高考英语作文复习点拨与演练

高考英语作文复习点拨与演练一题型解读命题重视“新材料、新情境”的创设与运用，考查考生的综合语言运用能力。新材料、新情景的创设与运用，主要体现在词汇和语法知识、完形填空、阅读理解、阅读表达等题目的选材上，这些题目应注重选取贴近考生、贴近生活、新颖的、时代感强的材料。高考英语写作题的主题最好涉及与每个考生密切相关的内容，这样可以引导考生思考现实问题，使每个考生均有内容可写，充分发挥自己的水平，展示其英语写作能力，而不是单纯地为了写作而写作。应试技巧点拨1.首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步确定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。2.列题纲使要点条理化，有序化，统筹安排布局。3.勿要直译，需意译。尤其对看图情景作文要构建完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。4.要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语，力求文理通顺，语言准确。没有把握的词句不要写，确有把握的的可以锦上添花。5.遇到一时想不起的词语，需变通。可以用同义近义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉化表达。6.注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定，如果内容多应多用复杂句式，如果内容不多，为了达到词的限数应多用简单句式，并适当增补合理内容。7.注意保持卷面整洁，书写工整清楚。书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。8.最后应注意复查全文。看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写是否规范，是否有语病等。总之，要心有全局。英文写作如果结构意识良好，应试写作就简化成为一个填空的过程了，适当地填入观点、素材，文章就自然而然立起来了。临考在即，同学们要牢记英语写作的基本要领，特编顺口溜如下：细审题，巧构思，列要点，防遗漏。写日记，同汉语；书信、通知格式要牢记。看清图表细梳理，写人记事按顺序；完稿后查遗漏，整洁干净莫忘记。英语作文写作“四步走”由于时间限制，高考时一般在15分钟左右必须完成英语作文。高考的英语作文步骤如下：1.作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。2.考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些动词和词组等。3.边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。4.写完后一定要再细看一遍。最后冲刺阶段的英语写作1.重视增加阅读量是提高英语写作的途径之一目前，考生在进行大量阅读的同时，应注重所读材料的文章结构以及连接词的运用（ontheotherhand,however,furthermore）、作者的表达方式（词汇、习惯用语和典型句子的使用）、作者是如何进行叙述和议论的。2.在教师的指导下，平时应勤写多练练习写作应从基本功抓起。在中译英翻译训练过程中，加强积累适量的词汇、词组和增加各种类型句子的运用。把握好各种句型和词汇的搭配，并从各类题材和体裁着手，多阅读好的范文。然后模仿写作，作文写好之后，一般都要修改。第一遍收笔后，先看一看结构，然后从字词上推敲，使文章“充实”起来。更重要的是经老师修改过的作文一定要仔细地看一至两遍，然后再认真地抄写一遍，收获将会很大。二1.阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇120—150词的短文。自2008年6月1日起，在所有超市、商场、集贸市场等商品零售场所实行塑料购物袋有偿使用制度，一律不得免费提供塑料购物袋。请你结合自己的生活实际，自拟题目，谈谈自己对该项规定的看法与建议。参考答案：Say“No”toPlasticBagsPlasticbagswillnotbeprovidedfreeinthesupermarkets,departmentstoresandothermarketssinceJune1st,2022.customersneedtopayforit.I’minfavorofthisact.Inmyview,thegovernmentisstartingtoattachimportancetoprotectingtheenvironment.Italsoremindspeopletobeawareoftheresponsibilitytoprotectourenvironment.Aswellallknow,plasticbagsmakeourshoppingeasyandconvenient.However,ittakesaverylongtimeforthemtobreakup.Asaconsequence,theycancauseseriouspollution,whichdoesgreatharmtooursurroundings.What’sworse,theycanbemistakenlyusedinourdailylife.Therefore,Istronglyrecommendthateveryoneofusshouldtakeitseriouslyandtrymorerecyclablebags,likepaperoneswhenshoppingtomakeourenvironmentmorefriendly.2.阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇120—150词的短文。（开头已给出，不计入总词数。）最近，山东省教育厅下重手整治全省中小学加班加点的现象。作为一名高三学生，请结合自己及身边的实际谈谈你对这一举措的认识。ShandongProvincialEducationDepartmenthasrecentlytakenstrictmeasurestomakesurethatnostudenthastogotoschoolonweekendsorduringofficialholidays.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案： ShandongProvincialEducationDepartmenthasrecentlytakenstrictmeasurestomakesurethatnostudenthastogotoschoolonweekendsorduringofficialholidays.ForthefirsttimeinourseniormiddleschoollifemyfriendsandIenjoyedafull-lengthwintervacation,andforthefirsttimeinyearswearefreetodowhatisnecessaryandimportanttomeetourpersonalneeds.Inthepastyears,wekeptworkinghardfrommorningtillnightinordertogetahighermarkinthecollegeentranceexam.Weomittedeverything(suchasartclasses,socialactivities,etc.)thatdidnothaveadirectrelationshipwiththatgoal.Consequently,manyofusareweakbothphysicallyandmentally.Over70percentofmyclassmatesarenear-sighted…Ifthewholegenerationofuscontinuetolivethisway,whatwouldthefutureofournationbelike?!I’dliketoexpressmyheartfeltthankstoourresponsiblegovernmentforitswiseandtimelydecisiontobringallthattoanend.3.某英文网站正在开展关于“是否取消黄金周”的讨论。请你根据下面所给的要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,描述目前存在的两种看法,并陈述你的观点,以便向该网站投稿。赞成取消的人认为：反对取消的人认为：你的观点1.给交通、旅游者安全和环境带来巨大的压力；2．购票难；3．服务质量下降1．消费需求得到满足；2．促进旅游业和经济发展……注意：1．词数：120~150字；2．参考词汇：黄金周theGoldenWeek（或以theGW代替）参考答案：Inrecentdays,adiscussionisbeingcarriedonaboutwhethertheGoldenWeekshouldbecancelledSomepeopleagreedtocanceltheGoldenWeek.Theypointedoutthatnationwidetravelinghasputbigpressureontransportation,touristsafetyandtheenvironment.TheGoldenWeekresultsincrowdedscenicspotsandpackedhotels,makingthequalityofservicedecline.However,otherpeoplearguethegoldenweekhasencouragedpeopletospendmoreduringtheseven-dayholidaysoithasbroughthugeprofitstothenation’stourismindustryandpromotedtheeconomicgrowth.DespitethefactthatvoicescallingforitscancellationarebecomingevenstrongerIstillthinkpeopleneedtorelaxandcommonvacationtimeisveryimportant.Itshouldtakeintoconsiderationnotonlyincomes,butalsothesatisfactionofthosewhotaketheholiday.Opinionsofthosewhoobject：Inmyopinion,thecurrentgoldenweekmightaswellbecanceledandweshouldreadjustthenation’spublicholidays.Thenew1istofpublicholidaysmayincludeimportanttraditionalfestivals,suchastheDragonBoatFestivalandtheMid-AutumnFestival. 4.根据表格的内容，写一篇短文，介绍中西方饮食的不同，并发表自己的看法。字数在120~150之间。食物类别优点缺点中国饮食小麦、大米、豆类、蔬菜、少量鱼和肉是一个比较平衡的饮食；富含纤维；低糖、低脂肪有时能量不足西方饮食牛奶、糖、牛排、三明治、汉堡包提高足够的能量一个不太合理的饮食；容易引起肥胖和疾病参考答案： Astwodifferentcultures,thereareseveraldifferencesbetweenChineseandWesterndiets.Generally,Chinesefoodisafairlyhealthydiet.Peopleinthesouthmainlyeatrice,whileinthenorthpeopleliveonwheat,beansandsoon.Besides,Chineseeatplentyofvegetables,togetherwithalittlemeatandfish.TheadvantageofChinesedietisthatitisrichinfiber,lowinsugarandfat.Theshortcomingisthatitsometimesdoesn’tprovideenoughenergy. TheWesterndiethasitsowncharacter.Westernpeoplelivemainlyonmilk,sugarandmeat.Suchfoodsassandwiches,hamburgersgivehighenergy.Thedisadvantageisthatitcontainstoomuchsugarandfat,whichcanbringpeoplesometroubleslikeoverweightorheartdisease. WhataboutcombiningtheChineseandWesterndietstogether?Itmustbeaninterestingattempt.5．据报道，目前我国居民每日使用塑料袋约30亿个，中国已成为白色污染大国。自今年6月1日起，全国的商品零售场所将不再免费提供塑料购物袋。请根据左侧的漫画，结合生活实际，用英语写一篇120—150词的短文，谈谈你对“限塑令”的看法。参考答案：ItisreportedthataroundthreehundredmillionplasticbagsareusedbyChineseresidentseachday.Asisknowninthepicture,theearthiscryingforhelpbecauseofthisseriouswhitepollution.Toourjoy,alltheshoppingplaceswillbebannedfromprovidingfreeplasticbagsfromJune1thisyear.Ican’tagreemoretothis.Foralongtime,thoughwehaveknownthebadeffectsofplasticbagsonourenvironment,stillwefinditdifficulttorefusethem---theyaresoconvenienttous.Thankstothegovernment,firmmeasuresaretobetakentolimitthem.Iamsurepeoplewillbecomeaccustomedtogivinguptheplasticbags.Onlybychangingthewaywetreattheearthcanweformaharmoniousrelationshipwithit.Savingtheearthissavingourselves.Stopusingplasticbags.6.为丰富学生生活，减轻学习压力，教育部要求中学生每天锻炼一小时，建议跳校园集体舞。家长对此有些担忧，怕影响学生学习。请你用英语写篇短文，谈谈你对此的看法。词数:120—150。参考答案： AnewdemandfromtheDepartmentofEducationrequiresatleastanhour’sexerciseperdayformiddleschoolstudents,suggestinghavingsuchactivitiesasgroupdancing,whichaimstomaketheschoollifemorecolorful. Butthisleadstosomeworriesfromsomeparents.Theywonderifgroupdancingwillhavesomebadeffectonyoungboysandgirls,causingsmallaffairslikepuppylove. Asastudentmyself,Ihavedifferentideafromourparents.Allthingshavetwosides.Groupdancingisreallyahealthywayofrelaxation.Underproperguidance,itisbeneficialnotonlytobuildupourbody,buttostrengthentherelationshipamongstudents. What’smore,tryingtolearndancingrefreshesourmind,andmakesourstudymoreeffective.Sothereisnoneedtoworryaboutit.7.阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇120—150词的短文。近来，某书店生意不景气。假若你是店员，请你给店主写份报告，提出自己的建议，以吸引更多的年轻人来店购买书刊。参考答案：Toattractyoungpeopletoourbookstore,inthefirstplace,wemustsupplythemwithinterestingmagazinesandbooks.Isuggestaposteroutsideannouncingsubjectsofinterest,suchasmusic,films,video,footballandsoon.Magazinesshouldbesoldatlowerpricesforthefirst-timecustomers.Oncetheycometotheshoptheywillseeotherattractions.Alsoadvertiseonthelocalmediaaboutdiscountsforyoungpeopleonallbooksboughtinthenextmonth.Operateanexchangeprogrammewheretheycantradeoldbooksfornewonesataspecialprice.Reserveayouthsectionintheshopwherebooksandmagazinesinterestingtothemareonshow.Invitethemtocomeandsitinthecomfortablechairsprovided,tomeetfriendsandlookthroughbooksandmagazines.Ifweadoptproperstrategies,youngpeoplewillbeattractedtoourshop,andthesaleswillbeontherise.8.有些父母对孩子过分呵护，他们不仅在家为孩子代劳一切，还接送他们上学，陪伴他们到校外辅导班上课，领他们去参加招工面试……请你写一篇120—150词的短文就此谈谈自己的看法。参考答案：Nowadaysparentstendtocaretoomuchfortheirchildren.Besidesdoingeverythingathomefortheirchildren,theydrivethemtoandfromschool,accompanythemtovariousout-of-schoolclasses,and,whenthekidsareolder,takethemtojobinterviews.It’sabsolutelytruethatallthatisdoneoutofkindness.ButI’mafraidourdearparentsforgetthat,soonerorlater,We’llbegrown-ups,orparents,justlikethem.Romewasn’tbuiltinaday.Itisagradualprocessforustochangefromchildrentomatureadults.Weshouldlearntomakeourowndecisionsandbuildupanindependentmind.Anditisequallyimportantwetrytomanageourownlifesoastobecapableinthefuture.Leaningtocareforothersisanotherthingwemustdo.Onlyinthiswaycanweeventuallygrowmature,physically,mentally,andmorally.9.孟详斌，解放军某部军官，山东齐河人，2007年11月30日在浙江金华为救跳水轻生女子不幸牺牲，献出了年仅28岁的生命，他的事迹感动了全社会。请以“Heroismineconomicsociety”为题用英语写一篇字数为120-150的短文，发表自己的看法。Heroismineconomicsociety参考答案：HeroismineconomicsocietyMengXiangbin,a28-agedPLAmanofficer,losthislifeinsavingadrowninggirl,Hisheroicbehaviormovedthewholesociety.throughwhichwecanseethecrystal-clearheartofahero,Istronglyfeelthatheroicspiritneverfades.Oursocietycallsforheroism,Nodynastyinhistorycansurvivewithoutheroes,Itisheroeswhotaketheleadinfightingagainstcriminalsandsetanexampleforthemassestofollow,Theyarethebackboneofournationwhomakesgreatcontributionstohumanlife.Additionallyheroismisakindofvirtue,Financiallyspeakingalthoughafewpeople’sheartsarelargelyoccupiedbybusinessandmoney,heroismisdeeplyrootedatthebottomofourhearts,Sointimeofdang