2023届高三英语二轮复习读后续写练习课件（善良男孩将小狗捡回家）

高考英语读后续写语篇练习善良男孩将小狗捡回家1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文“Mumma,Iamgoingtothemorningwalk”,Rohanscreamedwhilehismotherwascookinginthekitchen.Hismotherwhowasengagedinherworkrepliedcasually,andhewentaway.Itwasbittercoldoutside.Thoughhehadhiscapandmuffler(厚手套)withhim,hecouldstillperceivemuchcold.Hefollowedhisdailyroutinewhensomethingdifferenthappenedtohim.Therelaidasmallpuppyontheothersideoftheroad,justbesideacanal,whoseemedshiveringandtremblingwiththecold.Hewenttowardsit,lookedintoitseyes,experienceditspainandcouldn’thelpbutpickituponhishands.Itwasvoiceless,butexpressedeverythingtotheboy,withoutanylanguage.4续写原文5段首句Para1：Hismotherallowedthatpuppytostaywiththem.

Para2：ThencamethedaywhenRohanhadtoleavehometostudyabroad.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Rohan捡到一条冻的奄奄一息的小狗，在明知妈妈会竭力反对的情况下把它带回了家，他的母亲愤怒地问“这是什么？”当Rohan说出一句“妈妈，他需要我们。”时，她继续问了很多问题，这让她的母亲相信“爱是什么”。他的母亲记得她最喜欢的老师说过的话：“爱是一种在有需要的时候帮助别人的感觉，知道会有障碍”。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Hismotherallowedthatpuppytostaywiththem.由第一段首句内容“他妈妈允许那只小狗和他们住在一起。”可知，第一段可描写Rohan很高兴、很感激，小狗的安置、恢复、成长和小狗与家人的相处等。10续写思路分析Para2：ThencamethedaywhenRohanhadtoleavehometostudyabroad.由第二段首句内容“后来有一天，Rohan不得不离开家去国外学习”可知，第二段可描写离家的后顾之忧：谁来照料狗狗，如何解决（可以是Rohan提出请求，也可以是妈妈主动请缨）。11续写思路分析续写线索Rohan很高兴、很感激——安置和照顾小狗——小狗融入家庭——离家的后顾之忧——妈妈主动请缨——松了一口气，踏上了旅途12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①安置：settle/emplace②照顾：takecareof/attendto③出发：setout/startoff情绪类①高兴的：overjoyed/happy②轻松地：withgreatrelief/withease13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]HelookedsocuteandadorablethatRohanfellindeeplovewithhimimmediately.(运用了so...that句型)[高分句型2]Thedogwaggedhistailaroundthem,seemingtounderstandwhatwashappening.(运用了what引导的宾语从句和现在分词作状语)[高分句型3]SensingRohan’sunease,hismotherwentoverandtoldhimthatshewaswillingtotakecareofhimduringhisabsence.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和现在分词作状语)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现1Hismotherallowedthatpuppytostaywiththem.Surprisedbutoverjoyed,Rohanthankedhismotherandthenfoundawarmplacetosettlehim.Abouttwohourslater,thetremblingpuppyrecoveredandbecamefulloflife.HelookedsocuteandadorablethatRohanfellindeeplovewithhimimmediately.Fromthenon,apartfromfeedingandwalkinghim,Rohanplayedwithhimandeventrainedhimtobehavewelleverydayafterschool.Gradually,hebecameattachedtoRohanandfamiliarwiththewholefamily.