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假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。

要点：⑴参加中文学习班； ⑵看中文书刊、电视； ⑶学唱中文歌曲； ⑷交中国朋友。

注意：可适当增加细节，开头语已给出。

书写极差层次不分明（一段式或多段式）3.单词拼写、语法错误，句型少而单调课前演练问题总结ProblemsoftheCompositionVerybadhandwritingProblemsoftheCompositionVerybadhandwritingGoodhandwritingGoodhandwritingisveryimportant!一段式或多段式Singlesentencepatterns句型单调Toomanymistakes

语法错误和拼写错误多Clearhandwriting整洁卷面Clearlydivided合理分段Nopointsleft要点不漏Naturallyconnected自然串联Nosillymistakes蠢错不犯StandardforaPerfectCompositionGetitpolished!让作文出彩DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

Iwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:

First,

itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Inaddition,

italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.What’smore,youcanalsomakemoreChinesefriends,whowilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.

I'mlookingforwardtoyourletternexttimeYourssincerely,LiHuapossibleversion:ReadaloudSummary

1.回应问题(1)I’mverygladtoreceiveyour...(2)Iamsorrytoknowthatyouhavetroublein…2.提出建议及理由(1)Itisimportantto….,as…..(2)Itshouldbeagoodideato…,because….(3)Italsohelpsto…,who/which….3.祝愿寄语(1)Iam

lookingforwardto...(2)Ihopethat...三、Usefulexpressions二、如何更有条理性1、

First,second,third….Finally2、besides;what’smore;inaddition一、书信格式HiWorried,I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Jamie(2014·安徽)为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了HEART-TO-HEART专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰。2.提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.词数120左右。2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息。3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：脾气，情绪temper1.什么书信？2.人称和时态？3.建议信的内容应包括什么？（1）表示理解并给予安慰（2）具体建议及理由（3）愿望高考链接建议信第二人称，一般现在时文章结构Para1.理解和安慰Para2.具体建议和理由Para3.愿望Hi,Worried,

I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthiseveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,soyoudon’thavetoworrysomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearesomeusefultips:First,

itisimportanttotalktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel,asitisagoodwaytoletyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Besides,

itshouldbeagoodideatogooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexercise,whichisaneffectivewaytogetridofyouranger.Inaddition,

italsohelpstoremainoptimisticaboutyourfuture,becauseonlywithapositiveattitudetowardslifecanyouliftyourspirits.Ihopeyou’llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal.Yours,Jamie1.理解并给予安慰2.具体建议和理由3.愿望Groupwork

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