英语书面表达之建议信课件

书面表达（三）

----Aletterofgivingadvice

书面表达（三）写作要点：1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。写作要点：3.基本框架：开头（beginning）----开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(stateyouridea)主体(body)----对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasonsandevidence)结尾(ending)----呼应开头，重申观点(restateyouropinion.)3.基本框架：4.注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。3）符合英文信件的基本格式4.注意事项：常用套语A．建议信开头常用句式

(照应材料,表明写作意图)1．AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----5.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.6.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto..andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.7.YouhaveaskedmeformyadviceaboutEnglishlearning.8.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…常用套语A．建议信开头常用句式

(照应材料,表明写作意图)9.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning….10.I’mwritingtopersuadeyouto….11.Itismypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon…12.9.IamwritingtoexpressmyB.表达建议（body）1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，afterthat，intheend．finally．Meanwhile,what’smore．．．2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Youmayconsiderdoing…6.Itwouldseemtomethatyoucould…7.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.8.Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowing.9.Whenitcometosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoucan…B.表达建议（body）10.Firstofall.Ithinkitwouldbebetterif….我想如果你能-----可能会更好11.HereI’dliketogivemyadviceon…\12.HereIwouldliketosuggestthat….英语书面表达之建议信课件C.建议信结尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。4.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.7.Pleasetakemyadviceintoconsiderationandmakeafinaldecision.

C.建议信结尾常用句式1.IbelieveyouwPleaseletmeknowwithouthesitationifyouneedanyhelpPleaseletmeknowwithouthes写作模板模板一：Dear_____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout_____(问题)，andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:______(建议内容).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour____(祝愿).Yourssincerely,LiMing写作模板模板一：模板二：Dear_____(对象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning______(问题).Firstandforthemost_______(建议一);inaddition_____(建议二);what’smore_____(建议三).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMing模板二：Dear____, Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_____,andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere. Inmyhumbleopinion(依我拙见),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_____. Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails. Goodluckwithyou.Yours,XXXDear____,Dear____,I’mwritingtopersuadeyouto____.Firstofall,Ithinkitwouldbebetterif____.Secondly,____.Furthermore,_____Lastbutnotleast,____Idohopeyoucantakemysuggestionintoconsiderationandmakeafinaldecision.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,_______Dear____,Dear___,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon____.\I’mgladtowritethelettertoyouon____.Hereareafewsuggestionsgoryourreference.First,itisimportantto____.Asyou’ll____.Then,italsohelpsifyou____.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato____.Because____.youcanalso____.I’msurethat_____.PleaseletmeknowwithouthesitationifyouneedanyhelpnextTime.\inthefuture.Sincerelyyours,Dear___,DearBob, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto

(引出主题). Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto,Then,italsohelpsto

.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato

.Youcanalso

.(此三句不同的句式提出建议) Asto

,Isuggest

(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,

(其他建议).I'msure

(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心). I'mlookingforwardto

(表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHuaDearBob,假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：⑴参加中文学习班； ⑵看中文书刊、电视； ⑶学唱中文歌曲； ⑷交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。DearPeter,

I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学DearPeter, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

Hereareafewsuggestions.

First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese. TryandwritetomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHuaDearPeter,假如你是李明，学校领导和老师担心同学们浏览不健康的网站，关闭了教室内电脑的网络浏览功能，你们感到难过，请你给校长写一封信，劝说校长开通教室内的网络。注意：1。信中要包括下表中的所有内容；

2。词数：120左右

3。信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。事由教室内的电脑不能上网，建议学校开通网络原因1、有利于查找资料；2、浏览新闻，了解信息；3、作为高中生，我们正在形成自己的判断力假如你是李明，学校领导和老师担心同学们浏览不健康的网站，事由DearHeadmaster,I’mwritingtopersuadeyoutoletussurftheInternetintheclassroom.Weknowyouareafraidthatwemaybeexposedtounhealthywebsites.Actually,everycoinhastwosides,westillthinkthatsurfingtheInternetcanbringusmoreadvantages.Firstofall,IthinkitwouldbebetterifwecouldsurftheInternetbecausethereisawiderangeoflearningresourcesontheInternet.Weshouldmakegooduseofit.Furthermore,wecanbroadenourhorizonsbyreadingvariousnewsonline.Lastbutnotleast,ashighschoolstudents,wearebuildingupoursenseofjudgement.Givenchances,wearesurethatwewilllearnhowtostayawayfromunhealthywebsites.IdohopeyoucantakemyadviceintoconsiderationandmakeafinaldecisionDearHeadmaster,书面表达如何写？三个步骤Step1ListthekeypointsStep2MakesentencesStep3.Formapassageandpolish书面表达如何写？三个步骤Step1Listtheke为了迎接即将到来的期末考试，你校要取消所有的体育课。请你以学生王丽的身份给校长写一封信，建议不要取消体育课。注意：1.词数：120左右；2.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearHeadmaster,I’mwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningourschool’sdecisionthatallphysicaleducationshouldbecancelled.为了迎接即将到来的期末考试，你校要取消所有的体育课。请你以学注意衔接词使用:表先后次序：First,second,third….FinallyFirstly,secondly，…eventuallytobeginwith/tostartwith,atlast递进关系：furthermore；moreover；notonly...butalso...；not...but...；,besides；inotherwords；ontheonehand...，ontheotherhand...；meanwhile；atthesametime；注意衔接词使用:如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body

中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending

小结；呼应主题如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分Heading书面表达（三）

----Aletterofgivingadvice

书面表达（三）写作要点：1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。写作要点：3.基本框架：开头（beginning）----开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(stateyouridea)主体(body)----对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasonsandevidence)结尾(ending)----呼应开头，重申观点(restateyouropinion.)3.基本框架：4.注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。3）符合英文信件的基本格式4.注意事项：常用套语A．建议信开头常用句式

(照应材料,表明写作意图)1．AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----5.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.6.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto..andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.7.YouhaveaskedmeformyadviceaboutEnglishlearning.8.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…常用套语A．建议信开头常用句式

(照应材料,表明写作意图)9.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning….10.I’mwritingtopersuadeyouto….11.Itismypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon…12.9.IamwritingtoexpressmyB.表达建议（body）1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，afterthat，intheend．finally．Meanwhile,what’smore．．．2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Youmayconsiderdoing…6.Itwouldseemtomethatyoucould…7.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.8.Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowing.9.Whenitcometosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoucan…B.表达建议（body）10.Firstofall.Ithinkitwouldbebetterif….我想如果你能-----可能会更好11.HereI’dliketogivemyadviceon…\12.HereIwouldliketosuggestthat….英语书面表达之建议信课件C.建议信结尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。4.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.7.Pleasetakemyadviceintoconsiderationandmakeafinaldecision.

C.建议信结尾常用句式1.IbelieveyouwPleaseletmeknowwithouthesitationifyouneedanyhelpPleaseletmeknowwithouthes写作模板模板一：Dear_____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout_____(问题)，andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:______(建议内容).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour____(祝愿).Yourssincerely,LiMing写作模板模板一：模板二：Dear_____(对象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning______(问题).Firstandforthemost_______(建议一);inaddition_____(建议二);what’smore_____(建议三).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMing模板二：Dear____, Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_____,andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere. Inmyhumbleopinion(依我拙见),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_____. Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails. Goodluckwithyou.Yours,XXXDear____,Dear____,I’mwritingtopersuadeyouto____.Firstofall,Ithinkitwouldbebetterif____.Secondly,____.Furthermore,_____Lastbutnotleast,____Idohopeyoucantakemysuggestionintoconsiderationandmakeafinaldecision.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,_______Dear____,Dear___,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon____.\I’mgladtowritethelettertoyouon____.Hereareafewsuggestionsgoryourreference.First,itisimportantto____.Asyou’ll____.Then,italsohelpsifyou____.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato____.Because____.youcanalso____.I’msurethat_____.PleaseletmeknowwithouthesitationifyouneedanyhelpnextTime.\inthefuture.Sincerelyyours,Dear___,DearBob, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto

(引出主题). Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto,Then,italsohelpsto

.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato

.Youcanalso

.(此三句不同的句式提出建议) Asto

,Isuggest

(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,

(其他建议).I'msure

(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心). I'mlookingforwardto

(表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHuaDearBob,假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：⑴参加中文学习班； ⑵看中文书刊、电视； ⑶学唱中文歌曲； ⑷交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。DearPeter,

I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学DearPeter, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

Hereareafewsuggestions.

First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese. TryandwritetomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHuaDearPeter,假如你是李明，学校领导和老师担心同学们浏览不健康的网站，关闭了教室内电脑的网络浏览功能，你们感到难过，请你给校长写一封信，劝说校长开通教室内的网络。注意：1。信中要包括下表中的所有内容；

2。词数：120左右

3。信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。事由教室内的电脑不能上网，建议学校开通网络原因1、有利于查找资料；2、浏览新闻，了解信息；3、作为高中生，我们正在形成自己的判断力假如你是李明，学校领导和老师担心同学们浏览不健康的网站，事由DearHeadm