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PolishYourWritingLanguagePolishYourWritingLangua随着房价的逐年攀高,许多人面临买房和租房的选择,请就此话题进行写作。你的文章需包括:

1.你的选择:买房或租房?

2.阐述你的理由(如买房和租房的利弊,等等)。GuidedWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.随着房价的逐年攀高,许多人面临买房和租房的选择,请就此话题进高考英语写作提升专题polishYourWritingLanguage课件3ExpressyourselfgracefullyEffectivewordsVariedsentencesExpressyourselfgracefullyEff4LanguagePolishmentGuidelines

S1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordLanguagePolishmentGuidelines5Tip1:VaryyoursentenceSuggestion1:ByusingcomplexsentenceWhat

entitlesmetopurchaseahouseisthesolideconomicbaseofmyparents.Tip1:VaryyoursentenceSugge6LanguagePolishmentGuidelinesS1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordLanguagePolishmentGuidelines7Suggestion2:ByusinginversionoremphaticsentenceNotonlydoesahousemeanaharmoniousfamilynowadays,butitalsobringsahugestresstotheadultswhowanttogetmarried.Suggestion2:Byusinginversio8高考英语写作提升专题polishYourWritingLanguage课件9LanguagePolishmentGuidelinesS1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordLanguagePolishmentGuidelines10Suggestion3:Byusingparticiplephrase.

Servingasaprivatedwellingwhereweliveinourownlifestyle,houseisn’tjustaconcretebuildingtosleepineverynight.Suggestion3:Byusingpartici11LanguagePolishmentGuidelinesS1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordLanguagePolishmentGuidelines12Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsSuggestion1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords.insist,maintain,suppose,claimmoreadvantageous/beneficial/rewardingthanTip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS13LanguagePolishmentGuidelinesS1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordLanguagePolishmentGuidelines14

Suggestion2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords.

thesparemoney

Suggestion2:Trytousesome15createasenseofsecurity,freedomandcozinesscreateasenseofsecurity,fr16LanguagePolishmentGuidelinesS1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordLanguagePolishmentGuidelines17Suggestion3:Trytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwords.

e.g.Iholdtheviewthat...Itstandstoreasonthat...Ithasbecomeapparenttousthat...Nowadays,itiswidelybelievedthat...,butIwonderthat...Tobeginwith,Forinstance/example,Ononehand…ontheotherhand…Apartfromthis,…Aboveall…Suggestion3:Trytouseexpre18高考英语写作提升专题polishYourWritingLanguage课件19高考英语写作提升专题polishYourWritingLanguage课件20Attention:Avoidmistakesinpunctuation,spellingandgrammar!!!高考英语写作提升专题polishYourWritingLanguage课件21LanguagePolishmentGuidelinesS1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordAvoidmistakesinpunctuation,spellingandgrammar!!!LanguagePolishmentGuidelines22Groupone/Para1:Withthesoaringofhouseprices,thetopicthatrentingorpurchasingahousehasprovokedafiercecontroversyamongmanypeople.Frommyopinion,itismoreadvisabletorentahouseforusthantobuyahouse.Grouptwo/Para2:Purchasingahouseisunrealisticforthemajorityduetothehighpriceofhouse.Mostpeoplecan’taffordthehousepriceanditwillbeaburdenfortheirwholefamilyiftheyfirmlydecidetobuyahouse.Groupone/Para1:Withthesoa23Groupthree/Para3:What’smore,therearemanyadvantagesforustorentahouse.Notonlycanwetryallkindsofhouseswithvariousdecorationstylesbutalsowearenotlimitedbythelocationofourschool.Itisbecauseofrentingahousethatallowsustochangeourresidenceanytimeandanywhereandlivewherewelike.Groupfour/Para4:Onthewhole,rentingahouseistemporary.Now,wearejustastudentandwehaven’ttheenoughabilitytopurchaseahouse.However,ifwestudyhard,wecanrealizetheunattainabledreaminthelongrun.

Groupthree/Para3:What’smore24LanguagePolishmentGuidelinesS1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordAvoidmistakesinpunctuation,spellingandgrammar!!!LanguagePolishmentGuidelines25

Para1:Withthesoaringofhouseprices,thetopicthatrentingorpurchasingahousehasprovokedafiercecontroversyamongmanypeople.Frommyopinion,itismoreadvisabletorentahouseforusthantobuyahouse.Revise:

Withthesoaringhouseprices,afiercecontroversyaboutwhethertorentorpurchaseahousehasbeenprovokedamongaveragepeople.Iplexsentenceexpressivephraseshigh-levelwordsRevise:

Withthesoaringhouseprices,afiercecontroversyaboutwhethertorentorpurchaseahousehasbeenprovokedamongaveragepeople.Iplexsentenceexpressivephraseshigh-levelwordsPara1:Revise:Revise:26Para2:

Purchasingahouseisunrealisticforthemajorityduetothehighpriceofhouse.Mostpeoplecan’taffordthehousepriceanditwillbeaburdenfortheirwholefamilyiftheyfirmlydecidetobuyahouse.Revise:Ononehand,purchasingahouseisanunrealisticdreamforthemajority.Whatfrustratesthosewhosparenoefforttoownahouseisthemonthlymortgage,thusturningintoahugeburden.transitionalwordcomplexsentence&high-levelwordsparticiplephrasePara2:Revise:27Para3:What’smore,therearemanyadvantagesforustorentahouse.Notonlycanwetryallkindsofhouseswithvariousdecorationstylesbutalsowearenotlimitedbythelocationofourschool.Itisbecauseofrentingahousethatallowsustochangeourresidenceanytimeandanywhereandlivewherewelike.Revise:What’smore,theadvantagesofrentingahouseisevident.Notonlycanwechoosetoliveinhousesdecoratedindifferentstyles,butalsowewillnotfeelfrustratedaboutthedistancefromworkingplacestoaccommodationareas.Itistheflexibilityofresidencechoicesthatcontributestooursenseoffreedomandconvenience.Para3:Revise:28Para4:Onthewhole,rentingahouseistemporary.Now,wearejustastudentandwehaven’ttheenoughabilitytopurchaseahouse.However,ifwestudyhard,wecanrealizetheunattainabledreaminthelongrun.Revise:Modestasmysuggestionis,weshouldliveinourownlifestyle,nomattertheconcretehousebelongstousornot.Rentingahouseistemporaryinthatwecouldrealizetheseeminglyunattainabledreaminthenearfuturebymeansofdiligenceandaccumulation.Para4:Revise:29PolishYourWritingLanguagePolishYourWritingLangua随着房价的逐年攀高,许多人面临买房和租房的选择,请就此话题进行写作。你的文章需包括:

1.你的选择:买房或租房?

2.阐述你的理由(如买房和租房的利弊,等等)。GuidedWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.随着房价的逐年攀高,许多人面临买房和租房的选择,请就此话题进高考英语写作提升专题polishYourWritingLanguage课件32ExpressyourselfgracefullyEffectivewordsVariedsentencesExpressyourselfgracefullyEff33LanguagePolishmentGuidelines

S1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordLanguagePolishmentGuidelines34Tip1:VaryyoursentenceSuggestion1:ByusingcomplexsentenceWhat

entitlesmetopurchaseahouseisthesolideconomicbaseofmyparents.Tip1:VaryyoursentenceSugge35LanguagePolishmentGuidelinesS1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordLanguagePolishmentGuidelines36Suggestion2:ByusinginversionoremphaticsentenceNotonlydoesahousemeanaharmoniousfamilynowadays,butitalsobringsahugestresstotheadultswhowanttogetmarried.Suggestion2:Byusinginversio37高考英语写作提升专题polishYourWritingLanguage课件38LanguagePolishmentGuidelinesS1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordLanguagePolishmentGuidelines39Suggestion3:Byusingparticiplephrase.

Servingasaprivatedwellingwhereweliveinourownlifestyle,houseisn’tjustaconcretebuildingtosleepineverynight.Suggestion3:Byusingpartici40LanguagePolishmentGuidelinesS1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordLanguagePolishmentGuidelines41Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsSuggestion1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords.insist,maintain,suppose,claimmoreadvantageous/beneficial/rewardingthanTip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS42LanguagePolishmentGuidelinesS1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordLanguagePolishmentGuidelines43

Suggestion2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords.

thesparemoney

Suggestion2:Trytousesome44createasenseofsecurity,freedomandcozinesscreateasenseofsecurity,fr45LanguagePolishmentGuidelinesS1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordLanguagePolishmentGuidelines46Suggestion3:Trytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwords.

e.g.Iholdtheviewthat...Itstandstoreasonthat...Ithasbecomeapparenttousthat...Nowadays,itiswidelybelievedthat...,butIwonderthat...Tobeginwith,Forinstance/example,Ononehand…ontheotherhand…Apartfromthis,…Aboveall…Suggestion3:Trytouseexpre47高考英语写作提升专题polishYourWritingLanguage课件48高考英语写作提升专题polishYourWritingLanguage课件49Attention:Avoidmistakesinpunctuation,spellingandgrammar!!!高考英语写作提升专题polishYourWritingLanguage课件50LanguagePolishmentGuidelinesS1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordAvoidmistakesinpunctuation,spellingandgrammar!!!LanguagePolishmentGuidelines51Groupone/Para1:Withthesoaringofhouseprices,thetopicthatrentingorpurchasingahousehasprovokedafiercecontroversyamongmanypeople.Frommyopinion,itismoreadvisabletorentahouseforusthantobuyahouse.Grouptwo/Para2:Purchasingahouseisunrealisticforthemajorityduetothehighpriceofhouse.Mostpeoplecan’taffordthehousepriceanditwillbeaburdenfortheirwholefamilyiftheyfirmlydecidetobuyahouse.Groupone/Para1:Withthesoa52Groupthree/Para3:What’smore,therearemanyadvantagesforustorentahouse.Notonlycanwetryallkindsofhouseswithvariousdecorationstylesbutalsowearenotlimitedbythelocationofourschool.Itisbecauseofrentingahousethatallowsustochangeourresidenceanytimeandanywhereandlivewherewelike.Groupfour/Para4:Onthewhole,rentingahouseistemporary.Now,wearejustastudentandwehaven’ttheenoughabilitytopurchaseahouse.However,ifwestudyhard,wecanrealizetheunattainabledreaminthelongrun.

Groupthree/Para3:What’smore53LanguagePolishmentGuidelinesS1:Byusingcomplexsentence

Tip1:VaryyoursentenceS2:

Byusinginversionoremphaticsentence

S3:ByusingparticiplephraseLanguage

S1:Trytousesomehigh-levelwords

Tip2:SelectEffectiveWordsS2:Trytousesomeexplicitwords

S3:TrytouseexpressivephrasesortransitionalwordAvoidmistakesinpunctuation,spellingandgrammar!!!LanguagePolishmentGuidelines54

Para1:Withthesoaringofhouseprices,thetopicthatrentingorpurchasingahousehas

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