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流程6点参考要领： (例如：Itcanbeseenfromthegraphthat…Thediagramshowsthestagesintheprocessofmakingchocolate.(所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：process整个过Chocolatecomesfromthecacaotree,whichisgrowninpartsofSouthAmerica,AfricaandIndonesia.(开头不能一上来就直接介绍cacaotree,而是 词chocolate引出，否则显得太唐突)【流程图特点之一：介绍过程要 语态】Thetreeproduceslargeredpodswhichcontainwhitecocoabeans.【流程图特点之四：使用一些表示顺序的连接词】whenthepodsareripe,theyareharvested,thebeansareremovedandtheyarefermentedforseveraldaysinlargewoodenboxes.(三个句子的并列：“A,BandC”。)Duringthefermentingprocessthebeansturnbrown.【流程图特点之五：要适当地添 Next,thebrownbeansarespreadinthesuntodry.Theyarethenputinlargesacksandtransportedbytrainorlorry.Afterthis,thebeansaretakentoachocolatefactorywheretheyareroastedinanovenattemperaturesofbetween250and350degreeCelsius.Afterbeingroasted,thebeansarecrushedandtheouters removed.Thispartisnotneededformakingchocolate.Finally,theinnerpartofthebeanispressedandliquidchocolateisproduced.【流程图特点Theprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustrycanbeoutlinedinsevenconsecutivesteps.Firsttherawmaterial,clay,whichwasjustbelowthesurfaceofsoilincertainclay-richareashastobedugupbyadigger.Thenthelumpsofclayare cedonametalgridinordertobreakupthebigchunksofclayintomuchsmallerareas,whichfallthroughthemetalgridontoaroller,whosemotionfurthersegregatesthebitsofclay.Sandandwaterareaddedtomakeahomogenousmixture,whichistheneitherformedinmouldsorcutintobrick-shapedpiecesbymeansofawireThosefreshbricksarethenkeptinadryingovenforatleast24andaumof48hours,severaldozensifnothundredsofbricksataThedriedbricksarethentransferredtoaso-calledkiln,anothertypeofhightemperatureoven.Firsttheyarekeptatamoderatetemperatureof200℃-1300℃.Thisprocessisfollowedbycoolingdownthefinishedbricksfor48to72hoursinacoolingchamber.Oncethebrickshavecooleddownandhave ehard,theygetpackagedanddeliveredtotheirfinaldestination,beitabuildingsiteor(215BandThisresponsefullysatisfiestherequirementsofthetask.Allkeyfeaturesofeachstageoftheprocessareappropria yandaccura ypresented.Anexcellentoverviewisgivenatthebeginningoftheresponseandthisskilfullyincorporatespartoftherubric,changingthegr function,togiveabriefsummaryofthewholeprocess.Themessageisveryeasytoread,withseamlesscohesionthatattractsnoattention.Paragraphing,linkingandreferencingareallskilfullymanaged.Thelanguageusedisveryfluentandsophisticated.Awiderangeofvocabularyandstructuresareusedwithfullflexibilityandaccuracy.Onlyrareminor‘slips’canbefoundandthesedonotdetractfromthehighrating. 6的test3考到的流程图，考官给的范文。范文中有两步考官直Thefirstdiagramshowsthattherearefourmainstagesinthelifeofthesilkworm.第一个图显示了，在蚕的生命过程中主要有四步。Firstofall,eggsareproducedbythemothandittakestendaysforeacheggtoeasilkwormlarvathatfeedsonmulberryleaves首先，蛾子产出卵，10天的时间变成蚕的幼虫，他们以桑叶为食。Thisstagelastsforuptosixweeksuntilthelarvaproducesacocoonofsilkthreadarounditself.这个阶段持续最多到六个星期，直到幼虫周围生产出茧（silkthread）.Afteraperiodofaboutthreeweeks,theadultmothseventuallyemergefromthesecocoonsandthelifecyclebeginsagain.经过三个星期的一段时Thecocoonsaretherawmaterialusedfortheproductionofsilkcloth.茧是生产丝绸的原材料。Onceselected,theyareboiledinwaterandthethreadcanbeseparatedintheunwindingstage.一旦被挑选出来，他们在水里煮沸，丝可以在打开的阶段中被分离出来。Eachthreadisbetween300and900metreslongwhichmeanstheycanbetwistedtogether,dyedandthenusedtoproduceclothintheweavingstage.每条丝是300到900 Overall,thediagramsshowthatthecocoonstageofthesilkwormcanbeusedtoproducesilkcloththroughaverysimpleprocess. 动词使用丰富：produce,feedon,last,emerge,select,boil,separate,unwind,twist(多数原词带入)名词比较专业：lifecycle,raw雅思流程图的重点词汇解析：表述时间in10duringtheperiodof10Theprocesslastsforupto10daysafter10days10dayspasseduntilsomething表示然后：then,nextinthenextstate,followingthatafterthatthenextstepinthestageis....表示步骤：stepstage,顺序连词：firstfirstofallinthefirststage,initially,tobeginsecond,then,next,also,afterthat,atthesametime,intheme ,meanwhilepriorto,until,thefirststageinvolves…/inthesecondstage/inthethirdstage/inthelaststage/Thenextstepinthestageisthat…目的连词：inordertoinorderthatsoastoso常见动词produce生产，lay放置，accumulate积累，gather/collect收集，obtain获得，heatup加热，expand膨胀，bend弯曲，turnoff关闭，cooldown冷却，disconnect断开连接，spin旋转/纺，strike打击，compress压缩，release释放，expand膨胀，move/flow流动，accelerate加速，form形成，press按压，adjust调整，absorb吸收，form形成，process加工，rotate旋转，chop坎，grind磨(碎)/碾(碎)，light点燃，burn燃烧，ignite点燃，reflect反光，turn转，starts开始，stops结束，records ，turnsup调高，turnsdown调低，winds缠绕,unwinds解开，revolves旋转，fold折叠，unfold打开，reverse颠倒/倒转，adapt适应，adjust调整，alter改变，cure治愈，disappear dissolve溶化/解散，exchange交换，expand扩张/膨胀，fade退色，increase增长，promote促进/升职,reduce减少，renew使更新/使恢复，renovate革新/更新/修复， ce取代，swell肿胀，switch改变，transform完全改变，vary改变，swap交换，shrink收缩，melt溶解，heal/cure治愈， eintobeing/takeshape形成，produce生产，gain/get/acquire获取，evaporate蒸发，volatilize挥发，draw提取，recycle回收，extract拔，absorb吸收，collect收集，meet相遇，bemadeupof由...组成,bemadeof由...制成，bemadefrom由…制成，feedon以...为食，dependon/relyon依赖，release/sendout释放，sort分类，separate分开，conveyed运送，cutinto切成，pouredinto倒入，heated加热，meltedinto融化成，flowsinto流入-述的是一个地方（多为一个城镇）20069ATASK1，剑1TEST4。就这些图形，我们来总结地理变迁题的写作要点。..4.图 îThecarparkhasbeenremovedand cedbyaThenumberofhomesinTownAislikelyto(islikelyto=ispredictedto/isestimatedto/isprojectedto/istoItislikelythatthenumberofhomesinTownAwill(itislikelythat=itispredicted/estimated/projected/expected 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