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AcademicByTask1AssessmentCriteria评分标准考考官评分区雅思评分标准CoherenceandCohesion连贯与衔衔 LexicalResources词汇资连贯与接

Cambrige6ThetablebelowgivesinformationaboutchangesinmodestravelinEnglandbetween1985andHowwouldyougradethissampleTask1question••••••数据LinegraphBarchartPiechart••非数据ProcessTask1数据类图e.g.ThepiechartillustrateshowmuchelectricitywasusedperweekinordinaryAmericanfamiliesin1999.例: handsetmarketroseto20.6%fromSamsungElectronics’sharefellto12.2%from12.5%in2005.例:Britainproduces3%oftheworld’scarbondioxidesemissions,whichareapproximaythesameas.一般将来时：图表中出现的年代超过了当前时，使用“预计将”的特殊belikelyto,bepredictedto,beexpectedbeestimatedto,beprojected翻译:， ThetotalUSgreenhousegasemissionsarepredictedtoincreaseby20%from2015to2020.Task1文章结首1~2主体每段1+X具体描述数末1~2Task1首段写简要概括图表信息（改写标题DONOTCOPY不要照抄原DONOTCHANGETHEMAIN改写只改变词语和句(C4T1)ThetablebelowshowstheproportionofdifferentcategoriesoffamilieslivinginpovertyinAustraliain1999.抄Thetablebelowshowstheproportionofdifferent抄offamilieslivinginpovertyinAustraliainThetableshowstheproportionofdifferenttypesoffamilieslivinginpovertyinThetableillustratesthepercentageofdifferentfamilywholivinginpovertyinAustraliainThetabledescribesthepercentageofdifferentfmilyinAustraliain 首段改写用图表中的title替(没有title或title一致时不适用同义词替换（必备句式变要素补改写方法1：用图表中的title(C6T1)ThegraphbelowgivesinformationaboutuseSampleThelinegraphillustratesglobalwateruseby首段graphlineshowillustrategiveinformationabout…numberfigurestatisticsdata(pl proportionduring/over…kindstypes替 menandwomen→malesand改写方法2：同义词Thegraphbelowshowstheproportionofthepopulationaged65andoverbetween1940and2040inthreedifferentcountries.graph→lineshow→describe等proportionpercentagepopulation→seniorthreedifferent→Japan,Swedenthe同义词替换：改为后臵定theproductionof---silkoil---oile/money

Thelinegraphillustratestheamountofbeef,lamb,chickenandfishconsumedinaEuropeancountryfrom1979to2004.

改写方法3：句式变ThetablebelowshowstheproportionofdifferentcategoriesoffamilieslivinginpovertyinAustraliain1999.ThetablegivesabreakdownofdifferenttypesofhouseholdswhichwerelivinginpovertyinAustraliain1999. 改为→howsth

→thereasonThegraphbelowshows tiesof transportedintheUKbetween1974and2002byfourdifferentmodesoftransport.运货量可改为ThelinegraphillustrateshowmanygoodsweredeliveredbyfourdifferentformsoftransportintheUKbetween1974and2002.ThegraphbelowshowstheamountofwatersupplyinaparticularAsiancountryfrom1995to2005.ThepiechartbelowshowsthecausesoffarmlanddegradationincountryAin2010.Thetablebelowshowstheopeningdatesoftheundergroundsystemsinfivedifferentcountries.

改写方法4：要素补Thelinegraphillustrateschangesintheamountofbeef,lamb,chickenandfishconsumedinaparticularEuropeancountryfrom1979to2004.Thechartbelowshowsdifferentlevelsofpost-qualificationsinAustraliaandtheproportionofmenandwomenwhoheldthemin1999.Thechartgivesinformationaboutpost-schoolqualificationsintermsofdifferentlevelsoffurthereducationreachedbymalesandtheirfemalecounterpartsinAustraliain1999.数据类图表主单图分段技巧：先分对应每个图形元素写一个主体段图形示例：Thegraphbelowshowsradio evisionthroughoutthedayinThegraphbelowshows tiesoftransportedintheUKbetween1974and2002byfourdifferentmodesoftransport.双图分段技巧：每个图表写示例：ThegraphsbelowthedemandforelectricityinEnglandduringtypicaldaysinwinterandsummerThepiechartshowshowelectricityisusedinanaverageEnglishhome.分析：本图含有一个linegraph和一个piechart多图分段技巧：先分类后示例：Manywomenneedtocontinueworkingevenaftertheyhavechildren.Thechartsbelowshowtheworkingpatternsofmotherswithyoungchildrentocarefor.1+N

后N介绍具体细按照顺序进行选取关键数据进行起点、终点；拐点；极值；交多图形元素拐点可省数据动态图 相似趋静态图：组成部数据数值大小比Lambandchickenwereeateninties(around150grams),whilemuchlessfishwasconsumed(justover50grams).4数据变化趋势比However,whilethefiguresforthecountriesgrewtoabout15%inaround1990,thefigureforJapandippedtoonly2.5%formuchofthisperiod.4数据变化幅度比Theconsumptionoffishalsodeclined,muchlesssignificantlytojustbelow50数据类图表——线Line第一句：描述总体趋第二句以后：从开始描述及具体变化趋势单线图示例：ThegraphshowsthepercentageofUKadolescentsfollowingavegetariandiet.（ （总体趋势）OverthepastfivedecadestherehasbeenasignificantvariationinthepercentageofyoungpeoplewhochoosetoeatavegetariandietintheUK（具体描述）In1960,onlyasmallpercentageofadolescents(less1%)werevegetarian.Therewasthenasteepincreaseuntil1978,whenover15%werefollowingavegetariandiet.Thereafterthercntagefellsteadilyuntil1990andthenfluctuatedforadecade.Itreachedalowpoint

in1996.Ithasrisengradually2000andisexpectedtocontinuetodosooverthefewyears.Afterreachingahighpointat11%in拐2015,itisprojectedtodeclineagainandleveloffat12%bythedecade’s如何描述趋一：表示上

八大运动急剧上升：jump，surge，shootup，soarExpenditureonstaffsalarieshadincreasedto70%by1991.一：表示上名词：anincrease，arise，agrowth，asurge，anupwardtrend例：Theconsumptionofchickenshowedanupwardtrend,exceedingthatoflambin1980.常用形容词和副词—变化risesteadilygrowgraduallyamarginaldecreasefluctuateabruptlyrisedramatically

=asteady=agradual=decrease=anabrupt=adramatic二：表示下猛跌：slump例：ThefigurefortheUSdippedtoonly4%whichisthelowestinthefiguresforthesecountries.名词：afall，adecrease，adecline，adrop，adownwardtrend三：表示(下降后)再上后接from例：人口下降后上升：Thenumberofpopulationrecoveredfromtwomillion.四：表示上升或下降后趋于平flattenoutleveloffreachaThenumberofpopulationmountedandlevelledoffflattenedoutattwo五：表示稳定或保持稳定或水平：remainsteady/constant，staystablestabilize，stayatthesamelevel，thereislittle／hardlyany／nochange Theconsumptionlevelsremainedstableataround14%overthepastthreedecades.六：表示波七：表示达到最低reachthelowestpointat数值reachthebottomat+数值reachtheminimumat+数值bottomoutat+数值八：表示达到最高reachthehighestpointat数值reachthetopat+数值reachthe umat+数值peakat+数值表示到达多reach,hit,arriveat，amount位于多少数值：stand描述变化趋势常Therebe句型变化名词”作主语+INe.g.Therewasanincreaseinthenumberof“描述对象”做主语+变化<动词e.g.Thenumberofpeople时间做主语<动词变化<名词IN描述对e.g.Theperiodsawanincreaseinthenumberofg.Anincreasewasfound/observedinthenumberof三个“高大上”句while/whereas定从省略/withwhile/whereas对比数据的用ThebirthrateofcountryArosewhereas/whilethatofcountryBfellFrom1950onwards,industrialusegrewsteadilytojustover1,000km3,whiledomesticuserosemoreslowlytoonly300km3.Lambandchickenwereeateninsimilar (around150grams),whereasmuchlessfishwasconsumed(justover50grams).课堂练 Between1940and1960,ThepercentageofelderlypeopleintheUSAincreased/rose/grewslowlyto10%while/whereasthatof(thefigurefor)Japandecreased/declined/fellsharply/significantlyby2%.定从省略/分词状语By2000,nuclearpowerhaddevelopedintothemainsource.Nuclearpowerproducedalmost75%ofelectricity,at126units.By2000,nuclearpowerhaddevelopedintothemainsource,producingalmost75%ofelectricity,at126units.课堂Meanwhile,FranceandItalygenerallymaintainmiddlepositions.FranceandItalyamounttoapproxima similaroverallspending.Meanwhile,FranceandItalygenerallymaintainmiddlepositions,amountingtoapproximaysimilaroverallspending.with介词状语后臵的用Theremaining40unitswereproducedlargelyfromoilandnuclearpower.Buthydropowercontributedonly5Theremaining40unitswereproducedlargelyfromoilandnuclearpower,withhydropowercontributingonly5units.课堂Thesecausesaffecteddifferentregionsdifferentlyinthe1990s.Europehadasmuchas9.8%ofdegradationduetodeforestation.Thesecausesaffecteddifferentregionsdifferentlyinthe1990s,withEuropehavingasmuchas9.8%ofdegradationdueto课堂练 ，从5%快速降至仅3%Between1940and1960,theproportionofelderlypeopleinWesterncountriesexperiencedanupwardtrend,with(thatof)Swedenincreasingmorerapidlyfromabout7%to9%,whilethefigureforJapanwitnessedadownwardtrend,decreasingrapidlyfrom5%toonly3%.多线1.（超过三条线）合并描述描述每条曲线的变化，适当合并、对（比较的三个方面：趋势、大小、变幅分别描述终点多线图示例BODY起点值数据比较，最大值：In1979beefwasbyfarthemostpopularofthesefoods,withabout225gramsconsumed perweek.三值归类：Lambandchickenwereeateninsimilarties(around150grams),whilemuchlessfishwasconsumed(justover50grams).BODY下降趋势合并描述：However,duringthis25-yearperiodtheconsumptionofbeefandlambfelldramaticallytoapproxima y100gramsand55gramsrespectively.比较变幅及大小：Theconsumptionoffishalsodeclined,butmuchlesssignificantlytojustbelow50grams,soalthoughitremainedtheleastpopularfood,consumptionlevelswerethemoststable.不同趋势对比：Theconsumptionofchicken,ontheotherhand,showedanupwardtrend,overtakingthatoflambin1980andthatofbeefin1989.课堂练习Thegraphbelowshowsthe tiesofgoodstransportedintheUKbetween1974and2002byfourdifferentmodesoftransport.Body1在1974年，管道是最不受欢迎的工具，运货量只有…， 半的货物是由公路，运货量为…水运和铁路的Body2路先降后升，写明交点，最低点和终点值Body1起点的静态对In1974,pipelinewasconsideredtheleastpopulartransporttoolintheUK,withjustaround5milliontonnesofproductscarried,whereasnearly50%ofgoodsintheUKweretransportedbyroad(over70milliontonnes).Thefiguresforwaterandrailwerealsosignificant,constitutingapproxima y39and40milliontonnesrespectively.Body2整个时间段的动态对Despitesomefluctuations,the tiesofgoodscarriedthroughroad,waterandpipelinesawagrowingtrend,reachingthehighestpointsatapproxima y100,65and21milliontonnesrespectivelyby2002.Bycontrast,railwaytransportwitnessedadownwardtrendbeforerisingtoabout40milliontonnesagainby2002,overtakenbythatofwaterin1978andtouchingthebottomataround25milliontonnesin1994.BarChart示例

Generallyamongthreecategoriesincludinglocal一fixedline","nationalandinternationalfixedline"and"mobiles(allcalls)",localphonecallsaccountedforthelargestproportionofallusage,rangingfrom70to90billionminutes.Nexttoit,nationalandinternationalonestookthesecondpositionstandingat38to60millionminutes.Obviously,themobilestookupthesmallestpart(3to40billionminutes).Body2特征数据+Thetrendsofthe ephoneusagechangedduringthe8years.Thelocalphonecallspeakedat90billionminutesin1999,andthenstartedtodeclinetothe1995figurein2002(70billion).However,thetrendsoftheothertwokeptincreasing.Nationalandinternationalcallsrosesteadilyfrom38billionto61billion.Themostnoticeablechangewasthetrendofs,whichsoaredfrom2billionin1995toabout46billionin2002.静态—柱状适当分类（依据：组成部分大小描述分类下的各柱数比较柱与柱之间的落差，突出极示例Thechartbelowshowsdifferentlevelsofpost-schoolqualificationsAustraliaandtheproportionofmenandwomenwhoheld inBody(总体特征)Wecanseeimmedia ythatthereweresubstantialdifferencesintheproportionofmenandwomenatdifferentlevels.(具体描述)Thebiggestgenderdifferenceisatthelowestpost-sch