人教版高中英语一轮复习写作专题训练-慰问信-导学案

高中英语一轮复习写作专项训练—慰问信Learningaims:Tolearnhowtowritealetterofsympathy;Towritealetterofsympathybyimitatingthesample.Step1Self-learning作文原题：你班同学Tom生重病住院两个星期了，同学们都很难过。今天班主任要去医院看他，并请你代表全班同学写一封慰问信，要点如下：

1.

表示同情和关心

2.

送他一个包裹（幸运星和千纸鹤；现金一万元）

3.

祝他早日康复，返校上课

参考词汇：

幸运星：lucky

stars

千纸鹤：paper

cranes

OnePossibleVersionDear

Tom,

I’m

very

sorry

to

heat

that

you

are

seriously

ill

and

that

you

have

been

in

hospital

for

about

two

weeks.

We

are

very

concerned

about

you

and

your

studies.

Our

head

teacher

is

coming

to

see

you

today,

so

we

ask

him

to

bring

you

a

packagewith

some

lucky

stars

and

colorful

paper

cranes

in

it.

I

hope

you

will

like

it

and

it

will

bring

good

luck

to

you.

Also

you’ll

receive

10,000

yuan,

which

will

help

you

pay

the

medical

fees.

Don’t

worry

aboutyour

studies,

we’ll

try

to

help

you

make

up

the

lessons

you

have

missed,

because

we

are

good

friends.I

hope

I

can

come

and

see

you

soon

on

Sunday.

Everyone

in

our

class

misses

you

very

much,

hoping

you’ll

be

well

again

and

get

back

soon.

Yours

sincerely,

Li

Hua1.题型特点

慰问信是向失败者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到天灾人祸的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此类信要写得及时、简明扼要，感情要真诚，措辞要贴切，尽量以乐观的口吻减轻亲友的烦恼和痛苦，并鼓励对方对日后烦人生活、学习、工作充满信心。2.写作思路

第一步：引出事实，表达惋惜和同情；

第二步：安慰对方或鼓励对方，预测未来；

第三步：表达愿望和祝福。慰问信写作必备词汇词组:慰问sympathyn.2.痛苦painn.3.缓解reliefn.4.祈祷prayv.5.接受慰问acceptsb’ssympathy6.代表...onbehalfof....7.我想表达...I’dliketoexpress...8.这封信的目的是...Thepurposeoftheletteristo…9.英语日期表达：2017年9月6日September6(th),2017e.g.TheywillgetmarriedonOctober25,2017.10.我们很期待...We

are

looking

forward

to...

词句模板

1．段首常用语：普通版：①We

are

so

sorry

to

hear

the

news

about

the

earthquake.

听到地震的消息我们很难②I

was

shocked

at

the

news

about

the

earthquake

in

…

听闻……地震的消息我很震惊。

高级版：I

just

can’t

tell

you

how

sorry

I

was

to

learn

of

your

accident.

我刚得知上个星期你病了。

2.段中常用语：普通版：If

there

is

anything

I

can

do

to

help

you,

please

let

me

know.

如果需要我的帮助，请告知。高级版：Please

extend

our

deep

sympathy

to

your

family.

请向你的家人转达我们最深切的同情。3.段尾常用语：普通版：I

hope

you

are

getting

some

relief

from

the

pain.

我真心希望能减轻你的痛苦。高级版：We

are

looking

forward

to

/hoping

and

praying

for

your

speedy

and

full

recovery.

我们真心希望你早日康复。慰问信格式模板：Dear,

I

am,

I

am

very

sorry

to

have

heard

that.

/

I

am

shocked

at

the

newsabout(引出具体实情，表示惋惜和同情)

If.

Please

extend

our

deep

sympathy

to

your

family.

I

hope

you

will

make

efforts

to

overcome

all

kinds

of

difficulty,

no

matter

how

hard

it

is.

You

are

sure

to

make

it.(进一步安慰并鼓励对方)

I

will

try

my

best

to,

which

may

help

you

.It

will

give

more

courage

to

liveon.(表示自己意愿提供帮助)

I

hopeWe

are

looking

forward

to.

(表达愿望与祝福)

Yours

sincerely,

XX

Step2WritingWritealetterofsympathywithinthetimegivenaccordingtowhatyouhavelearnt.据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy

Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung

cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：

自我介绍

2、得知的情况

3、表示鼓励

4、打算为她做什么

5、祝她早日康复_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step3DiscussionDiscussthedifficultpointswithyourgroupmembers.Step4Feedingback

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