读后续写微技能之恐惧描写公开课课件 【高效备课精研+知识精讲提升】 高三英语写作专项

读后续写微技能训练——情感描写ZhanjiangCunjinPeicaiSchoolSophieFongHowdoyoufeelwhenyouseethesnakes?Whenseeingthesnakes,Ifeel...scared

frightened

terrified

读后续写微技能训练——情感描写之“恐惧”ZhanjiangCunjinPeicaiSchoolSophieFongDonot“tell”me,but“show”meyourfeelingoffear.2020年7月高考浙江卷：遇熊脱险Glancethegivenpassage,underline(划线)thesentences

describingthefeelingoffearandlearnfromthem.Howtoshowyourfeelingoffearvividly(生动地)?Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.Besidemewasmywife,whowasrootedtotheground,frozenwithfear.Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,herfacewasnearlydeadwithfright.Thefurrycreaturelaunchedanattackonthefence,instantlyleavinganarrowopeningonit.Wefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfroze

rapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.whowasrootedtotheground,frozenwithfear.herfacewasnearlydeadwithfright.Wefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfrozerapidlybecauseoftheterrible

sight.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.1.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.

(一阵恐惧袭来,将我紧紧包围,我已经无法动弹)2.Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.（我惊恐不已，感觉两腿发抖，手心冒汗。）3.Besidemewasmywife,whowasrootedtotheground,frozenwithfear.

(她一动也不动，吓呆了)4.Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,herface

wasnearlydeadwithfright.

(吓得面无血色）5.Wefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfroze

rapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.

(我们感觉浑身血液都凝固了）6.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.

(我们喉咙发紧，膝盖发软）无灵主语句肢体/动作描写神态表情描写心理描写肢体动作描写肢体/动作描写肢体动作描写Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.

Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.Besidemewasmywife,whowasrootedtotheground,frozenwithfear.

Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,

herfacewasnearlydeadwithfright.

Thefurrycreaturelaunchedanattackonthefence,instantlyleavinganarrowopeningonit.Wefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfrozerapidlybecauseoftheterrible

sight.

Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.

ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.无灵主语句肢体/动作描写神态表情描写心理描写Asisdescribedinthegivenpassage,therearemanyvividwaystoshowthefeelingoffear.vividwaystoshowfeelings……恐惧/害怕phrasessentenceswords(n./v./adj.)必备素材积累adj.afraid,frightened,feared,panicked,scared,terrifiedn.fright,fear,panic,terror,horror(beinn.;v.withn.)v.

frighten

terrify,scare,(sb.)freeze,(sb.’sheart)pound/beatIfeel/amfrightened.Iaminfright.Thesightfrightensme.Ifreeze

withfright.Myheartispounding/beatingwidlywithfright.adj.n./v.必备素材积累shake/tremblewithfear吓得发抖getintoapanic陷入恐慌中standrootedtothespotwithfear吓得呆若木鸡tremble/shakealloverwithfright吓得浑身发抖befrozen/numbwithfear吓呆beseizedwithpanic/panicsetsin惊慌失措bescaredoutofwits吓得魂不附体beopen-mouthedwithhorror吓得目瞪口呆bedeadwithfright吓得面无血色bestruckwithfear吓坏了11(be)inacoldsweat一身冷汗Whenseeingthesnakes/Atthesightofthesnakes,I...Whenseeingthesnakes,/Atthesightofthesnakes,I...phrases必备素材积累(P1S1)Whenthatdogjumpedoutatme,

Ifrozewithterror,

tooscaredtomoveaninch.

那条狗突然跳出来冲向我，我吓呆了，一动也不敢动。1.我站着不动，吓得不敢前进，

也不敢后退。Istood

still,________________________________________sentences练能生巧：利用并仿效满分素材补全下列句子并背诵。tooscaredtomoveforwardorstepback.2.当她以为自己把票弄丢了时，她着实惊慌起来。______________________________atthethoughtthatshe’dlostthetickets.4.听到这个可怕的消息，我们惊慌失措。Hearingtheterriblenews,_____________________________________sentences练能生巧：利用并仿效满分素材补全下列句子并背诵。(P1S4)Hewasthrownintopanic,hishandsshakingwithfear.他一下子惊慌起来，吓得双手颤抖。(P2修辞S3)Panicbegantoboilinhisstomach.

Heshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.他恐慌起来。他浑身发抖，觉得如坐针毡。(P3S6)Panicconsumed/swallowedher.Shefeltthebloodinherbodycooled/frozerapidly.她十分恐慌。她觉得她的血液都凝固了。getintoapanic陷入恐慌中beseizedwithpanic/panicsetsin

惊慌失措2.当她以为自己把票弄丢了时，

她着实惊慌起来。______________________________atthethoughtthatshe’dlostthetickets.ShewasthrownintopanicShegotintoapanic/Shewasseizedwithpanic4.听到这个可怕的消息，

我们惊慌失措。

Hearingtheterriblenews,

_____________________________________sentences练能生巧：利用并仿效满分素材补全下列句子并背诵。wewerethrownintopanic.Wegotintoapanic.Wewereseizedwithpanic.3.我很害怕父亲会发现我对他撒了谎。___________________________________thatmyfatherwouldfindoutIhadliedtohim.sentencesadj.:afraid/terrified/scared/frightened练能生巧：利用并仿效满分素材补全下列句子并背诵。Iwasafraid/terrified/scared/frightened(P2神态S1)

Janeturnedwhite/pale,

andalookofpanic/horrorcrossed/spreadacrossherface.简脸色变得苍白，脸上掠过惊恐的表情。(P2心理S4)

IsensedamanwasfollowingmeandIwasscaredoutofmywits.

我感到有个人跟着我，我吓得魂不附体。5.他脸色苍白，看上去吓得魂不附体。______________________________________________________________________________________sentences练能生巧：利用并仿效满分素材补全下列句子并背诵。Heturnedwhite/pale,lookingthathewasscaredoutofwits.11(be)inacoldsweat一身冷汗(P2无灵S4)Frank’sheartraced/beat/poundedwidly/violentlywithfear.弗兰克吓得心狂跳。6.我一身冷汗，心脏也怦怦跳，透不过气来。______________________________________________.Icouldn’tbreathe.sentences练能生巧：利用并仿效满分素材补全下列句子并背诵。Iwasinacoldsweatandmyheartwasbeatingviolently练能生巧：根据所给情节，用一句话续写。描写男孩看到“我”时的恐惧。

IthoughtIwouldcatchthechildandmakehimmyfriendbeforehewasoldenoughtobefrightenedofmyterribleface.我想我会抓住那个小孩，趁他还没有长大到懂得害怕我这张脸，我要让他成为我的朋友。

SoIcaughtthelittleboy,butwhenhesawmyface,...Iwouldcatchthechildascaryface动作+情感词汇神态+情感词汇神态+肢体语言SoIcaughtthelittleboy,butwhenhesawmyface,...panicked;coveredhisface;screamedloudlyalookofpaniccrossedhisface;hiseyesfullofhorrorhisfacewasdeadwithfright;trembledallover

Jane与Tom两人本来一起去露营。但两人发生争吵，Jane负气一个人离开。走着走着，她发现自己到了一个无人之地。小试牛刀:

根据所给情节，用本节课所学的句子进行一段话续写。注意情节的合理性和连贯性。根据所给情节，用本节课所学的句子进行一段话续写。

OneweekendinJuly,

Janeandherhusband,

Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbya

lakeintheforest.Unfortunately,

onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.

Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,

JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”and

walkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,

Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.

Aftershehad

climbedtoahighplace,

sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.

Tohersurprise,

shesawnothingbutforestand,

farbeyond,

asnowcappedmountaintop.

Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.

“Help!”

Noreply.根据所给开头续写一段话：Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.

__________________________________________参考续写：

Jane,extremelyfrightenedbythedarkness,feltherlegstremblingandherpalmss