黑龙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信（含答案）

建议信1．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike总说学习太忙而没有时间锻炼身体。最近天气变化无常，他生病了。请你给他写一封电子邮件，对他表示关心并建议他加强锻炼。要点如下：1.对朋友表示关心；2.加强锻炼的好处和建议；3.表示祝愿。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMike,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2．假定你是李华，最近有很多关于溺水事件的报道，请你向校英文报投稿呼吁同学们珍爱生命，远离溺水。内容包括：1.陈述现象；2.提出建议；3.发出呼吁。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dearfellowstudents,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．假如你是李华，你校国际部的交流生Tom给你发来电子邮件，说他在即将到来的考试前出现了忧虑、头痛、睡眠差等情况，请你给他发一封电子邮件提出你的建议，内容包括：1．说明考试的目的；2．为考试做好必要的准备；3．注意健康饮食、运动和睡眠等。注意：1．词数80左右；2．邮件开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。DearTom,Ihavereceivedyouremailsayingthatyouareworriedaboutthecomingexam.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4．假如你是李楠，你的澳大利亚Peter将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假设你是李华，你的好友Mary前不久随父母来了中国，她写信告诉你她觉得很无助，想征求你的意见去更好地适应中国的高中生活。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件，给她提供一些建议。1、表示安慰；2、你的建议和理由；3、表示祝愿。注意：1、词数80-100词左右。2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是某中学学生李华，在你班级留学的美国学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷，因此写信向你求助。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容如下：1.深表同情；2.提出建议(至少三条建议，如参加学校社团活动、与朋友交流、做些户外活动等)并给出理由；3.希望建议能有所帮助。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearBill,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua7．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Paul给你来信，他升入高中后，感觉学习压力很大，请你给他回封电子邮件，安慰他并给他提一些建议。要点如下：1.寻求家人、老师和同学们的帮助；2.参加社团，树立自信；3.劳逸结合，多做运动。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearPaul,Nicetohavereceivedyourlastletter.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua8．假如你是高一学生李华，你校校门口在上学时间经常出现交通拥堵，给师生和路人带来很多不便。你校英文报就此向学生征集解决拥堵的良策。请按下列提示用英语写一封信，向校报投稿。1.写信的目的。2.分析学校门口拥堵的原因。3.提出2-3点建议。注意：词数100左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假如你是李华，是一名高中生。因为担心同学们只顾上网而忽视了学习，学校关闭了教室里电脑的上网功能，同学们感到很郁闷。请你给校长写一封建议信。内容包括：(1)说明教室里的电脑不能上网给同学们带来的不便；(2)上网的必要性（查资料、看新闻等）；(3)提出建议。注意：(1)词数80~100左右；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearHeadmaster,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua10．假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Jack对全新的高中生活感到无所适从。请你给他写一封电子邮件，提出一些建议。邮件的内容包括：1．学习方面；2．人际关系方面；3．其他方面。注意：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数)；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJack,I’msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroubleindealingwiththenewhighschoollife._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Allthebest!Yours,LiHua1．DearMike,IamsorrytohearthatyouhavebeenillthesedaysandI’mreallyconcernedaboutyourhealth.Youarealwayssayingthatyouaresobusystudyingthatyoucan’tspareanytimeforexercise.Actually,lackofexerciseisharmfultoyourhealth.Inmyopinion,itwillbebeneficialtoyourhealthifyoutakeexerciseregularly,whichcannotonlyimproveyourphysicalhealthandimmunesystembutalsorefreshyourmind.Asaresult,yourefficiencycanbegreatlyraised.Ihopeyoucanformthehabitoftakingexerciseeverydayafteryourecoverandwishyougoodhealth.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Mike写一封电子邮件，对他表示关心并建议他加强锻炼。【详解】1.词汇积累生病的：ill→sick担心的：concerned→worried事实上：actually→infact养成：form→develop2.句式拓展句式转换原句：Actually,lackofexerciseisharmfultoyourhealth.拓展句：Actually,itislackofexercisethatisharmfultoyourhealth.【点睛】【高分句型1】IamsorrytohearthatyouhavebeenillthesedaysandI’mreallyconcernedaboutyourhealth.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Inmyopinion,itwillbebeneficialtoyourhealthifyoutakeexerciseregularly,whichcannotonlyimproveyourphysicalhealthandimmunesystembutalsorefreshyourmind.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)2．Dearfellowstudents,Recently,therearemanyreportsaboutdrowning.Ithappenednotonlytochildrenbutalsotoadults,whichisreallyheartbreaking.SoIfeelweallshouldlearntoprotectourselveswheninoraroundwater.Hereismyadvice:Firstofall,don’tswiminstrangeriversorlakes.Besides,weshouldn’tgoswimmingalone.Wemustfindacompanion.Atthesametime,wecan’tswimwithoutparents’permission.What’smore,ifwecan’tswim,wemustn’tgetintothewatertosaveaperson.Cryoutforhelpimmediately.Lifeisprecious.Wemustvalueourlivesandkeepawayfromdrowning.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向校英文报投稿，陈述最近有很多关于溺水事件报道的现象，向同学们提出建议，呼吁同学们珍爱生命，远离溺水。【详解】1.词汇积累学习：learn→study建议：advice→suggestion此外：besides→inaddition立刻：immediately→rightaway2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstofall,don’tswiminstrangeriversorlakes.拓展句：Firstofall,don’tswiminriversorlakeswhicharestrange.【点睛】【高分句型1】Ithappenednotonlytochildrenbutalsotoadults,whichisreallyheartbreaking.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】What’smore,ifwecan’tswim,wemustn’tgetintothewatertosaveaperson.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）3．DearTom,Ihavereceivedyouremailsayingthatyouareworriedaboutthecomingexam.Itiscommonformostofusstudents,butIthinkwecangetridofit.Firstofall,inmyopinion,it’simportantforustohaveawiseattitudetowardsexams.Theyareonlyameansofcheckinghowwearegettingalongwithourstudies,sothereisnoneedtoworrytoomuchabouttheresults.Furthermore,studyhardeverydayandmakecarefulplansforeveryexam.Onlyinthiswaycanweavoidsufferingfromthepressureofexams.Inaddition,enoughsleepcanmakeusenergeticandenableustoperformwellinanexam.Therefore,duringtheperiodofexams,weshouldnotstayuptoolate.Wecanalsotryawarmbathoracupofwarmmilkbeforegoingtobed.Theymighthelpustohaveasoundsleep.Ihopemysuggestionswillmeetwithyouapproval.Yourssincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封电子邮件帮助Tom解决考前焦虑问题。【详解】1.词汇积累（同义词）常见的：common→ordinary重要的：important→significant除了：Inaddition→besides建议：suggestion→advice2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstofall,inmyopinion,it’simportantforustohaveawiseattitudetowardsexams.拓展句：Firstofall,inmyopinion,it’simportantthatweshouldhaveawiseattitudetowardsexams.【点睛】【高分句型1】Theyareonlyameansofcheckinghowwearegettingalongwithourstudies,sothereisnoneedtoworrytoomuchabouttheresults.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Onlyinthiswaycanweavoidsufferingfromthepressureofexams.（运用了部分倒装句）4．DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandconfusedabouttheChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoputforwardsomeadvice.Firstofall,Isuggestyouarrive5to10minutesearly,whichisverycommonintraditionalChineseculture.Secondly,ifIwereyou,Iwouldbringsomeappropriategifts,suchassouvenirsfrommyowncountry.Inaddition,youshouldalsopayattentiontothetablemanners.Forexample,youshouldn’tstickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Instead,puttingthemonyourplateisawisechoice.

Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetocontactme.Yours,

LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的澳大利亚Peter将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗这一事情，回复邮件给他一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice→suggestions提出：putforward→comeupwith此外：Inaddition→what’smore注意：payattentionto→focuson2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandconfusedaboutChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoputforwardsomeadvice.拓展句：BecauseIlearnthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandconfusedaboutChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoputforwardsomeadvice.【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstofall,Isuggestyouarrive5to10minutesearly,whichisverycommonintraditionalChineseculture.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Secondly,ifIwereyou,Iwouldbringsomeappropriategifts,suchassouvenirsfrommyowncountry.（运用了if引导的虚拟语气用法。）5．DearMary,I’msorrytolearnthatyouhavetroubleadaptingtoyournewseniorschoollifeinChina,butitcanbeeasilychangedifyoutakeadvantageofmytips.Firstly,tobeconfidenttocommunicatewiththelocals,youshouldgoallouttoimproveyourChinese.Secondly,Ifinditimportantforyoutouseallresourcestomakemorefriends,whichcancontributetoforgettingyourloneliness.Thirdly,thereareallkindsofactivitiesinseniorschool,andyoumusthaveapositiveattitudetothem,becausetheywillhelptoexploreyourpotentialanddevelopyourconfidence.Ihopeitcanmakeadifferencetoyou.Ibelievethatafteraperiodofadaptation,youwillhaveagoodtimeinChina.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursLiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Mary写一封电子邮件，对她在中国适应高中生活提供一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累得知：know→learn建议：suggestion→tip帮助：assist→help希望：wish→hope2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thirdly,thereareallkindsofactivitiesinseniorschool,andyoumusthaveapositiveattitudetothem,becausetheywillhelptoexploreyourpotentialanddevelopyourconfidence.拓展句：Thirdly,thereareallkindsofactivitiesinseniorschool,whichyoumusthaveapositiveattitudeto,becausetheywillhelptoexploreyourpotentialanddevelopyourconfidence.【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly,tobeconfidenttocommunicatewiththelocals,youshouldgoallouttoimproveyourChinese.(运用了非谓语动词不定式作目的状语)【高分句型2】Secondly,Ifinditimportantforyoutouseallresourcestomakemorefriends,whichcancontributetoforgettingyourloneliness.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)6．DearBill,Iamsorrytoknowyouarehavingtroublewithyourlifeandstudyhere.However,thesituationiseasytochange.Now,I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.Firstly,joinsomeschoolclubs,whereyoucanmakesomefriends.Secondly,communicatewithpeoplewhohavethesameinterestswithyou.Maybeitcanhelpyougetridofyourloneliness.Thirdly,dosomeoutdooractivitiesandtheycanmakeyourelaxed.Bydoingallthesethings,youcangetusedtoyourschoollifeandlivehappily.Hopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学的美国学生Bill写一封回信，就他“无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷”一事给出相关建议。【详解】1.词汇积累对……感到困难：havetroublewith→havedifficultywith建议：advice→suggestions/tips/recommendations习惯于：getusedto→getaccustomedto帮助某人：helpsb.→givesb.ahand2.句式拓展简单句变成复合句原句：Thirdly,dosomeoutdooractivitiesandtheycanmakeyourelaxed.拓展句：Thirdly,dosomeoutdooractivitieswhichcanmakeyourelaxed.【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly,joinsomeschoolclubs,whereyoucanmakesomefriends.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Secondly,communicatewithpeoplewhohavethesameinterestswithyou.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)7．DearPaul,Nicetohavereceivedyourlastletter.Iunderstandthatyouareunderalotofstressnow.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstly,Isuggestyoutalkaboutyourtroublewithyourparents,teachersandclassmatessoastogethelpfromthem.Secondly,itisagreatideatojoinaclubyouareinterestedin,whichwillsurelyhelpyoumakenewfriendsandbuildyourconfidence.Inaddition,doingmoreexerciseinyoursparetimeisawonderfulwaytorelieveyourstress,becausesportswillalsohelpyousleepbetteratnight.Ihopemysuggestionscanbehelpfulandyouwillgetoutofyourtroublesoonerandlivehappily.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Paul回一封电子邮件，对于他感觉学习压力很大的问题表示安慰并给他提一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累压力：stress→pressure此外：inaddition→what’smore空闲时间：sparetime→freetime开心地：happily→delightedly2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly,Isuggestyoutalkaboutyourtroublewithyourparents,teachersandclassmatessoastogethelpfromthem.拓展句：Firstly,Isuggestyoutalkaboutyourtroublewithyourparents,teachersandclassmatessothatyoucangethelpfromthem.【点睛】【高分句型1】Iunderstandthatyouareunderalotofstressnow.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Secondly,itisagreatideatojoinaclubyouareinterestedin,whichwillsurelyhelpyoumakenewfriendsandbuildyourconfidence.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型3】Inaddition,doingmoreexerciseinyoursparetimeisawonderfulwaytorelieveyourstress,becausesportswillalsohelpyousleepbetteratnight.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）8．DearEditor,IamLiHua,astudentfromGrade1.Iamwritingtodiscussthetrafficproblemnearourschoolgate.Withsomanyparentstakingtheirchildrentoschool,trafficjamsarefrequentneartheschoolgate,causingalotofinconveniencetous.Inordertoavoidtrafficjams,Istronglyrecommendsomeeffectivemeasuresbetaken.First,ridingabikeorgoingtoschoolonfootisagoodchoice,whichnotonlyhelpstoreducetrafficjams,butalsobuildupstudents’health.Second,privatecarsshouldnotbeallowedtoparkinfrontoftheschoolgate.Idohopemysuggestionswillbeconsideredandtheproblemcanbesolvedsoon.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据提示用英语写一封信，就如何解决学校门口的拥堵向校报投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累减少：reduce→decrease建议：suggestion→advice考虑：consider→takeintoconsideration解决：solve→workout2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Withsomanyparentstakingtheirchildrentoschool,trafficjamsarefrequentneartheschoolgate,causingalotofinconveniencetous.拓展句：Assomanyparentstaketheirchildrentoschool,trafficjamsarefrequentneartheschoolgate,causingalotofinconveniencetous.【点睛】【高分句型1】First,ridingabikeorgoingtoschoolonfootisagoodchoice,whichnotonlyhelpstoreducetrafficjams,butalsobuildupstudents’health.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Idohopemysuggestionswillbeconsideredandtheproblemcanbesolvedsoon.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）9．Dearheadmaster,I’mwritingtorequestyoutoallowustosurftheInternetinthecomputerclassroom.WithouttheInternet,weareunabletousethecomputerconveniently,whichmakesusveryunpleasantbecausewecan’tsearchfortheinformationwhenweareinneedofit.AsfarasIamconcerned,itwouldbebeneficialforusifyouallowustosurftheInternet.Foronething,wecansearchforanswerstodealwithsomeproblemsthatwemightencounterinourlives.Foranother,itisnecessaryforustolearnaboutthelatestnews.Wewillfailtoconnectthesociety,eventheworldifwecannotreachtheInternet.Lastbutnotleast,wearenotchildrenanymore,sowehavetheabilitytoberesponsibleforourbehavior.Ipromisewewon’tutilizetheInternetforunreasonablepurposes.Iwouldappreciateitalotifyoucantakemyadvicein