高三英语二轮复习读后续写：亲情类-谁动了我的小汽车学案

【原题重现】Carterenjoyedridingtheschoolbushome.Theridehomegavehimsometimetorelaxafterabusydayoffifthgrade.Heusuallysataloneandenjoyedthattoo.Withfoursiblings(兄妹)hedidn'tgetmuchtimealone.Sometimeshesatwithhisyoungerbrother,Jackson,butJacksonwassickathometoday.Thebusstoppedandthetallestboyinhisclass,Dexter,steppedofffollowedbyhisyoungerbrother,Billy.Asthebuspulledaway,Carterlookedbackoverhisshouldertowatchtheboys.Dexterwasyellingandwavinghishandsathislittlebrother.BillysaidsomethingCartercouldnothear.Dexteryelled,gavehisyoungerbrotherahardshove（推，挤）andknockedhimtotheground.Billywasonthegroundwipinghiseyes,butDexterwalkedaway.Carterturnedinhisseat,feelingdisgusted.Hehatedseeinglittlekidsgetpickedon(欺负).ThesightofBillyonthegroundcryingwasburnedintohismemory.Hetriedtothinkofsomethingelse.Hethoughtofthemodelcarhewasworkingonathome,a1967Corvette.Hestartedbuildingitoveraweekagoandjustfinishedputtingittogetherlastnight.Tonight,assoonashefinishedhishomework,hecouldstartpaintingthecar.Thatwashisfavoritepart.Healreadyhadtheperfectcolorofbluepickedout.Hehurriedoffthebus,ranthroughhisyard,andbreezedthroughthekitchenwithaquickhellotohismom.Shewasmakingspaghetti,whichsmelleddelicious.Heranupthestairstwoatatimeandrushedintohisroom.“Surprise!”hisbrotherJacksonsaid,throwinghisarmsintotheair."Whatareyoudoinginmyroom?Ithoughtyouweresick!”“Ifeelbetter!”"What'sonyourface?Areyoubleeding?""No!I'mnotbleeding."Jacksonwipedathisface,probablyjustpaint.Look!LookwhatIdid!”HepointedatthedeskinthecornerofCarter'sroom.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1Carterlookeddownathisdeskinhorror.Paragraph2Cartertookadeepbreathandthenunfoldedhisfist.【好词好句】1.他离开后面跟着弟弟Dextersteppedofffollowedbyhisyoungerbrother

2.汽车驶离thebuspulledaway

3.向他的弟弟挥舞拳头wavehishandsathislittlebrother

4.推弟弟一把givehisyoungerbrotherahardshove（推，挤）5.把弟弟打倒在地knockhimtotheground.

6.抹眼泪wipehiseyes7.感到恶心厌恶feeldisgusted.

8.被欺负getpickedon

9.看到billy坐在地上哭的这一幕深深地刻在他的脑海里ThesightofBillyonthegroundcryingwasburnedintohismemory.

10.组装putittogether11.轻松愉快地穿过厨房breezethroughthekitchen

12.把手举向空中throwhisarmsintotheair.情节走向：第一段

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汽车模型的状态（被涂错色）Plot

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生气（皱眉

脸涨红

冲过去

怒吼

推了一把弟弟。。。）Plot

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看到弟弟的反应（从兴奋到紧张害怕，大哭或抽泣等）联想Dexter和Billy，意识到自己的错误行为牵扯Billy的唯一方式-提醒Carter不能和Dexter一样欺负自己的弟弟Billy第二段

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冷静下来道歉、请求原谅或友情提醒；Plot

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共同解决问题-一起涂色或增加新图案或一起做新的模型Plot

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家庭温馨的氛围或妈妈出场肯定他们的做法点主题-团结友爱（感悟+影响）谁动了我的小汽车？（下水文）Paragraph1

Carterlookeddownathisdeskinhorror.Withhismodelcarpaintedred,thedeskwasinamess,whichirritatedCarter.Hiseyebrowsrisingintohisforeheadandfaceburningwithgreatanger,hecouldn’tcontainhisfuryandyelledathisbrother“Youruinedmymodelcar!”Instantly,Jackson’sexcitementfromhelpingcompletingasatisfactorymodelgavewaytoterriblepanic.NeglectingJacksonwhoattemptedtoexplainfurther,Cartersnapped,gavehimashoveandrushedtowardshisdesk.Pickinguptheredmodelcaratthedesk

and

strokingitcautiouslyasifitwasatreasure,Carter

feltasurgeofsadnessoverwhelmedhim.Thescenesofhishardworkonthemodelcarrosebeforehiseyes,whichfueledhisanger.

Hewalkedquicklytowardshislittlebrother,angerboilingupandhisfistclenched.

Atthattime,hisbrother’sinnocenteyesandthesceneofDexterpickingonBillytookoverhismind.(159)Paragraph2

Cartertookadeepbreathandthenunfoldedhisfist.

Givingasighofreliefandtryingtocalmdown,herealizedheshouldn’thavetreatedhislittlebrotherinthisway,soheapologizedtoJacksonforhisbadattitudesincerely.Hearingthis,Jacksonembracedhisbrothertightlywitharelivedsmileonhisface,toldhisbrotherhisgoodintention

and

promisedhisbrothernottoaccesshisitemswithoutpermission.Catersuggestedtheirrepaintingthemodelcartogether.Thetwobrotherswereburiedintheirnewproject.Then,theirmomstoodatthedoorwithtwodishesofSpaghetti,satisfactionofsmilespreadingacrossherface,seeingthesiblingsliveinperfectharmonyandunity.

Throughthis,Carterrealizedtheimportanceofbeingtolerantandwasmoregoodatproblem-solvingwhengettingalongwithothers.(128)第一段Carter低头看了看他的办公桌，他的模型车被漆成了红色，办公桌乱七八糟，这让Carter很生气，横眉冷对，无法控制他的愤怒，朝他的兄弟大喊：“你毁了我的模型车!”

立刻，Jackson帮助完成一个令人满意的模型的兴奋变成了可怕的恐慌。忽视了Jackson的进一步解释，Carter怒气冲冲，推了他一把，冲向他的办公桌。Carter拿起桌前的红色模型车，小心翼翼地抚摸着，好像它是一件宝贝似的，他感到一股悲伤涌上心头。他辛苦制作汽车模型的场景浮现在眼前，这激起了他的愤怒。他快步走向他的小弟弟，怒火中烧，紧握着拳头。(他握紧拳头，双眼炯炯有神地向他哥哥）第二段

Carter深吸了一口气，然后展开了拳头。他松了一口气，试图冷静下来，他意识到他不应该这样对待他的弟弟，所以他真诚地向Jackson道歉。听到这个，Jackson紧紧地拥抱他的兄弟，脸上带着重新释放的微笑，告诉他的兄弟他的好意，并答应他的兄弟未经允许不得拿走他的东西。Carter建议他们一起重新给汽车模型涂色。两兄弟埋头于他们的新项目。然后，他们的妈妈站在门口，端着两盘意大利面，满意的笑容在她的脸上蔓延，看到兄弟姐妹们和睦团结地生活在一起。通过这件事，Carter认识到了宽容的重要性，并且在与他人相处时更善于解决问题。【学生易