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北京高考英语情景作文考前背诵记叙文(日记,周记,稿件)推荐写作框架第一段开头(when,whodidwhat,where)主旨句(中心思想)itisthroughthisexperiencethatIlearnt...第二段图一要点(核心动词)图一细节(一个以上)过渡(语言过渡)图二要点(缺一不可)图二细节(必要细节)过渡(增加细节)第三段图三要点(段首主旨)图三细节(文字要用)过渡(合情合理)图四要点(区别细节)图四细节(添加情感)过渡(凸显句型)第四段总结(whathappenedlater)升华(照应主旨,个人感想,展望未来)1.开头:引出话题;表明写作中心思想•I'vealwaysbelievedthatgettinginvolvedinsocialactivitiesisagreatwaytobroadenmyhorizonsratherthanjustfixingmyeyesontextbooks.Thisismyreasonforparticipatingin...•IhadheardhundredsofrumorsaboutthelifeofSeniorThreeeverbeforeenteringthehighschool.Boredom,tiredness,endlessexamsandnotimeforrelaxationwereamongthem.However,IstillgotreallyexcitedasmyfirstdayofSeniorThreewasdrawingnear.Lastweek,myfriendandIhadafantasticfieldtrip.Thoughthingsdidn'tgoonaswehadplanned,itstillturnedouttobeamemorableexperience.Volunteeringspeaksvolumestome,fornotonlycanIpracticemyoralEnglishbutalsosendmybestcaretopeoplewhoneedhelp.Today,Iwasreallyexcitedabouttakingpartinavolunteerrecruitmentandeagertobearealvolunteer.Everyjobtakespainstakingeffortstobedonewell.Theeasiestworkinourmindsmaynotbethesamewhenweactuallylayourhandsonthem.Thisweek,designingourownbookshelfinourgeneraltechnologyclasstaughtmethehardshipacraftsmanhastogothroughtocreatehismasterpiece.NothingmakesmehappierthanknowingthatI'mmakingcontributionstoourlivingplanet.Thereisnodoubtthattodayisabigdayinmylife,becauseit'sthefirstdaythatIparticipatein…Doingvoluntaryworkbringssatisfaction.ItwasthroughourspringoutingthatIrealizedthistruthforthefirsttime.Todaymarkedthestartingpointforustoparticipateinthe“Low-carbonLife”.Wefeltreallyexcitedaswehavealreadykeptthebeliefinmindandhavetakenmanyenvironmentally-friendlyactions.2.结尾:总结、升华。好的结尾必须扣题,特别要注意照应文字题干。Grandpaandgrandmahavedevotedsomuchtome,fromraisingmeuptoteachingmelife-philosophies.NowI'magrown-up,Ifeelastrongneedandresponsibilitytopaythemback.That'sthereasonwhyIdidthis.Ilovemygrandparents.Thiswasjustasimplethinginourschoollife,butsomethingmeaningful.Ourteachersneverfailtoshowuseveryconsideration.Sowhentheyneedhelp,it'sourdutyaswellashonortolendahelpinghand.Inthisway,wecancreateaharmoniousteacher-studentrelationship.Wecouldhavehadsomefuninsteadofcleaningthemountainthatafternoon.However,enjoyingthemagnificentscenerywithoutrubbish,weknewthatwhatwehaddonewasworthwhile.Itwasatiringbutmemorabletrip.Notonlydidwedo...butwealsodid…Lookingbackontheexperience,whatwasmostvividinourmindswasnotabout..butourThedaywasunforgettable,forweplayedoutpartinprotectingtheenvironment.Andwewillkeepitasareminderthatdoingsomethinggoodcanindeedaddtoourhappinesstoanunimaginableextent.Itisnothavingfuntogetherthatimprovestherelationshipamongourclassmatesmost,butsharingandcaringonunexpectedoccasions一thatiswhatIhavelearnedfromourmountainclimbingtoday.Theresulthasn'tcomeoutyet,butitdoesn'tseemthatimportant.Itistakingpartinthiseventitselfthattrulymatters.I'llcherishthisexperiencewhenmovingoninmylifejourney.Besidesthehappyending,whatIammostproudofisthatIconqueredmyfearandshowedthebestofmetootherpeople.Iamalsolookingforwardtovoluntaryjobstartingnextweek.Theoutingisreallyincredible,forthemutualhelpandcareweexperiencedwhencaughtintherainstrengthenedourbondsandpromotedasenseofbelonging.Afterawholedayofwork,mybodywaswashedout,butmyheartwasfilledwithsatisfaction.Itgavemeabigbeliefthatlcoulddosomethingforourcity.Thisunforgettablevolunteerworknotonlybringsmegreatprideandhappinessbutalsoinspiresmethathelpingothersisakindofthingfullofenjoyment.Smallstepsleadtoabigchange.Iamdeeplyimpressedbytheseseeminglysimpleactionstakenbymyclassmates,believingbeyondashadowofdoubtthatourbehaviorwillbringabrighterfuture.Despitealltheinconveniencecausedbythisactivity,Ihavesomethingmuchmorefillinginheart一thecontentmentofknowingthatIdidjusttherightthingstoprotectourenvironment.Happinessbroughtbyouractionstocutdownemissionshasreallybrightenedtheday.However,thisisonlyabeginningofalongjourneythatfollows.Timeseemedtofleefasterthanusual.ItwaswhenthebellrangthatIrealizedtheveryfirstdayofSeniorThreewascomingtoanend.Itwasindeedafabulousstartformynewterm.NotonlywasImovedbyhisinspiringspeech,butalsogainedconfidenceandfaithinbreakingthroughtheobstaclesnomatterhowdifficulttheymightbe.Toughasitistopreparefortheexamination,thesupportfromthepeoplearoundmewarmsmyheartandkeepsmemotivated.3.过渡及细节添加Itallstartedwhen…/Allstartedwhen…Wesetupearlythenextmorning.Itwasatthatmomentthat…Thencamethetimewhenwe...Allthiswentsmoothlyuntil…Nextcamethemostchallengingtask.Themomentwearrivedatthefarm,westartedtodocleaning.However,planningwasonething,andcarryingitoutwasquiteanother.IthasbeenfiveyearssinceIvisited/calledatthisplacelasttime.Hardlyhadwearrivedatthesummitwhentonsofrubbishcameintoourview/sight.Nosoonerhadwereachedthetopthangreatquantitiesoftrashcameintoourview.Itwasnotuntilthesundisappearedunderthehorizonthatwefinishedourwork.NothingcomfortedandpleasedmegreaterthanWhatimpressedmemostTheteachers'encouragingwordsfueledourpassionandconfidence.Ifeltquiterelievedtoseealloureffortspayoff.Theworkwastiring/exhausting,nodoubt,butalsosatisfying.Thewholeclasswereimmersedin/wereabsorbedinexcitement.Theexcitementwasaccompaniedbysomeworriesonmywaytoschool.ButtheanxietywaswipedoutwhenIwasgreetedwarmlybymyclassmatesandteachers.Iwouldneverforgettheveryfirstsceneweshotinthepark.Itwasabrightsunnyday.Withexcitementandslightnervousness,werecordedtheactingofournewactorsandactress.TheexcitementsfloodedeverinchofmybodyonthewaytotheinterviewplacethismorningasIcouldnothelpimaginingmywearingavolunteer'sshirt.However,thecontentmentwasreplaced
byanxietyuponourarrivingatthejobfair.WhenIrecalledthetourtoBritain,joyandhappinessdancedallthewaytomyheart.Awaveofdelightsurgedthroughmyheart.Ourdirectorandleadactressstoodonthestagewithcupsinhand,pridewrittenallovertheirfaces.Iwasoverwhelmedbyjoyandcontentment/Afeelingofjoyandcontentmentovercame(overwhelmed)mewhenIsawtheroomforourpremierepackedwithstudents.thebroadsmileonherfaceindicatedthat...Tearssoakedmyeyes.Ourproducerwasclosetotearswhen…WechattedhappilyandIsawhertearsofsatisfactionandpleasure.Iwasjuststandingtherewithmymouthhangingopen.Thelaststrawwas/camewhenIheardsomeonesingingbehindme.常用表达oneselfinstudy;dedicateoneselftolearning;apply/devotingoneselftolearning全力以赴sparenoefforttodo/oneselfinstudy;dedicateoneselftolearning;apply/devotingoneselftolearning全力以赴sparenoefforttodo/makeeveryefforttodo/gogreat努力学习devoteoneselftolearning;busy/buryoneselfinlearning;spare♦noeffort/painstostudy;immerselengthstodo/makeeveryendeavortodo忙于bebusydoing/devote...todoing/applyoneselfto…/bededicatedto./beoccupiedwith/bedeeply(fully)engagedin梦想成为医生dreamofbeingadoctor/yearnforbeingadoctor/longtobeadoctor/desiretobeadoctor在.方面积极tobeactivein.积极参与totakeanactivepartin.环保beenvironmentallyfriendly;beeco-friendly;beenvironmentfriendly;livegreen♦造成损害dodamageto;beharmfulto;doharmto发挥自己的作用doone'sbit;playone'spart减少二氧化碳的排放reducecarbonemissions;reducethereleaseofcarbondioxide;reducetheamountofcarbondioxidegivenoffintotheair;reducetheamountofcarbondioxidedischargedbyvehicles提高人们的环保意识raisepeople'senvironmentalawareness对.评价高tospeak/thinkhighlyof.♦开拓视野/开拓心胸tobroadenthehorizons/tobroadenthemind♦实现梦想/抱负torealizeone'sdream/ambition♦关心社会tobeconcernedaboutthesociety♦尽到责任tofulfillone'sduty♦振作topulloneselftogether/totakeheart♦承担责任totake/shouldertheresponsibility♦把握机会totake/seize/grasptheopportunity♦树立楷模tosetagoodexample/tobearolemodel♦自立tobeindependent/tostandonone'sown♦达到目标toachievetheaim/goal♦对..感兴趣Myhobbyis.;beinto;befondof;fancydoing;bekeenon;beaddictedto;haveagreatlove/giftfor.;haveastrongpreferencefor;begiftedin…;myinterestliesin..Withgreatinterestin…,I…;have/showgreatinterestin.在…方面打下基础tolayagoodfoundationin.起到.作用toservethepurposeof.准备好tobepreparedfor/todo开始着手做...tosetaboutdoing/setouttodo去郊游/野餐goforanouting/apicnic观光gosightseeing欣赏大自然的风景toappreciatethesceneryofnature保持健康tokeep/stayhealthy/fit锻炼身体tostrengthen/buildupthebody符合需要tomeetthed
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