专四写作专题课件

短文写作部分文体绝大部分为议论文，一般采用三段式的结构，第一段为论点，第二段为论据，第三段为结论。最高要求为文章内容切题，思想表达清楚，论据充分，论证严密，基本无语言错误。要想写好一篇文章，应该注意一下写作步骤：第1页/共122页短文写作部分文体绝大部分为议论文，一般采用三段式的结构，第一11.审题：作文评分的第一个要求就是内容切题，因此审题特别关键。专业四级作文都是命题作文，而且多有中文提示或提纲，所以你首先应了解命题的基本要求，理解题目的真正意图，然后确定提纲中的关键词及各要点间的逻辑，整理自己的思路，对自己所想到的内容进行组织和全面安排。尤其对要讨论的问题，该问题涉及的内容，所需的事实、例证、阐述、说明和总结等，在头脑中形成一个整体的构思。第2页/共122页1.审题：作文评分的第一个要求就是内容切题，因此审题特别关键22.组织段落：构思好之后，根据构思的提纲，运用选好的材料，恰当地运用连词，合理安排段落，使文章条理清楚、内容连贯。段落的组织主要是通过扩展句对主题句的支持或说明来进行的。各段的主题句在审题构思时就应基本形成，主题句确定下来，接着就是通过一系列的扩展句，来说明、论证或阐述主题句的思想。常见的段落展开方法有列举、举例、比较和对比、因果、叙述、归类、下定义等，考试时应灵活运用。第3页/共122页2.组织段落：构思好之后，根据构思的提纲，运用选好的材料，恰33.修改：也就是说要删除与主题不相干的内容，检查句子时态、语态等。特别应注意单词的正确拼写；字母大小写和标点符号；数的一致性（包括主语与谓语以及名词与其限定语的单复数一致性）；指代关系（包括指代的一致性和代词的选用）；动词形式（时态、语态、语气）等方面。第4页/共122页3.修改：也就是说要删除与主题不相干的内容，检查句子时态、语4关于考试过程中短文写作的时间分配问题。我们知道，短文写作的时间为35分钟,要力争写完写好,这就要求考生做到有条不紊，忙而不乱，充分发挥自己应有的水平。建议按照如下的方案分配时间:审题1～2分钟；组织素材,细节和关键词:4～5分钟；起草:20～25分钟；修改定稿（检查润色）:4～5分钟。第5页/共122页关于考试过程中短文写作的时间分配问题。我们知道，短文写作的时5

因为是三段式作文，写作的时候一定注意第一段提出的论点要简洁明了，开门见山；第二段的论据要能充分说明论点，论证条理清楚；第三段的结论要水到渠成，切忌草率，严谨完整的结尾是取得高分的保证。便条写作最主要的是注意格式正确，交待清楚，比如请柬、贺信、道歉函等，要注意称呼、正文、签名等的格式，一定要把相关的时间、地点、原因及主要事件内容交待清楚。第6页/共122页因为是三段式作文，写作的时候一定注意第一段提出的论点要6专四作文评分标准14-15分内容切题,完整,条理清楚,文章结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺恰当,句式用词富有变化,有"闪光点"基本无语言错误.

11-13分内容切题,完整,条理清楚,文章结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺恰当,少量语法错误

8-10分内容基本切题,完整,条理基本清楚,文章结构基本严谨,语法基本正确,语言基本通顺恰当.少量严重错误,一些词使用不当.

5-7分内容基本切题,完整,条理不够清楚,教明显的母语痕迹.较多语言错误,许多词使用不当.

2-4分内容偏题,不完整,思路混乱,语句不完整,只有少数句子可以理解,词汇拼写错误严重.

第7页/共122页专四作文评分标准第7页/共122页7争取高分要注意的事项：(1)文章内容切题、丰富、文章通顺，表达清楚。(2)行文流畅。(3)组织严密，逻辑性强。(4)句型多样化，句法结构正确。(5)用词得体、恰当、丰富。(6)语法正确。(7)拼写及标点正确，书写美观。第8页/共122页争取高分要注意的事项：第8页/共122页8作文的排版应该不多于卷面的2／3，不少于1／3。换句话说，就是要留有余地，不要将卷面写得密密麻麻。字体不要过大或过小，字间距保持均匀，字迹要工整。段落方面，格式要整齐划一，段首或一律顶格或一律空四个字母的位置。这些都有易于考生先发制人，取得先机。第9页/共122页作文的排版应该不多于卷面的2／3，不少于1／3。换句话说，就9专四大作文题型及解题

策略一、问题解决型1．定义：问题解决型作文就是针对命题提出的问题或论题，列举所能够解决的方法、途径，并对这些方法或途径提出自己的挑选观点，然后结合自己的认识和体会，再做出评价或结论。

第10页/共122页专四大作文题型及解题

策略一、问题解决型第10页/共122页102．写作步骤：第一步：提出论题。针对命题要求，提出论题，阐述其重要性。第二步：列举方法。列举出解决问题的几种方法或途径。第三步：做出评价或选择。根据列出的方法或途径，结合自身体会，做出评价或选择。第11页/共122页2．写作步骤：第11页/共122页113．Title:

HowtoSolvetheProblemofHeavyTrafficI.OutlineA.ImportanceofsolvingtheproblemofheavytrafficB.WaystosolvetheproblemofheavytrafficC.Mysuggestion第12页/共122页3．Title:

HowtoSolvethePro12II.Sample

Withpopulationrapidlyincreasing,heavytraffichasbecomeabigheadacheformanycities.Forthisveryreason,manygovernmentofficialsandexpertshavethoughtupsomesolutions,amongwhichtwodrawmuchattentionoverthecountry.

第13页/共122页II.SampleWithpopulationr13

Somepeoplesuggestedthatmoreandwiderroadsshouldbelaiddown.Itisevidentthatitcanrelievethetrafficcongestioninthestreets,thusaccelerating（加速）theflowofbusesandcars.And

meanwhile,thefastandsmoothflowoftrafficreducestheairpollutioncausedbyengine-idling.Butthedisadvantagesofthissolutionliesinthefactthattoomuchlandcouldbeusedforfarmingorhousingwillinevitablybeoccupiedbymoreandmoreroads.第14页/共122页Somepeoplesuggestedthat14Therefore,othersholdthatthenumberofpublicbusroutesshouldberaisedsothatmorepeoplecanbetransportedandfewerpeoplewillhavetotravelintheirowncarsorridebikes.Lessuseofbicyclesandprivatecarswillmaketheroadslesscrowded.Unfortunately,thereisalsoadrawbackinthissolution:itwillbringinconveniencetothosewholiveorworkfarawayfrombusstop.第15页/共122页Therefore,othersholdthatth15

Asneitherofthetwosolutionsiseffectiveenoughtosolvetheproblem

oftrafficincities,Ifavoracombinationofthetwo.Whilebuildingmoreroadsinplaceswherelandislessuseful,weshouldincreasethenumberofpublicbuslines.Onlyinthiswaycanwebemoreeffectivelytosolvetheproblemofheavytraffic.(247words)

第16页/共122页Asneitherofthetwosolut16范文点评：本文严格按照问题解决型作文成文。作者首先提出交通问题是一个世界性问题，接着就列举了两个解决的方法，并就其优缺点做了阐述，最后作者提出了自己的观点-----综合两者的优点。本文内容切题，每个段落都围绕文章的主题展开，层次清楚，结构严谨；文字连贯，句式多变，是一篇得分较高的文章。第17页/共122页范文点评：第17页/共122页17问题解决型作文模版

问题解决型模版按照开头、正文和结尾三个部分呈现。PartOne:TheModelofBeginningParagraph1.---------hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople,especiallyamongtheyoung,andheateddebatesarerightontheirway.2.Recently,--------hasbecomethefocusofthesociety.Andinthisway,peopleswarmto-------.3.------hasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.Ithasbroughtusalotofbenefitsbutcreatedsomeseriousproblemsaswell.第18页/共122页问题解决型作文模版

问题解决型模版按照开头、正文和结尾三个部184.Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplearebeginningtobeawareoftheof------.5.------isnow------,andatthesametime------.Thesetwofactorshavecaused--------.Thenwhatshallwedotosolve-------inthefaceofsuchasituation?第19页/共122页4.Nowadaysmoreandmorepeop19PartTwo:TheModelofBodyParagraph1.Agreatnumberofsolutionsarebeingoffered.Somepeoplesuggestthat------.Othersarguethat-------.2.Thereareseveralmeasuresforustoadopt.First,wecan------,thereareanumberofadvantagesof-----.Anothersolutionisto---------.3.Why--------?Thefirstreasonisthat------.Thesecondreasonis--------.Thethirdis---------.第20页/共122页PartTwo:TheModelofBodyPa204.Theeventualresultitbringsoutis-------.Andperhapsthemostobviousresultof----is------.5.------isnecessaryandimportanttoourcountry’sdevelopmentandconstruction.First,------.

What’smore,

--------.Mostimportantofall,

---------.第21页/共122页4.Theeventualresultitbrin21PartThree:TheModelofConcludingParagraph1.Personally,Ibelievethat----.Consequently,Iamconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause-------.2.Withthedevelopmentofsociety,-----.Soitisurgentandnecessaryto------.Ifeverymemberiswillingtocontributehimselftosociety,itwillbebetterandbetter.第22页/共122页PartThree:TheModelofConcl223.Butforme,Iwouldratherthinkofthematterinanoptimisticway，becauseIbelieve--------.4.Myownpointofviewisthat------isanormalbehaviorinoursociety.Thereisnodoubtthat-----.ASanoldsayinggoes,--------.5.Fromallthereasonsabove,weknowthatgreatchangeshadtakenplacein-----.AndIbelievethat------.第23页/共122页3.Butforme,Iwouldrather23Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:OneWaytoFightagainstGlobalEpidemics

Youaretowriteinthreeparts.Inthefirstpart,statewhatyoursuggestedwayis.Inthesecondpart,stateoneortwo

reasonsfor

yoursuggestion.Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusion.

Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.第24页/共122页Writeacompositionofabout224

OneWaytoFightagainstGlobalEpidemics

Nowadays,newinfectiousdiseasesareemergingandspreadingfasterthanever.Globalepidemicshavebecomeaseriousthreattohumanhealthandlives.Worldwidediscussionsabouthowtofightagainstthemareongoingactively.Inmyopinion,oneeffectivewayistotakeconcretemonitoringandquarantine[‘kwɔrən,tin]

（检疫，隔离）

measures.

第25页/共122页OneWaytoFightagainstG25Foronething,newdiseasesareemergingatthehistoricallyunprecedentedrate.Vulnerabilityisuniversal.GovernmentsworldwidemustkeepwatchfornewthreatsliketheemergenceofSARS,newtypesofbirdfluandMexicanswineflu.第26页/共122页Foronething,newdiseases26

Foranother,duetotheglobalboominairtravel,itmakesitpossibleforevenjustoneindividualtravelingbetweencountries,carryinganinfectiousdisease,tobeathreattoothersandtocauseanalarmorapotentialcrisisinanothercountry.TheWHOalsowarnedthatanoutbreakofanepidemicinonepartoftheworldnowisonlyafewhoursawayfrombecominganimminentthreatsomewhereelse.

第27页/共122页Foranother,duetotheglob27Infectiousdiseasesarenowspreadinggeographicallymuchfasterthanatanytimeinhistory.Thusgovernmenthealthauthoritiesaroundtheworldshouldimprovetheirmonitoringofinfectiousdiseases,reportoutbreaksassoonastheyhappenandcarryoutquarantinemeasuresstrictly.第28页/共122页Infectiousdiseasesarenowsp28Onlyby

effectivemonitoringandquarantinemeasurescanwefightagainsttheincreasinglyseriousthreatofglobalepidemics.

Don’twaittillwinter.Nowisthetimetopreventtheworsefromhappening.第29页/共122页Onlybyeffectivemonitoring29Practice：1．TheHeavyBurdenofCollegeStudents2．TheLackofResponsibilityofYoungPeopleinChina3．HowtoSolvetheProblemofHighTuitionofhighereducationinChina第30页/共122页Practice：第30页/共122页30二、阐述观点型1．定义；阐述观点型就是指，对某一个事物、事件或问题的重要性、必要性和正确性、优越性或危害性以及错误性进行的阐述和论证。也就是通过摆事实、讲道理的方式，来说服读者信服某个观点。这是一种议论文，也可以称为立论文。例如，Benefitsof（Sports）；Advantagesof（CityLife）；Importanceof（Education）第31页/共122页二、阐述观点型第31页/共122页312．写作步骤：第一步：提出论点。针对命题，对命题所涉及的问题或现状进行阐述，然后，提出自己的论点。第二步：论证论点。通过举例、使用事实、数据等方式来论证提出的论点是正确的。第三步：提出建议或方法。在论证的基础上，重申自己的观点，提出自己的建议或方法来解决问题。第32页/共122页2．写作步骤：第32页/共122页323．Title:

TheProblemofMigrantWorkers

Everyday,millionsofworkersfromthecountrysideareseentoflow,byeverymeansoftransportation,intobigcities.Thentheywillsettledownandworkforyearsthere.Althoughtheyhavemadenoticeablecontributionstotheurbanexpansion,theproblemstheybringaboutarenottobeignored.第33页/共122页3．Title:

TheProblemofMigra33Whatarousesaseriesofcomplaintsonthepartofcityresidentsiscenteredroundthefollowingproblems.Violentcompetitionstandsoutforjobopportunity.Strugglingforthealready-scarcepositions,thousandsofthemigrantsputgreatpressureonthegovernmentaswellasoncitydwellers.Besides,theyarealsoresponsiblefortheincreaseincrimerates.第34页/共122页Whatarousesaseriesofco34Asidefromthosewhoarehardworking,somearetemptedtostealandrobbecauseofoverpopulationagainstinsufficientjobopenings.What’smore,theproblemofsanitationisworthmentioning.Sincetheymoveintocitieswithoutanyphysicalexaminations,thespreadofsomeinfectiousdiseasesislikelytooccur.第35页/共122页Asidefromthosewhoarehardw35Tomakethepowerfulforceofmigrantsexertitsparttothefull,citygovernmentsmustpassalawthatwillgetruralworkersregisteredwithaspecialorganization,helpingthemobtainajobandinstructingtheirlife.Andsomemedicalteamsneedtobesentaroundtomakesurethateveryworkerisingoodconditionandcaredforbyourgovernments.(218words)第36页/共122页Tomakethepowerfulforce36范文点评本文按照阐述个人观点型作文成文。文章开篇就提出农民工问题，虽然他们有利于城市的建设和发展，但是也带来各种不可忽视的问题。在此作者提出自己鲜明的观点。接着就列举了农民工入城所带来的问题，如，造成就业紧张、给政府和城市居民带来压力、犯罪率提高问题以及疾病传染问题。针对这些问题，作者提出两点建议，从法律和医疗方面解决农民工引发的问题。本文层次清楚，逻辑性强。文字连贯，句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。第37页/共122页范文点评第37页/共122页374．阐述观点型作文模版

ModelOne:引言:Thereisnoconsensusof(opinions/disagreements)amongpeopleastotheviewof----------.Somepeoplesuggestthat-------,whilesomeotherpeoplearguethat----------.Iagreewiththelattertosomeextent.提出自己的论点:Ithink------------.提供论据,证明自己的观点:Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationofthe(view/idea)thanmyown(experience/example)of---------.First,-----Second,------.Finally,------.结论:Mypersonalexperienceleadsmetoconcludethat---------.第38页/共122页4．阐述观点型作文模版ModelOne:第38页/共138ModelTwo:引言:Inthepastfewyears,therehasbeenagrowingtrendthat--------.Peoplehaveconflictingviewsofthisfact.Somepeoplesupportandothersworry.提出自己的论点Asforme,(whatIthinkis),-----------is(beneficialtousinmanyways./usefulinmanyways.)提供论据,证明自己的观点:Firstly,-------.Secondly,-------.Thelastpoint,---------.结论:Therefore,wehavenoreasontomakeafussabout---------.第39页/共122页ModelTwo:第39页/共122页39ModelThree:引言:Forthefirsttimeinhistory,----wasofficiallyadopted(acrossthecountry/allovertheworld).Ithasfoundanimmediatewelcomeandmuchpopularityeversince.提出自己的论点:Indeed,therearemanyobviousadvantagesto----------.提供论据,证明自己的观点:First,--------.Second，--------.Third,------.结论:------benefitsmorethanindividuallyandeconomically,andwiththepassageoftime,itwillshowmoreprofoundsignificance.第40页/共122页ModelThree:第40页/共122页40ModelFour:引言:Inrecentyearstherehasbeenabiggrowthintheareaof-------.提出自己的论点:--------ispopularthatithasbecomeanindispensablepartinourlife.提供论据,证明自己的观点:------contributebothto--------andto-------.Besides,------offers-------.Andmostimportantly,------helptopromote--------.结论:-----playsavitalroleinpeople’slife,anditdeservesfurtherattentionfrom(thegovernment/authorities).第41页/共122页ModelFour:第41页/共122页41ModelFive:引言:Eversinceearlythiscentury.提出自己的论点:------hasbecomeanessentialpartofourmodernlife.Ithasplayedadecisiveroleinmodern(industry/agriculture/scienceandtechnology/naturaldefenseandeducation).Nobodycandenythatthedevelopmentofourcivilizationdependson---------.提供论据,证明自己的观点:

Iftherewereno--------,ourmodernworldwouldbeintrouble.Foronething,---------.Foranother,--------.结论:Therefore,weshouldmakebetteruseof-------.Weshould--------.第42页/共122页ModelFive:第42页/共122页42Practice：1．Themarriageofcollegestudents2．Theproblemofchildren’saddictiontocomputergames3.Thedecliningrateofcollegestudent’senrollment4.OncollegestudentslearningChineseclassics第43页/共122页Practice：第43页/共122页43三、观点评论型1．定义：观点评论型就是，自己对某个问题的“评论或观点”。在写这类短文时，考生要针对命题提出要阐述的问题，再从各个方面对这个问题提出考生自己的观点和见解，并要着重阐述赞成或是反对这个观点的理由。第44页/共122页三、观点评论型第44页/共122页442．写作步骤：第一步：提出问题。针对命题，首先要提出命题所涉及的论题，并且按照命题要求，适当对命题给予讨论和评述。第二步：提出自己的观点，表明自己的态度。根据命题的另一个角度的要求提出自己或他人的观点和态度。第三步：做出结论。综合前面两步的看法和理由，提出问题解决的方法或实现的途径。第45页/共122页2．写作步骤：第45页/共122页453．Title:OnMakingFriendsAsahumanbeing,onecanhardlydowithoutafriend.Weneedfriendstoshareourjoyandsorrow;weconsultwithfriendsifthereareproblemswecannothandlealone;wegotofriendsforhelpwhenweareintrouble;andwesometimesconfidetoourfriendswhatsecretswearereluctanttorevealtoourfamily.Inasense,friendsareoftenmoreimportanttousthanrelatives.第46页/共122页3．Title:OnMakingFriends46Butnotallwhoarefriendlytoeachothercanbecalledtruefriendsinthesocialgatherings.Truefriendshipconsistsinsincerity,mutualtrust,andself-sacrifice,bothintimesofhardshipandatthemomentsofcrisis.Atruefrienddoesnotjusttelluswhatwewanttohearbutwilldowhathethinksisbestforusinthelongrun.

第47页/共122页Butnotallwhoarefriend47WhenIchoosefriends,Idonotcarewhatworktheydoorwhatsocialbackgroundtheyarefrom,butIdonoticethoselittlethingswhichrevealone’scharacters.Iwouldmakesurethatwereallycareforeachother,sothatnomatterhowmuchtimegoesbywithoutourseeingeachother,Iknowmyfriendswillalwaysbethere,readytohelpifIneedthem.AndIknowwearetruefriendsindeed.(218words)第48页/共122页WhenIchoosefriends,Id48范文点评：本文第一段论证对朋友的需要。强调朋友在个方面的重要性，在某种意义上，超过了亲属。接着作者把文章的中心提高到一个新的境界，论证什么是真正的朋友。最后，作者提出了自己关于朋友的观点和界定。第49页/共122页范文点评：第49页/共122页494．观点评论型作文模版

PartOne

ModelofBeginningParagraph1.Oneofthegreatwritersoncesaidthat---------.Nowitstillhasarealisticsignificance.2.Thereisanoldsayinggoesthat-----------.It’stheexperienceofourforefather;however,itiscorrectinmanycaseseventoday.第50页/共122页4．观点评论型作文模版PartOne

Modelof503.Oneofourancientphilosopherssaid,---------.Chinesepeoplehavealwaysbeenholdingthisideatobeoneoftheirstandardsofmorality.4.TheEnglishproverbsays,----------.Thisisquitetruebecause--------.5.Inourhistory,theideathat-------neverhasbeensopopular.Ononehand,----------,ontheotherhand,---------.第51页/共122页3.Oneofourancientphilosop51PartTwo:TheModeloftheBodyParagraph1.

Fromapersonalperspective,Ialsopreferto------because---------.2.

Theadvantagesof--------aremuchgreaterthanthoseof--------.Forinstance,-----------.3.

However,ifnotmanagedproperly,------cancreatemanyproblems.Sometimes-------.Furthermore,---------.Therefore,---------hasbeengainingpublic.第52页/共122页PartTwo:TheModeloftheBod524.

Whatismore,theessenceof-------isthat-------,althoughwecannot,mostofus------------.5.

Tomakeamoralpoint,IfeelthatanotherreasonwhyIprefer------isthat--------.第53页/共122页4.

Whatismore,theessenceo53PartThree:TheModelofConcludingParagraph1.

Asregardsme,Itendtopick--------,for-------.Whatismore,----------.2.

Forme,---------isagloryanditisthemostimportantthingIhavetakeintofeasibleconsideration.3.

IfIweregivenachoicebetween-------and-------,Iwouldcertainlyprefer--------.Forme,-------------.4.

Mypointofviewin--------largelyresultsfromthefactthat--------.第54页/共122页PartThree:TheModelofConcl54Practice；1.Myideaofbeauty2.Goodsocialrelationshipismoreimportantthanacademicstudies3.Successhasnothingtodowithluck第55页/共122页Practice；第55页/共122页55四、问题分析型1．定义：问题分析型作文就是，命题内容是关于社会现象或社会问题的，要求作者分析该问题产生的原因或造成的后果，这类作文属于说明文体。作文通常要求考生使用“因果法”或“比较法”的写作技巧来成文。第56页/共122页四、问题分析型第56页/共122页562．写作步骤第一步：提出问题或现象。针对命题，概括性地提所要论述的社会问题和现象的主要特点。第二步：找出、分析问题的原因或后果。说明问题产生的原因是什么，并且要分析说明原因造成的后果是什么。第三步：提出建议或解决问题的方法，或对目前无法解决的问题提出展望。第57页/共122页2．写作步骤第57页/共122页573．Title:JuvenileDelinquency

Today,theproblemofjuveniledelinquencyhasbecomeseriousandwidespreadinmostmoderncountries.Townsandcitiesofthemostwesterncountriessufferfromteenagelawlessnessandcrime;alcoholdrinkinganddrug-takinghaveincreasedeverywhere;gangsofyouth,maleandfemale,attacklaw-abidingcitizens,orrobshopkeepers.Juvenilecourtsareovercrowdedwithoffenders.Andneithergovernmentnorschoolmastercancurethetrouble.第58页/共122页3．Title:JuvenileDelinquency58Therearemanyreasonsforjuveniledelinquency.Firstofall,anattitudeofpersonalirresponsibilityinmodernsocietyaffectsyoungpeoplewhichencouragerebellionagainstallformsofestablishedauthority.Therefore,drug-taking,violence,andothercrimesplaytheirdisastrouspart,andteenagersbecomethefirstvictimsofthecrimes.Secondly,manyevilsaremadefashionablebyalargenumberofTVplays,filmsandbookswithviolenceandpornography,whicharepoisonoustotheteenagers’mind.Thirdly,somejuveniledelinquencystemsfromtheunstablefamilywhereparentsgotdivorced.Thuschildrencannotreceiveduecareandguidance,andasaresulttheyareheadingforcrimes.第59页/共122页Therearemanyreasonsfor59Personally,Ithinkthatsocietyineverycountryhastheresponsibilitytocaremuchmoreforthejuvenile.Thiscarebeginsinthehomeandinvolvesconcern,loveandinterestbyparents;theschoolcanonlysupplement,butneverreplacethis.Secondlymoralsmustbefirmly,yetkindlytaughtfromanearlyage.TVplaysandbooksconcerningviolenceandpornographymustbestrictlybannedinpublicplacesaswellasinschools.Finally,alsomostimportantly,teenagersmustbeencouragedtosetarealgoalinlifeandpursuetheirgreatideals.Witheducationfromschoolcombinedwiththecareandconcernfromparentsandsociety,juvenilecrimes,maynotbecompletelyeliminated,butcanbeatleastreducedtoaminimum.(293words第60页/共122页Personally,Ithinkthats60范文点评:本文严格按照问题分析型作文成文。开篇作者概括出西方国家青少年犯罪成泛滥之势，青少年法庭已经拥挤不堪，而西方政府和学校对此无可奈何。接着作者从三个方面出发，比较深刻地分析、挖掘了青少年犯罪的原因。最后，作者从社会、学校和家庭提出了三点建议。第61页/共122页范文点评:第61页/共122页614．问题分析型作文模版PartOne:TheModelofBeginningParagraph1.Last(week/month),Ivisitedafriendofmineandfoundthat-------.The(case/story/incident)isnotrare.Ithasnowdrawnmuchnationwideattentiontotheissue/problemof------------.Wemaytracethisproblembackto--------,butitdoesnotanswerthequestionofwhy---------.2.Perhapsnothingismore(dominant/popular/important/harmful/dangerous)in(themodernworld/Chinesefamily/school/society)than--------.Accordingtoarecent(study/investigation/poll)80%teenagers(people/women)are(addictedto/indulgedin/interestedin)doing--------.True,itdoessomegoodtous,butwhenweapplauditsbenefits,wemustacknowledgeitsenormouspotentialtoaffectus.第62页/共122页4．问题分析型作文模版PartOne:TheMode62PartTwo:TheModeloftheBodyparagraph1.分析原因:Inmyopinion,the(phenomenon/problem/failure/change)in------(ispartly…/mainly/largelyattributableto…/dueto…/owingto….)--------.Thefactthat------hasseveralfactors.First,------.Second,------.Finally,-----2.分析结果:Itisimportantforpeople/teenagerstorealizethat-------,forit

will(produce/exert/have)aremarkable(impact/influence/effect)on---------.Firstofall,-------.Also,-------.Finally,--------.第63页/共122页PartTwo:TheModeloftheBod63PartThree;TheModelofConcluding

Paragraph1.Thereis(nodenying/littledoubt)that(special/adequate/considerable/further)attentionmustbepaid/called/devotedtotheproblemof--------.Ifweignore/fallin/areblindtotheproblem,itisverylikelythat---------.2.Wemustlookfor/searchfor/callforanimmediateattention/action/method/measurebecausethepresent/currentsituation/stateof---------.3.Itissuggested/recommended/hopedthatgreat/persistent/continuouseffortsshouldbemadetohalt/control/checkthedangerof-------.Anyhow,widereducation/morepublicityshouldbegiventotheseriousconsequences/effectsof---------.Onlybyrecognizing/realizingthe-------,necessity/importance/dangerouseffectof-----canwe-----.第64页/共122页PartThree;TheModelofConcl64Practice:1.AdvantagesorDisadvantagesofTVAdvertisements2.GapsbetweenParentsandChild3.TheBackwardsoftheCountrysideintheWesternAreasinChina4.BadQualityofEducationinthePoorRuralAreas第65页/共122页Practice:第65页/共122页65专四与专八、考研作文常用写作模板通练参考模式是一根“拐杖”，初学时期离不开它，但是不能够一直都依赖它，学到一定程度就必须甩掉这根“拐杖”，走自己的路，形成自己的风格！我国学生在国际大考中写作成绩不理想，主要是过于模式化、千篇一律，缺少学生自己的思想和见解，缺少自己的风格，尽管字数不少，句子不错，语法正确，结构标准但是就得不到高分。第66页/共122页专四与专八、考研作文常用写作模板通练参考模式是一根“拐杖”，66I.观点选择式

1.观点选择式AorB模式1：

Dependingonpersonalexperience,personalitytypeandemotionalconcern,wefindthatsomepeopleholdtheideaofAmeanwhileothersprefertoB,frommypointofview,itismoreadvisabletochoseAratherthanB.Myargumentsforthispointarelistedasfollows.

第67页/共122页I.观点选择式

1.观点选择式AorB模式1：第6767ThemainreasonformypropensityforAisthat___________________________.就理由进行解释_____________________.Forinstance,____________________

Anotherreasoncanbeseenbyeveryoneisthat____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________Forexample,____________________

TheargumentIsupportinthefirstparagraphisalsoinapositionofadvantagebecause_____________________________

AlthoughIagreethattheremaybeacoupleofadvantagesofB,Ifeelthatthedisadvantagesaremoreobvious.Suchas________________.

第68页/共122页Themainreasonformyp68Inaword,________________________________________________.So,itissagacioustosupportthestatementthatitisbettertoA.

第69页/共122页Inaword,________________692.观点选择式AorB模式2：

将原题复述___________________________________________WhenfacedwiththedecisionofAofB,quiteafewwoulddeemthat______________________,butothers,incontrast,believeA/Basthepremierchoiceandthatisalsomypoint.Amongcountlessfactorswhichinfluence-A/-B,therearethreeconspicuousaspectsasfollows.

第70页/共122页2.观点选择式AorB模式2：

第70页/共122页70ThemainreasonformypropensityforA/Bisthat___________________

Thesecondreasoncanbeseenbyeverypersonthat________.

Inaddition,thesereasonsarealsousablewhenweconsiderthat_________.

Therearesomedisadvantagesin____(另一种观点的缺点).Suchas__________.

第71页/共122页Themainreasonformypro71Inaword,____________(_重复观点句并缩写理由)__________________.Takingintoaccountofallthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthat___________.第72页/共122页Inaword,____________(_重复723.观点选择式AorB

SomepeopleprefertoA.othersbelieveB.WhenfacedwiththedecisionofAorB,quiteafewwouldclaimthat______________,butothers,incontrast,deemA/Basthepremierchoiceandthatisalsomypoint.Therearenumerousreasonswhy___________,andIwouldexploreonlyafewofthemostimportantoneshere.

第73页/共122页3.观点选择式AorB

Somepeople73ThemainreasonwhyIagreewiththeabovestatement,however,isthat_____________________.Take___________asexample,______________.

Thereisanotherfactorthatdeservessomewordshere.Suchas_______________

Similarly,thesereasonsarealsousablewhenweconsiderthat______________.(examples:___________).

第74页/共122页ThemainreasonwhyIagree74FromtheaboveyoumightgotideathatIagree______________.(repeattheabovethreereason____________).So,itissagacioustosupportthestatementthatitisbetterto_______________.

第75页/共122页Fromtheaboveyoumightgo754.观点选择式AorB

Inmypointofview,Aisasimportantas,ifnotmoreimportantthanB.SoitissagacioustochooseA.AmongcountlessfactorswhichinfluenceA.therearethreeconspicuousaspectsasfollows.

第76页/共122页4.观点选择式AorB

Inmypoint76TheabovepointiscertainlytrueifAisconsidered.Forexample,___________________

AnotherreasonwhyIagreewiththeabovestatementisthatIbelievethatAisbetterthanB.Forinstance,_______________

ItwouldprobablynotbetookindlydisposedtotheideathatBisnotimportant.B________也好_________.

第77页/共122页Theabovepointiscertainly77Inaword,tochooseAorBissomethingofadilemmatothepublicbecausetheysometimesareconfusedbytheseeminglyg