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读后续写练习写作指导讲义阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Ineedtodosomethinginmycommunityinordertocompletethecommunityservicehoursrequiredtograduatefromhighschool.Someofmyfriendshadsigneduptospendtimeatasoupkitchen,soIdid,too.Itseemedlikeagoodthingtodo.Ithoughtthatwewouldjustbepassingoutdinnerstothoseinneed,butIfoundoutwewouldbedoingeverythingmixthesaladdressingandassignvegetableandmeat.Asthelineofpeoplecametowardme,Igotalittlescared.I'dcomefacetofacewiththehomeless.HowshouldIact?Howwouldtheytreatme?Wouldtheyhatemeforhavingmorethantheydid?Whilesomeofthepeoplelookedveryfriendly,someofthemlookedsodangerous.Ididn'thavetoomuchtimetoworryaboutit.Iwasassigned（分酉己）toservethesaladwiththeladynexttome.ShesmiledatmeandsaidifIneededhelp,she'dberightthere,whichIfoundquitecomforting.Ihadneverseensomanypeoplewantingfood.Theywereofallagesandnationalities.Mostofthemworeclothesthatweretornanddirty.Somelookedliketheyhadtotallygivenuponlife,whileothersseemedtobemakingthebestofthesituation,smilingandjoking.Somewerebetteroffthanothers,buttheyallneededagoodmealtoeatandawarmplacetolivein.Itsaddenedmetothinkofhowmanypeopletherewerewhodidn'thaveaplacetocallhomeandtheonlyfoodtheygotcamefromasoupkitchen.注意：.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Astheycameinmydirection,Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile.Paragraph2:IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway.写作解析■前文分析・人物>1:-needtodosomethinginmycommunityinordertocompletethecommunityservicehoursrequiredtograduatefromhighschool>thelady：-smiledatmeandsaidifIneededhelp,she,dberightthere,whichIfoundquitecomforting.>thehomeless：-wantingfood-ofallagesandnationalities-woretornanddirtyclothes-totallygivenuponlifeormakingthebestofthesituation-allneededagoodmealtoeatandawarmplacetolivein・主题人与社会：社区服务・主要情节为了毕业，需要完成社区服务时间，跟其他同学一样，我也去了soupkitchen（施舍处/施粥场）做义工。起初感觉上还好也就是分发食物，但是事实上差不多什么事都要做，而且看到那么多穿着破烂的无家可归者出现在面前的时候，我的心里开始多了几分忐忑，有些看上去很友善，有些给人的感觉不太安全，有些看上去基本对生活失去希望，有些却非常乐观。不管如何，我还是要硬着头皮把工作做好。与这些无家可归者接触了之后，我的内心极不平静。■下文分析・续写两段：＞段1：Astheycameinmydirection,Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile....＞段2：IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway....・续写主线“不了解（为了完成社区服务时间”）一“了解（参与服务）”一“主动参与（组建小组，开展活动）”•两段情节安排A段1:①开始忐忑地分发食物（与开头句衔接；突出无家可归者的生活中的“恩格尔系数”更高，所以写更喜欢“吃肉”）②无家可归者的表现让我放下戒备之心（为了回应上文中自己的几个疑问）③社区服务进展顺利（为了与段2开头句衔接）＞段2：①简单回顾并对这样的社区服务持肯定态度（与开头句中的happy相对应和衔接）②参加社区服务的收获③为了更好地帮助这里无家可归者，与前文中提到的thelady一起创建了一个慈善小组，去做更多的事情。（从对社区服务的“不了解”到“了解”再到“组织开展活动”，以期实现“主题升华”）范文Paragraph1:Astheycameinmydirection,Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile.Andthen,Ibegantodistributehamburgerswiththemeat,whichwerebadlyinneed,withalittlenervousness.Buttomygreatrelief,thosehomelesswereinaquietwell-orderedqueue,waitingforthefoodtobedelivered.Sohungryweresomethattheybegantoeatthefoodaftergettingit,whilesomejusttookitaway.WhatmovedmemostwasthatIreceivedhundredsoffriendlythanks.Indeed,onecouldn'tbejudgedbyhisclothes.Allinall,mycommunityservicewentsmoothly.（87words）Paragraph2:IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway.Ttwasworthspendingthetimeatthesoupkitchen,notonlyformyselfbutforthosespecialpeopleinlife.WhatIgotwasapreciousexperienceofadeepdipintosociety,learningmoreaboutpeoplelivinginthebottom,whomightfallintotroublefordifferentreasons.Istro