高考短文改错专题训练(含高考题、模拟题及答案解析)

.PAGE.>A组2016～2014年各省市高考题Passage1(2016·全国Ⅰ)MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig，buttheRestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.SomePeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead，hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.Passage2(2016·全国Ⅱ)Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.Passage3(2016·全国Ⅲ)Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst，IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However，myparentsdidn’tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime，Ieverfeltmyparentscouldn’tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast，Iwillbeonmyown，butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.Passage4(2016·)ItisMother’sDaytoday.Thoughit’sawesternfestival,it’spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull－timejob，soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother’sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse，andthenwentonshopping.Whenhecameback，Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom’sfavoritest.Atdinner，wesaidtoher，"HappyMother’sDay！〞Momwasgratefulandmoving.Passage5(2016·)WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren，myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday，we’dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat，myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothe*citedandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.Passage6(2015·新课标全国Ⅰ)WhenIwasachild，Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity，butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately，onthedevelopmentofindustrialization，theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso，we'lllivetoregretit.Passage7(2015·新课标全国Ⅱ)Oneday，littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime，heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater，Tonysawparents.Momsaid，"Hownicetoseeyouagain！DadandIwereterribleworried.〞Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.Passage8(2015·)Hi,Janice，It'sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeene*periencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We'vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It'sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime­wastingactivity!Infact，Idon'tliketogoanymore,soI'mafraidI'lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo"Ifyouareme，wouldyoutalktohim"Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.GracePassage9(2015·)Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld，soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.Ataparty，mycoach，withabiscuitinhismouth，askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked，"Imighthavetoretireagainne*tyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.〞Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!Passage10(2015·)Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft­handsideoftheclass，Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings，itwasfullofstudentse*ercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance，Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom，Iwillneverforgetit.Passage11(2014·新课标全国Ⅰ)Nearlyfiveyearsbefore，andwiththehelpbyourfather，mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen－foralltheseyear－wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself­seedwheretheyplease.Asresult，theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize，butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear，butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!Passage12(2014·)IwastakingatraintoLondon'sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.Beforelong，atraininspectorcomestocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn'tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket，whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticket­ownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed，theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.Passage13(2014·)Hello，boysandgirls！Today，Iamgoingtotalkwithwhatyoushoulddowhenafirealarmgooff.Ifyouhearthealarm，standinlineatthedoorandwaityourteachertoleadyououtside.Stayclosetoyourteacherandclassmate.Don'tpanicorgetoutofline，andtryingtoremainquietandcalmly.Soonthefirefighterswillcomeandputoutafire.Ifit'safalsealarmandthereisnofire，yourteacherwillleadusbacktotheclassroom.Ifyounoticethatwhensomeoneismissingandhurt，tellyourteacherimmediately.Passage14(2014·)MyfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttimewhenIwasseven.Hewantedteachmeaboutanimals，insectsandtrees.Myunclesallcomealongwithbowsandarrowsforhunting.Oneeveningatsunset，wesatbythefire，haveourbarbecue.Justthenabirdwasflyingoverus.Myunclesimmediatejumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird.Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget.Suddenlythearrowswasflyingdownatusfromthesky－theywerelookedlikerain！Werantoescapebutfortunatelynoonewasinjured.ThatdayIdidn'tlearnmuchaboutanimals，insectsortrees，butIlearntaimpressivelessonaboutgravity!Passage15(2014·)DearJeremyandAlice，Althoughwe'vebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors，we'rehopingtosettlesomethingthatbotherstous.Inaword，yourdog—Cleo.We'vecalledseveraltimeaboutCleo'searlymorningbarking.Itisdifficulttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe'soutside.Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.Beside，Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsi*hoursaday.Thismorningshestartsbarkingevenbefore5o'clock.Thatistoomuchforus，consideringhowcloselythehousesare.Weappreciateourapologiesandgoodwill，butwehopethatyoucanfigureagoodwayofsettlingthematter.Sincerely，JackandRoseB组2016～2015模拟精选题Passage1(2016·山西重点中学协作体模拟)HavingagoodteacherdomeanalottousstudentsandIamluckyenoughtohavetheone—MissBrown,myEnglishteacher.MissBrownisacharmingladyalwayswornabigsmileonherface.InthefirstclasssheintroducedherandthenaskedustosaysomethingaboutourselveswithEnglish.Whenitwasmyturn,IfelttooshyandfearfulthatIdidn’tdaretosayaword.Shecameuptomeandsaid,"Don’tafraid.Youcanmakeit.Justhaveatry.〞Atlast,Ididitquitegood.ShepraisedmeforthatIhaddone.NevershallIforgotmyfirstEnglishclassinseniorhighschool.Passage2(2016·汉中市二次质检)Smilingisauniversallanguagebutcangiveuscourage,confidenceandcomfort.IstillrememberhowupsetIamwhenitwasmyturntoreciteapoembeforeclass.Feelnervousandshy,Iforgotalmosteverything.Idecidedtogiveup,butallmyclassmates,especialmyteacherkeptsmilingatmeencouragingly.TheirsmilewarmedmesomuchthatIgotoverthedifficultyandeventuallymadeitup.Ithinksmilingnotonlymakesushappybutalsohelpbuildupourconfidence.Furthermore,theywillimprovetherelationshipbetweenus.Itissmilingthatbringsharmonyus.Onlywhenyousmileattheworlddoestheworldsmileatyou.Therefore,keepsmilingandshowyourbesttotheworld.Passage3(2016·临沂一模)ThismorningIsawoffmyauntatrailwaystation.Thereweremanypassengerinthewaitingroom.Isawanoldladycryingsadbecauseshehadlostherticketandnotabletoaffordanotherone.Iwasthinkingabouthelpingherwhenamancomeuptocomforther.Thenheboughtheraticketwithhisownmoney.TheoldLadywassomovingthatshecouldhardlysayaword.Shegraspedhishandandaskedforhisnameoraddress.Butheonlysmileandsaid，"It’smypleasure.〞Thenheleftawayquickly.Iwasgreatlymovedbysuchamanhewarmedotherswithhislove.Passage4(2016·株洲市质检)HiLana，Iam61yearsoldandIamfromNewZealand.IstartteachinginChinalastFebruary.IdecidedthatIreached60yearsIwouldliketodosomethingdifferent.IwasluckytohavegotadegreeinEnglish,thathelpedmefindajobasateacherinChina.NowIworkwithtwoCanadianteacher.One,57,hasbeenhereforfouryears,andtheother,63,havebeenteachingherefor6years.HemarriedwithalovelyChineselady.TheChinesepeoplearehard－workingbutthestudentsaresowillingtolearn.Howaninterestingcountrytolivein!IfeelsaferherethananywhereIlived.Ihavefoundhertipsonteachingsousefully.Thankyou!DavePassage5(2016·宁夏六盘山二模)DearJoe，Thanksforyoumail.I’mgladtoknowyouwereinterestedinthe2017FloridaWinterCamp.ItwillbeheldfromJanuary27toFebruary13,duringthattimeyouwillgetawonderfule*perience.YouwillhavechancestoimproveyourspeakingEnglishinthecoursesprovided.Also,activityarearrangedforyoutospendweekendstogetherwithyourhostfamily,butyoucanlearnAmericanEnglishinauthenticsituations.However,atriptothelocalDisneylandwillcertainaddupthefunofthecamp.JoininthecampandyouwillhavetheknowledgeofAmericancultureandlife.Youaresuretobenefitfromit.Yourstruly，LiHuaPassage6(2016·漳州八校联考)DearPeter，Iamwritingtoaskthatyouareabletodomeafavor.Iwanttohaveapenfriend，hopefully，agirlinherearlytwenties，andwithinterestssimilarlytomine.Inmymind，heissomeoneinterestingintraveling，swimming，andplayingtabletennis.However，itwouldbebetterforhertohaveapetdogasIhavebeenkeptoneathomeforsometime.Withsuchapenfriend，IhopeIcansharewithheroure*periencesintraveling，takingcarepets，orwhateverwehaveincommon.IbelievedIwillimprovemyEnglishbydoingsoandlearnmoreabouthercountries.Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyousoon.Bestregards，LiHuaPassage7(2015·潍坊3月)DearJack，Welcometomyschool！Uponyourarrival，therewillbeapartyforyouorganizingbymyclassmates.YoumayattendtoEnglishclassestofeeladifferentlylearningstyle.Afterthat，youcangotoyourhostfamilythatyoucane*periencetheChinesewayoflife.Youcanhavemealstogetherchattingaboutwhateverinterestyou.Thehostfamilywillalsoshowyouoffsomefamousscenicspots.Youcanseepeoplesellingkiteseverywherebecauseourcitywashometokites.Therearevarietiesofkitestochoose.Soisn’tthatagoodideatobuysomeforyourfriends？Writetomeunlessyouhaveanyquestionsabouttheschedule.Yours，LiHuaPassage8(2015·大连一模)Inthesummerholiday，wetravelledtoQingdaoandpaidvisittomyunclethere.It’salongandboredjourney.ButthemomentIarrived，Ifallinlovewiththecity.It’ssuchbeautifulacitythatIcanhardlyfindanywordtodescribeit.Thestreetsarecleaningandtheskyisblue.Ifyouwalkalongthecoast，youcanfeelthewindtoblowingonyourface.Theseaisvastandsometimesyoucanfindaboatoraship.Youmayalsodosomefishingasfarasitispermitted.Moreover，Ithinkthedrivertheredrivetoofastinthestreet.Youcanneverbetoocarelesswhencrossingthestreet.Passage9(2015·山东省实验中学模拟)Asweallknow，everyonehaveadream.IhavedreamedofbeingadoctorsinceIenteredintotheprimaryschool.Nowadayswithmodernlifegorapidly，manypeoplesufferfromdifferentkindofdiseases，bothmentallyandphysically.Asaresult，doctorsareingreatneedathomeandabroad.Mydreamistobecomesuccessfuldoctor，helpingtosavepeople’slives.Althoughtobeagooddoctorwasverydifficult，IwilldowhateverIcantokeepeveryonehealth.Tomakemydreamcometrue，IhavetoldmeoverandoveragainthatI’llconcentratemoretostudies.Afterall，onlybyworkinghardlycanonesucceed.Passage10(2015·泰安期末)I’dliketogiveyousomeadvicesonhowtolearnChinesewell.First，itwasimportanttotakeaChinesecourse，asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpractisingwithyourfellowstudents.Then，italsohelptowatchTVandreadbooks，newspapersandmagazinesintheChinesewheneverpossible.ItwillmakeyoufamiliartoChinesecharactersandenlargeyourvocabularyevenbeforeyounoticeit!Besides，itisagoodidealearnandsingChinesesongs，becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasy.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends，theywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrytospeakChineseasmanyaspossible.参考答案A组2016～2014年各省市高考题〔改编〕Passage1Myuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetoeq\f(that,where)Ilive.Thoughnotverybig，eq\a\vs4\al(but)theRestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleeveneq\f(had,have)towaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessiseq\f(honest,honesty).Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetableseq\f(or,and)highqualityoilareeq\f(using,used)forcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichineq\f(the,a)shortperiodoftime.Instead，hehopesthateq\f(our,his)businesswillgroweq\f(steady,steadily).1．that→where[考察宾语从句的连词用法。由句子构造可知，介词to之后为宾语从句。从句谓语是不及物动词live。故用where引导。]2．去掉but[考察附属连词与并列连词。附属连词though不可与并列连词but连用。]3．had→have[考察语境中的时态运用。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般现在时。]4．honest→honesty[考察名词作表语。由句意"他成功的关键是诚信〞可知应当用名词形式。]5．or→and[考察并列连词的用法。根据句意可知二者之间为并列关系而非选择关系。]6．using→used[考察固定短语的用法。beusedfor"用来做〞，为固定短语。]7．在dreams之后加上of或about[考察短语动词。固定短语dreamof/about(doing)sth.的意思是"梦想做*事〞。]8．the→a[考察代词的用法。inashortperiodoftime为固定词组，意思是"短时间内〞。]9．our→his[考察冠词的用法。短文介绍了myuncle诚信经营餐馆的事情，故将our改为his。]10．steady→steadily[考察副词的用法。修饰谓语动词用副词。]Passage2答案Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouteq\f(how,what)tododuringtheholiday.Wecaneq\f(chose,choose)betweenstayingathomeandeq\f(take,taking)atrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortableeq\f(but,and)thereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadeneq\f(your,our)viewandgaineq\f(knowledges,knowledge)wecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestweeq\f(can,\a\vs4\al(can)/或should)gotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ieq\f(thought,think)thatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcosteq\f(many,much)，yetwecanstilllearnalot.1．how→what[考察疑问词的用法。我和同学正在谈论假期里做什么。固定表达whattodo，如果用how构造为howtodosth.]2．chose→choose[考察动词形式。根据语法知识可知，情态动词can后要用动词原形。]3．take→taking[考察非谓语动词的用法。此处为between...and...构造，根据前面的stayingathome可知，此处也要用动名词形式，与前面保持一致。]4．but→and[考察连词的用法。如果呆在家里，感觉舒适，还不花钱。根据句意可知，此处应是并列关系，而不是转折关系。]5．world前加the[考察定冠词的用法。此处特指我们所生活的这个世界。]6．your→our[考察形容词性物主代词的用法。根据前面的主语we可知，此处要用our，表示"我们能够开阔我们的视野〞。]7．knowledges→knowledge[考察不可数名词的用法。knowledge为不可数名词，没有复数形式。]8．去掉can或can→should[考察虚拟语气。suggest表示"建议〞，后面的宾语从句要用shoulddo形式，should可以省略，故答案有两种改法。]9．thought→think[考察一般现在时的用法。我认为这是一个好主意。根据上下文可知，此处并不是过去的看法，而是现在的看法。]10．many→much[考察代词的用法。这样不会花很多钱。costmuch花费很多。此处也可理解为muchmoney的省略。]Passage3答案Theteenageeq\f(year,years)from13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandeq\f(worse,worst)yearsinmylife.Ateq\a\vs4\al(the)first，IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyeq\f(yourself,myself).However，myparentsdidn’tseemtothinkeq\f(such,so).Theyalwayseq\f(tell,told)mewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime，Ieverfeltmyparentscouldn’tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbeeq\f(freely,free)fromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbyeq\f(wear,wearing)strangeclothes.NowIamleavinghomeeq\f(to,for)college.Atlast，Iwillbeonmyown，butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.【语篇导读】本文主要讲述了青少与父母之间的关系。1．year→years[此处指13～19岁的年龄，故用复数。]2．worse→worst[与前面的best并列，此处应用最高级。]3．去掉the[atfirst固定短语。]4．yourself→myself[根据句意，此处指"我自己〞。]5．such→so[so指已经提到的事。]6．tell→told[此处应用过去时态。]7．freely→free[此处应用形容词作表语。]8．wear→wearing[此处用动名词作介词的宾语。]9．to→for[固定搭配leavefor去……。]10．whenever后加I[whenever引导状语从句，从句缺少主语I。]Passage4答案ItisMother’sDaytoday.Thoughit’sawesternfestival,it’spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull－timejob，eq\f(so,but)shehastodomostoftheeq\f(houseworks,housework).Sheisagreatmother.BothDadeq\f(or,and)IplannedtodosomethingonMother’sDay.Weeq\f(get,got)upearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse，andthenwenteq\a\vs4\al(on)shopping.Whenhecameback，Ifoundabunchofflowersineq\f(her,his)hand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.Thedisheseq\f(what,which/that/\a\vs4\al(what))IcookedwereMom’seq\f(favoritest,favorite).Atdinner，wesaidtoher，"HappyMother’sDay！〞Momwasgratefulandeq\f(moving,moved).1．so→but[前后句之间为转折关系。]2．houseworks→housework[housework是不可数名词。]3．or→and[both...and是固定搭配。]4．get→got[这里说的是发生在过去的事情，因此用一般过去时。]5．去掉on[goshopping去买东西。]6．her→his[爸爸去购物，从句主语是he，因此物主代词形式用his。]7．kitchen前加the[上文虽未提及kitchen，但听话者一定知其所指，因此，kitchen前加定冠词。]8．what→which/that或去掉what[引导定语从句，并在从句中作宾语，指物，用关系代词that/which，也可省略。]9．favoritiest→favorite[favorite为无等级形容词。]10．moving→moved[moving多用来修饰事物，moved用来指人。]Passage5答案WhenIwasaveryyoungeq\f(children,child)，myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearseq\f(late,later).Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday，we’dgreeteq\f(her,him)atthedoor.Hewouldaskwhoweeq\f(was,were)andpretendnottoeq\f(knowing,know)us.Thenheandmymotherwouldhaveeq\a\vs4\al(had)adrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheyeq\f(chat,chatted)，myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositeq\f(in,on)thetopofthefridge.Itwasbotheq\f(e*cited,e*citing)andfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.1．children→child[因为前面有不定冠词a，所以这里用单数。故children改成child。]2．late→later[late是形容词"迟的〞，或副词"迟地〞，但是"一段时间后面应该接later〞，表示"……时间以后〞。故late改成later。]3．at后面加the[attheendof为固定搭配。]4．her→him[根据上文可知我们每天在门口迎接爸爸。用him指代myfather，作greet的宾语。故her改成him。]5．was→were[这句话的主语是we，谓语用复数，而且这篇文章是作者回忆小时候的事情，用一般过去时。故was改成were。]6．knowing→know[pretend后面接不定式作宾语，这里是否认式pretendnottodo。故knowing改成know。]7．去掉had[woulddo表示"过去常常做〞。]8．chat→chatted[根据主句内容myfatherwouldliftmysister可知while引导的时间状语从句用一般过去时。故chat改成chatted。]9．in→on[onthetopof...为固定搭配，意为"在……顶部〞。故in改成on。]10．e*cited→e*citing[这句话的主语是形式主语it，真正的主语是tobeupthere，主语是物的时候，表语应该用现在分词形式的形容词。故e*cited改成e*citing。]Passage6答案WhenIwasachild，Ihopedtoliveinthecity.Ieq\f(think,thought)Iwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity，butImissmyhomein∧thecountryside.Theretheairiscleaneq\f(or,and)themountainsaregreen.Unfortunately，eq\f(on,with)thedevelopmentofindustrialization，theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshaveeq\a\vs4\al(been)shownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryeq\f(seriously,serious)problem.Theeq\f(airs,air)webreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.eq\f(Much,Many)rareanimalsaredyingout.Wemusteq\f(found,find)waystoprotecteq\f(your,our/the)environment.Ifwefailtodoso，we'lllivetoregretit.1．think→thought[考察动词的时态。根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故用一般过去时态。]2．countryside前加the[考察冠词的用法。inthecountryside(在乡村)为固定短语。]3．or→and[考察并列词的用法。那儿的空气干净，群山葱绿。由句意可知两个分句之间显然为并列关系，而非选择关系。]4．on→with[考察介词的用法。withthedevelopmentof...为一固定短语，意思是"随着……的开展〞。]5．去掉been[考察被动语态的用法。众多研究说明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。由句意可知，studies和谓语show之间为主动关系，故要用主动语态。]6．seriously→serious[考察形容词的用法。修饰名词problem应当用形容词。]7．airs→air[考察不可数名词的用法。air作"空气〞讲时为不可数名词。]8．Much→Many[考察代词的用法。Animals为可数名词复数，故用many。]9．found→find[考察情态动词的用法。情态动词后面要接动词原形。]10．your→our[考察语境中代词的用法。依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知your与上下文相悖，结合句意应当改为our/the才能使句意通顺。]Passage7答案Oneday，littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhiseq\f(parent,parents).Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyeq\f(on,in)ashopwindow.Helikeditsoeq\a\vs4\al(very)muchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Aftereq\f(looks,looking)atthetoyforsometime，heturnedaroundandfoundeq\f(where,that或where)hisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandeq\f(begun,began)tocry.Awomansawhimcryingandeq\f(telling,told)himtowaitoutsideeq\f(a,the)shop.Fiveminuteslater，Tonysaweq\o(\s\up7(∧,his)parents.Momsaid，"Hownicetoseeyouagain！DadandIwereeq\f(terrible,terribly)worried.〞Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.1．parent→parents[考察名词复数。由第五句中的"hisparentsweremissing.〞可知此处应当用复数形式。]2．on→in[考察介词的用法。玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的，故用介词in。]3．去掉very[考察固定句型的用法。由语境可知，托尼非常喜欢这个玩具，于是快速走进商店。so...that...为固定句型，意思是"如此……以致于……〞，故去掉very。]4．looks→looking[考察省略的用法。After之后省去了主语he，he与lookat之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，故应当用现在分词。]5．去掉where或where→that[考察宾语从句连接词的用法。动词found之后为宾语从句，从句为系表构造，意思完整，故将where去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的that。]6．begun→began[考察并列谓语的用法。由句子构造可知，begin与wasscared并列，因此，要用一般过去时。]7．telling→told[考察并列谓语的用法。有一位妇女看到他哭泣就告诉他去商店外面等。由句意可知，tell这一动作是这个妇女发出的，应当与saw构成并列谓语。故改用told。]8．a→the[考察冠词的用法。表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词。]9．saw后加his[考察物主代词的用法。根据句意及英语表达习惯，应当在parents前加上与主语相一致的物主代词。]10．terrible→terribly[考察副词的用法。形容词worried之前要用副词来修饰。]Passage8答案Hi,Janice，It'sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywant∧tosharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeene*periencing.AsIeq\f(tell,told)youlasttime,Imadethreeneweq\f(friend,friends)here.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We'vebeenspendingalotoftimeeq\f(sing,singing)inkaraokebars.It'sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmeeq\f(many,much).AndIstartedtoseethisasatime－wastingactivity!Infact，Idon'tliketogoanymore,eq\f(so,but)I'mafraidI'lllosetheirfriendship.eq\f(How,What)doyouthinkIshoulddo"Ifyoueq\f(are,were)me，wouldyoutalktoeq\f(him,them)？Pleasehelpeq\a\vs4\al(with)meandgivemesomeadvice.Grace1．[考察动词want的用法，want后用不定式作状语，故加上to。]want后加to2．[考察时态。根据时间状语lasttime可知，此句需用一般过去时，故把tell改成told。句意：正如我上次告诉你的那样。]tell→told3．[考察名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。句意：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。]friend→friends4．[考察动名词作宾语。本句考察句型spend...(in)doingsth构造，故把sing改成singing。]sing→singing5．[考察代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。句意：那真的花费很多。]many→much6．[考察连词。上一分句句意：我不想再去；下一分句句意：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。]so→but7．[考察疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，故用what。]How→What8．[考察虚拟语气。根据句意可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不符，故把are改成were。句意：如果你是我，……。]are→were9．[考察代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them。句意：你会和他们说吗？]him→them10．[考察动词。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。句意：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。]去掉withPassage9答案Mysoccercoachretiredeq\a\vs4\al(in)lastweek.Iwantedtodoeq\f(anything,something)specialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakestheeq\f(better,best)biscuitsintheworld，soIeq\f(decide,decided)toaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasiceq\f(step,steps)ofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallyeq\f(well,good).MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeontheflooreq\f(after,when/while)Iwaspackingthemup.Ateq\f(a,the)party，mycoach，withabiscuitinhismouth，askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked，"Imighthavetoretireagainne*tyearjust∧,to)getsomemoreofthesebiscuits.〞Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeeq\f(enjoy,enjoying)thebiscuitswithhappylaughter!1．去掉in[lastweek上个星期，前面无需加冠词。]2．anything→something[something用在肯定句中，表示"一些事〞，anything"任何事〞。]3．better→best[我的妈妈做了世界上最好吃的饼干，此处不是比较含义，应是最高级(best)。]4．decide→decided[全文的时态都是一般过去时，故把decide改为decided。]5．step→steps[根据前面的some，step应该是复数形式。]6．well→good[作表语的是形容词good，well是副词，作状语。]7．after→when/while[我唯一所犯的错误就是当我包装饼干的时候，掉在地上一些。when/while当……的时候，after在……之后。]8．a→the[此处表特指，attheparty在晚会上。]9．just后加to[动词不定式表示目的，我也许得再退休一次，能吃到更多的饼干。]10．enjoy→enjoying[and连接两个并列的(动)名词，enjoy是动词，所以改成enjoying。]Passage101．第一句：side→sides[考察名词的复数形式。前面有three修饰，故要用复数形式。]2．第一句：from→of[考察固定表达。bemadeof是指不经过加工，能直接看出原材料；bemadefrom是指经过加工，不能直接看出原料。]3．第二句：sit→sitting[考察非谓语动词。动词enjoy后要接动名词作宾语。]4．第三句：easy→easily[考