英语高三一轮复习系列外研学案导学版文档第三部分写作导练案第四讲word版含答案2

06/605/6/第四讲用篇章技巧助力层级十一生动清晰的“时、语态”一篇文章的时态语态可以让文章要点表述清晰，语言生动，段落有条理，能烘托语境，创设情境，使文章的语言活起来，亮起来。美句输入一、时态一定要正确1.一般时态一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。Thereisgoingtobeapaper－cuttingexhibitionintheFolkArtMuseumonSunday.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ·书面表达)星期日，在民间美术馆将有一个剪纸展览。2.进行时态现在进行时、过去进行时和将来进行时。Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinapaper－cuttingshowtobeheldthisSunday.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ·书面表达)我写信是想邀请你参加本星期日举行的剪纸展。3.完成时态现在完成时、过去完成时。I’msurethatitwillinterestyou，foryouhavebeenenthusiasticaboutping－pong.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ·书面表达)我肯定这会使你感兴趣，因为你一直热衷于乒乓球运动。二、用英语的被动语态写作时可以多用被动语态，以使表达更生动。1.be＋过去分词(be可使用各种时态)或get＋过去分词Theexhibitionwillbeheldfrom9：00amto5：00pmthedayaftertomorrowinFolkCustomMuseum.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ·书面表达)展览将于后天上午9时至下午5时在民俗博物馆举行。2.情态动词＋be＋过去分词Internetvotingisunfair，andcan’tbetrusted.(2016·江苏卷·书面表达)网络投票不公平，不能被信任。佳句输出补全句子1.Thatweekend，wewenttoanearbyneighborhoodandgavethemawaytothepeoplethere.(2016·北京卷·写作)那个周末，我们去了附近的小区把它们送给那里的人们。2.I’veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyou’veaskedforbefore.我已请他带给你所要的油画。3.I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutdonatingbookstoyourclass.我正写信告诉你向你班赠书的情况。4.Theentrancetotheparkingplacewastoosmallandoftengotblocked.通往停车场的入口太小了，经常堵车。5.Thisbooksellswellinourprovince，andthousandsofcopieshavebeensoldoutnow.这本书在我们省很好卖，现在已经卖出数千本了。6.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschoolinthepasttwoyears.我们的学校近两年发生了巨大的变化。7.Ididn’tcatchwhatourteachersaid，becauseIwasthinkingaboutsomethingelse.我没有听懂我们的老师说的什么，因为我刚才在考虑别的事情。8.Iwilltellyouthetruthaslongasyoukeepittoyourself.只要你不告诉别人，我就告诉你真相。完美文章(记人叙事)利用恰当的时态语态，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵1.AveryterriblerainstormhitourcityVillage.In2.ten市)lastnightandcausedhugemudslidesaroundWestVillage.Inthisdisaster，nearly2.tenhousesweredestroyed(十所房子被毁)andanofficebuildingwasruined.What’sworse，3.ithasalreadycausedonedeath(暴雨已造成一人死亡)，leavingfivepersonsmissing.4.Whentroublehappens(当困难发生)ataplace，helpcomesfromallsides.Soldiersweresenttohelpout.And5.alotofvillagerstriedtheirbesttohelp(许多村民努力帮助)searchforthemissingpersons.Itissaidthatthedirecteconomiclosscausedbythisheavyrainstorm6.addsuptomorethantenmillionyuan(总计一千多万元).Througheveryone’sefforts，7.everythingwentonverywell/smoothly(一切进展顺利).层级十二句顺意畅的“过渡语”能使书面表达的整篇文章浑然一体的就是一些过渡性词语的使用。这些衔接过渡性词语在句与句之间、段与段之间起承上启下、使文章前后连贯、结构紧凑、过渡自然的作用，从而提升了表达的层次，成为增分的亮点。美句输入1.表示起始关系的过渡性词语aboveall，tobegin/startwith，today，now，nowadays，atpresent，currently，recently，generallyspeaking，accordingto，withthedevelopmentof...等。Tostartwith，IhavebeenlearningandspeakingMandarinforabout17years.首先，我学说普通话已经17年了。(2015·四川卷·满分作文)2.表示时间顺序的过渡性词语firstly，firstofall，tobegin/startwith，then，later，intheend，finally，atlast，afterthat，afterwards，sincethen，immediately，suddenly，meanwhile等。Firstly，Ihavealwaysbeeninterestedinreadingbooks.Secondly，I’dliketosharemybookswithothersaswell.(2015·重庆卷·满分作文)首先，我一直对读书感兴趣；其次，我也喜欢与别人分享我的书籍。3.表示并列关系的过渡性词语and，or，also，aswellas，neither...nor...，notonly...butalso...，either...or...，not...but...等。Shefinallyearnedrespectofthem，whoeventuallybecameconfidentaswellaswell－behaved.(2015·广东卷·满分作文)她最后赢得了他们的尊重，他们最终变得自信，表现也不错。4.表示转折关系的过渡性词语but，yet，however，while，otherwise，onthecontrary，though，although，evenif/though，despite，inspiteof，regardlessof等。Somecompromiseswereunavoidable，butthevideoturnedoutperfect.有些妥协是不可避免的，但视频结果是完美的。(2017·北京卷·书面表达)5.表示因果关系的过渡性词语because，as，since，for，thanksto，dueto，asaresultof，so，therefore，asaresult/consequence等。Thankstotheassistanceofthelocalmedia，hehasfound32timetwinsacross13countries，with17malesand15females.(广东卷·满分作文)多亏当地媒体的协助，他在13个国家找到了32对同年同月同日出生的人，其中17对男性，15对女性。6.表示递进关系的过渡性词语what’smore，furthermore，moreover，besides，what’sworse，stillless，tomakemattersworse，worsestill，on(the)onehand...ontheotherhand...，foronething...foranother(thing)...等。What’sworse，Idon’tcommunicatealotwithmyparentsandmyfriends.更糟糕的是，我不经常和父母和朋友交流。(2017·天津卷·书面表达)7.表示列举事实的过渡性词语suchas，forexample/instance，take...forexample，thatistosay，asfollows，inotherwords等。Theplanforthedayisasfollows：Firstly，it’sacustomtohavedumplingsonthatday，sowe’llmakedeliciousdumplingswithourownhandsratherthanbuysomeforthem.(2015·全国卷Ⅱ·满分作文)这天的计划如下：首先，在那天吃饺子是一项风俗，因此我们会亲手为他们做美味的饺子而不是去买。8.表示观点的过渡性词语inmyopinion，inmyview，frommypointofview，asfarasIamconcerned，asforme，personally等。AsfarasI’mconcerned，allourclassmateshavelearnedalotfromourcommunicationandthevariousactivities.(2016·天津卷·书面表达)就我个人而言，我的所有同学从交流和各种各样的活动中学到很多东西。9.表示总结的过渡性词语inshort，inbrief，inconclusion，ina/oneword，tosumup，allinall，onthewhole，ingeneral，actually等。Inshort，playingbasketballenrichesmylifeandmakesmemoreconfident.总之，打篮球丰富我的生活，使我更加自信。佳句输出用过渡词汇补全句子1.Firstofall/Tobeginwith(首先)，themostsignificantthingistosetagoal，workoutaplanandcarryoutyourplanstepbystep.2.Besides/Inaddition/What’smore/Moreover(况且)，listeningtosomesoftmusicdoesrelaxyourmoodandgiveyouanewstart.3.Ilostmywayintheforestandtomakemattersworse/worsestill(更糟的是)，itbecamedark.4.Therefore(因此)，Isuggestwebegivenmoretimeforsportsandsleep.5.Inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Inbrief(总之)，weshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectourenvironment.6.Otherwise(否则)we’llhavetoanswerforourselfishnesssoonerorlater.7.Swimmingnotonly(不但)benefitsourhealth，butalso(而且)helpsushaveastrongwill.8.Onthecontrary(正相反)，smartphonesnotonlytakeupourvaluabletime，butalsodogreatharmtoourhealth.9.AsfarasIamconcerned(在我看来)，onlybystudyinghardatordinarytimecanyousucceedeventually.10.Therefore(因此)，Isuggestwegetupearlytocatchthebus.11.Actually(事实上),wecan’tsucceedineverythingwetry.What’simportantisthatweshouldstickatit.12.Inmyfreetime,Iwillcontinuetotakeregularexercise,suchas(例如)swimming,runningandvariousballgames.13.Inoticedtheentrancewassmallandalmostblocked.So(所以)myclassmatesandIhadadiscussionandwroteareport.14.Inadditionto(除了……之外)readingforknowledge,wereadforfunandinspiration.15.Finally(最后),weshouldtakepartinsportsandoutdoorsactivitiesfrequently.Theyarereallyhelpfultobuildupmybodyandenrichmyschoollife.完美文章(观点对比类)选用适当的过渡性词语补全短文however，besides，meanwhile，personally，additionally，ononehand，ontheotherhand，asfarasI’mconcernedDeareditor，I’mwritingtotellyou