四级作文写作

Writing(一)大学英语四级写作：评分原则与评分标准1.CET–4检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。2.CET–4作文题采用总体评分（GlobalScoring）方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分（RewardScores）,而不是按语言点的错误数量扣分。3.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而恰当地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否会造成理解上的障碍。4.避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括0分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。5.字数不足以应酌情扣分：（1）如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得计入所写字数。（2）只写一段者：0~4分；只写两段者：0~9分。（指规定三段的作文）四级作文评判内容、结构、语言内容不跑题即可，注意：1.不要妄图以情动人;2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。结构：总分总：先写主题句(TopicSentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句(Conclusion)。语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。语言a)书写卷面工整。（作文没有草稿纸，也没有打草稿时间，要训练一次写成功。）b)不要全部套模板。c)单词句子要有亮点，比如：Ithink可以写成：inmyeyes;Ifirmlybelieve;personally,Ithink.d)无重大语法错误。如：Somepeoplearebegin…;Therearesomepeoplewant…;Whyhappenthesethings?(Why+助动词+主语)作文类型正反观点对比题现象解释型观点论证型图表作文题应用文写作（书信，解说词，欢迎词等）议论文&说明文正反观点对比题提出主题（开门见山）正方观点&反方观点我的观点真题2006年12月四级作文试题SpringFestivalGalaonCCTV.1.许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会2.有些人却提出取消春节晚会3.在我看来．．．2005年12月英语四级作文ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?1．名校校园正成为旅游新热点2．校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同3．我认为……2010年12月六级作文MyViewonUniversityRanking1、当今社会，高校排名很流行2、个人看法不同3、我自己的观点2009年12月六级作文Shouldparentssendtheirkidstoartclasses?现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班；

1、对这种做法有人表示支持，2、有人并不赞成；3、我认为…2009年6月六级作文月六级作文OntheImportanceofaName年月六级作文

1.有人认为名字（名称）不重要；2.有人认为非常重要；3.你认为呢？结构方式11.Thetopicof(主题)isbecomingthemostpopularonerecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof(理由一).What’smore,(理由二).Moreover,（理由三）.2.WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly…secondly…thirdly…3.Frommypointofview,Ithink（我的观点）.Thereasonisthat…方式2：1.Manystudentslike(主题).Amongthemtherearetwotypesofattitudein(主题).2.SomeofthemthinkthatA.Theythinkthat(原因)andtheyshould(结果).Otherstudents,however,don’tthinkso.TheyfeelthatB.Theyarguethat(原因).3.IlikeAbecause(理由).So,asaresult,I(选择A的结果).ByA,Ican(重申支持A的理由).Ilikethiswayof(主题).1.开头常用句Wehavehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherweshould…Thetopicof…isbecomingthemostpopularonerecently.Whenaskedabout…,differentpeopleholddifferentviews.Theissueofwhetherweshould…hasbeenwidelydebatedrecently.Avarietyofdifferentargumentshavebeenputforwardaboutthisissue.Thereisapublic/general/heated/impassioneddebate/discussion/controversytoday/nowadaysasto/over/on/concerningtheissue/problemof….Apublicdebatehasarisenastothephenomenonof…eItisundeniablethat…hasbecomethebiggestconcernofthepresent-dayworld.Recently,thereisavehementdiscussionontheissueof…Thereisalong-runningdebateastowhether…Whichisabetterchoice,AorB？Differentpeoplehavedifferentanswersduetotheirrespectivepointofview.Thediscussionaboutwhetherornot…isaverycontroversialone.Therearepeopleonbothsidesoftheargumentwhohaveverystrongfeelings.2.表达不同观点常用句型Thosewhocriticize/oppose/objectto…contend/arguethat…Theybelieve/claim/holdthat…Butpeoplewhoadvocate/favor/arefor…,ontheotherhand,maintain/assertthat…Someargue/holdthat…,butotherssetforthatotallydifferentargumentabouttheissueof…Somepeoplesaythat…,otherpeoplesuggestthat…Manypeoplehavetheideathat….However,manyothersdisagreethat…Bothsidesofthequestionofwhether…arewellsupportedbysoundreasons.Peoplefromdifferentbackgrounds,however,putdifferentinterpretationsonthesamething.Viewsontheissueinquestionvaryfrompersontoperson/varywidely.Peoplerarelyreachanabsoluteconsensusonacontroversialissue.People’sviews,however,aredivergentonthematterinquestion.Theothersideofthecoinhasvoicedstrongoppositionsayingthat…3.自己的观点Ifaskedtomakeachoicebetweentwo,Iwouldnothesitatetochoosethelatterovertheformerforseveralsoundreasons.Myopinionisidenticalwith…Personally,Isidewiththeformer/latteropinion.I’moftheopinionthatpriorityshouldbegivento…However,IsidewiththeopinionthatAisfarbetterthanB,forseveralreasonsaddressedbelow.Personally,Istandonthesideof…AsfarasI’mconcerned,Iaminfavoroftheopinionthat…Formypart,Icompletelyagreewiththeformer/latter.Tobefrank/Totellthetruth,Ishouldsecondtheformer/latterattitude/positioninpreferencetothelatter/former.Ifullyagreewiththestatementthat….Thereasonsarechieflyasfollows:…Asforme,I’minfavorofthefirst/secondview.Therearemanyreasonsformyinclination,butthefollowingonesaremostimportant.练习1ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?1．名校校园正成为旅游新热点2．校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同3．我认为……练习2Shouldparentssendtheirkidstoartclasses?现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班；

1、对这种做法有人表示支持，

2、有人并不赞成；

3、我认为…练习3MyviewonFamilyTutoring(120-180)有些人赞成大学生做家教另一部分人则持相反观点我的看法2006.1ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?Nowadayssomefamousuniversitycampusesarebecominganewattractionfortourists.Openingofuniversitycampushasbecomeahotissueamongpeople.Somepeoplethinkthatasaplaceofeducationuniversitiesshouldnotbeopentotheactivitieswhichhavenothingtodowitheducation.Someotherpeople,however,wouldarguethatauniversityisapublicplace;consequently,itshouldbeopentothepublicandpeoplewillbenefitfromtheopeningofuniversitycampus.

Inmyopinion,universitycampusshouldbeopentothepublic.First,universitiesarepublicresourceaswellasplacesforhighereducation.People,withaninterestinuniversityculture,havetherighttovisitcampus,attendinglectures,seeingexhibitions,andenjoyingthebeautifulsightsofthesefamousuniversitycampuses.Second,universitiesshouldholdanopenmindtothepublic,welcomingdifferentculturesaswellasdifferentpeople.Third,inmanypeople'seyesthesefamousuniversitiesareaholyplace,representingasociety’sculturalandhistoricalessence.Whenauniversitycampusisopentotourists,itsurlywouldgetagoodchancetoexhibititscharmtothepublic.使用现在进行时表明现象，清晰明了用定语从句增加句子的多样性，用however做插入语，引入与前面对立的观点开始阐述作者的断电，条理清楚，层层递进。使用现在进行时表明现象，清晰明了Childrenarethefutureofthenation,thepearlintheirparents’eyes.Hopingthattheirkidscanbecomethecreamofthecropamongothers,moreandmoreparentssendtheirkidstovariousartclassestoletthemlearnmore.However,peopleholddifferentopinionstowardthisphenomenon.Somepeopleholdafirmpositionthatitisabeneficialthingforkidstoattendartclasses.There,kidscannotonlylearnsomeartskillsthatmayhelpfulforthemsomeday,theycanalsogetachancetoexpandtheirintereststoagreatextent,andtheirmindscanalsobebroadened.Besides,kidscanalsomakealotoffriendsthere,thustheircommunicationskillsmayalsobesharpened.Whilefortheothers,theyholdanoppositeopinion.Theythinkparentsshouldnotsendtheirkidstoartclassesblindlyagainstkids’will,becausethiswillgetadefinitelynegativeimpactonkids.Kids,intheseparents’eyes,shouldbegivenmoreflexibletimetorelaxanddowhatevertheyareinterestedin.Andkidsalsoneedfreedombecauseunacceptableartclasseswillabsolutely