高考英语读后续素材+练习汇总

1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Onceuponatime,inasmallvillageinTurkey,therelivedamotherandherson.ThesonwasknownbyallasBaldBoybecauseeventhoughhewasstillquiteyounghehadnohaironhisheadatall.BaldBoyandhismotherwereverypoorindeedandsoeachdayBaldBoywouldtakeuphisbasketandwentoutintothewoodsinsearchoffood.Oneday,ashewassearchingtheforestfloorformushrooms,BaldBoywassurethathecouldhearayounggirlcrying.Whenhelookeduphenoticedalittlesquirrel(松鼠）sittingonthebranchofthetreeabovehishead.Thesquirrelwascryinginconsolably(无法安慰的）andsoBaldBoytookthelittlecreatureinhisarms.Hecomfortedherandtoldherthateverythingwasgoingtobeokay.Whenatlastthesquirrelstoppedcrying,thetwofriendsgottotalkingandtheBaldBoyexplainedhowhelivedwithhismotherandhowtheywereverypoor."Ineedtocomeintothisforesteachdayinsearchoffoodbecausewehavenomoney,"hetoldthesquirrel.Itwasthenthatthelittlesquirrelsaid,"YouhavebeenverykindtometodaysoIamgoingtohelpyouinreturn."ThenthelittlesquirreljumpedoutofBaldBoy'shandsandsaid,"Followme."Theyoungboyfollowedthesquirrelthroughtheforestformanyhoursuntiltheyreachedacliffedge(悬崖边）thatcouldseethegreenvalleybelow."Youmustclimbdownthiscliff,"saidthesquirrel."WhenyoureachthebottomyouwillfindtheForestQueen.Shewillaskyouthreequestionsandyoumustanswerthemallcorrectlytoreceivetheprize."注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:ThesquirrelclimbedupontoBaldBoy'sshoulderandwhispered..._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:"Ifyoudonotanswercorrectly,"shesaidinhercoldvoice,"then...____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Paragraph1:ThesquirrelclimbedupontoBaldBoy'sshoulderandwhisperedtheanswerstothethreequestionsinhisear.Thenshejumpeddownandranbackintotheforest.BaldBoymadehimselfarope,thenclimbeddownthecliffedgeandmadehiswaytowherethesquirrelhadtoldhimtheForestQueenlived.Whenshesawhimapproaching,theQueenstoppedBaldBoyanddemandedthatheanswerthreequestions.Paragraph2:"Ifyoudonotanswercorrectly,"shesaidinhercoldvoice,"thenyouwillloseyourhead.""Howmanycherriesaregrowingonthistree?""Whereisthemiddleoftheearth?""Whichistheheavierofthesetwoapples?"Confidently,BaldBoyspokeouttheanswersthesquirrelhadalreadytoldhim.TheForestQueencouldnotdenythatallthreeanswerswerecorrectandsosheunwillinglyhandedBaldBoyalargebagofgoldthatwashisprize.Hethankedthesquirrelinhisheartandhappilyreturnedhometohismotherwiththegold.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。文章主要讲述生活在一个小村庄里的秃头男孩和他的母亲相依为命，并且很贫穷。一天，这个秃头男孩遇到一个哭的伤心的小松鼠并安慰它，小松鼠受到感动决定帮助男孩的故事。【详解】续写第一段开头为：松鼠爬上秃头男孩的肩膀，小声说……后面应该写小松鼠怎么帮助秃头男孩去获取奖励，男孩怎样到达悬崖底部见到森林女王的过程。续写第二段开头为：“如果你答错了，”她用冰冷的声音说，“那么……后面应该写秃头男孩回答上森林女王的问题，最终获得奖励，回到家中和他妈妈分享喜悦。【点睛】文章主题部分选用的是一般过去时，续写部分也用一般过去时，通篇时态把握准确；词语运用恰当并且高级，显示出较高的英语能力；文章中还使用大量的复合句，为文章增加色彩和高级感，如BaldBoymadehimselfarope,thenclimbeddownthecliffedgeandmadehiswaytowherethesquirrelhadtoldhimtheForestQueenlived.TheForestQueencouldnotdenythatallthreeanswerswerecorrectandsosheunwillinglyhandedBaldBoyalargebagofgoldthatwashisprize.这里的宾语从句和定语从句相结合使用，显示高级的英语水平，精准掌握了从句使用的要领；续写部分构思巧妙，衔接自然，思路清晰自然，表达完整，为一篇优秀的作品。2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Jennywasaprettyeight-year-oldgirl.Onedaywhensheandhermotherwerecheckingoutatthegrocerystore,Jennysawaplasticpearlnecklace,bywhichshewastotallydefeated.Howeagerlyshewantedit!Butwhenshesawtheprice,herheartsankalittle.Shegathereduphercourageandaskedhermotherifshewouldbuyitforher.Hermothersaid,“Well,itisaprettynecklace,butitcostsanawfullotofmoney.Icanbuyyouthenecklace,butwhenwegethome,weshouldmakeupalistofhouseworkthatyoucandotopayforthenecklace.”Jennyagreedimmediately,feelingaburstofjoy.Sohermotherboughtthepearlnecklaceforher.Jennyworkedonherhouseworkdeterminedlyandearnestlyeveryday.SoonJennypaidoffthepearls.Jennyhadaverylovingdaddy.WhenJennywenttobed,hewouldreadJennyherfavoritestory.Onenightwhenhefinishedthestory,hesaid,“Jenny,doyouloveme?”“Oh,yes,Daddy,youknowIloveyou.”thelittlegirlsaiddelightedly,withabroadsmileonherface.“Well,then,givemeyourpearls.”Hearingthat,Jennyfrozethere,ananxiousexpressiontwistingherface.“Oh!Daddy,notmypearls!ButyoucanhaveRosy,myfavoritedoll.Rememberher?Yougavehertomelastyearformybirthday.Okay?”“Ohno,darling,that’sokay.”Herfatherbrushedhercheekwithakiss,gentlyandcalmly.“Goodnight,littleone.”Aweeklater,herfatheronceagainaskedJennyafterherstory,“Doyouloveme?”“Ohyes,Daddy,youknowIloveyou.”thelittlegirlmurmuredsoftly,tryingtoescapefromherfather’seyes.“Well,then,givemeyourpearls.”“Oh,Daddy,notmypearls!ButyoucanhaveRibbons,mytoyhorse.Doyourememberher?Sheismyfavorite.”Thelittlegirlbegged.“No,that’sokay,”herfathersaid,smilingbroadlyandsweetlyandbrushedhercheekagainwithakiss.“Godblessyou,littleone.Sweetdreams.”注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1：Severaldayslater,whenJenny’sfathercameintoreadherstory,Jennywaswaitinganxiouslyforhimonthebed.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Holdingtheplasticpearlhisdaughteroffered,thefatherdraggedoutabluebox.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Paragraph1：Severaldayslater,whenJenny’sfathercameintoreadherstory,Jennywaswaitinganxiouslyforhimonthebed.Whenlisteningtothestory,Jennywastotallyabsent-minded,withherhandsholdingthenecklacetightlyandfirmly.Whenthestorycametoanend,unexpectedly,Jennyofferedherbelovednecklacetoherfather,withherfingerstremblingautomatically.Nooneknewwhatthenecklacemeanttoher.Shewhisperedtoherfather,softlyandgently,“Daddy,youknowIloveyoumorethanthenecklace.”Then,thenecklaceslidintoherfather’shandsdeterminedly.Paragraph2：Holdingtheplasticpearlhisdaughteroffered,thefatherdraggedoutabluebox.MuchtoJenny’samazement,abeautifulrealpearlnecklacelaypeacefullyinthebox,whichsetherheartracing.Jennyfrozethere,athrilledexpressiontwistingherface.BeforeJennywasabletosaysomething.herfatherbrushedawarmkissonherfaceandgatheredherintohisarms.Holdingthegenuinenecklaceinherhand,Jennyliftedherlip,tearsbeginningtoblurhervision.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。【详解】读后续写主要以故事类文本为主，考生在阅读时，不应该走马观花看情节，而应找出文章的六要素（who,when,where,what,how,why），然后将每个主要事件都用六要素串联成一句话。这样一来，冗长的故事就成了两三句，文章的结构自然清晰明了。同时，考生还应该分析已给出的两个开头句包含的主要句子结构，这样才能保证正确的写作方向。为了写出符合故事发展的“尾巴”，必须先分析原文的情节发展方向。除了采用上文提到过的六要素分析法，在审题时还应该着重分析三个点：起因、转折、高潮。只有确定了故事的起因，考生才能合理推断这个起因会导致的可能结果；只有确定了故事的转折，考生才能合理地将故事发展下去。不过，在设计情节时，同样要考虑六要素，将它们串联成一句话，再将这句话添砖加瓦变成段落。在语言方面，注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切，合理使用高分词汇、短语及句型；不要抄原文，情节合情合理；书写美观，保持卷面整洁。【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了高级句子Whenlisteningtothestory,Jennywastotallyabsent-minded,withherhandsholdingthenecklacetightlyandfirmly.使用了状语从句的省略，和with复合结构；Holdingtheplasticpearlhisdaughteroffered,thefatherdraggedoutabluebox.使用了非谓语动词做状语；MuchtoJenny’samazement,abeautifulrealpearlnecklacelaypeacefullyinthebox,whichsetherheartracing.使用了which引导的定语从句。这些为文章增色不少，而且全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Wemovedonintothejungle--aforestwherelargenumbersoftalltreesandplantsgrowveryclosetogether.OldMaliwentinfrontandIfollowedclosebehindhim.Westoppedforthenightaboutanhourbeforeitbegantogetdark.OldMalilitafire.Whenitwasbightheshowedmehowtomakeabedwithmoss（青苔，苔藓）.Itwassoftandcomfortable.―Mali,howdidyoulearntomakesuchabed?Iasked.―Ilearnedtomakebedslikethat,Malireplied,―bywatchingandlisteningtoothers.Thatistherealwaytolearnanything.―Willyouletmewatchyoualways?IaskedOldMali.―Iwanttolearnallthethingsyouknowaboutthejungle.Whenwehadfinishedoursupper,OldMaligotontohisbedandlaydown.Itwasnowcompletelydark.Inthefirelight,OldMaliseemedtobefastasleeponhisbed.Isuddenlyfeltaloneandafraid.Alldayinthejungle,whilewehadbeenwalking,Ihadheardnoisesofanimals.Nowtheyseemedtobemuchnearer.Thejunglewasnowawallofblacknessinthelightofthefire.Ifeltfrightenedandsuddenlymymouthwentdry.Iwantedtoscream.Ifeltmymouthopeningwide,readytoscreamasloudaspossible.ButIdidnotscream.IsawOldMali’sfaceinthefirelight.Thismademefeelashamed.Iheldmyteethtightlytogethertostopmyselffromscreaming.Ilaydownandclosedmyeyes.AssoonasIclosedmyeyes.Iheardathousandnoises.Thewholejunglebecamealivewithanimalsmovingquietlyandcarefullyallaroundme.SuddenlyOldMalitookadeepbreathandmadeanoise.IwashearingsomanyimaginarynoiseandtherealnoisemadebyOldMaligavemeaterriblefright.Iopenedmyeyesandjumpedoutofbed.Ipulledmyknifeoutandhelditabovemyhead.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:Iwasgoingtoseeiftherewasawildanimalbesidethefire.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:OldMali’squietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Paragraph1:Iwasgoingtoseeiftherewasawildanimalbesidethefire.Throughtheburningfire,IbelievedIsawitssharpteethandcruelredeyes.ItscrawswouldinsertintomyflashwithoutmercyassoonasIcameintoitssight.Icouldn’thelptremblingandscreamingloudlyatthethoughtofit.Thenasoftvoicecamefromthedark,“AreyouOkey?”ItwasOldMaliwhowasnowlyingonhissidewithhiseyeswideopen.Paragraph2:OldMali’squietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter.Adjustingbreathquicklyandobservingcarefully,Ifoundthe“animal”wasjusttheshadeoftrees.IlaughedinreliefandtoldOldMaliwhathadhappenedjustnow.Havingknownthewholestory,Maligavemeanunderstandingsmileandtoldmehisformerexperiencesinjungle.Withthesestories,Igotbacktomybedandlaydown.Exhausted,Iclosedmyeyes,andknowingOldMaliwaswatching,Isoonfellfastasleep.Thatnightwassounforgettablethatitwouldstayinmymemoryforever.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。【详解】通读短文可知，作者跟随着OldMali进入了丛林。夜色降临，吃完晚饭作者和OldMali各自休息，但作者一闭上眼睛就听到各种动物的声音，续写由此展开。第一段以“我去看看火边有没有野兽”开始，所以接下来要叙述作者所误认为的“野兽”以及当时作者的心理活动。这是OldMali已经醒来，问作者“还好吗”。第二段以“OldMali平静的声音让作者感觉好多了。”所以要接着写OldMali告诉了作者所谓的“野兽”就是树的影子，并与作者讲起了以前的丛林经历，作者听了这些故事，很快入睡，那晚是作者最难忘的经历。【点睛】本篇范文层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色。使用高级句型有：…iftherewasawildanimalbesidethefire和assoonasIcameintoitssight使用了状语从句；ItwasOldMaliwhowasnowlyingonhissidewithhiseyeswideopen.使用了强调句型和with复合结构：Adjustingbreathquicklyandobservingcarefully,Ifoundthe“animal”wasjusttheshadeoftrees.和Havingknownthewholestory,…使用了非谓语从句；…whathadhappenedjustnow使用了宾语从句；Exhausted,Iclosedmyeyes,andknowingOldMaliwaswatching,…使用了形容词作伴随状语和非谓语动词结构；Thatnightwassounforgettablethatitwouldstayinmymemoryforever.使用了so…that…引导的结果状语从句。4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。AtDana’syardsale,Timchoseabaseballfromthetoysspreadonthecardtableandaskedabouttheprice.DanatoldhimeverythingwasaquarterexceptNezumi,acottontoyrat.Itwasgreywithsomecottonstickingoutfromtheholewhereanearhadbeentornoff.“Nezumiisextraspecial,soheistendollars.Heneedsasafenewhome.”Danasighed.Timlaughedsayinghedidn’thavetendollars.DanalaughedtooandgaveNezumitoTimasafreegiftbecausehewasherfriend.WhenTimwhispereditwassortofold,Danasaidoldtoyswerethebest.ShetheninvitedTimtoherbirthdaypartythenextevening,addingthatherparentsweregivingherarealratforherbirthday.Timwasamazedandaskedifitwasaliverat.“Ofcourse.”Danasaid.Athome,Tim’smothershowedhimthegiftshehadboughtforDana.Itwasaknittingspool(针织线轴)shapedlikeamushroom.MomsaidDanacouldknitascarfforherdoll.TimsighedthatDanawasn’taknittingkindofpersonbutaratkindofperson.Momlaughedafterknowingwhathadhappened.Togethertheydrovetothepetstore,whereTimsearchedandsearchedandselectedaclearplasticball,oneinwhichtheratcouldrunaroundonthefloorsafefromcatsanddogs.TimthoughtofNezumi’searanddecidedDana’snewratwouldneedthisball.Thenextday,Danabroughtcupcakestoclass.WhenshehandedacupcaketoTim,sheaskedifTimbroughtNezumitoschoolasNezumilikedtorideinbackpacks.TimwasatalossbecauseNezumiwasathomeonhisbed.ThenDanaaskedwhatgifthewasgivingher.Timreplieditwasasurprise.InsilencetheysatforawhilebeforeheheardDanasayherparentsweregivingheranewbikeforherbirthdayinsteadofaliveratbecausetheythoughtratswouldbitethings.注意:1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:Athomethatafternoon,Timstaredattheplasticratball.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Allofasudden,hehadanidea.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Paragraph1:Athomethatafternoon,Timstaredattheplasticratball.WonderingabouttheuseoftheclearplasticballifDanahadnorat,hestartedwalkingupanddowntheroomwithafrownonhisface.Momwassurprisedandaskedhimwhatwashappening.TimtoldherDanawasn’tgettingaliveratfromherparentsbutabike.Astheywererackingtheirbrains(绞脑汁)tocomeupwithanappropriategift,TimturnaroundandsawNezumionhisbed.Paragraph2:Allofasudden,hehadanidea.HeliftedNezumiandsqueezingNezumiintotheplasticballwithgreatcautionsothatNezumiwouldbesafefromcatsanddogs.Seeingthis,MomaskedTimwhetherhewasgivingDanaanoldcottonratwithoneearasagift,Timnoddedwithasmilesayingshewoulddefinitelylikeit.LookingatMom’sconfusedexpression,TimaddedthatDanawasaNezumikindofpersonwhothoughtoldtoysweretheBEST.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，Tim从Dana的庭院旧货出售会得到了有一只耳朵被扯掉了的玩具老鼠Nezumi，Tim很喜欢。Dana的生日快到了，Tim去商店里为Dana喜欢的老鼠买了一个透明的塑料球，可以让它在里面跑，不会被猫和狗咬伤。第二天Tim听到Dana说她的父母给她的生日礼物是一辆新自行车，而不是一只活老鼠，因为他们认为老鼠会咬东西。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：那天下午在家里，Tim盯着塑料老鼠球。所以后文应该是讲述Tim得知Dana不会受到老鼠作为生日礼物后的心理活动，他觉得买的这个塑料老鼠球没有用了，于是他皱着眉头开始在房间里走来走去。妈妈很惊讶，问他发生了什么事。Tim告诉她Dana从她父母那里得到的不是一只活老鼠，而是一辆自行车。当他们绞尽脑汁想出合适的礼物时，Tim转过身，看见Nezumi躺在床上；第二段开头是：突然，他有了一个主意。本段应该写Tim为Dana准备生日礼物的过程，Tim要送Dana一只长着一只耳朵的老鼠。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：walkupanddown,not…but…,withgreatcaution等高级词汇；WonderingabouttheuseoftheclearplasticballifDanahadnorat,hestartedwalkingupanddowntheroomwithafrownonhisface.非谓语动词的运用和if引导的条件状语从句；Seeingthis,MomaskedTimwhetherhewasgivingDanaanoldcottonratwithoneearasagift,Timnoddedwithasmilesayingshewoulddefinitelylikeit.运用了whether引导的宾语从句等高级句式。5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Freddiewokeuptoseeitwassnowing-again.Theworldoutsidewaswhite.Snowcoveredtheroads,thecars,thehouses,andeventhedrivewayFreddiehadjustshoveledthedaybefore.“Ugh,”saidFreddie.“Nomoresnow!”Hegotoutofbedandheadedtothebathroomforhisregularmorningshower.Ashereachedforthetaps,hismotherappearedinthedoorway.“I’vegotnews,”shesaid.“There’sbeensomuchsnowovernightthattheroadsareslipperyanddangerous.Ijustheardontheradiothattheycanceledtheschoolbusesfortheday.”Freddiegroaned.“ThenhowamIsupposedtogettoschool?”Hismomgrinned.“Iguessyoudon’t.It’sasnowday!”Freddie’seyeslitup.He’dneverhadasnowdayofffromschoolbefore.Whatwouldhedofirst?“I’mgoingbacktobed!”Freddieheadedbacktohisroomandclimbedunderthecovers.Afterafewminutes,herealizedthatitwastoolate.Hewasalreadywideawake.Heheadeddowntothekitchenandthensatatthetable,watchinghisfatherfrytheeggsoverinthepanandhismotherpourjuiceandcoffee.Itwasrelaxing,thoughtFreddie.Afterbreakfasthismothersuggestedhegooutandbuildasnowman.Freddiewasn’ttoosure.Hedidn’treallylikethecoldandthesnow.He’dratherstayinsideandplayvideogames.“Youcanplayafterward,buthowaboutgoingoutsideforalittlebit?It’sgoodtogetsomefreshair,andwhoknows,youmightevenenjoyyourself.”Freddieunwillinglyputonthewarmclothesandheadedoutside.Standingaloneinthefrontyard,withthecoldwindblowing,wasnotFreddie’sideaofagoodtime.Knowinghismommeantwhatshesaid,theboysighed,thinkingthequickerhecompletedhissnowman,thefasterhecouldgobackinsidetohisvideogames.Hesettoworkpackingupsomesnowintoalargeball.Momentslater,hesawoneofhisfriendsappearingfromhishouseupthestreet.Dionwaddledoutinhisbigsnowtrousersandheavyovercoat.HewavedtoFreddie.“Heythere!Isawyououthereandthoughtyoumightwantcompany.Snowdaysareawesome!”Dionlaughed.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:Freddiewassurprisedbuthappytoseehisclassmate.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Delightedattheidea,Freddieexcitedlyranintohishouse.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Paragraph1:Freddiewassurprisedbuthappytoseehisclassmate.“Yeah,sure.Helpmemakethissnowman,wouldyou?”Dionnodded,andtheygottowork,buildingthesnowmanasolidbaseandliftingaheavysnowballontopofit.Dionfoundsomestonesforbuttons,andFreddiestuckacoupleofbrokenbranchesintothebodytomakearms.Finally,thesnowmanwasfinishes!Then,theybothhadagoodtime.Suddenly,Dionsaid,“Hey,Iknowwhatwecandonext!”HetoldFreddiehisideaandFreddiegrinned.Paragraph2:Delightedattheidea,Freddieexcitedlyranintohishouse.SeeingsnowfullofFreddie’sfaceandcoat,hismothercouldn’thelplaughing.“Areyoureadytocomein?”sheasked.“Notyet,mom.”Freddiesaid.Stillexcited,heaskedhismotherifhecouldgototheparkwithDionandgosleddingdownthehill.KnowingFreddiewouldratherenjoyhimselfoutside,hismotheragreedwithouthesitation.“Snowdayarethebest”Freddieyelledasheranofftoplaywithhisfriend.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。【详解】前文主要讲的是主人公Freddie很懊恼下雪天，因为他可能又要为了保持道路畅通继续出去铲雪。不过，在得知学校由于连日积雪而停课时，Freddie激动不已，心想着终于可以宅在家里打游戏了。但是，妈妈坚持建议他出门去堆个雪人，呼吸下新鲜空气。Freddie不情愿地来到院子，堆了个大雪球，同学Dion突然出现，兴奋地想要成为Freddie的同伴，同时表示喜欢雪天带来的快乐。在给的第一段开头“Freddiewassurprisedbuthappytoseehisclassmate.”中“happy”一词可以想象两人一起成功地堆了雪人的而快乐场景；同时第二段开头“Delightedattheidea,Freddieexcitedlyranintohishouse.”中“excitedly”和“delighted”也呈现了Freddie的情感及态度变化。而“idea”一词可以推测两人在堆完雪人后有了进一步的想法，而这个想法也一定和户外玩雪所带来的快乐相关。【高分句型一】AsDionfoundsomestonesforbuttons,Freddiestuckacoupleofbrokenbranchesintothebodytomakearms.当Dion找了一些石头做纽扣时，Freddie就把几根断了的树枝插进身体里做胳膊。运用时间状语从句。【高分句型二】HismotheragreedwithouthesitationbecausesheknewFreddieenjoyedhimselfoutside.他的母亲毫不犹豫地同意了，因为她知道Freddie在外面玩得很开心。运用原因状语从句。6．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Throughourlives,wecangainalotandlosesomuch.Butbeinghonestshouldalwaysbewithus,ashonestyisalwaysregardedasavirtue.EverytimeItalkaboutthetopic,somethingcrowdsinmymindasifithadjusthappened.Iwas16whenonemorning,DadtoldmeIcoulddrivehimtoMijasandthentakethecarinanearbygaragetogetitserviced.Atthattime,Ihadjustpassedthedrivingtest,andIhardlyhadachancetousethecar,soIsaidyeswithouthesitation.IdrovemyfathertoMijas,promisingtopickhimupagainat4pm,thenIwenttoanearbygarage,andputthecarinthere.SinceIhadseveralhourstospare,Idecidedtogotoamovietheaternearthegaragetoseethemovie.However,IwassoabsorbedintheplotofthemoviethatIforgotthetime.Whenthelastmoviefinished,Ilookedatmywatch：6pm.Iwastwohourslate!IthoughtmyfatherwouldbeveryangryifheknewwhatIwasdoing.Andhewouldneverletmedriveagain.SoIdecidedtomakeupanexcuse.Then,Idrovetotheappointedplace,myfatherwassittinginacorner,waitingpatiently.Ifirstapologizedforbeinglate,thentoldhimthatIwantedtogetthereassoonaspossible,butthatsomethingwaswrongwithsomeofthemainpartsofthecar.Iwouldneverforgetthewayhelookedatme.“I'mverydisappointedthatyouthoughtyouhadtolietome,Jason.”Myfatherlookedatmeagainandsaid,“Whenyoudidn'tshowupontime,IcalledthegasstationandaskediftherewasanythingwrongTheytoldmeyouneverpickedupthecar.So,yousee,Iknowthere'snothingwrongwiththecaratall."注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:AwaveofguiltsweptovermeandIhadtoadmitthefactthatIhadgonetothemoviesandthatwastherealreasonwhyIwaslate.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Butfather,it'sexactlyeighteenmileshomefromhere,andit'sdark.Youcan'twalkback."Ibegged.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Paragraph1:AwaveofguiltsweptovermeandIhadtoadmitthefactthatIhadgonetothemoviesandthatwastherealreasonwhyIwaslate.Dadlistenedcarefullyasasadnesspassedthroughhim，“I'mangry,notwithyoubutwithmyself.Yousee.IrealizethatIhavefailedasafatherifafteralltheseyearsyoufeelthatyouhavetolietome.IhavefailedbecauseIhavebroughtupasonwhocannoteventellthetruthtohisownfather.I'mgoingtowalkhomenowandthinkwhereIhavegonewrongalltheseyears”.Paragraph2:Butfather,it'sexactlyeighteenmileshomefromhere,andit'sdark.Youcan'twalkback."Ibegged.Myprotests,myapologiesandtherestofmywordswereuseless.Ihadletmyfatherdown.andIwasabouttolearnoneofthemostpainfullessonsofmylife.Dadbeganwalkingalongthedustyroads.Iquicklyjumpedinthecarandfollowedbehind.Iapologizedalltheway,tellinghimhowsorryIwas,buthesimplyignoredme.For18mileshekeptwalking.SeeingmyfatherinsomuchpainwasthemostawfulexperiencethatIhaveeverfaced.Howeveritwasalsothemostsuccessfullesson.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达考查读后续写。根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者驾车去接他的父亲，但是他因为去看电影而耽误了时间后，他谎称去修车了，最后谎言被拆穿了，这使得父亲非常生气。【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：一股负疚感席卷了我，我不得不承认我去看电影了，这才是我迟到的真正原因……，所以应该写父亲对此的反应是什么以及父亲的情感此时影视什么样的。第二段开头是：可是，爸爸，那儿离这儿正好十八英里，而且天又黑。你不能走回去。我恳求。本段应该写父亲对我这么做的反应是什么以及我的心里活动是什么以及我从这件事情当中得到了什么经验教训。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：protest，apologies，ignore等高级词汇；非谓语动词Iapologizedalltheway,tellinghimhowsorryIwas,buthesimplyignoredme，Dadlistenedcarefullyasasadnesspassedthroughhim.as引导的状语从句，IrealizethatIhavefailedasafatherifafteralltheseyearsyoufeelthatyouhavetolietome.that引导的宾语从句。7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。AgiftofgoldItwasthewinterof1937,justafterChristmas.TheDepressionwasstillgoingon,butIwasingoodspirits.Iwasgoingtograduatefromelementaryschool,butmymotherstilldressedmeinshorts.Mostofmyclassmateshadgivenupwearingshorts.Forthegraduationceremony,alltheboyswereexpectedtowearwhiteshirtsanddarkbluewoolpants.Iwaiteduntilaweekbefore