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读后续写2018高二上.温州期末Wemovedonintothe
jungle--aforestwherelargenumbersoftalltreesandplantsgrowveryclosetogether.
OldMali
wentinfrontandIfollowedclosebehindhim.Westoppedforthe
night
aboutanhourbeforeitbegantoget
dark.
OldMalilitafire.Whenitwasbightheshowedmehowtomakeabedwithmoss(青苔,苔藓).
Itwassoftandcomfortable.
Mali,howdidyoulearntomakesuchabed?
Iasked.
I
learned
tomakebedslikethat,Malireplied,―bywatchingandlisteningtoothers.Thatistherealwaytolearnanything.诊查2018高二上.温州期末Willyouletmewatchyoualways?
IaskedOldMali.―Iwanttolearnallthethingsyouknowaboutthejungle.
Whenwehadfinishedoursupper,OldMaligotontohisbedandlaydown.Itwasnowcompletelydark.Inthefirelight,OldMaliseemedtobe
fastasleep
onhisbed.Isuddenlyfeltaloneandafraid.
Alldayinthejungle,whilewehadbeenwalking,Ihadheardnoisesofanimals.Nowtheyseemedtobemuchnearer.Thejunglewasnowawallofblacknessinthelightofthe
fire.2018高二上.温州期末Ifeltfrightenedandsuddenlymymouthwentdry.Iwantedtoscream.Ifeltmymouthopeningwide,readytoscreamasloudaspossible.
ButIdidnot
scream.IsawOldMali'sfaceinthefirelight.Thismademefeelashamed.Iheldmyteethtightlytogethertostopmyselffromscreaming.Ilaydownandclosedmyeyes.AssoonasIclosedmyeyes.Iheardathousand
noises.Thewholejunglebecamealivewithanimalsmovingquietlyandcarefullyallaroundme.SuddenlyOldMalitookadeepbreathandmadeanoise.Iwashearingsomany
imaginary
noiseandtherealnoisemadebyOldMaligavemeaterriblefright.2018高二上.温州期末
Iopenedmyeyesandjumpedoutofbed.Ipulledmyknifeoutandhelditabovemyhead.注意:1).所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2).应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3).续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4).续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。Paragraph1
Iwasgoingtoseeiftherewasawildanimalbesidethefire.___________________________________________________
Paragraph2
OldMali'squietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter.___________________________________________________一、表达能力高考续写的考查点1.从句2.It做形式主语3.非谓语……二、编故事的能力小说三要素:1.人物2.情节3.环境导学续写五步法
1.读故事;2.选出合适的5个词;3.由P1、P2所给内容推理P1内容,列中文草稿;4.由P2所给内容推理P2内容,列中文草稿;5.在草稿中试着加入所画单词,并翻译。1.读故事
一句话概括文章讲了什么读不懂没时间根据首尾段进行脑补续写题目
Paragraph1
Iwasgoingtoseeiftherewasawildanimalbesidethefire._________________________________
Paragraph2
OldMali'squietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter.__________________________________
2.选词要点人物
〉时间地点
〉名词
〉形容词noisefirejunglenightOldMali2.选词要点
learneddarkimaginaryfastasleepscream3.起草P1,P2之间的内容有因必有果制造悬念该段内容为对P1的承上以及P2的启下3.起草P1,P2之间的内容Iwasgoingtoseeiftherewasawildanimalbesidethefire.
_________________________________有因必有果制造悬念该段内容为对P1的承上以及P2的启下OldMali’squietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter.P1段草稿小心翼翼地去火边查看发现什么都没有(制造悬念)丛林里传来奇怪的声音(制造悬念)夜太深,啥都看不清我很害怕,不敢去看了找老马力帮忙4.起草P2之后的内容
OldMali’squietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter._________________________________有因必有果制造悬念结尾紧扣正能量4.起草P2之后的内容
OldMali’squietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter._________________________________有因必有果制造悬念结尾紧扣正能量下文得知老马力很冷静,故事可能就是虚惊一场P2段草稿
老马力和我拿着手电走进丛林声音奇怪地停止了(制造悬念)拿着手电找了找发现什么都没有突然闪出一个小东西(制造悬念)原来是一只兔子突然明白为什么老马力如此冷静了5.在草稿中试着加入选定单词
OldMalinightjunglefirenoiseP1段草稿-翻译
小心翼翼地去火边查看Iwenttothefireandcheckedwhethertherewassomething.发现什么都没有(制造悬念)But,tomydisappointment,therewasnothingnearthefire.丛林里传来奇怪的声音(制造悬念)Suddenly,astrangenoisewhichcamefromthejungleappearedagain.夜太深,什么都看不清Itwaslateatnight,Icouldhardlyseewhatwasthere,butthenoisecontinued.我很害怕,不敢去看了
IwassoscaredthatIcouldnotcheckitalone.找老马力帮忙SoIturnedtoOldMaliforhelp.P2段草稿-翻译
老马力和我拿着手电走进丛林OldMaliandItooktheflashtoapproachthejungle.声音奇怪地停止了Thenoisestrangelystopped.拿着手电找了找Wecontinuedtosearchwiththeflash.发现什么都没有Butnothingwasfound.突然闪出一个小东西(制造悬念)Suddenly,asmallthingappearedinoursight.原来是一只兔子Itwasacuterabbit.突然明白为什么老马力如此冷静了IthitmewhyOldMaliwassocalmallthetime.Therewasnowonderthatrichexperiencecanmakemanstrongandwise.Iwasgoingtoseeiftherewasawildanimalbesidethefire.Iwenttothefireandcheckedwhethertherewassomething.But,tomydisappointment,therewasnothingnearthefire.Suddenly,astrangenoisewhichcamefromthejungleappearedagain.Itwaslateatnight,Icouldhardlyseewhatwasthere,butthenoisecontinued.IwassoscaredthatIcouldnotcheckitalone.SoIturnedtoOldMaforhelp.OldMali’squietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter.OldMaliandItooktheflashtoapproachthejungle.Thenoisestrangelystopped.Wecontinuedtosearchwiththeflash.Butnothingwasfound.Suddenly,asmallthingappearedinoursight.Itwasacuterabbit.IthitmewhyOldMaliwassocalmallthetime.Therewasnowonderthatrichexperiencecanmakemanstrongandwise.
续写五步法
1.读故事;2.选出合适的5个词;3.由P1、P2所给内容推理P1内容,列中文草稿;4.由P2所给内容推理P2内容,列中文草稿;5.在草稿中试着加入所画单词,并翻译。Practicemakesperfect!
AVacationwithMyMotherIhadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother---loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.展示DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdr
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