高三英语复习 作文案例1：道歉信 课件(共20张PPT)

新高考英语写作教学设计案例

——应用文写作（案例一）

基于高考真题的道歉信写作教学设计

Listening输入标题延迟符Q1:Whichwordsorsentencesimpressyou

most?Q2:What’sthepurposeofthissong?ApologizeWhen?How?Discussion输入标题延迟符Q1:Whatkindofformatwillweadopt?Q2:Howmanypartsofit?AletterofanapologySalution:

BodyCompliments

&Signature？sincerity输入标题输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字延迟符DiscussionWhattowriteWhytowritePara.1Para.2…Structure(body)输入标题输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字延迟符DiscussionWhattowriteWhytowritePara.1

Para.2Para.3Structure(body)expresstheapologyshowthepurposeexplainthereasons;comeupwithsolutionsadmityourfaultandshowyoursinceritytomakeupforyourmistakesapologizeagainshowyourgreatsincerityAppreciating输入标题输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字延迟符【2014北京】你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；

3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。注意：

1.词数不少于50。

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Appreciating输入标题输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字延迟符DearChris,Howiseverythinggoing?IrememberweplannedtovisitYunnaninJulybutnowbecausemyleftfootwasinjured,IamafraidIcannotgowithyouasplanned.Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyregretfornotbeingabletogowithyou.CanIsuggestthatweputitoffuntilearlyAugust?Iwishyoucouldunderstand.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,JoeAppreciating输入标题输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字延迟符【2016新课标全国卷III】假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。输入标题延迟符AppreciatingDearBob, IwouldliketoexpressmydeepestapologyfornotbeingabletogotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.IhavejustfoundthatIhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetingthatafternoon.Ihopethechangewillnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble. ShallwegoonSaturdaymorning?Wecansetoutearlysothatwe’llhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetat8:30outsidetheschoolgate.Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek. Deeplysorryforyourinconveniencecausedbymeagain.Yours,LiHuaBrainstorming输入标题输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字延迟符

AspectsExpressions/SentencepatternsGroup1Expresstheapology…Group2Explainthereasons;…Group3Putforwardsolutions.…Group4Makeanapologyagain…PresentingForthebeginningpartIamafraidIcannot…Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyregretfornotbeingableto…Iwouldliketoexpressmydeepestapologyfor…Ihopethechangewillnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.Deeplysorryforyourinconveniencecausedbyme.Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyoufor…Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouformyfailingto…Ifeeldreadfulabout…Imustbegyourforgivenessfor…Iamverysorrytosaythat…Excusemeformynotbeingableto…Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyfor…Hereismydeepestapologyfor…PresentingFortheendingpartOnceagain,Iamsorryforalltheinconveniencecaused.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.

Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.

Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies.

IwanttoletyouknowhowregretfulIamfeelingnow.Weassureyouthatsuchamatterwillneverhappenagain.Iwouldbeverymuchappreciatedifyoucould……I'mafraidwhatIhavedonehascausedmuchinconveniencetoyou.Let’snotputalittlemisunderstandingbetweenus.

Ihopethatthesettlementofthematterwillmeetyourwishes.IsincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandthatIoffendedyouunintentionally.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologiesforthisunhappyexperience.Pleaseacceptmyapology.Idohopeyouwillunderstandmeandexcusemeformycarelessness.Writing输入标题输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字延迟符TypeofwritingAimofwritingKeypoint1fortheletterReasonswhyyoucan’tattendKeypoint2fortheletterYourclassmateTomhasinvitedyoutohisbirthdaypartybefore,butyoudidn’tattendforthereasonthat.......LetterapologizeshowyoursorryfornotattendingthebirthdaypartyattendcampintheUSaccordingtothescheduleexpressyoursincerity&yoursuggestionformakingupforitSharing输入标题输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字输入文字延迟符1Thegratitudeismentioned★2Youhaveexplainedthereasonwhyyoucan’tattend★3Therearesomegoodsentencestomakeyourapologypoliteandtactful★★4Whatyouwriteisrelatedtowhatwehavelearned★★5Thereisnoseriousspellingorgrammarmistakes★★

CheckpointsPolishing输入标题延迟符DearTom,ThankyouforinvitingmetoyourbirthdaypartyonMar.12,whichIamtrulyhonoredandhumbled.Unfortunately,IwouldliketoexpressmydeepestapologyfornotbeingabletoattenditowingtotheEnglishSpeakingContestwhichisalreadyontheschoolschedule.I’mdeeplysorryforthelimitedtimesothatIcouldnotbeavailableforboththings.Isincerelyhopethatyourbirthdaypartywillbefullofgreatjoyandsuccess.Deeplysorryformyfailuretokeepmypromiseagain.HopeyoucanunderstandthatIoffendedyouunintentionally.Sincerely,LiHuaAPolishedWritingConsolidating输入标题延迟符Model

1Dear_________,

Iamterriblysorrytotellyouthat_________,andIamwritingthislettertoshowmydeepregret.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologywithgratitude.Ihopeyouwillunderstandmysituationandexcusemefor_________.

Thereasonwhy_________isthat__________.Underthatcircumstance,__________.Therefore,itwasnotmypowerto_________.Ifpossible,Iwouldliketosuggestthat_________.Ishallbeobligedifyouwillkindlywriteandtellme_________.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyouagain.Yours,XXXConsolidating输入标题延迟符Model2Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouformyfailingto

.Thereasonisthat

.IamsorrythatIcan’tfinish

intime,butisitpossiblethatI

makeupthelossby

?Ifso,Iwillputeverythingelseasideto

.Idohopethatyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.输入标题延迟符ConsolidatingMuchtomyregret/IamterriblysorrythatIamunableto______.ItismainlybecauseatthattimeIwillbefulloccupiedby________whichisquiteoutofmyexpectation,andthatconflictswithyour__________.ThereforeIamforcedtoadjustmyscheduleandcannotmakemypresenceonyour______________.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillenjoyagoodtime.By