校内公开课短文改错总结市公开课一等奖省名师优质课赛课一等奖课件

ProofReading1.SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyself.2.I’msureyouwillfindoneyoulikeit..3.Ilikeplayingpiano.the错词∧talking改错格式多词缺词

Deardiary,

HereIaminthemiddleofacity,350milesfarawayfromourfarmland.Doyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?Dadlosthisjob,andasMumexplained,Hewasluckytofindotherone.HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.Tomademattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.Iamawfullytiring,butIknowI’llneverfallsleep.

Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.YoursRosemarymovedanotherclassmatesandworse∧the/mytiredasleepare-改错考点分配年份名词冠词形容词副词代词主谓一致介词连词动词词组时态非谓语动词121021012141020011231011011231101011改错分类一.名词、冠词二.动词（谓语动词和非谓语动词）三.连词四.代词五.引导词Ihopeallmystudentcanbeadmittedintocollege.Nowadays,almosteveryfamilyhascomputer,and…Tianmaschoolwillgiveyoualltheknowledgesyouneed.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrella.students∧a一．名词和冠词

1.指名词单、复数形式使用方法错误。2.冠词a,an和the使用方法错误．knowledgeannowIwasamemberofourschoolfootballteam.Nowmymathandchineseteacher

are

inmyhome.Ofcourse,whenmymotherwasasked,“Haveyou…”amis_____二．动词1.谓语动词主要包含两类错误：动词时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致错误。比如：1.ItwasthefirsttimeIhavebeentoHongkong.

2.NotonlythestudentsbutalsotheteacherlikeLeeMinho.

hadlikes3.Tianmaschoolconsideredasoneofthemostbeautifulschools.∧is

1.Playbasketballmakesusgrowuptallandstrong2.Myparentsloveme…andwilldoalltheycanmakesure…3.Givingmoretime,wecoulddoitmuchbetter.

toplaying∧Given2．非谓语动词

1.不定式2.动名词作主语、宾语3.and连接不定式或动名词前后一致4.现在分词和过去分词区分等非谓语动词细区分

1.Wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories..

2.Igotupearlycatchtheearlybus.3.ItisdifficulttomakeyourselfunderstandinEnglish.understoodvisited∧to注：名词动词修饰词Iamsurewe'llhaveawonderfullytimetogether.Wecanhearbirdssinginghappyallaround.wonderfulhappily１修饰名词、系动词要用形容词；２修饰动词、形容词、整个句子用副词；３比较级和最高级使用。

4.形容词ed形式与ing形式1.Ineverspentamoreworriedday.2.Shesaidthathersonworkedhappythereeveryday.3.Thisisamostbeautifulpark.Ihaveneverseenabestonebefore.4.Theylookforanimmediatelypleasurefromadangenousactivityworryinghappilybetterimmediate

连词but，and，or,so和although等使用方法错误．1.I’msorry,andIwon’tbeabletocometonight.but三.连词1.She'ssmilingatmebutnoddingatme.2.Iplanedtogiveitbacktoyoubeforefourintheafternoon，andIwasholduponmywayback.

3.Itlooksasifmyparentstreatmeasavisitorandaguest.butandor四．代词1.人称代词误用2.人称代词格误用3.反身代词误用myself

their__1.Ijustsmiledtomeandthought,"WhatcanIdo.Weareguestsafterall."2.Somestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.3.Itwasaboutnoonwhenwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.us

Icannotmakesenseofthathesaidatthemeeting.

IliveinBeijing,whereisthecapitalofChina.Atlast,weachievedourgoalsandhedidthathesaid

Thequestionisifthefilmisworthseeing.

whatwhich___五.从句引导词复合句中从句关系词或引导词利用是否得当______what__whether6：介词IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.Iwasreallydisappointedandabouttoleavewhenhewalkedoutabuilding.of（短语固定搭配；句型）ThismorningIfoundredwalletonthecampus.Girlsusuallikered,soIbelievedthewalletwasbelongedtoagirlstudent.Iopenedit,trytofindoutwhoseitwas.Therefore,Ifoundnothingbut300yuaninit.IwaswonderingwhattodowithitwhilesuddenlymyclassmatesChenYangpassedby.Shesuggestedsheputup