上课用高考短文改错公开课课件

ProofReading

短文改错生活中，人人都会犯错，有错就知改。写作中，人人也会犯错，有错也要改。ProofReading

短文改错生活中，人人都会犯错，有PlayagameFindthewrongwordsandcorrectthem.BestrictatsbBeresponsiblewithsb/sthBeinbusinessHavesthoncommonHaveaneffectinsbLosetheheartMakeagreatprogressThewarwasbrokeoutTheaccidentwashappenedInthehurrySharesthforsbApairofshoeAlotofequipmentsGeneralspeakingAssoonaspossiblywithforoninontheawaswasawithShoesequipmentGenerallypossiblePlayagameFindthewrongwordWhatisproofreading?知短文改错则百战不殆1.correctsomegrammarmistakes2.connectionbetweensentences3.themainideaofthewholepassageWhatisproofreading?知短文改错则设错方式？改错格式？多词缺词错词

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。设错方式？改错格式？多词缺词错词假定英改错步骤1.Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(浏览全文，掌握大意）2.Readthepassagesentencebysentence

andfindthegrammarmistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）3.Readthepassageagain,checkyouranswers.（检查核对，敲定终稿）改错步骤1.Gothroughthewholepa6

Ioftendreamofateacher.Idreamofstandingonthe______platformintheclassroomandgivelessonstolovelyboys.______andgirls.Iteachthem,playwiththem,butwatchthem.______growingup.IamalwaysyoungwhenIwasstaying.______withthem.Iknowthereisnoteasytobeateacher.You.______havetolearninordertoteach.Withoutenoughknowledges.______youcanneverlearnwell.Whatismore,youhavetobe.______friendswithyourpupilsandtakegoodcareofhim..______Onlyinthiswaycanyouareagoodteacherandwin______respectfromthem.ThoughIamastudentnow,Iwillworkasveryhardtomakemydreamcometrue. ______∧beinggivingandamitknowledgeteachthembeHomework--Checkyouranswers

6IoftendreamofateacheHowmanykindsofmistakesinthisProofReading?HowmanykindsofmistakesinHowmanykindsofmistakesinthisProofReading?ProofReading动词名词冠词代词连词介词形容.副词Howmanykindsofmistakesin近5年全国新课标卷短文改错题考点一览表

考查内容时间动词名词介词连词冠词代词形容词副词2010年312111012011年322110102012年312102012013年322110102014年11111023近5年全国新课标卷短文改错题考点一览表考查内容小组合作，讨论学案中的突破考点内容Discussingroups3minutesQuickly!小组合作，讨论学案中Discussingroups3mi

小试牛刀1.(2010全国）Ontheboxwasacardsay“25centseach”2.TheGreatWallofChinaisoneofthelargestconstructionprojectsevercomplete.3.(2012全国)Iwinanationalprizeforpaintinglastweek.4.(2013全国)TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.5.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.6.Amongthepark’streesthereareasciencehall,anartcentre,agym,…and…sayingwondrunkcompletedholdis一、动词小试牛刀1.(2010全国）Ontheboxwas

归纳总结错误主要错在时态、语态、主谓一致、动词短语、非谓语动词（todo/doing/done）归纳总结错误主要错在时态、语态、主谓一致、动词短语、非谓

小试牛刀1.(2010全国)Iftheyhadsaidwastrue,Iwouldhaveachanceofwinningtheprize.2.(13全国)Infact,mygrandfatherevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.3.IwillbeverygladwhetherIcanworkwithyou.whatwhenififwhether如果条件状语从句是否及物动词后的宾语从句且没有ornot是否通常引导名词性从句二、连词小试牛刀1.(2010全国)Iftheyhads

小试牛刀

归纳总结错误主要错在并列连词和从属连词的漏用和错用，上下文逻辑关系理解错用4.(2011全国)Iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybag

fromthefloorandthenIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit.5.Ireceivedmymother’scalltellingmeshewouldcome,butIhadtocanceltheappointmentswithyou.andso小试牛刀归纳总结错误主要错在并列连词和从属连词的

小试牛刀1.(2011全国)Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.2.(2014全国)WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.3.AfterlearningEnglishforseveralyears,Ihavemadeagreatprogress.4.IfIchoosetotakeanextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforanother30minutes.

5.Allinall,Joeyisaveryspecialdogbecausehehasovercomeunpleasantstartinlife.luggagecupsthean三、名词四、冠词小试牛刀1.(2011全国)Itfeltverys名词错误主要错在单复数；可数与不可数；

归纳总结冠词错误主要错在泛指与特指；a.an.the混用漏用和多用名词错误主要错在单复数；可数与不可数；归纳总结冠词错

小试牛刀1.(2012全国)MyfatherwassopleasingthathesuggestedIgotoEnglandforaholiday.2.(2014全国)Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.3.(2014全国)Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost.五、形容副词pleasedtasty4.BeingamemberoftheStudents’Unionmakesmecapableoforganizingvariousactivities.However,IamconvincedthatIcankeeptheclassorganizedandlively.Therefore5.Wegaveourthankstoourteacherswhohadbeeneducatinguspatient.patientlywonderful小试牛刀1.(2012全国)Myfatherwas

归纳总结错误主要错在词性错用，副词混用；原级、比较级最高级的混用归纳总结错误主要错在词性错用，副词混用；原级、比较

小试牛刀1.(2010全国)Beforeherleaving,Ipreparedagifttoshowmybestwishestohim.2.Tomakemydreamcometrue,IhavetoldmeoverandoveragainthatI’llconcentratemoreonstudies.3.Every

year

more

and

more

people

start

a

stamp

collection

of

your

own.

归纳总结错误主要错在六、代词hermyself指代错误；人称代词和反身代词的误用；主格宾格；关系代词和连接代词（复合句，名词性、定语从句）their小试牛刀1.(2010全国)Beforeherlea

小试牛刀1.(2011全国)LuckilyIhadallmymoneyonmypocket.2.(2014全国)Nearlyfiveyearsagoandwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoesinourbackgarden.

归纳总结

错误主要错在七、介词inof固定搭配小试牛刀1.(2011全国)LuckilyIhad聚沙成塔---Summary动词时态和语态主谓一致勿忘记还要注意非谓语名词多考单复数连词并列和从属上下逻辑要清楚形容副词看词性代词前后要一致介词搭配要记牢还有冠词a/an/the改完复查敲定稿聚沙成塔---Summary动词时态和语态Attention三不改四原则标点符号不改字母大小不改词语顺序不改以保持句子原义为原则改动以最少为原则实词以改变词形为原则虚词以添加或删除为原则Attention三不改四原则标点符号不改以保持句子原义为原做完能力提升中的单句改错和短文改错Challengeyourself!做完能力提升中的单句Challengeyourself!1.MyfriendNicktoldmestoryabouthisexperience

backintheUS,whichwasveryinterested.2.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.3.Sincethen—foralltheseyears—wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.4.TherewasUncleChen,gentlemanlivingnearmyhouse,whowasaverymuchfamouswriter.(2010-2014全国卷)abuyinghasainteresting1.MyfriendNicktoldmestor5.However,myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.6.Forawhilemyparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.7.Howmanytimeshaveyouwalkedoutofaroomandleavethelightsortelevisionwhennooneelsewasthere?flewleftwhat5.However,myfatherhadtorMydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn’tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.2014全国卷短文改错Theredon’tmuchforhourslookssittohelpful固定句型动词介词名词动词冠词动词动词短语形容词形容词Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30Whathaveyoulearnedtoday?Summary7347兄弟3不改4原则Whathaveyoulearnedtoday?Su【解题步骤】1浏览全文，掌握大意2分句阅读，逐行找错3检查核对，攻克难点4规范答题不留空白【解题步骤】1浏览全文，掌握大意2分句阅读，逐行找错3Homework1.Finishthewritinginyourpaperand

correctitbyyourselfintime.2.Trytodotheafter-classexercisesbyusingwhatwehavelearned.

必做部分：选做部分：Homework1.FinishthewritingThemorewepractise,theeasieritwillbe!Themorewepractise,theeasiProofReading

短文改错生活中，人人都会犯错，有错就知改。写作中，人人也会犯错，有错也要改。ProofReading

短文改错生活中，人人都会犯错，有PlayagameFindthewrongwordsandcorrectthem.BestrictatsbBeresponsiblewithsb/sthBeinbusinessHavesthoncommonHaveaneffectinsbLosetheheartMakeagreatprogressThewarwasbrokeoutTheaccidentwashappenedInthehurrySharesthforsbApairofshoeAlotofequipmentsGeneralspeakingAssoonaspossiblywithforoninontheawaswasawithShoesequipmentGenerallypossiblePlayagameFindthewrongwordWhatisproofreading?知短文改错则百战不殆1.correctsomegrammarmistakes2.connectionbetweensentences3.themainideaofthewholepassageWhatisproofreading?知短文改错则设错方式？改错格式？多词缺词错词

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。设错方式？改错格式？多词缺词错词假定英改错步骤1.Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(浏览全文，掌握大意）2.Readthepassagesentencebysentence

andfindthegrammarmistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）3.Readthepassageagain,checkyouranswers.（检查核对，敲定终稿）改错步骤1.Gothroughthewholepa36

Ioftendreamofateacher.Idreamofstandingonthe______platformintheclassroomandgivelessonstolovelyboys.______andgirls.Iteachthem,playwiththem,butwatchthem.______growingup.IamalwaysyoungwhenIwasstaying.______withthem.Iknowthereisnoteasytobeateacher.You.______havetolearninordertoteach.Withoutenoughknowledges.______youcanneverlearnwell.Whatismore,youhavetobe.______friendswithyourpupilsandtakegoodcareofhim..______Onlyinthiswaycanyouareagoodteacherandwin______respectfromthem.ThoughIamastudentnow,Iwillworkasveryhardtomakemydreamcometrue. ______∧beinggivingandamitknowledgeteachthembeHomework--Checkyouranswers

6IoftendreamofateacheHowmanykindsofmistakesinthisProofReading?HowmanykindsofmistakesinHowmanykindsofmistakesinthisProofReading?ProofReading动词名词冠词代词连词介词形容.副词Howmanykindsofmistakesin近5年全国新课标卷短文改错题考点一览表

考查内容时间动词名词介词连词冠词代词形容词副词2010年312111012011年322110102012年312102012013年322110102014年11111023近5年全国新课标卷短文改错题考点一览表考查内容小组合作，讨论学案中的突破考点内容Discussingroups3minutesQuickly!小组合作，讨论学案中Discussingroups3mi

小试牛刀1.(2010全国）Ontheboxwasacardsay“25centseach”2.TheGreatWallofChinaisoneofthelargestconstructionprojectsevercomplete.3.(2012全国)Iwinanationalprizeforpaintinglastweek.4.(2013全国)TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.5.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.6.Amongthepark’streesthereareasciencehall,anartcentre,agym,…and…sayingwondrunkcompletedholdis一、动词小试牛刀1.(2010全国）Ontheboxwas

归纳总结错误主要错在时态、语态、主谓一致、动词短语、非谓语动词（todo/doing/done）归纳总结错误主要错在时态、语态、主谓一致、动词短语、非谓

小试牛刀1.(2010全国)Iftheyhadsaidwastrue,Iwouldhaveachanceofwinningtheprize.2.(13全国)Infact,mygrandfatherevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.3.IwillbeverygladwhetherIcanworkwithyou.whatwhenififwhether如果条件状语从句是否及物动词后的宾语从句且没有ornot是否通常引导名词性从句二、连词小试牛刀1.(2010全国)Iftheyhads

小试牛刀

归纳总结错误主要错在并列连词和从属连词的漏用和错用，上下文逻辑关系理解错用4.(2011全国)Iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybag

fromthefloorandthenIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit.5.Ireceivedmymother’scalltellingmeshewouldcome,butIhadtocanceltheappointmentswithyou.andso小试牛刀归纳总结错误主要错在并列连词和从属连词的

小试牛刀1.(2011全国)Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.2.(2014全国)WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.3.AfterlearningEnglishforseveralyears,Ihavemadeagreatprogress.4.IfIchoosetotakeanextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforanother30minutes.

5.Allinall,Joeyisaveryspecialdogbecausehehasovercomeunpleasantstartinlife.luggagecupsthean三、名词四、冠词小试牛刀1.(2011全国)Itfeltverys名词错误主要错在单复数；可数与不可数；

归纳总结冠词错误主要错在泛指与特指；a.an.the混用漏用和多用名词错误主要错在单复数；可数与不可数；归纳总结冠词错

小试牛刀1.(2012全国)MyfatherwassopleasingthathesuggestedIgotoEnglandforaholiday.2.(2014全国)Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.3.(2014全国)Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost.五、形容副词pleasedtasty4.BeingamemberoftheStudents’Unionmakesmecapableoforganizingvariousactivities.However,IamconvincedthatIcankeeptheclassorganizedandlively.Therefore5.Wegaveourthankstoourteacherswhohadbeeneducatinguspatient.patientlywonderful小试牛刀1.(2012全国)Myfatherwas

归纳总结错误主要错在词性错用，副词混用；原级、比较级最高级的混用归纳总结错误主要错在词性错用，副词混用；原级、比较

小试牛刀1.(2010全国)Beforeherleaving,Ipreparedagifttoshowmybestwishestohim.2.Tomakemydreamcometrue,IhavetoldmeoverandoveragainthatI’llconcentratemoreonstudies.3.Every

year

more

and

more

people

start

a

stamp

collection

of

your

own.

归纳总结错误主要错在六、代词hermyself指代错误；人称代词和反身代词的误用；主格宾格；关系代词和连接代词（复合句，名词性、定语从句）their小试牛刀1.(2010全国)Beforeherlea

小试牛刀1.(2011全国)LuckilyIhadallmymoneyonmypocket.2.(2014全国)Nearlyfiveyearsagoandwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoesinourbackgarden.

归纳总结

错误主要错在七、介词inof固定搭配小试牛刀1.(2011全国)LuckilyIhad聚沙成塔---Summary动词时态和语态主谓一致勿忘记还要注意非谓语名词多考单复数连词并列和从属上下逻辑要清楚形容副词看词性代词前后要一致介词搭配要记牢还有冠词a/an/the改完复查敲定稿聚沙成塔---Summary动词时态和语态Attention三不改四原则标点符号不改字母大小不改词语顺序不改以保持句子原义为原则改动以最少为原则实词以改变词形为原则虚词以添加或删除为原则Attention三不改四原则标点符号不改以保持句子原义为原做完能力提升中的单句改错和短文改错Challengeyourself!做完能力提升中的单句Challengeyourself!1.MyfriendNicktoldmestoryabouthisexperience

backintheUS,whichwasveryinterested.2.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.3.Sincethen—foralltheseyears—wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.4.TherewasUncleChen,gentlemanlivingnearmyhouse,whowasaverymuchfamouswriter.(