考研作文攻略

第五部分2011年考研作文攻略

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【“十二字”总体策略：“明”特点、“熟”套路、“背”经典、“多”练习】

一、“明”特点——准确把握考研作文命题特点：

1.考查内容：

【英语（一）大纲要求】

考生应能写不同类型的应用文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等，以及一

般描述性、叙述性、说明性或议论性的文章。写作时考生应能：

1）做到语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当。

2）遵循文章的特定文体格式。

3）合理组织文章结构，使其内容统一、连贯。

4）根据写作目的和特定读者，恰当选用语域。（在书面或口语表达中根据不同的交际对

象，所采用的话语方式，即正式、一般和非正式的话语）

【英语（二）大纲要求】

考生应能根据所给的提纲、情景或要求完成相应的短文写作。短文应中心思想明确、切

中题意、结构清晰、条理清楚、用词恰当、无明显语言错误。

2.命题形式：

【英语（一）大纲要求】

考研英语作文部分由A、B两节组成，主要考查考生的书面表达能力。总分30分。

A节：题型有两种，每次考试选择其中的一种形式。

1）考生根据所给情景写出约100词（标点符号不计算在内）的应用性短文，包括私人

和公务信函、备忘录、报告等。

2）要求考生根据所提供的汉语文章，用英语写出一篇约80-100词的文章摘要。

【英语（二）大纲要求】

考研英语作文部分由A、B两节组成，主要考查考生的书面表达能力。总分25分。

A节：题型有两种，每次考试选择其中的一种形式。

1）考生根据所给情景写出约100词（标点符号不计算在内）的应用性短文，包括私人

和公务信函、备忘录、报告等。

2）要求考生根据所提供的汉语文章，用英语写出一篇约80-100词的该文摘要。

小作文真题解析

[09年真题】

51.Directions:

Restrictionsontheuseofplasticbagshavenotbeensosuccessfulinsomeregions.uWhite

pollution“isstillgoingon.Writealettertotheeditor（s）ofyourlocalnewspaperto

1）giveyouropinionsbrieflyand

2）maketwoorthreesuggestions

Youshouldwriteabout100words.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use

“LiMing“instead.Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.(10points)

[08年真题】

51.Directions:

YouhavejustcomebackfromCanadaandfoundamusicCDinyourluggagethatyouforgot

toreturntoBob,yourlandlordthere.Writehimaletterto

1)makeanapology,and

2)suggestasolution.

Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.

Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing“instead.

Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)

【07年真题】

51.Directions:

Writealettertoyouruniversitylibrary,makingsuggestionsforimprovingitsservice.

Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.

Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing“instead.

Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)

[06年真题】

51.Directions：

YouwanttocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotearea.

Writealettertothedepartmentconcerned,askingthemtohelpfindacandidate.Youshould

specifywhatkindofchildyouwanttohelpandhowyouwillcarryoutyourplan.

Writeyourletterinnolessthan100words.WriteitneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.

Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter;use“LiMing“instead.

Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)

L05年真题】

51.Directions:

TwomonthsagoyougotajobasaneditorforthemagazineDesigns&Fashions.Butnow

youfindthattheworkisnotwhatyouexpected.Youdecidetoquit.Writealettertoyourboss,Mr.

Wang,tellinghimyourdecision,statingyourreason(s),andmakinganapology.

Writeyourletterwithnolessthan100words.WriteitneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.

Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter;use“LiMing“instead.

Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.(10points)

【10年真题】

51.Directions:

YouaresupposedtowriteforthePostgraduatesJAssociationanoticetorecruitvolunteers

fbraninternationalconferenceonglobalizationoThenoticeshouldincludethebasicqualifications

ofapplicantsandtheotherinformationyouthinkisrelevant.

Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameat

theendofthenotice.Use“Postgraduates,Association“instead.(10points)

特点：一般给出作文内容要点，要求考生围绕内容提示构建短文主体内容；以书信形式

为主，可能涉及求职信、辞职信、建议信、道歉信、投诉信、邀请信和感谢信等具体类型。

摘要应对策略：包含所有内容要点；注意格式、语域要求；表意明确即可，避免复杂华

丽的文采修饰。

【英语(一)大纲要求】

B节：考生根据提示信息写出一篇160~200词的短文(标点符号不计算在内)。提示信

息的形式有主题句、写作提纲、规定情景、图、表等。

【英语(二)大纲要求】

B节：要求考生根据所规定的情景或给出的提纲，写出一篇150词以上的英语说明文或

议论文。提供情景的形式为图画、图表或文字。

特点：在选题上，通常贴近生活，一方面是带有哲理性的永恒话题；另一方面是目前人

们最为关注的问题，亦即当前热门话题。但总体上讲，所涉及的写作内容均属大多数考生所

熟悉之话题，因而便于取材，具有一定的可写性。具体说来，主要涉及教育、职业道德、身

体健康、家庭关系、环境保护、人口增长以及文化交流等话题。就体裁而言，以论说文为主，

因为这类体裁形式在实际学习、工作和生活中使用的频率较高。就具体的命题形式而言，可

分为：主题句作文、标题作文、提纲作文、图画(表)作文、规定情景式作文等。

大作文真题解析：

【10年真题】

52.Directions:

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1)describethedrawingbriefly,

2)explainitsintendedmeaning,and

3)giveyourcomments.

YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)

[09年真题】

52.Directions:

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1)describethedrawingbriefly,

2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

3)giveyourcomments.

YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSHWERSHEET2.(20points)

【08年真题】

52.Directions:

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1)describethedrawingbriefly,

2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

3)giveyourcomments.

YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)

[07年真题】

52.Directions:

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1)describethedrawingbriefly,

2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

3)supportyourviewwithanexample/examples.

YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)

[06年真题】

52.Directions:

Studythefollowingphotoscarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould

1.describethephotosbriefly,

2.interpretthesocialphenomenonreflectedbythem,and

3.giveyourpointofview.

Youshouldwrite160-200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）

[05年真题】

52.Directions:

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

firstdescribethedrawing,theninterpretitsmeaning,andgiveyourcommentonit.

YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）

[04年真题】

66.Directions:

Studythefollowingdrawingcarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould

1）describethedrawing,

2）interpretitsmeaning,and

3）supportyourviewwithexamples.

Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）

总体应对策略：课下注意关注相关重点话题；熟练掌握图画作文的写作模式及步骤。

二、“熟”套路：

作文评分原则和方法

1）一般评分标准适用于A、B两节。但根据两节不同的考查要点，评分时会有不同的

侧重点

第五档：A节（9-10分；B节（17-20分）/（英语二13-15分）

很好地完成了试题规定的任务

1）包含所有内容要点

2）使用了丰富的语法结构和词汇

3）语言自然流畅，语法错误极少

4）有效地采用了多种衔接手段，文字连贯，层次清晰

5）格式与语域恰当贴切

对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果

第四档：A节（7-8分）；B节（13-16分）/（英语二10-12分）

较好地完成了试题规定的任务

1）包含所有内容要点，允许漏掉一两个次重点

2）使用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇

3）语言基本准确，只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别错误

4）采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰，组织较严密。

5）格式与语域较恰当

对目标读者产生了预期的效果

第三档：A节（5-6分）；B节（9-12分）/（英语二7-9分）

基本完成了试题规定的任务

虽漏掉一些内容,但包含多数内容要点

应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求

有一些语法及词汇错误，但不影响理解

采用了简单的衔接手法，内容较连贯，层次较清晰

格式和语域基本合理

对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果

第二档：A节（3-4分）；B节（5-8分）/（英语二4-6分）

第一档：A节（1-2分）；B节（1-4分）/（英语二1-3分）

零档：所传达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价：内容与要求无关或无法辨认。

A节：本部分评分的重点在于信息表达的全面、准确、适当。主要包括信息点的覆盖

是否全面，语篇结构和格式是否正确，语言表达是否准确，语域是否恰当等方面。对语法结

构利词汇多样性的要求将根据试题的具体情况作出相应规定。

B节：本部分的评分重点在于内容的完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的

多样性以及语言的准确性。

2）评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来给分。

评分人员在档内有1-3分的调节分。

3）文章长度不符合要求的，酌情扣分。

4）拼写和标点符号是反映语言准确性的一个方面。

5）如书写较差，以致影响读者理解，分数将降低一个档次。

1.遣词造句的基本策略：

a）在用词上，首先，选词要准确，词能达意，符合英语表达习惯.在此基础上，要尽

量做到用词丰富，避免多次重复同一词汇，可考虑适当使用代词、同义词及近义词等，从而

使表达形式多样化。

准确用词（书面语）：A.拼写B.词义C.词性D.搭配

Inwriting,theproperuseofaword=A+B+C+D

Iconsiderthatyouarethebestteacherinmystudylife.Neitheryouhaveextensive

knowledgenoryouarefriendlytostudents.

Iconsiderthatyouarethebestteacherinmystudylife.Ononehand,youhaveextensive

knowledge;ontheotherhand,youarekindtostudents.

Iwouldstudyhardly.Iwouldstudyhard.

Iheadache,shetookthemedicineforme.

Ihadaheadache,andshegotthemedicineforme.

Hetaughtmeforthreeyears,hisblackhairdisappearance.

Hetaughtmeforthreeyears,andhisblackhairdisappeared.

Thankstothevariousofweather,Ihadacold.

Thankstothechangeableweather,Ihadacold.

Teacherlikenoodle.Teachersarelikecandles.

Myteacherlikesmymomverymuch.Myteacherislikemymomverymuch.

Theteacherlikecandleandburnstudent.

Ateacherisjustlikeacandle,whichburnsitselfandgivesofflighttopeople.

Alargenumberofwater…alargeamountofwater

Hecost$10onthatbook.Hespent$10onthatbook./Thebookcosthim$10.

Ihadahighcold.Ihadabadcold.

Youdidnotrememberyourbody.Younevercaredaboutyourownhealth.

Shehasabadbody.Sheisinbadhealth.

Sheoftenreachedmyhome.Sheoftencametomyhome.

Oneshouldbeselectiveinreadingbecausesomebooksareyellowbooks.

Oneshouldbeselectiveinreadingbecausesomebooksarebadbooks/domuchharmto

theirreaders.

Thechengjioflastyearwasmuchgood…

Imadealotofprogresslastyearwiththehelpofmyteacher.

巧用词汇：

Mostyoungpeoplelikepopsongs.

Mostyoungpeopleenjoypopmusic.

Mostyoungpeoplearefondofpopmusic.

Mostyoungpeopleareinterestedinpopmusic.

Mostyoungpeopletake/have/showmuchinterestinpopmusic.

Withthedevelopmentofoursociety,it'sbecomingmoreandmorenecessarythatacollege

student（should）learnEnglishwell.

Withthedevelopmentofoursociety,it'sbecomingincreasinglynecessarythatacollege

student

Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplerealizetheimportanceofkeepingfit.

Nowadays,agrowingnumberofpeople/anincreasingnumberofpeople........

Nowadays,peopleingrowing/increasingnumbers.......

b）在句子的写作方面，首先要确保语法正确，句子的意义与结构完整，意思连贯，逻

辑合理，同时符合英语表达习惯。其次，要做到句式句型灵活多样，长短句搭配协调，并适

当采用倒装、强调等特殊句型，同时要注意尽量使用自己熟悉和有把握的句型。

清晰的句子结构意识：

Don'tyouremembertheIsay,youlisten.

Don'tyourememberthe….Ifyoudon't,justlistentomenow./1J11tellyounow.

Whenyourinlovewithabeautifulwomanisveryhard.

Itisnotaneasythingtoloveabeautifulwoman.

rmverysad,eventhethoughtthatkillmyselfwascomeout.

IwassosadthatIevenwantedtokillmyself.

SimpleSentence（简单句）：

（1）S+V主语+谓语（不及物动词）

（S=subject;V=verb;O=object）

（2）S+V+O主语+谓语（及物动词）+宾语

（3）S+V+O+C主语+谓语（及物动词）+宾语+宾补

（4）S+V+C主语+谓语（被动语态）+主补

（5）S+linkV.+P主语+系动词+春吾（linkverb=系动词；P=predicative=表语）

Bushwonhiselection.

l.Bushwonhiselection,becauseheheldapositiononmoralissuewhichunderscoresthe

importanceofthechurch'seffortstoprotecttraditionalvaluesregardingthefamilyandlife.［原

因］

2.AlthoughtheIraqwarhasbeenadisaster,andBush'selitistdomesticagendaisunpopular

withvoters,Bushwonhiselectionanyway.［让步］

3.Bushwonhiselection,sothatheplungedU.S.intofurtherthreatofterrorism.［结果］

4.AshasbeenexpectedbythehundredsofRepublicansupporterswhogatheredtwoblocks

fromtheWhiteHouseafteralongnightofpollwatchinganduncertainty,Bushwonhiselection.

［情景］

CoordinateSentence(并列句)：

(1),and/but/while/whereas/so/for..........................................

(2).......................................................................................

(3);moreover/however/therefore,.....................................

Hehadbeeninthebusinessforsometime;hewasregardedasthebestcandidateforthe

position.

Hehadbeeninthebusinessforsometime,and/sohewasregardedasthebestcandidatefor

theposition.

Hehadbeeninthebusinessforsometime;therefore,hewasregardedasthebestcandidate

fortheposition.

ComplexSentence(主从复合句)：

(1)adverbialclause(状语从句)

a)时间：when,while,as,before,(soon/shortly)after,since,assoonas(themoment

that),bythetime(when)

Shehadjustfallenasleepwhensomeknocksatthedoorwokeherup.

Theplanehadtakenoffbythetimewearrivedattheairport.

Shewenttoseeherparentsassoonas/themomentthatshereturnedtoBeijing.

Hehasbeenworkingveryhard(ever)sinceheenteredthatschool.

b)原因：because,since,as

Hefailedinthefinalexambecausehedidn,tprepareforitatall.

Since/Ashehadnointerestinit,herefusedtheoffer.

c)条件：if,aslongas,onconditionsthat,once,or/otherwise,unless

Whatshallwedoifherefusestohelpus?

IfIwereyou,Iwouldtakethejob.

You'11suremakeitaslongasyoudoyourbest.

I'11letyouknowaboutitonconditionsthatyoujustkeepitasecret.

Youhavetodecideonitnow,or/otherwiseit，11betoolate.

Oncetheenvironmenthasbeendestroyed,ittakesmanyyearsforthesystemtorecover.

Theproblemswon'tberesolvedunlesssomemoreeffectivestepsaretaken.

d)让步：although,though,evenif/though,nomatter+wh-words,as,whether

NomatterwhatIsaid,hejustwouldn,tbelieveme.

You'11havetofaceitonedaywhetheryoulikeitornot.

Althoughhetriedhisbest,hestillcouldn,tmakeit.

Hewon'tdoitevenifyoupromiseabigreward.

Childasheis,hebehavesmuchlikeanadult.

e)目的：sothat,inorderthat

Hegotupveryearlythatmorningso/inorderthathecouldcatchthefirstcoachtoBoston.

f结果：so…that…

Hegotupsolatethatmorningthathemissedthefirstcoachtothecity.

g比较：

Heisolderthanmostofhisclassmates（are）.

h）地点：

Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.

i）方式：

Hedideverythingashewastold.

（2）attributiveclause（定语从句）:that,which,who,whom,when,where,why

Onlythosewho/thatarenotafraidofdifficultyhavethechancetoachievesuccessintheir

careers.

Thebook（that/which）hewrotealmosttenyearsagoisstillpopularwithmanyyoung

people.

Istillrememberclearlythedayswhenweworkedtogether.

Thisistheschoolwhere/inwhichIspentmychildhood.

Thereasonwhy/thatheleftisstillunknown.

Today,thepublicismuchconcernedaboutthewaythat/inwhichnatureisbeingdestroyed.

Twomen,neitherofwhomIhadseenbefore,cameintomyoffice.

Asurveywascarriedoutonthedeathrateofnew-bornbabiesinthatregion,theresultof

whichwasshocking.

（3）nominalclause（名词性从句）：that;wh-words

a）主语从句：

l.ItisimportantthatacollegestudentlearnEnglishwell.

2.1tisestimatedthattheearthquakehasclaimedmorethan200people,slivessofa匚

3.Whathehaddonemadeusallveryfurious.

4.Whyhedidthatremainsamystery.

b）宾语从句：

l.Hepromisedthathewouldreturnthebookassoonaspossible.

2.Hesuggestedthatwegotherebytrainratherthanbyplane.

c）表语从句：

Thereasonwhyhewasabsentfromthemeetingwasthathesuddenlyfellill.

d）同位语从句：

1.Aftersomeinvestigation,theycametotheconclusionthathewasthesuspecttheyhadbeen

lookingfor.

2.Weareallforyourproposalthatthemeetingbeputoff.

【句式巧转换】

Therearemanywaysforcollegestudentstogetto.......

Therearemanywaysinwhichacollegestudentcangetto.......

Collegestudentscangettoknowtheworldoutsidethecampusinvariouskindsof/many

ways.

Collegestudentscanfindvariouskindsof/manywaystogetto.......

Variouskindsof/Manywaysareavailableforcollegestudentstogetto.......

【范例】

Wecanimaginethebeautifulsurroundings.Therearemanytreesalongthestreets.Thereisa

cleanriverinthecity.Therearemanyfishesintheriver.Therearewillowtreesontheoneside.

Therearesomepiecesofgrasslandontheotherside.Therearemanyflowersonthem.

Justimaginethebeautifulsurroundingsifwemakeourcitiesgreener.Greentreeslinethe

streets.Acleanriverwindsthroughthecity,inwhichfishswimsfreely.Ontheonesidestand

rowsofwillowtrees;ontheothersideliesastretchofgrasslanddottedwithmanyyellowandred

flowers.

2.熟练掌握重点应用文体的写作格式及规范(PartA:小作文)：

(1)概述：

A.大纲要求：应能写不同类型的应用文(100字左右)，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、

摘要、报告等

B.重点命题形式：私人和公务信函、摘要、备忘录

(2)信函写作策略：

A.熟练掌握英文书信格式、结构特征及不同书信类型的文体特征

B.熟练掌握和运用不同书信类型中的常用句型

C.多背范文，灵活运用

a)英文书信格式布局：

信头(heading)一信内地址(insideaddress)f称呼语(salutation)-主体(bodyof

letter)结束语(complimentaryclose)-*签名(signature)-*附件(enclosure)f再启

(postscript)

Sample:

September22,1986

DearMr.Johnson,

ThankyouforinvitingmetogivealecturetothebusinessstudentsatMarkhamCollegeon

uStressandtheWork-place”.Iamdelightedtobeabletocomplywithyourre-quest.

October12thisfinewithme,butatimeat12noonwouldbemoreconvenient.Asyouknow,

myfeeforthiskindoflectureis$35,000.Thisincludesbothmytravelandhotelexpenses.

SeptemberhasbeenabusymonthformewithlecturesatMcGill,Concordia,andthe

UniversityofMontreal.I'mlookingforwardtogettingtoTorontoinOctober,andinparticular

lecturingatyourschoolonthe12th.

Yours

truly,

(Signature)

Dr.

MatthewS.Walker

Encl.

P.S.

b)真题实例讲解：

【08年】

Directions:YouhavejustcomebackfromCanadaandfoundamusicCDinyourluggage

thatyouforgottoreturntoBob,yourlandlordthere.Writehimaletterto

1)makeanapology,and

2)suggestasolution.

Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.

Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing“instead.

Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)

Sample1:

January20,2008

DearBob,

rmwritingheretomakeanapologytoyou.

IborrowedfromyouamusicCDwhileIlivedinyourhouse.But,unfortunately,whenIwas

unpackingthismorning,Ifounditinmyluggage.Iwasinsuchahurrythat1forgottoreturnitto

you.r11senditbacktoyoubypostorexpressassoonaspossible.Ifnecessary,I'llcompensate

foranytroubleitmayhavecaused.

Onceagain,Ifeelsosorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Pleaseacceptmyapology.

Sincerelyyours,

LiMing

Sample2:

January20,2008

DearBob,

rmsorryaboutforgettingtoreturnthemusicCD,whichIborrowedfromyoulastweek.It

wascompletelymyfault.Iwassobusypreparingformyleavethatitmusthaveslippedmymind.

Tocompensateformycarelessness,Ihaveaskedoneofmyfriends,whoisgoingtoCanada

foravisitnextweek,tobringtheCDbacktoyou.Hewillcontactyouassoonashearrivesthere.

Again,Iwouldliketoapologizeforanyinconveniencethismayhavecausedyou.

Sincerely

yours,

LiMing

【07年】

Directions:Writealettertoyouruniversitylibrary,makingsuggestionsforimprovingits

service.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.

Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing“instead.

Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)

Sample1:

January20,2007

DearSirorMadam,

rmastudentintheuniversityandIspendmuchofmyfreetimereadinginthelibrary.Vm

writingheretomakesomesuggestionsonhowtoimproveyourservice.

Ifindthatsomemagazinesinourlibraryareactuallyoutofdate.Itwillbemuchhelpfulif

theycouldbereplacedbynewonesintime.Also,somenewbooksandmagazinesshouldbe

introducedbecausestudentstendtoshowinterestinalargevarietyofsubjects.Furthermore,since

therearesomanybooksinthelibrary,thecurrentsearchingsystemneedstobeimprovedsothat

thestudentscouldfindthebookormagazinemoreeasily.

ThankyouforyourtimeandI'mlookingforwardtosomechangessoon.

Sincerelyyours,

LiMing

Sample2:

January20,2007

DearSirorMadam,

rmastudentoncampushereandafrequentvisitortothelibrary.I,mwritingtotellsomeof

myideas,whichIwishtobehelpfulforyou.

1noticethatsomemagazinesinourlibraryareactuallyoutofdate.Itwillbebeneficialtous

studentsalotifnewissuescouldbeshelvedintime.Also,itmayproveverynecessarythatsome

newjournalsandbooksbeintroduced,forstudentstendtoshowinterestinmoresubjectsthan

thosethey'relearning.Furthermore,sincethelibraryhasahugestorageofbooks,amoreefficient

searchingsystemmaywellhelpthestudentsfindtherightthinginashortertime.

ThankyouforyourtimeandI'mlookingforwardtosomechangessoon.

Sincerely

yours,

LiMing

【06年】

Directions:

YouwanttocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotearea.

Writealettertothedepartmentconcerned,askingthemtohelpfindacandidate.Youshould

specifywhatkindofchildyouwanttohelpandhowyouwillcarryoutyourplan.

Writeyourletterinnolessthan100words.WriteitneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.

Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter;use“LiMing“instead.

Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)

January20,2006

DearSirorMadam,

rmacollegegraduateworkingwithacomputercompany.Assomeonewhohasever

benefitedalotfromProjectHope,IwishtodosomethingfortheProject.Specificallyspeaking,I

wanttoofferfinancialassistancetoachildinaremotearea.Hence,Vmwritingthislettertoseek

foryourhelptorecommendapropercandidate.

Itispreferablethattwothingsaretakenintoconsiderationinpickingoutacandidate.First,

thechildshouldcomefromSichuanProvince,forIintendtohelpachildfrommyhometown.

Second,asIwanttooffermoreaidtothechild,itwillbebetterifheorsheattendsprimaryschool

now.

Myplanwillbecarriedoutasfollows.Ononehand,Iwillofferatleast2,000RMBincash

everyyearuntilheorshefinisheshisorherhighschooleducation.Ontheotherhand,I'11buy

himorhersomebooksfromtimetotime.

Yourprompthelpwouldbehighlyappreciated.AndIamlookingforwardtoyourreplyvery

soon.

Yours

sincerely,

LiMing

【05年】

Directions:

TwomonthsagoyougotajobasaneditorforthemagazineDesigns&Fashions.Butnow

youfindthattheworkisnotwhatyouexpected.Youdecidetoquit.Writealettertoyourboss,Mr.

Wang,tellinghimyourdecision,statingyourreason(s),andmakinganapology.

Writeyourletterwithnolessthan100words.WriteitneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.

Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter;use“LiMing“instead.

Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.(10points)

Jun

22,2005

DearMr.Wang,

I,mwritingthislettertopresentmyresignation.I'mreallysorryfbrthisbecauseIdoknow

thatthiswilldefinitelybringmuchtroubletoyou,but,anyway,Ihavemyownreasonsforit.

Tobeginwith,havingworkedherefortwomonths,Iseemtofindthejobasaneditorisnot

suitableforme.What'smore,itkeepsmebusyalltheweeksothatIhavenotimetopreparefor

thedegreeIhavebeenpursuingformorethanthreeyears.Again,Iapologizetoyoufbrmy

resignation.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Sincerely

yours,

LiMing

c)重点书信类型推荐：

A.LettersofApplicationforaJob(求职申请信)

1)见广告后应聘职位

Sample:

May16,2006

DearMr.Jones,

PleaseconsidermyapplicationforthepositionofComputerProgrammer,asadvertisedin

TheGlobeMailofMay14,2006.Asrequested,Iamenclosingacopyofmyresume.

Asyouwillseefrommyresume,Iamagraduateofthethree-yearComputerProgram

CourseatHumberCol-lege.Mythreesummersofexperienceasastudentprogram-merhave

givenmevariedandvaluableexperienceonseveralkindsofcomputers.AceComputershas

caughtmyattentionoverthepastfewmonthsasoneofthefastest-growingcompaniesinthefield.

Ireallydesiretojoinacompanywhichwillgivemevariedex-periencecoupledwithopportunities

foradvancement;thusIamparticularlyanxioustobeconsideredforthisposition.

IamavailabletostartanytimeafterJune1andIwouldbepleasedtocomeinforan

interviewatyourconvenience;youcanreachmeafter3:00p.m.at358-9853toarrangeanap­

pointment.Thankyouforyourconsideration.

Yourstruly,

(Signature)

JanetBaker

2)求职自我推荐信：

Jun.5,2005

DearMr.Goodwin,

WouldyourfirmbeinterestedinemployingakeengraduateofCentennialCollegewitha

diplomainAccounting?Iwillbegraduatinginafewweeks,andameagertofindachai-lenging

positionwhereIcanusemyaccountingandmanage-mentskills.

Asyouwillnotefrommyresume,Ihavehadtwosummers'experienceassummerreliefin

acharteredaccountant"s