校园活动(因果关系)

美国康州某中学与你校是友好学校，对方校刊来信说想了解你校为落实素质教育精神所开设选修课的情况。你作为学校记者站的小站长，根据康州中学的要求对学生进行了问卷调查，根据调查结果你以StudentsLikeOptionalcourses为题，写了一篇120词左右的英语报道。课程门类：音乐、美术、体育、文学、记算机等十余种上课时间：每周五下午3:30—5:00上课方式：同一门课同一所教室；集体学习。最受欢迎的课：计算机、英语口语、艺术等对课程的看法：1、有利于自己的特长发展，十分感兴趣；2、学到很多课外知识；3、有大量的实践机会。建议：1、增加选修课；2、减少作业量；3、多组织参观，了解社会Thistermourschoolhasofferedmorethan10optionalcourses,suchasmusic,arts,literature,computerandsoon.Studentscanchoosewhattheyareinterestedinaccordingtotheirtastes.Thestudentswhostudythesamesubjectstudyinthesameclass.Thecoursesaregivenfrom3:30to5:00everyFridayafternoon.Studentsthinkhighlyofthemeasurestakenbyschool,andtheirfavoritecoursesarecomputer,spokenEnglish,artsandsoon.Theysayitisusefultodeveloptheirspecialitiesandtheyhavelearnedalotthatisnottaughtintextbooksandtheyhavegotagreatdealofpractice.

However,studentsarenotquitesatisfied.Theyhopemoreoptionalcourseswillbeofferedwhiletheirhomeworkshouldbeless.Theysuggestthatmoretripsandvisitsbeorganizedsothattheycanlearnmoreaboutwhatisgoingonoutsideschool.写作素材：1.上课时间：每周五下午3:30—5:00Thecoursesaregivenfrom3:30to5:00everyFridayafternoon.通知：开会时间：下周二下午3:30—5:00Themeetingwillbeheld

from3:30to5:00nextFridayafternoon.2.最受欢迎的课：计算机、英语口语、艺术等Theirfavoritecoursesarecomputer,spokenEnglish,artsandsoon.Computer,spokenEnglish,artsareverypopular\wellreceived.3.有利于自己的特长发展Itisusefultodeveloptheirspecialities4.学到很多课外知识Theyhavelearnedalotthatisnottaughtintextbooks5.课外活动能让我们更好地了解社会。Wecanlearnmoreaboutwhatisgoingonoutsideschool.Theseafter-classactivitiesofferusachancetohaveabetterunderstandingofsociety.2011四川（世纪金榜p55）最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-classActivities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。你校开展课外活动的情况；你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处为同学选择课外活动提出建议为学校开展课外活动提出建议第一段第二段第三段Nowadays,after-classactivitiesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularinhighschools.Inourschool,therearevariouskindsofactivities,forexample,artsandsports.Weenjoythemverymuch.Playingfootballandreadingstoriesaremyfavoriteswhichdomelotsofgood.Besidesbuildingmybodyandenrichingmyknowledge,theyalsofreemefromtheheavyworkofstudy.

HereIhavesomesuggestions.Tostudents,you’dbetterchoosetheactivitieswhichinterestyouandsuityou;toschools,theyshouldorganizemoreactivitiesforstudentsandleavestudentsmoretimeforactivitiesbygivingthemlesshomework.Dearfriends,pleaseactivelytakepartinafter-classactivities,whichwillnotonlymakeyourschoollifecolorful,butalsoimproveyoulearning.

谈论精彩的校园活动、校园生活写作素材：活动的意义有助于开拓学生视野。AlltheseactivitiesarebeneficialforstudentstobroadentheirhorizonsAlltheseactivitiesgivestudentsanimportantmeanstobroadentheirhorizons.2.校园活动有利于提高学生们的学习成绩。Schoolactivitiesplayapositiverolein

improvingstutents’studies.3.此外这些活动也给那些封闭在“象牙塔”中的学子们一个接触社会的好机会。Inaddtion,theseactivitiesalsogivestudentslivingintheir“ivorytowers”anopportunitytostayintouchwithsociety.假定你在参加一场英语辩论赛。你是正方辩手，试用英语简要地表明自己的观点。主题：Shallaseniorstudenttakeapart-timejobinholidays?观点：1．高中生重视功课，而对社会知道甚少。2．假期做apart-timejob是很好的社会实践。3．通过书本学到的东西不如通过实践学到的东西有效。4．通过社会实践，我们可以在知识和能力两个方面取得进步。5．假期做apart-timejob的报酬或多或少有些帮助。结论高中生....要点一：高中生重视功课，而对社会知道甚少。第一步:确定并翻译句子主干（谓语部分，以短语为主）1.重视：paymuchattentiontoattachgreatimportancetodevotemuchtimeto2.对社会知道少knowlittleaboutfailtoknowabouthavelittleknowledgeof要点一：高中生重视功课，而对社会知道甚少。第二步:翻译句子其它部分；分析两个信息之间的逻辑关系，确定连接词和句式1）逻辑关系1:“而”转折关系Westudentspaymuchattentiontoourstudieswhileweknowlittleaboutsociety.比较：他仍然很穷，但他哥哥发了大财。Heremainedpoorwhilehisbrothermadeafortune.but要点一：高中生重视功课，而对社会知道甚少。逻辑关系2:因果关系Westudentspaymuchattentiontoourstudiessoweknowlittleaboutsociety.Westudentspaymuchattentiontoourstudiesasresultofwhichweknowlittleaboutsociety.Westudentspaysomuchattentiontoourstudiesthatweknowlittleaboutsociety.Aswestudentspaymuchattentiontoourstudiesweknowlittleaboutsociety.Westudentspaymuchattentiontoourstudies,whichmakesusknowlittleaboutsocietyWestudentspaymuchattentiontoourstudies,whichmakesusknowlittleaboutsociety.Westudentspaymuchattentiontoourstudies,makingusknowlittleaboutsociety.Westudentspaymuchattentiontoourstudies,causeusknowlittleaboutsociety.(双谓语错误)Westudentspaymuchattentiontoourstudies,leadtousknowlittleaboutsociety.(双谓语错误)2012年高考英语作文真题：辽宁卷图片丰富；有助于英语学习。TherearesomanybeautifulandcolorfulpicturesthatwecanenjoyEnglishbetter.Therearemanybeautifulandcolorfulpictures,______

canhelpusunderstandEnglishbetter.Therearemanybeautifulandcolorfulpictures,

________(help)usunderstandEnglishbetter.which

helping车多，污染严重路上有如此多的车空气污染日益严重。Therearesomanycarsonheroadthattheairispollutedseriously.倒装Somanycarsarethereonheroadthattheairispollutedseriously.加结果Therearemanycarsrunningontheroad,makingtheairpolluted.Therearemanycarsrunningontheroad,which

makestheairpolluted.要点2：假期做apar