高三英语书面表达1课件

英语书面表达EnglishCompositionWriting英语书面表达EnglishCompositionWrit1Whatmakesagoodessay?TheessayWhatmakesTheessay2Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph.TopicparagraphSupportingParagraph1SupportingParagraph2SupportingParagraph3ConcludingparagraphAgoodessayisusuallymadeu3Topicparagraph(Introduction)paragraph

GeneralstatementTopicstatementTopicparagraph4Tomanystudents,schoollifeisboringandtiring.However,Ifindmyschoollifemeaningfulandcolourful.Ourschool

(big,modernandbeautiful)generalstatementtopicstatementAnotherexampleTomanystudents,schoollife5…Ourschoolislarge,modernandbeautiful.TS:Ourschoolisreallylarge.ss-ss-ss-ss-ssOurschoolisaverymodernone.ss-ss-ss-ss-ssOurschooliswell-knownforitsbeauty.ss-ss-ss-ss-ssI’mproudofbeingastudentof

suchagood

school.Topicparagraph

SupportingParagraph1SupportingParagraph2

SupportingParagraph3Concludingparagraph…Ourschoolislarge,modern6

SupportingParagraphs(Body)Paragraphs

TSSSSSSSSSFirstly,...Secondly,...Moreover,...Finally,...However,...Inaddition,…Furthermore,...

SupportingParagraphsTSFirstl7ConclusionIthink…Personally,…Obviously,wecandrawtheconclusionthat…tosumup,inconclusion,inbrief,onaccountofthis,thusConclusion8Thus,itcanbeconcludedthat…,Therefore,wecanfindthat…Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat...

Insummary,itiswiser...

Inshort...Thus,itcanbeconcludedthat9TheparagraphWhatmakesagoodparagraph?TheparagraphWhatmakesa10Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Therearedifferentkindsofbee.Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee,andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks.Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground.Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatall.Amongthedifferentkindsofbee,itisthehoney-beethathasinterestedscientistsmostbecauseofthelanguage…topicsentenceAgoodparagraphisonethatc11Whereveryougoinourschool,youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers.Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles.Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater.Topicsentence:____________________justlikeagarden.

Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.

Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.

OurschoolisWhereveryougoinourschool,12Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons.

Firstofall,Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople,andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries.Secondly,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet.Ithasbecomeanon-linelanguage.Thirdly,the2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinourcountryandEnglishwillbeveryuseful.Lastly,…AgoodparagraphisoneIbeli13Otherlinkingwords1）first,second,third,last2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally3）inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly4）tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finallyOtherlinkingwords145）tostartwith,next,inaddition,

finally

6）firstandforemost,besides,last

butnotleast

7）mostimportantofall,moreover,

finally

8）ontheonehand,ontheother

hand

9）foronething,foranotherthing5）tostartwith,next,inaddi15Agoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns.Asacreature,Ieat;asaman,Iread.Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofthemind,theyareinawayquitesimilar.

AgoodparagraphisoneAsac16Summary:Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph.Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.Agoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns.Summary:Agoodessayisusuall17

2008年全国高考考试大纲中，语文作文“每错一个字扣一分，重复不计”的新规定，引起考生和家长的极大关注。请你就以下要点给某英语报社写一篇英语报道。（不必翻译新规定内容）

问题及分析错别字普遍（电脑普及；作业量大）

新规定的影响有助于学生重视母语;有助于学生提高母语水平;你的建议……Writingpractice2008年全国高考考试大纲中，语文作文“每错一个字扣18Thecomputerismoreandmorewidelyused.Youngpeopleliketochatonline.Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcareabouttheirwritting.Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions,too.Everyday,theyhavemanyhomework.Theycan’trememberthecharacters.Thegovernmenthascarriedoutanewpolicy.ItwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoChinese.ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.Wedon’thavemuchtime.It’shightimethatwetookaction.Wecandevelopourcountrybyimprovingourmothertonguefirst. Whatdoyouthinkofthisessay?Andwhy?Astudent’sessayThecomputerismoreandmore19ASSESSMENTstructureIstheessaydividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?contentAreallthedetailsstated?Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?

LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高级词汇）?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Let’simproveit:ASSESSMENTIstheessaydivided20ASSESSMENTstructureIsthearticledividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?Let’simproveit:Let’simproveit:21Thesuggestedstructure:Paragraph1:Problemandanalysis.Paragraph2:

Effectofthenewpolicy.Paragraph3:Youradvice.Thesuggestedstructure:22

Let’sdivideitintoparts:Para.1Para.2Para.3Thecomputer…rememberthecharacters.Thegovernment…helpstudentslearnChinesewell.It’shightimethatwe…byimprovingourmothertonguefirst. Let’sdivideitintoparts:Pa23Paragraph2:Todealwiththesituation,thegovernmentcarriesoutanewpolicy.Paragraph3:AsfarasIamconcerned,it’shightimethatwetookaction.Paragraph1:

Itiscommonthattherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinastudent’scomposition.Thetopicsentenceofeachparagraph:Paragraph2:Paragraph3:Parag24contentAreallthedetailsstated?Iseverything

tothepoint(切题)?Let’simproveit:contentLet’simproveit:25

LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高级词汇）?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Let’simproveit:Let’simproveit:26…theydon’tcareabouttheirwritting.Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions,too.Everyday,theyhavemanyhomework.writingaremuch…theydon’tcareabouttheir27Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcaretheirwriting.Everyday,theyhavemuchhomework.Theyaretoobusytorememberthecharacters.Itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoourmothertongue.ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.Canyouimprovethem?Whentheyarechatting,theyd28

①Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcaretheirwriting.

Whenchatting,theydon’tcaretheirwriting.(Ellipsis省略句) ①Whentheyarechatting,the29

②Everyday,theyhavemuchhomework.Theycan’trememberthecharacters. Everyday,theyhavesomuchhomeworktodothattheyfailtorememberthecharacters.

(so…that;failtodo)(with)Withsomuchhomeworktodo,theyhavetroubleinrememberingthecharacters. ②Everyday,theyhavemuchho30③Itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoourmothertongue.(raisetheawarenessof)Itwillraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue.③Itwillmakepeoplepayatten31ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.(haveapositiveeffecton)Itwillhaveapositiveeffectonstudents’Chineselearning.ItwillhelpstudentslearnCh32Itwillraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue.Itwillhaveapositiveeffectonstudents’Chineselearning.______theawarenessofourmothertongue,itwillhaveapositiveeffectonChineselearning.(non-verbal非谓语）(notonly…butalso)Itwillnotonlyraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue,butalsohaveapositiveeffectonstudents’Chineselearning.RaisingItwillraisetheawarenessof33…________.________,whenyoungpeoplechatonline,theyattachlittleimportancetotheirwriting.__________,withsomuchhomeworktodo,theyhavetroublememorizingthecharacters.Thenewpolicyisintendedtodealwiththesituation.Raisingthesocialawarenessofourmothertongue,itwillhaveapositiveeffectonChineselearning.__________,it’shightimethatwetookaction.__________,weshouldrefertoadictionaryforunknowncharacters.Second,collectthemistakesandreviewthemfrequently.Inaword,onlybyworkinghardcanweachieveourgoal.Thereareseveralreasonsbehind.B.AsfarasIamconcerned

C.Forexample

D.Moreover. E.FirstofallACDBE…________.________,whenyoun34Whichendingdoyoulikebetter?Why?Inmyopinion,thepolicyisbeneficialtous.Itmakessenseinprotectingourculture.b)AsfarasIamconcerned,it’shightimethatwetookaction.Weshouldcollectthemistakesandreviewthemfrequently.Onlybyhardworkingcanweachieveourgoal.Whichendingdoyoulikebette35Itiscommonthat

therearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinastudent’scomposition.

Thereareseveralreasonsbehind.Forexample,

whenchattingonline,teenagersattachlittleimportancetotheirwriting.

Moreover,

withsomuchhomeworktodo,theyhavetroublememorizingthecharacters.

Todealwiththesituation,thegovernmentcarriesoutanewpolicy.Raisingthesocialawarenessofourmothertongue,itwillhaveapositiveeffectonChineselearning.

AsfarasIamconcerned,it’shightimethatwetookaction.Weshouldcollectthemistakesandreviewthemfrequently.

Inaword,

onlybyworkinghardcanweachieveourgoal.Itiscommonthattherear36Summary:paragraphstopicsentencedetailstothepointadvancedvocabularysentencepatternslinkingwordsstructurecontentlanguagewritingfewmistakesSummary:paragraphstopicsenten37ThewritingtaskoftheCollegeEntranceExaminationinJiangsuProvinceofthepastfiveyearsThewritingtaskoft3804年江苏高考假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。

自然情况①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住成就②经济发展迅速③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。存在问题④水、空气污染⑤交通拥挤对江城发展的看法⑥(内容由考生自己拟定)04年江苏高考假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿3905年江苏高考

假设你是李晓平，是“江苏中学”的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。要点提示：1．人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心2．人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助3．人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护

4．你的态度：(内容由考生自己拟定)05年江苏高考假设你是李晓平，是“江苏中学”的4006年江苏高考据报道：2008年北京奥运会将选拔约十万名志愿者为之服务。请你以“DosandDon‘tsforthe2008OlympicVolunteers”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讨论志愿者应该做什么，不应该做什么。短文应包括下表中的内容：DosDon'ts1．待人礼貌友好1．避免不得体的言行2．坚守岗位2．不忘履行自己的职责3．介绍中国历史和文化3．不损害祖国的形象如果你成为志愿者，你还应该做什么，不应该做什么。(内容由考生自己拟定)

06年江苏高考据报道：2008年北京奥运会将选拔412007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时举行。江苏省1,110万学生积极参与了这项活动。教育部倡导学生：●每天锻炼一小时●健康工作五十年●幸福生活一辈子请根据以上指示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由

07年江苏高考2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生42实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“BeingaGoodListener”的英文演讲稿。（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。）怎样倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，……了解学生，满足需求，……老师倾听学生理解孩子，消除代沟，……谁来倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系为何倾听家长倾听孩子同学相互倾听08年江苏高考实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，43Fromthewritingtaskofthepastfiveyears,wecanfindsomethingincommon.Thatis,thewritingtaskrequiresyoutowritesomethingassuggested;atthesametime,itrequiresyoutoexpressyourownopinion.We’dbetterpayspecialattentiontothispart.Fromthewritingta44苏州市2009届高三教学调研测试

最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudents’healthorgrades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。支持方的理由反对方的理由你的看法及理由1．可以促进对体育的重视；2．可以增强学生的体魄；3．更有利于提高学习效率。

1．学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前途；2．过高的要求学生难以达到；3．长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。(考生自行发挥2—3点)注意：1．词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2．对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。苏州市2009届高三教学调研测试最近，国家教育部要求45Onepossibleversion:Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudents’healthorgrades?TheMinistryofEducationofChinahasurgedallthestudentstoparticipateinthewinterlong-distancerunningactivity.Itissuggestedthatprimaryschoolstudentsshouldrun1,000metersaday,juniorschoolstudents,1,500andseniorschoolstudents,2,000.However,itarousedvariousargumentsamongpeopleincludingeducationspecialists,teachers,parentsandstudents.Somepeoplesay"yes"tothisactivity.Theythink,foronething,itcanmakemorepeoplecareaboutphysicaleducation;foranother,runningcanimprovestudents’healthandpromotetheirlearningefficiencysotheycanhavegoodgrades.Onepossibleversion:46However,othersholdoppositeopinionsabouttheactivity.Theybelievethatlearningisthemostimportanttaskforstudentsandtheirfuturedependsonwhattheywillachieveintheirsubjects.Meanwhile,highrequirementsdon’tmeangoodhealthandmanycan’tdoiteveryday.What’sworse,somewillsuffercoldandinjuries.

Inmyopinion,it’sallrightforschoolstopaymoreattentiontostudents’healthandcarryouttheactivitystepbystep.Rememberagoodbodyhelpsmakehighefficiency.However,othershold47Whatdoyouthinkabouttheconcludingparagraph?Isitagoodone?Ifnot,howcanyouimproveit?Inmyopinion,it’sallrightforschoolstopaymoreattentiontostudents’healthandcarryouttheactivitystepbystep.Rememberagoodbodyhelpsmakehighefficiency.Whatdoyouthinkabouttheco48

Inmyopinion,it’sbetterforschoolstopaymoreattentiontostudents’healthandcarryouttheactivitystepbystep,becauseagoodbodyhelpsmakehighefficiency.What’smore,itnotnolyhelpsstudentsgetrelaxed,butalsowillbenefitthemintheirfuturelife.Inmyopinion,it’sb491.Agoodbeginningmakesagoodending.2.Yourcompositionshouldbedividedintoparagraphs.3.You’dbetterusesomelinkingwords.4.Handwritingisofgreatimportance.Suggestions:1.Agoodbeginningmakesa50南通市英语作文评分细则一、有以下情况之一的，在正常评分以后再扣9分。1.全文没有使用任何比较复杂的语言结构，例如从句、倒装句等。2.全文没有使用任何比较高级的表达方式的。3.全文没有使用任何关联词语的。南通市英语作文评分细则一、有以下情况之一的，在正常评分以后再51二、有以下情况之一的，在正常评分以后再扣5分。1、书写潦草，不规范，影响理解的。2、卷面不洁，乱涂改的。3、因审题不清而全文人称使用错误的。4、动词、时态、人称错误达3处以上的。5、句子结构严重错误达3处以上的。二、有以下情况之一的，在正常评分以后再扣5分。52三、有以下情况之一的，在正常评分以后再扣2分。1、全文不分段。2、词数少于130.3、词数多于170.四、有以下情况之一的，扣2分。1、每遗漏一个次要点的。2、冠词、介词用错，其他单词拼写错误分别达4处以上的。3、大小写、标点符号分别达4处以上的。三、有以下情况之一的，在正常评分以后再扣2分。四、有以下情况53五、有以下情况之一的，扣5分.1、每遗漏一个主要点的。六、有以下情况的，不扣分。1、为使用比较高级的表达方式而出现的些许错误。2、紧扣主题作适当发挥时出现的些许错误。七、有以下情况的，不以评分，以0分计。1、没有使用0.5毫米的黑色签字笔。2、答题中有学校、班级或个人真实信息的。高三英语书面表达1课件54Thankyou!Thankyou!55英语书面表达EnglishCompositionWriting英语书面表达EnglishCompositionWrit56Whatmakesagoodessay?TheessayWhatmakesTheessay57Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph.TopicparagraphSupportingParagraph1SupportingParagraph2SupportingParagraph3ConcludingparagraphAgoodessayisusuallymadeu58Topicparagraph(Introduction)paragraph

GeneralstatementTopicstatementTopicparagraph59Tomanystudents,schoollifeisboringandtiring.However,Ifindmyschoollifemeaningfulandcolourful.Ourschool

(big,modernandbeautiful)generalstatementtopicstatementAnotherexampleTomanystudents,schoollife60…Ourschoolislarge,modernandbeautiful.TS:Ourschoolisreallylarge.ss-ss-ss-ss-ssOurschoolisaverymodernone.ss-ss-ss-ss-ssOurschooliswell-knownforitsbeauty.ss-ss-ss-ss-ssI’mproudofbeingastudentof

suchagood

school.Topicparagraph

SupportingParagraph1SupportingParagraph2

SupportingParagraph3Concludingparagraph…Ourschoolislarge,modern61

SupportingParagraphs(Body)Paragraphs

TSSSSSSSSSFirstly,...Secondly,...Moreover,...Finally,...However,...Inaddition,…Furthermore,...

SupportingParagraphsTSFirstl62ConclusionIthink…Personally,…Obviously,wecandrawtheconclusionthat…tosumup,inconclusion,inbrief,onaccountofthis,thusConclusion63Thus,itcanbeconcludedthat…,Therefore,wecanfindthat…Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat...

Insummary,itiswiser...

Inshort...Thus,itcanbeconcludedthat64TheparagraphWhatmakesagoodparagraph?TheparagraphWhatmakesa65Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Therearedifferentkindsofbee.Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee,andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks.Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground.Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatall.Amongthedifferentkindsofbee,itisthehoney-beethathasinterestedscientistsmostbecauseofthelanguage…topicsentenceAgoodparagraphisonethatc66Whereveryougoinourschool,youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers.Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles.Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater.Topicsentence:____________________justlikeagarden.

Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.

Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.

OurschoolisWhereveryougoinourschool,67Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons.

Firstofall,Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople,andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries.Secondly,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet.Ithasbecomeanon-linelanguage.Thirdly,the2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinourcountryandEnglishwillbeveryuseful.Lastly,…AgoodparagraphisoneIbeli68Otherlinkingwords1）first,second,third,last2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally3）inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly4）tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finallyOtherlinkingwords695）tostartwith,next,inaddition,

finally

6）firstandforemost,besides,last

butnotleast

7）mostimportantofall,moreover,

finally

8）ontheonehand,ontheother

hand

9）foronething,foranotherthing5）tostartwith,next,inaddi70Agoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns.Asacreature,Ieat;asaman,Iread.Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofthemind,theyareinawayquitesimilar.

AgoodparagraphisoneAsac71Summary:Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph.Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.Agoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns.Summary:Agoodessayisusuall72

2008年全国高考考试大纲中，语文作文“每错一个字扣一分，重复不计”的新规定，引起考生和家长的极大关注。请你就以下要点给某英语报社写一篇英语报道。（不必翻译新规定内容）

问题及分析错别字普遍（电脑普及；作业量大）

新规定的影响有助于学生重视母语;有助于学生提高母语水平;你的建议……Writingpractice2008年全国高考考试大纲中，语文作文“每错一个字扣73Thecomputerismoreandmorewidelyused.Youngpeopleliketochatonline.Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcareabouttheirwritting.Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions,too.Everyday,theyhavemanyhomework.Theycan’trememberthecharacters.Thegovernmenthascarriedoutanewpolicy.ItwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoChinese.ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.Wedon’thavemuchtime.It’shightimethatwetookaction.Wecandevelopourcountrybyimprovingourmothertonguefirst. Whatdoyouthinkofthisessay?Andwhy?Astudent’sessayThecomputerismoreandmore74ASSESSMENTstructureIstheessaydividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?contentAreallthedetailsstated?Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?

LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高级词汇）?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Let’simproveit:ASSESSMENTIstheessaydivided75ASSESSMENTstructureIsthearticledividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?Let’simproveit:Let’simproveit:76Thesuggestedstructure:Paragraph1:Problemandanalysis.Paragraph2:

Effectofthenewpolicy.Paragraph3:Youradvice.Thesuggestedstructure:77

Let’sdivideitintoparts:Para.1Para.2Para.3Thecomputer…rememberthecharacters.Thegovernment…helpstudentslearnChinesewell.It’shightimethatwe…byimprovingourmothertonguefirst. Let’sdivideitintoparts:Pa78Paragraph2:Todealwiththesituation,thegovernmentcarriesoutanewpolicy.Paragraph3:AsfarasIamconcerned,it’shightimethatwetookaction.Paragraph1:

Itiscommonthattherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinastudent’scomposition.Thetopicsentenceofeachparagraph:Paragraph2:Paragraph3:Parag79contentAreallthedetailsstated?Iseverything

tothepoint(切题)?Let’simproveit:contentLet’simproveit:80

LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高级词汇）?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Let’simproveit:Let’simproveit:81…theydon’tcareabouttheirwritting.Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions,too.Everyday,theyhavemanyhomework.writingaremuch…theydon’tcareabouttheir82Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcaretheirwriting.Everyday,theyhavemuchhomework.Theyaretoobusytorememberthecharacters.Itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoourmothertongue.ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.Canyouimprovethem?Whentheyarechatting,theyd83

①Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcaretheirwriting.

Whenchatting,theydon’tcaretheirwriting.(Ellipsis省略句) ①Whentheyarechatting,the84

②Everyday,theyhavemuchhomework.Theycan’trememberthecharacters. Everyday,theyhavesomuchhomeworktodothattheyfailtorememberthecharacters.

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therearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinastudent’scomposition.

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whenchattingonline,teenagersattachlittleimportancetotheirwriting.

Moreover,

withsomuchhomeworktodo,theyhavetroublememorizingthecharacters.

Todealwiththesituation,thegovernmentcarriesoutanewpolicy.Raisingthesocialawarenessofourmothertongue,itwillhaveapositiveeffectonChineselearning.

AsfarasIamconcerned,it’shightimethatwetookaction.Weshouldcollectthemistakesandreviewthemfrequently.

Inaword,

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