高考英语作文高分突破概要写作(一)课件

作文高分突破概要写作

12021届高考英语作文高分突破2021届高考英语1主要内容一篇好的概要所具备的特点概要写作中存在的问题案例分析主要内容一篇好的概要所具备的特点2一篇好的概要所具备的特点Whatisasummary?ashortretellingofthemainideaofatextoratopic.Examples:anewsreportadescriptionofamovieablurbonthebackofabook

…Whatmakesagoodsummary?a.Agoodsummaryshouldinclude:

1.themainideas2.Importantdetailsb.Agoodsummaryisshort,trueandfair.

（客观、准确、公正；不渲染、不加入自己的主观评价或观点）

c.Agoodsummaryiswritteninyourownwordsandinaclearorderthattheoriginaltextispresentedin.一篇好的概要所具备的特点Whatisasummary?3概要写作高考要求评分时主要从以下4个方面考虑：1.对原文要点的理解和呈现情况2.应用语法结构和词汇的准确性3.上下文的连贯性4.对各要点表达的独立性情况提供一篇350个单词左右的文章（体裁一般为说明文或议论文），要求考生基于该短文写一篇60词左右的内容概要。概要写作高考要求评分时主要从以下4个方面考虑：提供一篇3504概要写作要心怀读者，假定读者看不到原文本，你写的文本是否makesense。

写概要时，要想象你是在对你的朋友描述或解释这篇文章。1.Unabletofindthestructure

2.Unabletofindthekeypoints

3.Unabletorewriteinyourownwords4.Unabletowritewithbeautifullanguage

概要写作中存在的主要问题概要写作要心怀读者，假定读者看不到原文本，你写的文本是否m5Readitthoroughlytogetthetopicandstructureofthepassage

Underlinetopicsentenceandimportantdetailsineachparagraph（leaveoutunimportantdetails）Relyonyourmemoryfirsttorewritethemainideaofeachpart

Reviseittoensurethatyourwritingistothepointandclearandthelanguageiswellwritten.

概要写作的过程Readitthoroughlytogetthe6Freereadingisthebestkindofhomeworkforthestudentstodo.Studentsgettochoosewhattheywanttoread.Somestudentsmightreadanadventurestory.Othersmightreadamystery.Studentscanchoosetoreadabouttopicstheydonotlearnaboutinclass.Studentscantaketheirtimereadingathomeinsteadofhavingtoreadonlyinclass.

案例分析请阅读下面这段文字并写概要：案例来自于外滩英语2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Freereadingisthebestkind7Freereadingisthebestkindofhomeworkforthestudentstodo.Studentsgettochoosewhattheywanttoread.Somestudentsmightreadanadventurestory.Othersmightreadamystery.Studentscanchoosetoreadabouttopicstheydonotlearnaboutinclass.Studentscantaketheirtimereadingathomeinsteadofhavingtoreadonlyinclass.

案例分析2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Freereadingisthebestkind8Freereadingisthebestkindofhomeworkforthestudentstodo.①Studentsgettochoosewhattheywanttoread.Somestudentsmightreadanadventurestory.Othersmightreadamystery.Studentscanchoosetoreadabouttopicstheydonotlearnaboutinclass.②Studentscantaketheirtimereadingathomeinsteadofhavingtoreadonlyinclass.

案例分析2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Freereadingisthebestkind9第一句copying第二句minordetails最后一句confusingorder看看下面这篇概要的问题在哪儿？Freereadingisthebestkindofhomeworkforthestudentstodo.Studentscouldreadadventurestoriesormysteries.Ilikemysteriesbest.Theycanusefreereadingtolearnaboutdifferenttopics.Theycanalsotakemoretimetoreadoutsideofclass.Studentscanchoosewhattheyread.第三句yourownopinion2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件第一句copying第二句minordetails最后10Freereadingisthebesthomeworkforstudents.Itallowsstudentstochoosewhattoreadandlearnaboutandalsoensuresthemmoretimetoread.

Randomreadingshouldbeacknowledgedasthesuperbassignmentforstudentswhichempowersthemtoobtainmorealternativesandguaranteesamplereadingtime.Studentsshouldhavefreereadingastheirhomework.Itisimportantforstudentstochoosewhattheyreadandlearnabout.Readingathomecangivestudentsmorereadingtime.主位缺失，逻辑混乱。这篇概要的主位应该是freereading,不是students或readingathome。辞藻华丽，晦涩难懂122021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Freereadingisthebesthomew111.包含文章所有要点，每个要点独立，逻辑清晰。2.按照原文出现的顺序，用自己的语言表达，字数60左右。3.表达连贯，内容客观、清晰，不渲染，不参入自己的观点。4.语言准确、严谨、简练、高级。总结：什么是一篇好的概要？2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件1.包含文章所有要点，每个要点独立，逻辑清晰。总结：什么是12Topicofthearticle

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Part4TS1KD1,2…KD1,2…KD1,2…KD1,2…Mi1,…如何确定文章的关键信息TS2TS3TS4Mi1,…Mi1,…Mi1,…2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件TopicofthearticlePart113Howtolocatethemainideasandimportantdetails?MindMap(overall/bigpictureofatext,thestructureofthetext)

Groupwords(wordsorphrasesfrequentlyappearing)Signalwords(first，last，but,however,forexample,besides,therefore,

inconclusion，onthecontrary,meanwhile,ontheonehand,

ontheotherhand,some…others…,

consequently,…)

确定文章的关键信息几个策略Relationshipbetweensentences2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Howtolocatethemainideasa14MindMap(structureofatext)

M4U2:

ChemicalorOrganicFarmingPara.1：introductionPara.2:problemsPara.3:solutionPara.4:othersolutionsproblemscausedbychemicals(damagethehealthofpeopleandsoil)organicfarming(definition,benefits)othermethodstokeepsoilfertilechemicalfertilizers(welcomedbutharmful)2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件MindMap(structureofatext15MindMap(structureofatext）

M3U4:Communication:NoProblem?Para.1backgroundPara.2&3problem-noticingPara.4Problem-analyzingPara.5Problem-solvingMeetinternationalstudentsattheairport(watchingthem)SomemajormisunderstandingsoftheirgreetingbodylanguageNotallculturesgreetthesameway(examples)

１.notgoodorbad2.studyinginternationalcustoms2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件MindMap(structureofatext16Likeanyotherfacility,keepingaschoolopenrequiresagreatdealofmoney.Keepingschoolopeninthemiddleofsummerrequiresairconditioning,andthataddssignificantlytotheschool'sexpenses.Besides,teachersmustbepaidforalltheweeksheyareworking.Forexample,ahighschoolinArizonahadacostincreaseof$157,ooowhentheyswitchedtoyear-roundschooling.Someschoolsmaynotbeabletohandlesuchincreases,andotherschoolsthatcanhandletheseexpensescouldbedoingbetterthingswiththemoney.Groupwordscanindicatethemainidea.2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Likeanyotherfacility,keepi17Genetechnologycanhelppeopletogivebirthtomorehealthyandcleverchildren.Somefamilieshavegeneticdiseases.Thismeanstheir

childrenwillforsurehavethefamilydisease,whichisagreattroubleforthesefamilies.Inthepast,doctorscoulddonothingaboutgeneticdiseases.Butgenetechnologycansolvethisproblemperfectly.Scientistsjust

needtofindthewronggeneandcorrectit,andahealthychildwillbeborn.Groupwordscanindicatekeysupportinginformation.2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Genetechnologycanhelppeopl18Asisknowntoall,sportsstarsearnlargeamountsofmoneyeveryyear.LeBronJames,thefamousAmericanbasketballstar,forinstance,earnsanincomeofmorethan20milliondollarsayear.Somepeopleholdtheviewthatthesestarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.Someevenarguethatsportsstarsdonothingtosocietyapartfromentertainingpeople.Theircontributiontosocietyaremuchlessthanthosemadebydoctors,firemen,scientists,professors,etc.ButIcanneveragreewiththat.Signalwordsmayhelptolocatemainidea.but,however等后面的信息一般是段落的重要信息举例后的信息一般属于次要信息2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Asisknowntoall,sportssta19

Actually,vacationhappinessisbasedon

thefollowingtoprules.First,chooseyourtravelcompanionswisely,becausenothingcontributesmoresignificantlytoatripthantherightcompanions.Second,don'tspendyourvacationtimeinaplacewhereeverythingistooexpensivesoastomaintainapositivemood.Third,shopwisely,formeaningfulexperiencesprovidemorelong-termhappinessthanphysicalpossessions.Signalwordsmayhelptolocatekeydetails.3个Rules要作为重要细节写到概要中2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Actually,vacationhappiness20Thebiggestfactorinshort-sightednessisalackoftimespentoutdoors.Exposuretodaylighthelpstheretina(视网膜)toreleaseachemicalthatslowsdownanincreaseintheeye'saxiallength,whichiswhatmostoftencausesmyopia(近视).Acombinationofnotbeingoutdoorsanddoinglotsofworkfocusingupclose(likewritingcharactersorreading)worsenstheproblem.Butifachildhasenoughtimeintheopen,theycanstudyalltheylikeandtheireyesightshouldnotsuffer,saysIanMorganofAustralianNationalUniversity.Topicsentenceexplanationfurtherinformationfurtherexplanation√√××Relationshipbetweensentencesinaparagraph2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Thebiggestfactorinshort-si21作文高分突破概要写作

12021届高考英语作文高分突破2021届高考英语22主要内容一篇好的概要所具备的特点概要写作中存在的问题案例分析主要内容一篇好的概要所具备的特点23一篇好的概要所具备的特点Whatisasummary?ashortretellingofthemainideaofatextoratopic.Examples:anewsreportadescriptionofamovieablurbonthebackofabook

…Whatmakesagoodsummary?a.Agoodsummaryshouldinclude:

1.themainideas2.Importantdetailsb.Agoodsummaryisshort,trueandfair.

（客观、准确、公正；不渲染、不加入自己的主观评价或观点）

c.Agoodsummaryiswritteninyourownwordsandinaclearorderthattheoriginaltextispresentedin.一篇好的概要所具备的特点Whatisasummary?24概要写作高考要求评分时主要从以下4个方面考虑：1.对原文要点的理解和呈现情况2.应用语法结构和词汇的准确性3.上下文的连贯性4.对各要点表达的独立性情况提供一篇350个单词左右的文章（体裁一般为说明文或议论文），要求考生基于该短文写一篇60词左右的内容概要。概要写作高考要求评分时主要从以下4个方面考虑：提供一篇35025概要写作要心怀读者，假定读者看不到原文本，你写的文本是否makesense。

写概要时，要想象你是在对你的朋友描述或解释这篇文章。1.Unabletofindthestructure

2.Unabletofindthekeypoints

3.Unabletorewriteinyourownwords4.Unabletowritewithbeautifullanguage

概要写作中存在的主要问题概要写作要心怀读者，假定读者看不到原文本，你写的文本是否m26Readitthoroughlytogetthetopicandstructureofthepassage

Underlinetopicsentenceandimportantdetailsineachparagraph（leaveoutunimportantdetails）Relyonyourmemoryfirsttorewritethemainideaofeachpart

Reviseittoensurethatyourwritingistothepointandclearandthelanguageiswellwritten.

概要写作的过程Readitthoroughlytogetthe27Freereadingisthebestkindofhomeworkforthestudentstodo.Studentsgettochoosewhattheywanttoread.Somestudentsmightreadanadventurestory.Othersmightreadamystery.Studentscanchoosetoreadabouttopicstheydonotlearnaboutinclass.Studentscantaketheirtimereadingathomeinsteadofhavingtoreadonlyinclass.

案例分析请阅读下面这段文字并写概要：案例来自于外滩英语2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Freereadingisthebestkind28Freereadingisthebestkindofhomeworkforthestudentstodo.Studentsgettochoosewhattheywanttoread.Somestudentsmightreadanadventurestory.Othersmightreadamystery.Studentscanchoosetoreadabouttopicstheydonotlearnaboutinclass.Studentscantaketheirtimereadingathomeinsteadofhavingtoreadonlyinclass.

案例分析2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Freereadingisthebestkind29Freereadingisthebestkindofhomeworkforthestudentstodo.①Studentsgettochoosewhattheywanttoread.Somestudentsmightreadanadventurestory.Othersmightreadamystery.Studentscanchoosetoreadabouttopicstheydonotlearnaboutinclass.②Studentscantaketheirtimereadingathomeinsteadofhavingtoreadonlyinclass.

案例分析2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Freereadingisthebestkind30第一句copying第二句minordetails最后一句confusingorder看看下面这篇概要的问题在哪儿？Freereadingisthebestkindofhomeworkforthestudentstodo.Studentscouldreadadventurestoriesormysteries.Ilikemysteriesbest.Theycanusefreereadingtolearnaboutdifferenttopics.Theycanalsotakemoretimetoreadoutsideofclass.Studentscanchoosewhattheyread.第三句yourownopinion2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件第一句copying第二句minordetails最后31Freereadingisthebesthomeworkforstudents.Itallowsstudentstochoosewhattoreadandlearnaboutandalsoensuresthemmoretimetoread.

Randomreadingshouldbeacknowledgedasthesuperbassignmentforstudentswhichempowersthemtoobtainmorealternativesandguaranteesamplereadingtime.Studentsshouldhavefreereadingastheirhomework.Itisimportantforstudentstochoosewhattheyreadandlearnabout.Readingathomecangivestudentsmorereadingtime.主位缺失，逻辑混乱。这篇概要的主位应该是freereading,不是students或readingathome。辞藻华丽，晦涩难懂122021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Freereadingisthebesthomew321.包含文章所有要点，每个要点独立，逻辑清晰。2.按照原文出现的顺序，用自己的语言表达，字数60左右。3.表达连贯，内容客观、清晰，不渲染，不参入自己的观点。4.语言准确、严谨、简练、高级。总结：什么是一篇好的概要？2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件1.包含文章所有要点，每个要点独立，逻辑清晰。总结：什么是33Topicofthearticle

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Part4TS1KD1,2…KD1,2…KD1,2…KD1,2…Mi1,…如何确定文章的关键信息TS2TS3TS4Mi1,…Mi1,…Mi1,…2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件TopicofthearticlePart134Howtolocatethemainideasandimportantdetails?MindMap(overall/bigpictureofatext,thestructureofthetext)

Groupwords(wordsorphrasesfrequentlyappearing)Signalwords(first，last，but,however,forexample,besides,therefore,

inconclusion，onthecontrary,meanwhile,ontheonehand,

ontheotherhand,some…others…,

consequently,…)

确定文章的关键信息几个策略Relationshipbetweensentences2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Howtolocatethemainideasa35MindMap(structureofatext)

M4U2:

ChemicalorOrganicFarmingPara.1：introductionPara.2:problemsPara.3:solutionPara.4:othersolutionsproblemscausedbychemicals(damagethehealthofpeopleandsoil)organicfarming(definition,benefits)othermethodstokeepsoilfertilechemicalfertilizers(welcomedbutharmful)2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件MindMap(structureofatext36MindMap(structureofatext）

M3U4:Communication:NoProblem?Para.1backgroundPara.2&3problem-noticingPara.4Problem-analyzingPara.5Problem-solvingMeetinternationalstudentsattheairport(watchingthem)SomemajormisunderstandingsoftheirgreetingbodylanguageNotallculturesgreetthesameway(examples)

１.notgoodorbad2.studyinginternationalcustoms2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件MindMap(structureofatext37Likeanyotherfacility,keepingaschoolopenrequiresagreatdealofmoney.Keepingschoolopeninthemiddleofsummerrequiresairconditioning,andthataddssignificantlytotheschool'sexpenses.Besides,teachersmustbepaidforalltheweeksheyareworking.Forexample,ahighschoolinArizonahadacostincreaseof$157,ooowhentheyswitchedtoyear-roundschooling.Someschoolsmaynotbeabletohandlesuchincreases,andotherschoolsthatcanhandletheseexpensescouldbedoingbetterthingswiththemoney.Groupwordscanindicatethemainidea.2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Likeanyotherfacility,keepi38Genetechnologycanhelppeopletogivebirthtomorehealthyandcleverchildren.Somefamilieshavegeneticdiseases.Thismeanstheir

childrenwillforsurehavethefamilydisease,whichisagreattroubleforthesefamilies.Inthepast,doctorscoulddonothingaboutgeneticdiseases.Butgenetechnologycansolvethisproblemperfectly.Scientistsjust

needtofindthewronggeneandcorrectit,andahealthychildwillbeborn.Groupwordscanindicatekeysupportinginformation.2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件2021届高考英语作文高分突破概要写作（一）课件Genetechnologycanhelppeopl39Asisknowntoall,sportsstarsearnlargeamountsofmoneyeveryyear.LeBronJames,thefamousAmericanbasketballstar,forinstance,earn