初中英语写作公开课(九年级)

ALessonofWriting

2021/5/91Howtowriteacomposition.2021/5/92Example:ImaginethatyouareLiMing,writeacompositionaboutthechangestakenplaceinyourhometown.

Keypoints:1.Topic（主题）:changes2.who:LiMing3.Where:LiMing’shometown4.tense(时态):pasttense&presenttense

一般过去时&一般现在时First,considerthetaskcarefully.2021/5/93LivingconditionCellphonesjobstransportationchangeshousecarsSecond,brainstorm(头脑风暴)educationshopsfoodroadscomputersclothesbuildingworkingtools农耕工具reasongovernmentefforts2021/5/94liveinalowhouseliveinatallbuildingplantcropswiththehelpoffarmanimalsplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachinesstudyinanoldschoolstudyinamodernschoolLivingconditionWorkingtoolseducation2021/5/95LivingconditionWorkingtoolseducationchangesBrainstormforthebody(正文)a.

Changesin

livingconditions.b.

Changesin

workingtools.C.

Changesin

education.2021/5/96OutlineTitle题目:

ChangesinLiMing’sHometownHeading开头：Greatchangeshavetakenplacein……Body正文:a.

Changesin

livingconditionsb.

Changesin

workingtoolsC.

Changesin

educationConclusion结尾:Thankstothegovernment’sefforts(努力),LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Next,drawupanoutline.提纲2021/5/97Then,writethecomposition.2021/5/98Finally,checkoverthecomposition.2021/5/99ChangesinLiMing’sHometown

GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinLiMing’shometownsincethereformandopening-up.

Inthepast,peoplelivedinlowhouses.Thefarmersplantedcropsonlywiththehelpoffarmanimals.Childrenstudiedinoldschools.

Butnow,mostpeopleliveintallbuildings.Thefarmerscanplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachines.Andchildrenstudyinmodernschools.Thankstothegovernment’sefforts,LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Onepossibleversion:heading开头body正文conclusion结尾2021/5/910AWritingPracticeWriteyourowncompositionaboutGreatchangesinmyHometown.2021/5/911以GreatchangesinmyHometown

为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。

可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的；traffic

交通；

convenient

方便的；Thanksto多亏；thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府；takeplace发生；education教育；modern现代；dreamabout憧憬

2021/5/912Requirement:1.topic:2.who:3.Where:4.Whatchanges：5.Tense时态:First,consideritcarefully.greatchangesI/myselfmyhometownliferoadshousespasttense&presenttense

……2021/5/913LivingconditiontransportationchangeshouseBrainstorming(头脑风暴)educationroadsbuilding2021/5/914Example:Outline提纲Title题目:GreatchangesinmyHometownHeading开头：Body正文:a.Changesin

…b.Changesin

…c.Changesin

…Conclusion结尾:Next,drawupanoutline.LifeHouseRoadshouselifeeducationtransportation2021/5/915nowUsedtobe…Once曾经pastManyyearsagois/areInthepastAtpresentbeforenowadaystodayWas/wereMakesentences.eg:1.Inthepast,myhometownwaspoor.

2.Myhometownusedtobepoor.Then:Brainstormforthetense(时态)2021/5/916LivingconditionCellphonestransportationwideroadscleancarsBrainstormforthebody(正文)dirtybetternarrowpoorclothesConvinent方便的improveeg:1.Manyyearsago,theroadsinmyhometownwasnarrowanddirty.2.Nowadays,theroadsinmyhometownarewideandclean.3.Today,manyfamilieshavecars.2021/5/917schoolhouseBrainstormforthebody(正文)2021/5/918Then,writethecomposition.2021/5/919以GreatchangesinmyHometown

为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。

可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的；traffic

交通；

convenient

方便的；thanksto多亏；thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府；takeplace发生；education教育；modern现代；dreamabout憧憬

2021/5/920TheChangesinMyHometownIamLiMing,todayIhaveinterviewedmygrandmother.Shehaslivedinmyhometownformorethanseventyyears.Shehasseenthechangesinmyhometownherself.Inthepast,myhometownwasverysmallandpoor.Theroadswerenarrow.Thepeoplecouldn’tgetenoughfood.Butnow,theroadsweresowide,andtherearemoreandmorekindsoffoodtosatisfypeople’sneeds.Andnow,eachfamilyhastelephones,TVs,computersandsoon.Ithinkmyhometownwillbemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture!2021/5/921ChangesinMyHometownMyhometownusedtobeabackwardplace,becauseitwasdeepinthemountains,wheretherewerenonicebuildingsandtheroadsweresonarrowanddirty.Peoplelivedapoorlife.Whileinrecentyears,withthedevelopmentofsociety,myhometownhasbeengreatlychanged.Nowtheroadsaregettingmuchwider.Treesandflowersareplantedonthetwosidesoftheroads.Theycanprovideuswit