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1/110月22日托福独立写作真题3篇10月22日托福独立写作真题12022年10月22日托福独立写作题目

Someteenagerstookpartinkindsofactivities,suchasmusicalclasses,sportsclassesandsoon,butothersonlyfocusononeactivitywhichisimportanttothem.Whichideadoyousupport,pleaseprovideideasandgivesomeexamples.

10月22日托福独立写作真题2Underthecurrenteducationalsystem,theextracurricularactivitiesdesignedforstudentsareplayinganincreasinglyimportantrole.Therefore,amongparentsandteachers,therearisesacontroversypertainingwhetherteenagestudentsshouldparticipateinvariousactivitiesorfocusononeactivity.Towardssuchalongrunningtugofwar,Istronglyrecommendteenagerstoengageinmorekindsofactivities,forthefollowingreasons.

Initially,gettinginvolvedinmoreactivitiescanbeconducivetothewellroundeddevelopmentofstudents.Itisselfevidentthatdifferentactivitiescanequipparticipantswithvariousskillsandabilities.Toillustrate,studentsattendingmusicalclassescanlearnhowtoappreciatetheclassicalworksoffamousmusiciansandthusimprovetheiraestheticcapability.Similarly,participatinginteamsportswillhelpstudentscultivateasenseofcooperationaswellasenhancetheirleadership.Afterhavingobtainedtheaboveskills,studentsdefinitelycandevelopinanallroundway,withtheresultofbecomingmorecompetitivethanothers.Incontrast,specializinginonlyonekindofactivityisatotallydifferentpicture.Inotherwords,studentsjustfosteroneparticularskill,whichisapotentialobstacletotheirfuturedevelopment.Theunderlyingreasonisthatthemoreandmorecomplicatedmodernlifenecessitatestheacquisitionofmultipleskills.

Furthermore,takingpartinmanyafterclassactivitiescandoabetterjobinhelpingstudentsfindwhattheyareinterestedin.Justasasayinggoes,interestisthebestteacher,whichclearlyindicatesthegreatroleplayedbyinterestinalllevelsofeducation.Theaboveclaimisespeciallytrueofteenseducation,becausetheyareinthepuberty,themostrebelliousperiod.Putitinanotherway,withoutthedriveoftheirowninterest,theyarelesslikelytoperformwellinanyactivitiesrequiredbytheirteachers.Inthiscase,offeringvariousactivitiestoadolescentsundoubtedlycanmoreeffectivelystimulatetheirinterestandpassion.Oncetheyfindwhattheylike,theywillautomaticallyputmoreeffortsandtimeinit.However,requiringallteenagerstosolelyengageinoneactivitiesmayfailtocatertotheinterestofthemajoritiesofthem.

Allinall,wecandrawtheconclusionthatitisawisermoveforstudentstoattendmultipleactivities,inordertoobtainaholisticdevelopmentandfindwhattheyarepassionatefor.

10月22日托福独立写作真题3Intheirfreetime,youngpeople(age1418)spendtimetakingpartindifferentactivitiessuchasmusiclessonsorcompetitivesports.Someyoungpeopledevotetheirtimeinotherkindsofactivities.Butotheryoungpeoplewillspendmostoftheirtimefocusingononeactivitythatisimportanttothem.Whichapproachdoyouthinkisbetter?

Theoldsaying“allworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy”stillremainsrelevantasitdidcenturiesago.Thequestionofwhatkindofextracurriculumactivitiesshouldkidsdoafterschoolhasneverfailedtoattractspotlight.Shouldtheyfocusononesingleactivityorisitbetterforthemtodevotetheirtimetovariousactivities.Personally,Ithinkitisinthekids’bestinteresttogetinvolvedinmultiplekindsofactivitiesbasedonthefollowingreasons.

Firstoff,doingvariousactivitiesmakesthekidsboredandmoreextracurriculumactivitiesmeanthattheyenjoyabetterchancetotrydifferentthingsandfindtheirrealinterest.Forinstance,playingsportsallthetimewillprobablydrivethekidscrazysincetheycanbeveryenergyconsuminganditmightleadtoinjuriesintheirbonesandjoints.One’smeatmightbeothers’poison,indeednobodyreallyknowswhattheirpreferenceliesinunlesstheyaregiventheopportunitiestododifferentactivities.Actuallyswitchingfromoneactivitytoanothergivesthekidstheopportunitytoexploretheirrealinterestandtaptheirunknownpotential.Akidwholacksofflexibilityandcoordinationwhendoingsportmightbetalentedinplayingchesswhileonewhocannotconcentrateintheclassroommightbeverygiftedinplayingsports.Tryingoutdifferentactivitiescanhelpkidstofindsomethingtheyarereallyinterestedinandeventuallytheycandevelopandbuildupconfidence.

Additionally,studentscandeveloplotsofusefulskillsandreleasetheirpressureinlifeandstudyiftheydodifferentactivities.Forexample,playinggroupsportscanhelpthemtogetcomfortableteamingupwithothersanddevelopcooperationawareness.Thiskindofexperienceandawarenesscanhelpthemgetpreparedforfuturejobssincewillingnesstocooperateandcoordinateisregardedasaveryvaluablequalityandworkingtogetherwithothersarenecessaryforthefutureworkingenvironment.Plus,learningmusicandhowtoplaypianocanhelpsomeonetodevelopatasteinmusic.Musiccanserveasasourceofcomfortandlove,atthesametimeitisconducivetoreleasenegativeemotionslikesorrow,depressionandevenanger.

Inconclusion,itismoreadvisableforkidstodovariousactivitiessinceithelpskidstoexploretheirinterestandtaptheirpotential,moreimportantlyitcanhelpkidstodevelopusefulskillsandgetthempreparedforfuturejobs.

10月22日托福独立写作真题3篇扩展阅读

10月22日托福独立写作真题3篇(扩展1)

——1月24日托福独立写作真题200篇

1月24日托福独立写作真题1Intimesofaneconomiccrisis,inwhichareashouldgovernmentsreduceitsspending?

1.Arts

2.Scientificresearch

3.Parksandpublicgardens.

题目大意:经济危机时,*应该在艺术、科学研究、公园这三个领域中的哪一个减少支出?

10月22日托福独立写作真题3篇(扩展2)

——6月18日托福独立写作真题3篇

6月18日托福独立写作真题1A:A/D:Tobeasuccessfulperson,onemustopenuptonewideasandwillingtochangehisorhermind.

B:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:peopleshouldbeopentonewideasandchangehisorhermindtobesuccessful.

6月18日托福独立写作真题2Everyoneislongingforsuccess;therefore,everyoneeagerlysearchesforeverymethodtoreachthatend.Havinganinclusiveandopenwoulddefinitelyserveasagoodpanaceaforeveryonewhowantstoachievesomethinginthelife.Nevertheless,itisnottheonlywaytowardone’sheyday,forone’ssuccessderivesfromthecombinedfactors,liketenacityandresilience.

Admittedly,amanwithanopenmindfornewideasishalfwayforsuccess,fortheseinnovativeideasandphilosophiesofferonewithanotheroutlookwhenfacingadeadlockordilemma.What’sthemostimportant,newideabringsaboutcreationtoourlife.Themodernsocietyhaswitnessedtherapidandpervasivechangesoftechnologiesalongwithsubtlesocialreforms.ItisthenewideasfromotherpeopleandotherplacesthatleadJamesDyson,theinventorifGforcevacuumcleaner,toagreatsuccess;itisembracingthenewmethodfromtheexcellentathletesthathelpsJimmyLicreatehisspecialset“JimmyLiJump”.Furthermore,changingourmindandlisteningtothenewideasfromothersisconducivetocooperatewithotherpeople.Amancannotsucceedwithouttheassistancefromothers.Anopenmindfornewideasandthoughtsareeasyforpeopletosharedifferentideas,therefore,itisbeneficialforcooperatingwithincertaingroupsorteams.Acooperativepeoplewouldcertainlygetmorehelp,thustosucceedinamoreearlierway.However,anopenmindforoutsideideasissurelytheonlywayforonetosucceed,fortherearealotofotherpeoplegainingsuccessthroughotherways!

Beingtenaciousandpersistentrepresentacontinuouseffortinone’sspecificcareer.Thesecrettohappinessishardworkandeffort,not“quickfixes”.Greatideasonlycannotguaranteeone’seffortsandactions.Onlybythedowntoeartheffortsandhardworkcanthefinalsuccessgained!IfJamesDysondidnotexperimentforover5200timesafterhegotanewideafromothers,wewouldnothavewitnessedthebirthofthisnewandhighlyefficientvacuumcleaner.Therefore,tenacityandpersistenceprovideasurewaytoone’ssuccess.

Furthermore,apositiveandoptimisticattitudetowardsfailurecanalsoserveasafacilitatorforone’ssuccess.Alotofpeoplefailedbecausetheyfearedthenewchallengesorfearedtofailagain.Peoplewithnegativeattitudesmaybeloathtotakeactioneveniftheyembracenewideasfromothers.Apositivemindsetcanserveasacatalystforone’ssuccess.IfJamesDysondidn’tholdhopesforhisproductionpromotionandgiveupduringhisexperiment,wewouldhaveseenhisproductsprevailtheglobalmarket.Thus,asoundmindsetandpositiveattitudepropelsonetosuccess.

Inanutshell,asuccessfulpersonisnotmadejustinoneday.Alotoffactorscontributetoasuccessfulpeople,likenewideas,tenacityandapositivemind,tonamejustafew.Onlyinthiswaycanapersonexpectsuccessassoonaspossible!

10月22日托福独立写作真题3篇(扩展3)

——1月24日托福独立写作真题

1月24日托福独立写作真题1Intimesofaneconomiccrisis,inwhichareashouldgovernmentsreduceitsspending?

1.Arts

2.Scientificresearch

3.Parksandpublicgardens.

题目大意:经济危机时,*应该在艺术、科学研究、公园这三个领域中的哪一个减少支出?

10月22日托福独立写作真题3篇(扩展4)

——托福独立写作真题:儿童教育类3篇

托福独立写作真题:儿童教育类1本次托福独立写作是儿童教育类,新题,但也是传统的儿童教育类,意思是你认为要跟小孩分享的事情最重要的是哪一个,第一是要让他们生活有条理,第二是要诚实,第三是要乐于助人,典型的三选一题型,还是用上课时候讲过的文章结构和方法去写作即可,可以两段支持段加一段反证段,也可以一段支持段加两段反证段,灵活使用即可。这里选择第一个。

首先,beingorganized是他们今后独立生活的必备能力。其实现在很多孩子的小时候的生活都是父母在安排,孩子只要被动的接受并且执行,其实没有自己的想法,而这则会使他们对父母产生过度的依赖,会对他们独立生活会产生消极影响,导致自己无法自理生活,而如果从小就学习如何能够井井有条的安排自己的生活的话,他们以后就可以自己很独立很好的生活。

其次,beingorganized能减轻他们以后生活和学习的压力。其实,现在很多学生都有拖延症,就是因为不会安排自己的时间,导致拖到最后自己压力很大,这甚至到highleveleducation还会发生,所以beingorganized是一种管理生活和学习的能力,能够考虑好每件事情要做的时间点,知道在正确时间做正确的事情,这样的话不仅可以按时完成自己的学习或者工作任务,还可以让自己的生活压力减缓很多。

另外,beinghonest虽然也很重要,但其实在今后的.生活中,一个人是很难保持百分之百诚实的,因为有一些场合是需要说谎的,比如说有些善意的谎言,而且在某些情况下,诚实反而会冒犯到他人,比如直接指出他人的缺陷或者短处,所以说孩子应该要在自己的生活和社交过程中去体会如何在不冒犯他人的情况下去保持诚实,这是在他们小时候可能无法理解的事情,这是需要时间去磨练和积累的。当然,beinghelpful也是一个很重要的品质,但同样地,帮助他人也要看情况,不能一味的帮助他们,这样的话有时候使得他人对自己产生过度的依赖,反而对他们的能力产生负面效果。而这些也是孩子在小时候难以学习的道理。

托福独立写作真题:儿童教育类2Thetraditionalvirtueofhonestyinallsituationsisincreasinglydoubtedbymanyintoday’sworld.Manybelievethatbeinghonestisnotalwaysthebestpolicywhendealingwithpeopleandshallnotbesharedwithchildren.Bethatasitmay,thisessaywillexploretheimportanceofbeinghonestinrelationshipsbetweenpeople.

Undeniably,Sharingvaluesofbeinghonestexposeschildrentothecruelworld.Weallunderstandthatoftenthetruthisoffendingandmaynotbeaverynicethingtobothhearorsay.Even,manywouldagreethatifacompanyistotelltheabsolutetruthaboutit’sproducts,noonewouldbeinterestedinevenhavingalookattheproducts.Thesamelogicalsoappliestohumanrelationships.ifyourfriendhadwornanewlypurchaseddressonherbirthdayandenergeticallyaskedyouifitwasaworthybuy,wouldyoufreelyexpressyouropinionthatyouhadneverseenadressastheoneshe’scurrentlywearing?andspoilherbirthday?unarguably,hiding(entirelyorparticularly)thetruthinsomesituationscanbequitehandyindeed.confrontationsanddis*scanseeminglybeavoided.

However,thereisalwaystheriskfactorofthetruthemergingsoonerorlaterwhentellinganuntruth.thebasictrustinanyrelationshipsfriends,parentsandchildrenwillbeblotched,andwouldhaveanimpactonthefuturerelationshipbetweenbothparties.thestoryofthe“theboywhocriedwolf”fullyillustratestheconsequencesoftellinglies.noonewillbelieveyouwhenyou’retellingthetruth.Therefore,afterpresentingthevalueofhonestytochildren,theywillavoidfallinginthedilemma.

Inaddition,another“badfactor”oftellinguntruthsisthatyouhaveabsolutelynocontroloverwhenthetruthwillemerge.untruthsbreedpaininbothparties:tearswhenthetruthisuncoveredafteraperiodoftime;inthelongrun,itseemsthathidingthetruthisnotbeneficialtoeitherparty.Incontrast,deliveringthevalueofbeinghonesttochildren,childrenwillhavenoworriesoffearingthetruthtobeexposed.Therefore,thelifewillbeeasierthanthosechoosingtocoverupthesecrets.

Everyonehatesbetrayal.evenifitisthetrendtooccasionallyhidethetruthinrelationships,itisstronglyrecommendedthatnottofollowthattrendastheriskandtheconsequencesofthetruthunfoldedoverwhelmstheminimaladvantagesonecanderivefromnottellingthetruth.Afterall,itisunderstoodthatrelationshipsarefoundedon“trust”whichgoeshandinhandwith“truth”.Indeedhonestyisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.Asaresult,thisvalueshouldbesharedgreatly.(wordcount:472)

托福独立写作真题:儿童教育类3Thetraditionalvirtueofhonestyinallsituationsisincreasinglydoubtedbymanyintoday’sworld.Manybelievethatbeinghonestisnotalwaysthebestpolicywhendealingwithpeopleandshallnotbesharedwithchildren.Bethatasitmay,thisessaywillexploretheimportanceofbeinghonestinrelationshipsbetweenpeople.

Undeniably,Sharingvaluesofbeinghonestexposeschildrentothecruelworld.Weallunderstandthatoftenthetruthisoffendingandmaynotbeaverynicethingtobothhearorsay.Even,manywouldagreethatifacompanyistotelltheabsolutetruthaboutit’sproducts,noonewouldbeinterestedinevenhavingalookattheproducts.Thesamelogicalsoappliestohumanrelationships.ifyourfriendhadwornanewlypurchaseddressonherbirthdayandenergeticallyaskedyouifitwasaworthybuy,wouldyoufreelyexpressyouropinionthatyouhadneverseenadressastheoneshe’scurrentlywearing?andspoilherbirthday?unarguably,hiding(entirelyorparticularly)thetruthinsomesituationscanbequitehandyindeed.confrontationsanddis*scanseeminglybeavoided.

However,thereisalwaystheriskfactorofthetruthemergingsoonerorlaterwhentellinganuntruth.thebasictrustinanyrelationshipsfriends,parentsandchildrenwillbeblotched,andwouldhaveanimpactonthefuturerelationshipbetweenbothparties.thestoryofthe“theboywhocriedwolf”fullyillustratestheconsequencesoftellinglies.noonewillbelieveyouwhenyou’retellingthetruth.Therefore,afterpresentingthevalueofhonestytochildren,theywillavoidfallinginthedilemma.

Inaddition,another“badfactor”oftellinguntruthsisthatyouhaveabsolutelynocontroloverwhenthetruthwillemerge.untruthsbreedpaininbothparties:tearswhenthetruthisuncoveredafteraperiodoftime;inthelongrun,itseemsthathidingthetruthisnotbeneficialtoeitherparty.Incontrast,deliveringthevalueofbeinghonesttochildren,childrenwillhavenoworriesoffearingthetruthtobeexposed.Therefore,thelifewillbeeasierthanthosechoosingtocoverupthesecrets.

Everyonehatesbetrayal.evenifitisthetrendtooccasionallyhidethetruthinrelationships,itisstronglyrecommendedthatnottofollowthattrendastheriskandtheconsequencesofthetruthunfoldedoverwhelmstheminimaladvantagesonecanderivefromnottellingthetruth.Afterall,itisunderstoodthatrelationshipsarefoundedon“trust”whichgoeshandinhandwith“truth”.Indeedhonestyisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.Asaresult,thisvalueshouldbesharedgreatly.(wordcount:472)

10月22日托福独立写作真题3篇(扩展5)

——1月23日托独立写作200篇

1月23日托独立写作1Somepeoplebelievethatvideogamescouldinspireyoungstudents'interestandmaketheirstudymoreefficientratherthandistractingthemandawasteoftime,soyoungstudentsshouldbeallowedtoplayvideogames.

题目大意:有些人认为,电子游戏可以激发年轻学生的兴趣,使他们的学习效率更高,而不是分散他们和浪费时间,所以应该允许年轻学生玩电子游戏。

10月22日托福独立写作真题3篇(扩展6)

——1月9日托福独立写作参考200篇

1月9日托福独立写作参考1Somepeoplethinkitisthebestapproachforstudentstolearnifschoolstartthedayataearlytimeinthemorning.Butsomeonethinktheschoolshouldstartthedayatlatetime.Whichonedoyouprefer?Usespecificreasonsanddetailedexamplestosupportyouranswer.

题目大意:学生是否需要起早去上学。老师建议大家选择反对,即认为孩子可以晚点去上学,因为一方面可以保证孩子的休息,从而提高课堂效率,另一方面避免孩子遭遇早高峰,有助于保证好的'心情,从而减少对学习的干扰。

1月9日托福独立写作参考2Haveyouexperiencedstrugglingwithyourpilloweverymorning?Haveyoueverchokedwiththetrafficjamsintherushhour?Haveyoueverfeltsleepyinthefirstclass?Nomatterwhatscientificevidenceshowsustheadvantagesofhavingclassearly,thereisanewresearchfromMarkFischettiofScientificAmericaconvinceusthatstudents'efficiencycanbeimprovedbygoingtoschoollater.Itotallyagreewiththestatementforit’sbeneficialforbothofstudentsandteachers.

First,students'efficiencycanbeelevated.Undertheexcessiveburden,studentsalwaysstayuplateandthat’swhytheirsleeptimehasbeenshrunk.Iftheyareforcedtogetupearly,theirwholedaywillbewindy.Thus,studentswouldwastethemostsubstantialcontentofstudy,nevertheless,studentswouldbemorefreshandhaveconcentrationsontheclass.AccordingtoKylaWahlstrom,directoroftheCenterforAppliedResearchandEducationalImprovementattheUniversityofMinnesota.ShemadearesearchinMinnesotaFebruarythattracked9000studentsineightpublichighschoolsinMinnesota,ColoradoandWyoming.Afteronesemester,whenschoolbeganat8:35a.m.orlater,gradesearnedinmath,English,scienceandsocialstudiestypicallyroseaquarterstep—forexample,uphalfwayfromBtoB+.Thisconclusionperfectlyconvinceseveryonethatstudentsshouldgetuplater.

Second,weshouldfollowstudents'biologicalsystem.Adolescents'physiologyhasgreatlyalteredfromtheirchildhoodbecauseofmelatonin.Thelaterthedelay,thegreaterthepayoff.Followingtheirbiologicalchangecanmakethemhealthyandwealthy.Takemeasanexample,asateacher,mostofmystudentswouldliketofinishtheirhomeworkandchatwithfrienduntilthemidnight.Theycan'tcontroltheirbiologicalclock,whichmakestheyfellverysleepyinthefirstclass.Moreovertherateofbeingondutyislowercomparedwithothertimeperiods.

Third,trafficproblemscanbereleased.Oneshouldknowthatbigcitieshavethetrafficjamsallthetime,whichmakesstudentschokedwiththeroadandcan’tgetridofit.Moreover,studentswholivefarawayfromtheschoolarehurrytogetcatchupwiththeearlyclasses.Ifschoolspostponetheirtimetobelater,itwillhelpthemstaggertherushtimeoftraffic.Nevertheless,studentswouldstarttheirstudyrestlessly,whichinfluencestheirmoodnotmentiontothestudyefficiency.Astudyin2022fromCaliforniapublicschoolsshowsthatstudentscanavoidtransportationproblemsbychangingtheirclasstime.What’more,theirliteratureandmathscoresarehigherontheaverage.

Toconclude,gettingupearlyandattendclassaregoodforbothofstudentsandteachers.Isuggestthatschoolshouldpostponetheirclasstimeandimprovestudents’efficiency.

1月9日托福独立写作参考3Inthecontemporarysociety,thelengthofstudytimeonthepartofstudentshasbecomeoneofthemosthottlydebatedissueamongthegeneralpublic.Whenitcomestowhetherstudentsshouldberequiredtoarriveschoolattheearlytimeinthemorning,people’snotionsmayvaryfromonetoanother.Inmyeyes,startingschooldayatalatetimeisabetterchoiceforthefollowingreasons.

Tobeginwith,arrivingschoolatthelatetimewillensurestudentshaveagoodrestandthuscontributestotheimprovementoftheirstudyefficiency.Asiscommonsense,theincreasinglyheavystudyburdenontheshoulderofstudentshassqueezedtheirleisuretimesomuchthattheirsleepingtimecannotbeguaranteed.Asaresult,withtheimplementationofstartingschooldayinalatetime,thequalityoftheirrestwillbeimproved,withtheconsequencethattheirattentionwillbemoreconcentratedinclass.Onthecontrary,shorteningtheirresttimebyrequestingstudentsbeginclassearlywilldefinitelyproduceanegativeeffectontheirstudy.Tobespecific,itwillbecommontoobservethatstudentsfeelsosleepyastohaveashortnapduringtheclass.

Inaddition,studentswhostartschooldayinalatetimewillobviouslyavoidbeingstuckintrafficjamandthushaveabettermoodinthemorning.Undoubtedly,underthedriveofacheerfulframeofmind,childrenwillraisetheirefficiencyofstudytoalargeextent.Theexperienceofmycousin,Tom,canserveasagoodexampletoshedsomelightsontheabovereasoning.Tom,astudentinamiddleschoolofBeijing,usedtoberequiredtoarriveschoolat8a.m.everymorninginordertopreparebetterfortheNationalExaminationofCollegeAdmission.However,theproblemisthataccordingtotheregulationsofmostcompanies,employeesalsohavetostartworkat8a.m.Therefore,itisnothardtoimaginethatthesubways,busesandtaxisarecrowdedwithpeopleinthemorning.AccordingtoTom’srecounting,noonewillfeelgoodaftersuchaexperience,letaloneimmediatelydevotinghim/herselftostudy.

Takingwhathasbeendiscussedintoconsideration,wecandrawtheconclusionthatitiswisetorequirestudenttoarriveschoolatalatetimeinthemorining,inordertoensurethequalityoftheirrestanddevelopalightheart.

10月22日托福独立写作真题3篇(扩展7)

——托福*日独立写作真题(菁选2篇)

托福*日独立写作真题1题目要求:Themostimportantthingforgovernmenttoimprovehealthcareistocleantheenvironment.

题目大意:对*来说,提升公众医疗保健最重要的是去清洁环境。此题目为绝对词的题目,波波建议选择不同意,采用承认合理性,反驳绝对性的结构来写作。具体来说,承认合理性,即承认清洁环境在健康保健方面的'重要性;反驳绝对性,通过给出其他可以提升健康保健的方式来驳掉清理环境是最重要的方式。

托福*日独立写作真题2Withthegraduallyraisedawarenessofhealth,howtoimprovehealthcarehasbecomeanissueofpublicconcernandinterest.Manyscientistsandenvironmentalistshavefullyrealizedthenegativeimpactofenvironmentaldeteriorationonthepublichealthandproposethatthemostimportantthingforgovernmenttoimprovehealthcareistocleantheenvironment.However,inmyeyes,theaboveviewpointhasoversimplifiedthecomplicatedsituation.

Indeed,acleanenvironmentplaysanimportantroleinimprovinghealthcare,becausevariousenvironmentalpollutionshaveposedathreattothepublichealth.Toillustrate,thehazeoccurringinlargecitiesofChinahasmadethousandsofpeoplefallvictimstorespiratorydiseases.However,itisapieceofoveremphasistoclaimthatcleaningtheenvironmentisthemostimportantwayforgovernmenttoimprovehealthcare,becausethereareothertwowayswhichareequallyimportant.

Firstofall,developingmedicaltechnologyisanothereffectivewaytoimprovehealthcare.GiventheindisputablefactthatthereremainmanyincurablediseasessuchascancerandAIDSacrosstheglobe,theappropriatetechnologyoftreatmentandtherapyisingreatneed.Asaresult,governmentissupposedtoassumetheresponsibilityofmakingprogressinmedicaltechniques,forthesakeofcuringtheseriousdiseasesandthusprolongingthelifeexpectancy.TheeleminationofSARSintheyearof2022canbeagoodcaseinpoint.UpontheoutbreakofSARS,mostcitiesandprovincesinChinaareaffected.Immediately,thegovernmentnotonlyassembledagroupofmedicalprofessionalsandexcellentexperts,butalsoallocatedmassiveinvestmentinthemedicalresearchforvaccine.Unexpectedly,theemergencywasperfectlyaddressedandthesameistrueofcuringotherdiseases.

Besidesthat,governmentshouldplaceemphasisonimprovingthesportsinfrastructure.Asiscommonsense,governmentalsupportforpublicsportsfacilitiescancreateaplacefortheaveragepeopletoworkoutregularly.Obviously,themoreexercisepeopleengagein,thest

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