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考研英语写作三段论：第一段---描述图画或图表第二段---解释寓意第三段---给出评论第一段：第一句1、Asisshownabove,描述图画（倒装）.Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionaboutapictureinthenewspaper.报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注。描述图画注意：第一步：寻找图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。第二部：描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。第三部;寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述。模式：在图画中央有------(倒装)，它-------（主谓一致、现在分词、非限定性定语从句），周围有-----（独立主格作状语）第二句----总结Thepicture,atthefistglimpse,seemstobesimple,butonlyapenetratingsightcanpiercethroughitssuperficialmeaning.这幅画初看好像很简单，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看穿其肤浅的含义。Theauthor’srealpurposeisnotthefactitself,buttoleadustofindwhathidesbehindtheiceburg.作者的真实目的不是图画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着什么。第二段第一句----观点的提出(1)Thepicturetellsusthatnothingcanbecomparedwiththe重要主题.Innocountry,otherthanchina,ithasbeensaid,isthisphenomenonmoreobvious.(2)Thepicturedoesrevelcertaindisturbingsocialphenomenon,thatis,peopletendtooverlookthefactthat有害主题.(或Thepicturedoesrevealthat有害主题isnotonlyharmful,butalsodamaging.)Thepastdecadehaswitnessedahugedevelopmentineconomyowingtothereformandopening-uppolicycarriedout,bringingsomeproblemsatthesametime,withtheaboveonebeingtheforemost.在过去的十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的发展，但同时带来了一些问题，上面的问题是最严重的。（或Innocountryotherthanchina,ithasbeensaidmisthisproblemmoreserous.）万能观点：图画主题的重要性Nothingcanbecomparedwith······isnotonlynecessary,butalsoindispensable···方便和快捷主题（e.g.WideWorldWeb）providespeoplewithup-to-date,concreteandaccurateandvividinformation.主题（e.g.MSNandotherinstantmessengers）canshrinkthedistancebetweencitiesandevencontinents;smooththecommunicationbetweenresidentsandridofthebarrierbetweenpeople.安全角度主题cansecurehisfoodandshelter.主题canshieldpeoplefromvariouskindsofhazardsrangingfrominjury,robbery,assaultstotrafficaccidents.身心健康①（主题）canrelievenotonlypressurebutalsoanxietyandsuchproblems,stress,isolationandsolitude.②Bydoing(主题)peoplestayhealthy,andthereforepreventheartdiseases,hypertension,diabetesorfattiness.③(主题)canalsohaveaddedbenefitofincreasingone’sknowledgeandgivingusanewperspectiveoftheoutsideworld.生活娱乐It’samajormeansofentertainmentthatrelievesone’spressure,boredom,stressandburden.表“受益”的词组：Broadenone’smindEnrichone’sexperienceEnhancevigorandputmoreenthusiasmtoone’sworkItiswellreceivedasaninstructivemodeofentertainmentthatprovidespeoplewithnotonlyabulkofinformation,butasourceofimaginationaswell.Itprovidesavarietyofleisureactivitiesthatenhanceyourenergy,enthusiasmandcharm.Itaddsaspecialmeansofentertainmenttoyouseeminglytedious,routineandmonotonouslife.有助成长和成功（自己和他人）Peoplecanobtainfinancialaids,materialsupport,mentalcomfort,orspiritualbackfromyoursupport.Theycandrawonexperiencefromyou.Throughyourspeeches,instructionsorassistance,theycanbroadentheirminds,increasetheirincome.Throughyourencouragement,theycultivatethespiritofcompetition,participationandcooperationandfinallyfindtheirownwaystofulfilltheirpursuitofhappiness.Thoughyourassistance,notonlycantheyaccumulatewealth,butwillalsoestablishtheircareer,fitintosociety,andevenattainsocialstatus.Peoplewhotreatotherswithlove,sincerity,sympathy,enthusiasm,hospitalityorgenerosityalwayswinrespectfromothers.Itdose/doesn’tnecessarilycultivatetalent,confidence,self—worth,self—relianceanddignity.文化价值观Itcannothelppeopletreattheworldwithbenevolence,confidenceandtolerance.Itcansometimesintensifyconflictsandtensionsbetweennations.Itputharmonioushumanrelationshipindanger.Itcannotpromotemutualunderstanding.Itcanbreachthefriendlyties,andwidenthegapbetweenpeople.环境保护Itmeansthatcentralauthoritycansetasidemorefundstoeliminateairpollution,noisepollution,reducesoilerosionordesertification,preventthethinnessofozonelayers,reduceindustrialsewage,andrescuethedwindlingtropicaljungles.Itgovernmentshouldraisethepublicawarenessofenvironmentalpreservation,therebypromotingsustainabledevelopmentandcreatingamorelivableenvironment.社会宏观角度Itcanminimizeinflation,economicstagnation,economicrecession,unemploymentrate.Itcanmaintainsocialorderandreducecrimerate.Itmeansthatrevolutionizethescientificlevelofacountry,meansofcocommunicationandqualityoflife.Itmeansthattheauthoritiescanallocatemorefundstotheconstructionandqualityofinfrastructurerangingfromkindergartens,hospitals,medicalcenter,museums,schoollibraries,trainstohighwaysandexpressways.Itmeansthatpeoplecanhaveequalopportunitytocollegeeducation,employments,self—realizationandpursuitofmaterialwealth.（二）、科学论据法AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofScience（CAS），···AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofSocialScience(CASS),···ChinaDailyinterviewedforpeoplefromfourprofessions–asurgeon,awhilecollarworker,acarpenterandafarmer.Thesurveydiscoversthatallofthemareoftheideathat主题重要或有害.（三）、举例子①Ourhumanhistoryhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexamplesof···,withthefollowingonebeingtheforemost.我们人类历史上与这个话题相关的例子有很多，下面这个是最有说服力的。②Amongallthetouchingfactsrelatingto···thatIhavehoard,noticed,andexperienced,themostimpressiveoneis···在我所听到的、看到的、经历过的所有和这个话题相关的例子之中，最有说服力的是···第四句（结尾句——虚拟语气和利弊句）虚拟语气：（1）积极的主题如果没有···，我们可能根本做不了···Weretherenosth,neverwouldwedosth.（2）消极的主题如果情况继续下去，我们将付出更加昂贵的代价。Werethesituationtocontinueasitis,wewouldpaythehighprice.e.g. Werethetendencytocontinueasitis,ourfuturegenerationwouldnotbothertothinkofexcuseforus.利弊句：(1)弊大于利Thedisadvantagesovershadowthebenefits.Thebenefitsareinlargemeasurecanceledoutbytheproblems.(2)利大于弊Theproblemsseemtobepalecomparedwitht