefulTimWehelnine2As
she
picked…3
It
wasdaybreak…Reading
for
Comprehension方法2:制作表格Para.
7But
no
morehelicopterscame
and
itwasdark.Feeling:
disappointed Find
a
place
to
sleepTime:
the
night
before
sleptPara.
8It
was
daybreak
when
Jane
woke
up.try
to
get
outPredicting
the
DevelopmentPara.
7But
no
morehelicopterscame
and
itwasdark.Predicting
the
DevelopmentWhenWhatHowFind
a
placecold,
scared…regretful…tired,
hungry…it
was
darkto
sleep…think
about
Tomfall
asleepJane,
Tom,
lake,
walked,
climbed,
at
a
distance,stream,
To
her
great
joy,
helicopter,
yellow
blousePredicting
the
DevelopmenttheyJane
took
off
her
yellow
blouse,
thinking
that
sheshould
go
to
an
open
area
and
flag
themif
helicopters
came
back
again.
(Para.
6)Para.
8It
was
daybreak
when
Jane
woke
up.What
would
Jane
do?try
to
get
rescued
by
thehelicopterJane,
Tom,
lake,
walked,
climbed,
at
a
distance,stream,
To
her
great
joy,
helicopter,
yellow
blousePredicting
the
DevelopmentJane
began
to
walk
along
the
stream
and
hope
itwould
lead
her
to
the
lake. (Para.
5)What
would
Jane
do
iftherewere
no
helicopteror
shefailedto
benoticed?follow
the
stream
to
find
the
lakeJane,
Tom,
lake,
walked,
climbed,
at
a
distance,stream,
To
her
great
joy,
helicopter,
yellow
blousePredicting
the
DevelopmentShe
wanted
to
hold
himand
tell
him
how
much
sheloved
him. (Para.
4)Would
Jane
get
out
of
the
forest?Yes.How
would
she
react
when
seeing
Tom?held
Tom
and
told
him
she
loved
himWhenWhatHowit
was
dark…Find
a
place
to
sleepthink
about
Tomfall
asleepcold,
scared,tired,
hungry,regretful…It
was
daybreak…try
to
get
out(by
the
helicopter
/
thestream
to
the
lake)hold
Tom
and
say…(disappointed
ifno
helicopter)hopefulexcited…Continuing
the
storyPossible
developmentIf
only
虚拟语气If
only
she
had
not
left
her
mobile
phone…Never
倒装句Never
in
her
lifehad
she
tasted
anything
better.V-ing
作状语Lying
awake
in
the
dark,
Jane
wanted
very
much
to
be……so…that…As
night…,
Jane
was
so
tired
that
she
had
tostop…With
结构With
no
path
to
follow,
Jane
just
walked
on
....The
more…,
the
more……the
farther
she
walked,
the
more
confused
she
became.形容词作伴随状语Jane
rose
at
the
break
of
day,
hungry
and
thirsty.Readingfor
LanguageParagraph1:But
no
more
helicopters
came
and
it
was
getting
dark
again.
Amid
thedreadful
darkness,
strange
sounds
of
wild
beasts
were
heard.
Jane
was
lonelyand
seized
by
extreme
panic.
“If
it
weren’t
for
that
stupid
quarrel,
I
wouldn’t
be
trapped
here,”
she
thought
regretfully
and
then
burst
into
tears.
Many
times,Jane
was
on
the
edge
of
breaking
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