读后续写亲情类 爸爸的生日 讲义 高考英语专题复习

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。ItwasacoldyetsunnysaturdaymorninginFebruary.Dad’sNewYear’sresolutionhadbeentogetfit.Mumpushedhimoutofbedandtoldhimtogojoggingbytheriver.Later,afteranicelie-in,shewentdownstairsinherdressinggownandfoundthekidswatchingTV.SheturneditoffandsaidshewasgoingtodosomethingreallyspecialforDad’sbirthday.Iftheyoverheardanything,justpromisedtokeepitsecret.

二月的一个寒冷但阳光明媚的星期六上午。父亲的新年决心是要健身。妈妈把他推下床，告诉他去河边慢跑。后来，在睡了个好觉后，她穿着晨衣下楼，发现孩子们在看电视。她关掉了它，说她要为爸爸的生日做些特别的事。如果他们无意中听到什么，就答应保守秘密。

JennylookedatMumwithapuzzledexpressiononherforeheadandpromisedtheywouldn’tsayanythingwhateverhappened.ButJennyremindedDad’sbirthdaywasinJuneanditmightbealittletooearlytogetallsteamedupaboutit.Silentforamoment,Mumsaidshewasnotgettingeverythingreadybutjustwantedtospareenoughtimeforpreparationasthisyearit’sabiggerdealthanusual.Dadwasgoingtobe50.“50!Gosh,that’shalfacentury,”splutteredGerry.“Iknewhewasold,butIdidn’trealizehewasancient!”

珍妮看着妈妈，额头上带着困惑的表情，答应他们不管发生什么事都不会说。但詹妮提醒说，爸爸的生日是在六月，现在要对这件事大做准备可能还为时过早。沉默了一会儿，妈妈说她并没有把一切都准备好，只是想抽出足够的时间来准备，因为今年比往年更重要。爸爸快50岁了。

“50！天哪，那是半个世纪，”格里说。“我知道他老了，但我不知道他这么老了！”

Indeed,thatwaswhyMumstartedplanningaspecialpartyforhim.Mumtalkedwithgrandmaabouttheplanbecauseherhousewastheonlyoneinthefamilythatisspaciousenoughforallfriendsandrelatives.Grandmaquiteagreedandalsostartedpreparing.

事实上，这就是为什么妈妈开始为他策划一个特别的派对。妈妈和奶奶讨论了这个计划，因为她的房子是家里唯一一个能容纳所有亲朋好友的宽敞房子。奶奶非常同意，也开始准备。

“ButyouknowhowDadfeelsguiltytobotherothers.You’vegottoadmit,”remindedJenny.Thinkingoverthespecialoccasion,Mumwascontinuingwithhersecretwhenoneevening,Dadwassittingatthedinnertableandhesuddenlyslappedhisforehead,“IjustrealizedthatIamgoingtobe50inJune.Let’sjustquietlyforgetaboutit.Iwanttomourn(哀悼)thepassingofmyyouthinprivate.”

珍妮提醒道：“但你知道爸爸不好意思打扰他人。你必须承认。”。想到这个特殊的时刻，妈妈在继续她的秘密。一天晚上，爸爸坐在餐桌旁，突然拍了拍他的额头，“我刚意识到我6月就要50岁了。让我们安静地忘掉它。我想私下哀悼我青春的逝去。”

“Oh,comeonDad,don’tbesuchaspoil-sport!”beggedthekids,hopingtogivemumahand.Realizingnomorechancetohidethesecret,Mumcarefullywordedherthoughtandsharedherplanofhavingalittlepartyatgrandma’shouse.Dadwasstunned(震惊的)tonoreply.

“噢，得了吧，爸爸，别这么扫兴！”孩子们乞求着，站在妈妈一边。妈妈意识到再也没有机会隐藏这个秘密了，她仔细地表达了自己的想法，并分享了在奶奶家开一个小派对的计划。爸爸惊呆了，没有回复。

注意1.

所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

Paragraph1:Frustrated,Mummadeacalltograndma.Paragraph2:TheygoteverythingreadyasplannedwhenJunefinallycame.

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Grandmasighed:“letthedonkeygoorcouldwemakethepartysimplerbutstillunique?”Mum’seyeslitupinstantly,settingabouthersecretplanagain,nolongeronhowgrand,butthroughcollectivededicationtoshowtheirheart,tocreateanexclusivenichefordad.Jennywasalsoupliftedandeventhoughtittoolatetoshowtheirwholeloveassomanywonderfulmomentsinvolved:theappreciationsfordad’scontributionoveryears,thecareforthishalfacenturyoldmanandsoon.Endlesslovetosay,theyonlyplungedthemselvesintoaction.

妈妈沮丧地给奶奶打了个电话。奶奶叹气道：“随这个倔驴去吧，或者我们能让聚会更简单但仍然极致？”妈妈的眼睛立刻亮了起来，再次开始了她的秘密计划，这次不再是如何宏大，而是通过集体奉献来展现她们的用心，为爸爸创造一个专属的小空间。珍妮也感到振奋，甚至认为现在要表达他们的全部爱已经太晚了，因为有这么多美好的时刻要表达，如感谢父亲多年来的贡献，关心这位半个世纪的老人等等。无穷无尽的爱要去表达，他们只能投入行动。

Paragraph2:TheygoteverythingreadyasplannedwhenJunefinallycame.

Followingthechildren,likewalkingonstarlitredcarpet,dadenteredthehall,definitelybeingthebrighteststarinthesky.Wall-to-wallphotos,whichpicturedhiseverymarvelousmoment,alongthelifeway,happyorsad,totallydefeatedhim,wethiseyes,andtouchedhisheart.Dadfondledtheexquisitedecoration;Leapingtotheeyeswasdelicacy,butengravingonhisheartwasthelovefromfamily.Thismoment,allhispasthardworkandeffortseemedsorewarding