书面表达12篇（第一期）-2023高考英语北京市名校模拟真题速递

2023高考英语北京市名校模拟真题速递

第一期

专题09书面表达12篇

一、建议信

1.（2023秋・北京丰台•高三统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim来信，询问你如

何提高学习效率.请你给他写一封回信，介绍你的具体做法及原因。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

Inyourlastletter,youmentionedthatyouwantedtoknowhowtoimprovelearningefficiency.Tilgiveyou

someadvice.

Firstly,whenacquiringnewknowledge,youshouldtrytomakeconnectionswithwhatyouhavealready

learned.Secondly,youshouldlearntodo“spacedreview"，especiallyduringthefirstdayafterlearning.Besides,

therearesomecommonpracticesyoushouldknow,suchassleepingwellanddoingphysicalexercise.Allthesecan

helpimproveyourmemoryandlearneffectively.

Ihopemyadvicewillbeuseful.Ifyouneedmorehelp,pleaseletmeknow.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim写一封信，针对如何提高学习效率给出一些建

议并说明理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice一suggestion

首先：firstly^-firstofall

止匕夕卜：besides-what'smore

有帮助的：useful—>helpful

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Secondly,youshouldlearntodo“spacedreview”,especiallyduringthefirstdayafterlearning.

拓展句：Secondly,youshouldlearntodo“spacedreview”,especiallyduringthefirstdayafterlearning,whichcan

improvelearningefficiency.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Inyourlastletter,youmentionedthatyouwantedtoknowhowtoimprovelearning

efficiency4运用了that引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Ifyouneedmorehelp,pleaseletmeknow.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

二、申请信

2.（2023秋・北京房山・高三统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你获悉首都博物馆正在招募于暑假

期间做英文讲解的志愿者，向外国游客介绍中国文化。请你用英文给相关负责人写一封申请信，内容包括:

1.说明写信原因；

2.介绍你的相关经验和优势；

3.希望能被录用。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearSirorMadam,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearSirorMadam,

KnowingEnglishvolunteerguidesfortheForbiddenCityarewantedinthesummervacation,Iamwritingto

applyforthisposition.IamaSenior3studentinHongxingMiddleSchool,andIbelieveIamqualifiedforthe

position.Theseyears,IhavebeenonseveralexchangeprogramsinAmerica,whichmakesmeconfidentwithmy

communicationskillsinEnglish.Besides,asafanofChineseancienthistory,Iamsuremyknowledgewillprove

helpfulwhenintroducingtheForbiddenCitytoforeignguests.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldoffermethe

opportunity.

Thankyoufbryourconsideration.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【导语】本篇属于应用文，要求考生给首都博物馆写信申请成为该馆暑期英文讲解志愿者，介绍自己的优势

和经验。

【详解】1.词汇积累

胜任的：qualified—>competent

止匕夕卜：besides—>what,smore

确信的：sure—certain

有用的：helpful—>useful

提供：offer—provide

机会：opportunity—chance

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：KnowingEnglishvolunteerguidesfortheForbiddenCityarewantedinthesummervacation,Iamwritingto

applyfbrthisposition.

拓展句：AsIknowEnglishvolunteerguidesfortheForbiddenCityarewantedinthesummervacation,Iamwriting

toapplyforthisposition.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Theseyears,IhavebeenonseveralexchangeprogramsinAmerica,whichmakesme

confidentwithmycommunicationskillsinEnglish.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）

【高分句型2]Besides,asafanofChineseancienthistory,Iamsuremyknowledgewillprovehelpfulwhen

introducingtheForbiddenCitytoforeignguests,（when引导的时间状语从句的省略）

【高分句型3】Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

二、邀请信

3.（2023秋・北京东城•高三统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。市青年联合会面向全球发起“青春之

歌”主题原创诗歌征集活动。请你用英文给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.介绍活动；

2.邀请参与。

参考词汇：青年联合会YouthFederation

注意：1,词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim

IamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinanoriginalEnglishpoetrycontest,thethemeofwhichis"Songof

Youth”.

ThiseventwasinitiatedbytheYouthFederationtosolicitpoemsfromstudentsallovertheworld.Poemscanbe

aboutyouthfulfriendship,loveorconfusionandmustbewritteninEnglish.Notonlycanyoudescribeyourlifein

thepoems,butalsoyoucanexpressyouropinionsonthesetopics.Thecontentofthepoemsmustbehealthyand

positive.Theworksshouldbesubmittedasadocumentandsenttoliterature@163.com.Everystudentiswelcometo

takepartinthisactivityaslongasyouareinterestedinEnglishpoetry.

Lookforwardtoyourparticipation.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加以“青春之歌”为主

题的原创诗歌征集活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参力口：participatein—>takepartin

比赛：contest—>competition

表达：express^voice

主题：topic—>theme

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：ThiseventwasinitiatedbytheYouthFederationtosolicitpoemsfromstudentsallovertheworld.

拓展句：ThiseventwasinitiatedbytheYouthFederation,whichistosolicitpoemsfromstudentsallovertheworld.

【点睛】[高分句型l]Notonlycanyoudescribeyourlifeinthepoems,butalsoyoucanexpressyouropinionson

thesetopics.（notonly引导的倒装句）

[高分句型2]EverystudentiswelcometotakepartinthisactivityaslongasyouareinterestedinEnglishpoetry.（as

longas引导的状语从句）

四、感谢信/祝贺信

4.（2023秋・北京昌平•高三一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你参加了学校举办的线上英文演讲比赛。

在准备的过程中，你的英国朋友Jim给了你很多帮助。请你用英文给他写一封邮件表达感谢，内容包括：

1.介绍比赛结果；

2.回顾Jim对你的帮助。

注意：1.词数不少于100；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

Ican'twaittotellyouthegoodnewsthatIwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContestheldinourschool!

Iamwritingtoshowmygratitudetoyou.

Iwouldalwaysrememberthatbeforethecontest,yougavememanyvaluablesuggestionsabouthowto

performbetterduringthecontest,suchasreadingEnglishtextloudlyeverymorning.Besides,yourencouragement

alsomademefullofconfidence.Thankstoyourguidance,Ireallykeptcalmandshowedthebestofmyselfto

others.

Withoutyourpatienthelp,Icouldn'tmakesuchanachievement.Thankyouagainforyourkindness!Best

wishestoyou!

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本书面表达是一篇感谢信。要求考生以学生李华的身份对在准备英语演讲比赛过程中，给予了很多

帮助的英国朋友Jim写一封邮件表达感谢。

【详解】1.词汇积累

比赛：contest—>competition

感谢：gratitude—>thanks

有用的：valuable-useful

建议：suggestion—advice

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides,yourencouragementalsomademefullofconfidence.

拓展句：Besides,youencouragedmesomuchthatIwerefullofconfidence.

【点睛】［高分句型1］Ican'twaittotellyouthegoodnewsthatIwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContest

heldinourschool!（运用了that引导的同位语从句）

［高分句型2JIwouldalwaysrememberthatbeforethecontest,yougavememanyvaluablesuggestionsabouthow

toperformbetterduringthecontest,suchasreadingEnglishtextloudlyeverymorning.（运用了that弓I导的宾语从

句）

5.（2022秋・北京・高三北京八中校考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你因为是新冠病毒的密接人员

而居家隔离了一周，隔离期间，社区的外国志愿者Jim给予了你很多帮助，你打算给Jim写一封感谢信，内

容包括：

1.感谢所帮你做的事情；

2.对你的意义和你的感受。

注意：新冠病毒的密接人员：aclosecontactwithCOVID-19;

隔离：quarantinev./n.

1.词数100左右；

2.信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

I'mwritingthislettertoshowmyappreciationtoyouforyourhelpduringmyquarantine.

AsaclosecontactwithCOVID-19,1hadtostayathome.AsastudentinHongxingMiddleschool,!needstudy

tokeepupwithotherstudents,andyouofferedtohelpmewithmystudy.Notonlydidyouhelpmewithmystudy,but

youtookgoodcareofme.Withoulyourhelp,!wouldfallbehindothers.

Whatyoudidmeansalotforme.Ideterminetoworkhardandtobeapersonlikeyouwhohelpothersasa

volunteer.Thanksforyourdevotionagain!

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，因新冠密接而居家隔离，社区志愿者Jim给予许多帮助，

要求考生写•封感谢信，感谢他所做的事及这些事的意义及自身感受。

【详解】1.词汇积累建议：

感谢：appreciation—>gratitude

照顾：takecareof—>lookafter

帮助：help^favor

表达：show^express

2.句式拓展

同义句转化

原句：Whatyoudidmeansalotforme.Ideterminedtoworkhardandtobeapersonlikeyouwhohelpsothersasa

volunteer.

拓展句：Whatyoudidmeansalotforme,soIdeterminetoworkhardandtobeapersonlikeyouwhohelpsothers

asavolunteer.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Notonlydidyouhelpmewithmystudy,butyoutookgoodcareofme.（运用/notonly的

倒装句）

[高分句型2]Whatyoudidmeansalotforme.Ideterminetoworkhardandtobeapersonlikeyouwhohelps

othersasavolunteer.（运用了what引导的主语从句以及who引导的定语从句）

五、推荐信

6.（2023秋・北京朝阳•高三统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班交换生Jim打算利用寒假在家

锻炼身体，发来邮件向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：

1.推荐一款APP和推荐理由；

2.给出运动建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

Knowingthatyouplantoexerciseathomeduringthewintervacation,TmwritingtorecommendanAPPcalled

Keep.Firstofall,itwillprovideyouwithcoursessuitableforyouaccordingtoyourneeds.What'smore,itwillurge

userstocompletedailyexercisetasksandallowuserstosharetheirexercisestatus.

Inaddition,I'dliketogiveyousomeadviceonhowtoexercise.Youcanfitexerciseintoourbusyschedule,

makingitapartofyourdailyroutine.Youcanalsodosomeindoorsports,suchassit-upsandpush-ups.Butyou

shouldbecarefulnottoexercisetoomuch.

Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Jim写一封信，给他推荐一款运动APP并给出运动建

议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先：Firstofall—►firstly

提供给某人某物：providesb.withsth.—providesth.forsb.

止匕夕卜：what'smore—>besides

建议：advice—>suggestion

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Butyoushouldbecarefulnottoexercisetoomuch.

拓展句：Butyoushouldbecarefulnottoexercisetoomuch,whichisharmfultoyourhealth.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Knowingthatyouplantoexerciseathomeduringthewintervacation,I'mwritingto

recommendanAPPcalledKeep.（运用了that引导的宾语从句作Knowing的宾语）

【高分句型21Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.（运用了that引导的宾语从句作hope的宾语，省略了that）

六、告知信/通知

7.（2022秋.北京石景山.高三统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为了丰富生活，你所在的班级开

展了“家务小能手”主题展示活动。你的英国好友Jim得知情况后，来信询问有关信息。请你回复一封电子邮

件，内容包括：

1.活动内容；

2.收获及感受。

提示词：家务小能手展示活动HouseworkTalentShow

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

I'mdelightedtohearfromyourecently.LearningthatyouareinterestedintheHouseworkTalentShowactivity,

I'dliketosharemyideaswithyou.

Tostartwith,inordertoenrichourschoollife,ourclasslaunchedsuchanactivity.Itappealstoallstudentsto

makeeffortstohelptheirparentsinthehousework.Studentscouldeithertakepicturesoftheirhelpinghandinthe

dailylifeorposttheirassistanceworkonline.Eventually,allthestudents'performanceswillbedisplayedonthe

schoofsadvertisingboard,andthewinnerwillbegivenaswell.

Byparticipatinginthisactivity,itnotonlyhelpsmerealizethehardshipsofmyparents,butalsoinspiresmeto

studyhard.

Yburs,

LiHua

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jim回复一封电子邮件，向其介绍班级开展的“家务小能手”

主题展示活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted-pleased

首先：tostartwith—>tobeginwith

举办：launch—»hold

参与：participateinttakepartin

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Eventually,allthestudents'performanceswillbedisplayedontheschool,sadvertisingboard,andthewinner

willbegivenaswell.

转换句：Eventually,allthestudents'performanceswillbedisplayedontheschool'sadvertisingboard,wherethe

winnerwillbegivenaswell.

【点睛】【高分句型1】

LearningthatyouareinterestedintheHouseworkTalentShowactivity,I'dliketosharemyideaswithyou.（运用了

现在分词作状语）

【高分句型2】

Byparticipatinginthisactivity,itnotonlyhelpsmerealizethehardshipsofmyparents,butalsoinspiresmetostudy

hard.（运用了notonly...butalso...的句式）

8.（2022秋・北京大兴•高三统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国笔友Jim来邮件询问你的

居家学习和生活情况。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

1.充实的学习活动

2.丰富的课余生活

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

It*smypleasuretotellyousomethingaboutmylearningactivitiesinthequarantineperiod.

BecauseoftheCOVID-2019,ourschoolarrangedforustostudyonline.Onlinelearningisnotboringbut

interesting,whichisaboutwhatwewilllearnatschool.What*smore,Ialsomadealearningplanthatissuitablefor

myself.It'sbeneficialformetomakefulluseoftime.

Asformyafter-classactivities,Ioftendosomejoggingeverydayinmycommunitytokeepfit.Helpingmy

parentswithhousechoresisalsomydailyroutine,whichincludesmoppingthefloor,washingdishesandsoon.

You'rewelcometosende-mailsifyouhaveanyquestions.

Yburs,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim写一封邮件，介绍居家学习和生活将框。

【详解】1.词汇积累

无聊的：boring—»dull

止匕夕卜：whafsmore一besides

关于:asfbr—withregardto

保持健康：keepfit-keephealthy

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Asformyafter-classactivities,Ioftendosomejoggingeverydayinmycommunitytokeepfit.

拓展句：Asformyafter-classactivities,IoftendosomejoggingeverydayinmycommunityinorderthatIcankeep

fit.

【点睛】【高分句型11Onlinelearningisnotboringbutinteresting,whichisaboutwhatwewilllearnatschool.（运

用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和what引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2]Helpingmyparentswithhousechoresisalsomydailyroutine,whichincludesmoppingthefloor,

washingdishesandsoon.（运用了动名词短语作主语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

9.（2022秋・北京•高三清华附中校考一模）学校将于本周三下午组织国际部部分学生返校参加主题为“校园清

洁人人有责”的义务劳动，请你用英语写一份口头通知。内容包括：

1.说明活动意义并简述活动内容（如整理图书馆、打扫公共卫生区等）；

2.提醒携带相关工具及其它注意事项。

注意：1.词数100字左右；

2.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Hello,everyone.

Thafsall.Thankyou.

【答案】Hello,everyone.

Inordertoprotectthecampusenvironment,createagoodlearningandlivingenvironmentandatthesametime

cultivatethestudents9awarenessandhabitofprotectingenvironment,ourschoolwillorganizeanactivity"cleanness

ofthecampus——everyone9responsibility^^.StudentsfromtheInternationalDepartmentmaycomebacktoschoolto

participateinthisvoluntarylabor.Duringtheactivity,wewillhelptidyupthelibraryandcleanupthepublichealth

areas.Ifyouareinterestedinthisactivity,pleasebringyourbrooms,trashcansandragsandcomeontime.Itisin

frontoftheschoollibrarythatwewillmeetatthreeo'clockonWednesdayafternoon.

Thafsall.Thankyou.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份口头通知，通知国际部部分学生返校参加主题为“校园清

洁人人有责”的义务劳动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

培养：cultivate—develop

组织：organize—>arrange

职责：responsibility—>duty

参力口：participatein—takepartin

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：StudentsfromtheInternationalDepartmentmaycomebacktoschooltoparticipateinthisvoluntarylabor.

拓展句：StudentswhocomefromtheInternationalDepartmentmaycomebacktoschooltoparticipateinthis

voluntarylabor.

【点睛】（高分句型1]Ifyouareinterestedinthisactivity,pleasebringyourbrooms,trashcansandragsandcome

0ntime.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

【高分句型2]Itisinfrontoftheschoollibrarythatwewillmeetatthreeo'clockonWednesdayafternoon.（运用

了强调句型强调地点状语）

七、其他应用文

10.（2023秋・北京西城•高三统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校正在为高三毕业典礼征集活动

方案。你有意参加，并对活动设计形成了一些想法。请你给英国好友Jim写一封邮件询问他的建议。内容包

括：

1.介绍设计想法；

2.说明设计理由。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

Myschooliscollectingdesignsforthegraduationceremony.Tmwritingtosharemyideawithyouandaskfor

youradvice.

First,theceremonyshouldbeonweekend,thusallowingalltheparentsandteacherstobepresent,makingthis

eventlivelier.Itwillkickoffwithaninspiringspeechdeliveredbytheprincipal,followedbyavideofeaturingthose

unforgettablemomentsofourschoollifeandthepresentationofdiplomas.Weneedtosetupa"gratitudewall”，

wherewecanexpressourgratitudetoourteachers,friendsandparents,withoutwhosehelpwecouldhardlysucceed.

Duringthelastsession,studentscanopenthefloortotalkabouttheirfuture,sharingtheirambitionswitheachother.

Sowhatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就高三毕业典礼征集活动方案给英国好友Jim写一封邮件，介

绍自己的设计想法，说明设计理由，并询问他的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice—>suggestion

鼓舞人心的：inspiring—encouraging

表达：express^convey

畅所欲言：openthefloor—>speakoutfreely

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Itwillkickoffwithaninspiringspeechdeliveredbytheprincipal,followedbyavideofeaturingthose

unforgettablemomentsofourschoollifeandthepresentationofdiplomas.

拓展句：Itwillkickoffwithaninspiringspeechdeliveredbytheprincipal,whichwillbefollowedbyavideo

featuringthoseunforgettablemomentsofourschoollifeandthepresentationofdiplomas.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Itwillkickoffwithaninspiringspeechdeliveredbytheprincipal,followedbyavideo

featuringthoseunforgettablemomentsofourschoollifeandthepresentationofdiplomas.（运用了过去分词作后置

定语、状语，现在分词作后置定语）

【高分句型2]Weneedtosetupa“gratitudewall”,wherewecanexpressourgratitudetoourteachers,friendsand

parents,withoutwhosehelpwecouldhardlysucceed.（运用了动词不定式作宾语，where和whose引导的非限制

性定语从句，含without的含蓄条件句的虚拟语气）

11.（2023秋・北京海淀•高三统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将与国际友好校联合举办主题

为“我是美食家（Gastronome）”的英语线上交流活动，请你用英语写一份发言稿，内容包括：

1.介绍你学会的一道美食并简述做法；

2.谈谈学做这道美食的感受及活动的意义。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词语：美食一delicacy;

Hello,everyone!

Thatsall.Thankyou.

【答案】Hello,everyone.

I'mverydelightedtosharewithyouatraditionalChinesedelicacyI'velearnedtomakefrommyparents,

dumplings.

AsoneofthemosticonicdishesinChinesecuisine,dumplingsareshapedlikesilveringots,representingwealth.

Whenmakingdumplings,youneedtowrapthefillingsmadeofvegetables,meatorseafoodwiththinpiecesof

dough.Aftertheyaremade,youneedtoputthemintoboilingwatertogetthemwellcooked.

Makingdumplingsrequiresteamworkandpatience.Itisalsorewardingtospendtimeworkingwithfamily

members.ThisonlinesharingoffersmeachancetounderstandourChinesefoodculturebette匚

HopeyoucantryityourselfandI'mexpectingtoappreciatedelicaciesfromyourculture.

That'sall.Thankyou.（120words）

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生用英语写一份发言稿，介绍一道美食并简述做法，同时谈谈学做这道美

食的感受及学校举办这次活动的意义。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted—>pleased

象征，代表：representstandfor

要求：require—>dema