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读后续写写作：JointheSchoolChoirLookingbackatmylife,IfoundthatthemostimportanteventoccurredwhenIwasin4thgrade.Fromthebeginningofthesemester,IstartedlearningdancingeverySaturday,butIdidn'tdowellinthefirstfewmonths.Mrs.Smith,mydancingteacher,alsomymusicteacherinmyschool,keptteachingmeandhelpedmewitheverymovementButitalwaysenhancedtooslowly.Ibegantogiveupandcanceledthisclass.Fewdayslater,wehadamusicclassatschool.WesangsongswhileMrs.Smithwasplayingpiano.Thebeautifulmelodysuffused[thewholeclassroom.Everyonewasveryearnest,lookinguptheteacherandfollowingtherhythm.AlthoughIwasnotgoodatsinging,Iwassingingreallyhard.Allthethingsinthisclassroomseemedveryharmonious.Wehadafreeclassaftersinging.Wejustsatonourchairsandtalkedtoeachother.AndMrs.Smithstartedtotalkabouttheschoolchoirthatsheledverywell.I'veseensomemembersbefore,whoareexcellentandgraceful.IwasimaginingifonedayIjoinintheschoolchoirthatwillbereallyawesome:wehavecompetitionseverymonth;wedogreatperformanceeverytime;wegetpopularinourschool.Thosewerejustmyimagination.Idon'tthinkonedayIcanbeoneofthedancers.Justthen,Mrs.Smithsaidmynameintheclass,“Angelinawasinmydancingclass.Shewasreallyhard-workingandtough.Ihopeshecouldrejoininmyclassandpracticemoretobeamemberoftheschoolchoir."Everyoneturnedbackandlookedatmewithamazedface.Iflushedtomatored.Mrs.Smithwaspleasedtolaugh.Wehadareallysilentmoment.Andthenthebellrang,thestudentsbegantoleave.There'sagirlwalkinguptomewithsomeofherfriends.HernameisCarrie,whoisapianoplayerandalsorecommendedtojointheschoolchoir.Shefacedme,andsaidtoherfriends:"Doyouthinkshereallycanjointheschoolchoir?It'sunbelievable!”Herfriendsthrewherafaintsmile.Ididn'tevenreactforthisbriefmoment,andtheyleft.Paragraphl:Withinthetime,Ifeltthattherefsastrongforcestrikingmypride.Paragraph2:Finally,becauseofmyperseveranceandefforts,Ijoinedtheschoolchoir. 参考范文：Withinthetime,Ifeltthatthere'sastrongforcestrikingmypride.Iwasveryangryanddidn'tknowwhattodonext.Istoodup,walkingoutoftheclassroom.There'snooneelseonthefloor,justme.Iwalkedveryslowlywithheaddown.Thegentlebreezeflickedmyface.Istopped.There'sastrongvoicecomingfrommymind,aGobacktothedancingclass.Don'tgiveupuntilyougetintotheschoolchoir,andyouwillprovetothemthatyoucanmakeit,"Later,Itooktheclassagain;Ipracticedeverynight.Finally,becauseofmyperseveranceandefforts,Ijoinedintheschoolchoir.IdidthesamethingasIimaginedbefore.Carriewassurprisedaboutme.Shesaidsorrytomeatonce.Ijustfeltreallyhappyandenjoyableduringtherestofmyschoolyearsinelementaryschool.Atfirst,Iwasshyandlackedconfidence,butafterwardIwasaspirantandstrivedreallyhard.IrealizedthatIcandoanythingifIjustputonmorefocusandworkinghard,don'tgiveupeasilyandtrythebest.Iwillneverrepentmyfinaldecision.考场优秀作文1Withinthetime,Ifeltthatthere'sastrongforcestrikingmypride.AtthethoughtofCarrieandherfriendslaughingatmetomyface,Iwasovercomebytheurgetoprovemyself.Mypreviousself-doubtgavewaytothefeelingofbeingoverlooked.IrejoinedthedancingclassandturnedtoMrs.SmitheverytimeIhaddoubtswithasinglemovement.ShewaspatientandkindasusualWhileIwasconcentratedandcareful.Overandoveragain,Ipracticeddancingafterschool,listeningtothemelodies,imitatingfacialexpressionsandmanagingtocarveeverymotionintomymind.Thefollowingseveralmonthswitnessedmystiffandclumsyfigureturnedsofterandlighter.Andeventually,IwascapableofdancingsmoothlyandgracefullyandthenIsignedupforthechoirconfidently.Finally,becauseofmyperseveranceandefforts,Ijoinedintheschoolchoir.ThefirstdayIsteppedintotheclassroomoftheschoolchoir,IdiscoveredCarrie,standingamongtheothermembers,eyesgluedtome,chinsdropped.Ienjoyedsinginganddancingthatday,andafterclass,Carrieturnedtome.Sheshuffledup,flushedscarletandsaidsorrytome.Sheapologized,shouldn'thavebeensorudetoyouandcouldwebecomefriends?"Abrightsmilecreptuponmyface.Ireachedoutmyhandsforher.Then,overthenextperiodoftime,wedidgreatperformancestogetherandgotpopularinourschool.Reflectingontheexperience,Iwasgratefultohersomehow.Afterall,itwasshethathelpedmetastethesweetofperseverance.考场优秀作文2Withinthetime,Ifeltthatthere'sastrongforcestrikingmypride.ReflectingonCarrie'soffensivewords,Isensedanemotionaltsunamiofrageandunyieldingdignitywashingoverme,"NeverwillIsworetobeather,changinghermind.Fromthenon,IrejoinedMrs.Smith'sdancingclasswithblazingdetermination.Delightedtoseemypresence,sheofferedtotransformme,astiffwoodintoagracefulswan.However,Iwasstillunabletoadjustmymovementstofollowtherhythm.Oneday,whenIwasfrustratedandleaningagainstthewindow,Iwasinspiredbyatinybirdstretchingitsswingstoembracethesky.Suddenly,Ifeltsomethingchangedinmybody,Imadeanattempttomovelikethebird,twitteringandglidingandintegratingmyselfintothemusic.NotonlydidImakeit,butalsoputmorepracticeinit.ThenIkeptpracticingdayafterday.Finally,becauseofmyperseveranceandefforts,Ijoinedintheschoolchoir.Theinstantthenewscame,allmytirednessandfatiguegavewaytono-edgeexhilarationandpride.Thenextday,Isteppedintotherehearsalroom,withmyheadraisedup.TherestoodCarrie,herchawopeningwideandhereyespoppingout!Whatanamusingexpression!Withthetonguetiedandherfacetomatored,shecameuptomeandapologizedtomeJTmreallysorryandItakebackwhatIsaid!CanIplaythepianoforyourdancing?”Inoddedandhuggedher.Tobefrank,sheplayedwonderfully,holdingmeentirelyinhermusic.Amazingly,myimaginationcametrue:wedidhavecompetitionseverymonth;wedidgreatperformanceeverytime;wegotpopularinourschool!Tomygreatsurprise,Carriebecamemygoodfriend,thepreciousexperienceintheschoolchoirundoubtedlyhadalife-longimpactonme.读后续写写作：AgiftboxInthebackofmyclosetisasmallboxthathasfollowedmetoeverynewaddress.ItfsthefirstthingIfindaplaceforasthemovingtruckpullsaway.Theonlyremainingcontentsinitaredozensofnotesinmymother'stidywriting.Mymother,whoputherbusinessdegreetouserunningasmallcompanywithmyfather,whileraisingme,wasalwayspreparedandalwaysgavemeabundantlove.Bydaythemademarketingslogansanddistributionstrategies.Bynight:Hubblebathsandbedtimestories.SheandIhadthesameFebruarybirthday.Eachyearmyparentsarrangedwonderfulparties.WhenIwas3,shelearnedshehadadvancedbreastcancerandimmediatelybegantopreparebyresearchingeveryavailabletreatment.Eachday,shewouldsitforhoursatourdiningtable,herstraightdarkhairtiedback,surroundedbypilesofpaper,studying,technicalparagraphs.WhenIwas7,thematerialsonthediningtablebegantochange.Wrapping（包装）paperandribbonstooktheplaceofherhighlightedpages.Scissorsswishedthroughgiftwrap.Papercreased（折）underherfingers.Ribboncuttolengthwithonesnip.Knotscametogetherwithatinycreak.Swish,crease,snip,creak.Shehadbegunassembling（装酉己）agiftboxforme.Inside,shepackedpresentsandlettersforthemilestonesofmylifeshewouldmiss--graduation,wedding,andeverybirthdayuntiltheageof30.Mymotherdied10daysbeforeoursharedbirthday.Thatmorning,whenIturned12andshewouldhaveturned49,Iwokeupearlyandopenedtheboxasmymotherhadshownme.Neatrowsofbrightlywrappedpresentsglowedlikethespringtulips（郁金香）thatwerejustcomingupinthefrontyard.Inthepackagemarked"12thBirthday",Ifoundalittleringwithanamethyst（紫水晶）atitscenter.Awhitecardcurlingaroundthepresentread:nIalwayswantedabirthstoneringwhenIwasalittlegirLIhopeyoulikeit,too.Happybirthday,darlinggirl!Love,yourMommy."para.1Onthemorningofmyhighschoolgraduation,Iwalkedtothebox. para.2TodayIhit31,andIsatinmyroom,holdingthenearlyemptybox. 范文1Para.l:Onthemorningofmyhighschoolgraduation,Iwalkedtothebox.Theboxsatquietlyatthefootofmybed,asifwaitingforme.Iopenedit,foundoutthepackagelabeled"graduation"andunwrappedit.Astrandof（一串）pearlsmadeasoundlikeamaraca（沙壬求）asIdrewthemfromthebox.Hernoteread,“Thereseemedtobeatraditioninmyfamilythatwhengirlsgraduatedfromhighschool,theyreceivedastringofpearls.Youmustbeshinyattheceremony."AsIread,Iwantedtofallthroughthewhite,lightlytextured（质地不平的）pageandintoherarms.Wearingthepearlsthatafternoon,Iacceptedmydiploma.Para.2:TodayIhit31,andIsatinmyroom,holdingthenearlyemptybox.For20yearsIhavepulledmothering（母亲的呵护）fromthebox.WhenIwasachild,openingthenextpackagefeltlikeatreasurehunt.AsIgrewolder,itbegantofeellikesomethingfarmorefundamental,hermessagesmeetingmelikeguideposts（路牌］inadarkforest.Thereisnogiftsleftintheboxnow,buttheselettersareaconstantreminderthatIhavealreadybeengivenwhateverychild,whateveryhuman,needs.Ihavebeenfiercely,extravagantly/ik'straevag3ntii/（过度地，wildlyloved.Theloveispowerfulenoughtohelpmecarvemylifeinthenext20years,andmywholelife.范文2Para.l:Onthemorningofmyhighschoolgraduation,Iwalkedtothebox.Withgreatcare,Iopeneditandfoundthewell-packedgift