高中英语外研版高中选修Revision高三英语短文改错佘娟 全市获奖

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。例如:Itwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospendweekendwithyou.LuckilyIwascompletelyfreethen,

but

I’lltosay“yes”.I’llarriveinBristolataround8pminamFridayevening.

注意：以下为不规范答题,均不给分

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theamonso漏词例1：Ihopeyou’vehadpleasantjourneyhomeand….^a改错规范2.多词

例2:

SuddenlyIcaughtasightofmyEnglishteacherinthecrowd.3.错词例3:Itisrealagoodchancetohavemetallofyouhere.___really动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；代词格，细领悟；介词短语须关注，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，冠词连词常光顾。短文改错口诀：skills3.IsawtheboysplayedgamesonthebankofthelakewhenIpassed.playing一、动词形

1.动词的时态和语态错误.2.主、谓不一致的错误。

3.非谓语动词的误用

高考链接1.Weweredrivinginthecountrywhenthecarstopworking.stopped2.Mary,aswellashersistersstudyChineseinChina.

studies4.

ItisoneofthefunniestthingsfindingontheInternetsofarthisyear.found二、名词数

1.可数与不可数名词的混用。2.可数名词的单复数的错用。3.名词的格的误用高考链接：

1.WecanfindalotofinformationsontheIrmation2.Morethantwentywitnesswillbecalled.

witnesses3.Themanisafriendofmyfather.father’s三、还要注意形和副1.形容词和副词的误用2.原级，比较级和最高级的误用。高考链接：1.wecookedonafireandthefoodtastedwonderfully.wonderful

3.Thisriverisn’taslongerasthatone.long2.

(2013年全国卷I）Infact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesaway…However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.

ever四、代词格，细领悟

人称代词(主格和宾格)，物主代词（adi.物主代词和n.物主代词）,反身代词，不定代词的误用及混用．(尤其是neither/both,all/none,anything/everything/nothing,other/anotheretc.)高考链接：1.JustatthattimeIwokeupandfoundmestillinbed!2.Ithinkimportanttolearnthecomputerwell.∧itmyself五、介词短语须关注，习惯用法要记住．主要考查介词短语和习惯用法的搭配。1.Isawhimenterintotheclassroom.2.

Itissoabeautifulplace!

高考链接：3.Stoptalkingandconcentrateyourwork.on∧4.（2011年全国卷I）LuckilyIhadallmymoneyonmypocket.

insuch六、句子成分多分析

不同的从句要用不同的引导词；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。NMET2004:Idon’tknowthattheydon’t

liketotalkwithme.2007天津卷：Iwasluckyenoughtohaveateacherwhichdidn’ttakemy

badgradesasajudgementofmyabilities,but…whywho/that七、逻辑错误须关注

与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。1.2006四川卷：Thatnight，wesatdowntowhattheythoughtwouldbeapleasant,uninterruptedmeals.2.Somestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.wetheir常考的错误形式有：连词but，and，or和so的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。AnAustralianfarmerfoundthekangaroocaughtinthefencearoundhisfarms.2.TodayIwashavingaPElessonwhileIfelldownandhurtmyfoot.

3.Althoughmybikeisold,butitisingoodcondition.a八、冠词、连词常光顾when实战演练Yesterdayallthestudentsweretellingaboutthesafeissuesintheclassmeeting,andthenthesummervacationfinallycame.Ihadbeenlookingforwarditforalongtime.Ihavemakesomeplansformysummervacation.First,Iwantedtovisitmygrandparents.Imissthemallthetimeandtheymissme,either.told∨tomadewanttoo习惯用法要记住动词形动词形动词形习惯用法要记住Iwanttospendmuchtimewiththemthanbefore.Mygrandmawillcookkindsofdishforme.Second,Iwanttoplaythefootball.Ispendlittletimeonitatschoolbecausewehavetofocusonmystudy.Ifit'stiring,it'sgoodformyhealth.moredishesThough\AlthoughI还要注意形和副名词数习惯用法要记住代词格，细领悟冠词连词常光顾解题步骤1.(浏览全文，掌握大意）2.（分句阅读，逐行找错）3.（检查核对，攻克难点）Ilovecamping.It’smyfavouritewaytospentthesummervacation.Lastyear,myfamilyandIwentcampinginthecountryside.ItwasoneofthemostexcitedexperiencesIhadneverhad.Wesleptinatentandwentonalongwalkeveryday.Wecookoverafireandthefoodtastedwonderfully.ForawholeWeek,Isawlovelymountainviewsorbreathedfreshair.Atnight,Iheardthegentlewindblowinginthetree,andIfeltsopeaceful.Itdoes’tcostmanytocamp,andwhatIbelieveit’sthebestwaytogetclosenatureandenjoyitsbeauty.spendexcitingevercookedwonderfultreesandmuch∧to

Mysistersawalovelycupwhenweareshoppingtheotherday.Shelikeditatonce.Thenshebentdownandpickeduptolookatapriceonit.Asshedidthis,lotsofteasplashedonhisT-shirt!Ihadtotryhardlynottolaughathershockedface!Mysisterwantedgetoutoftheshopasfastlyasshecouldwhenashopassistantcameovertous.Itwasturnedouttobeher