2023年中考英语写作讲评课件

中考写作讲评交友建议父母恩情未来选择目录Howtogetalongwithothers假如你是某英语报Problem&Advice栏目的编辑Eva，你收到了读者Lisa的来信，她向你寻求帮助。请你根据信的内容，给Lisa回一封信。河南开封2023一模书面表达DearEva,Ihaveaseriousproblemnow.IthasbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschool,butIhaven’tmadeanyfriendsyet.Itisnoteasyformetogetonwithmyclassmates.WhatshouldIdotowintheirfriendship? Canyouhelpme?Yours,Lisa01针对Lisa遇到的问题，提出至少三条建议，可适当发挥。河南开封2023一模书面表达DearLisa, I’mgladtohearfromyou.Don’tworry.You’renotalone.Manystudentshavethesameproblemwhentheymovetoanewenvironment.Iwillgiveyousomeadviceonhowtosolvethisproblem._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ihopethesesuggestionsareusefultoyou.Yours,Eva02初来乍到如何结交新友交友建议howtogetalongwithothers机会：参加社团、活动性格：友好亲切、礼貌待人品质：尊重他人、善良助人机会：参加社团、活动takepartin,clubsandactivities,havemorechances,makenewfriendsYoucantakepartinsomeclubsandactivitiessothatyoucanhavemorechancestomakenewfriendssothat为了，以便todo不定式表目的性格：友好亲切、礼貌待人bekindandfriendly,smileat,bepoliteBeingkindandfriendlytopeopleisalsohelpful.Forexample,youcanoftensmileatyourteachersandclassmatesandtreatthemwithpoliteness.forexample例如❀Forexample,+句子…,suchas+名词品质：尊重他人、善良助人respect,helpItisagoodideatorespectpeopleandgetreadytohelpthem.respectv.尊敬，尊重bereadytodo乐于做，愿意做Iwillbea(an)________person河南开封2022一模书面表达02IwillbeabravepersonAsaboystudent,Iwanttobeabravepersoninthefuture. Amanhasmanyresponsibilities.Heissupposedtoprotecthisfamily.Heshoulddoalotforhisparents,wifeandchild,especiallywhenhemeetssometrouble.Besides,heshouldalsodosomethingforthesocietyandcountry.Ifhiscountryisnotstrongenough,howcanheandhisfamilylivehappily?So,Iwanttobebrave. Toreachmygoal,Iwilltrytostudywellatschool.Iwanttogotoagooduniversity.Iwillalsotakemoreexercisetomakemyselfstrong.Iwilltrymybesttomakeit.02要点归纳：Tobea_________personkindbravepositive要点归纳：Tobea_________personkindbravepositive意志坚定，不畏困难严以律己，自尊自立勤于思考，勇于实践待自己：多往好处想，强身健体、享受生活待他人：友好多微笑、及时沟通待事物：努力并期待美好的未来乐于助人尊老爱幼诚实友善Tobeakindperson乐于助人behelpful=offertohelpothers=bewillingtohelpothers=bereadytohelpothers尊老爱幼respecttheoldandlovetheyoung诚实友善behonestandfriendlyTobeanbraveperson意志坚定，不畏困难haveastrongwill,

feelfearlesswhenfacingdifficulty严以律己，自尊自立bestrictwithyourself,

beaconfidentandindependentperson勤于思考，勇于实践usemyheadasoftenaspossible≈thinkinacreativeway,takeactionformydreamTobeapositivepersonMy_________andI父母对孩子总是倾注全部的心血。请以“My_________andI”为题写一篇英语短文。短文应包含以下内容：1.在你幼年时，他（她/他们）如何照顾你；2.青春期的你和他（她/他们）有过什么样的隔阂、冲突；3.在毕业之际，你想对他（她/他们）说些什么。My_________andI_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________河南开封2021一模书面表达01MymotherandIMymotherwasadoctor.Shewasalwaysbusyinmymemory.WhenIwaslittle,shesometimesbroughtmetoheroffice.Whileshewasworking,Iplayedbymyself.Busyasshewas,shealwayssparedasmuchtimeasshecouldtobewithme.Iwashappythen.However,thesituationthatshewasbusyseemedunchangedasIenteredjuniorhighschool.Imetsomeproblemsatschool.Butmostofthetime,shewasn’ttherewhenIwantedtotalkwithheraboutmyproblems.Oneday,IyelledatherbecauseIthoughtshedidn’tcareaboutmeenough.Shehadalongtalkwithme.Iunderstoodhermoreandfeltsosorryaboutyellingather.Iknewshelovedmedeeply.

Soon,Iwillgraduatefromjuniorhighschool.AsIlookback,Icanpickupallpiecesofmemoriesofherloveforme.Iwanttosay,“Thankyou,Mom,Iloveyou.”河南开封2021一模书面表达02MymotherandIMymotherwasadoctor.Shewasalwaysbusyinmymemory.WhenIwaslittle,shesometimesbroughtmetoheroffice.Whileshewasworking,Iplayedbymyself.Busyasshewas,shealwayssparedasmuchtimeasshecouldtobewithme.Iwashappythen.However,thesituationthatshewasbusyseemedunchangedasIenteredjuniorhighschool.Imetsomeproblemsatschool.Butmostofthetime,shewasn’ttherewhenIwantedtotalkwithheraboutmyproblems.Oneday,IyelledatherbecauseIthoughtshedidn’tcareaboutmeenough.Shehadalongtalkwithme.Iunderstoodhermoreandfeltsosorryaboutyellingather.Iknewshelovedmedeeply.

Soon,Iwillgraduatefromjuniorhighschool.AsIlookback,Icanpickupal