安徽2019年中考英语总复习课件：题型8 书面表达

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书面表达

一、认真审题认真审题的目的就是要确定时态及人称,同时关注题材格式。时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要与时间状语一致。如ago,lastnight等用于一般过去时。nextyear,“in+一段时间”等一般用于将来时。人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。例如:Thankstotheteachers,wehaveimprovedourEnglish.其中we和our就是人称的统一。格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。二、找全信息点1.切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再擦掉。2.根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。值得注意的是找全信息点的时候,尤其要紧扣主题,突出重点。三、成文时表述正确英语写作和语文写作一样,文字表述正确还只是基本的要求,文字的流畅程度同样重要。不过有三点依旧需要注意:1.切忌与汉语提示一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。2.首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾、主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,较好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。3.认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。四、认真检查,然后将作文誊写在答题卷上。书写时注意按结构分段,书写力求清晰。典例1(2018·安徽)某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为“Thankyou,myteacher!”的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:1.严格要求;2.耐心指导;3.热情鼓励;4.……注意:1.词数80~100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。写作思路一、审题这是一篇提纲作文,写对老师的感谢。写作注意事项如下:1.本文属于记叙文,文章所用的时态要以一般过去时态或一般现在时态为主;2.人称上以第三人称为主,注意代词的运用;3.注意多使用一些好的句型、句式,以使文章表达流畅,有节奏感。二、可用素材1.词汇:bestrictwith,fail,patient,difficult,dealwith,encourage,help,giveup,makeprogress2.句式:WhenshefoundIwasveryworried,sheencouragedmetostudyharder.Shewasalwayspatienttomakemeunderstandeverysinglequestion.Withherhelp,I’vehadenoughcouragetofacedifficultiesandmademuchprogressinEnglish.Notonlydoessheexplaineverythingclearlybutalsosheisverypatientwithus.One

possible

version:Thank

you,my

teacher!Mrs.LiismyEnglishteacherduringmythree-yearmiddleschoolstudies.Shehasleftaverygoodimpressiononme.Sheisareallywonderfulteacher.Notonlydoessheexplaineverythingclearlybutalsosheisverypatientwithus.Besides,herclassiswellorganizedandinclassshealwaysencouragesusandavoidsmakingusfeelembarrassedevenwhenwemakemistakes,soeverystudentisveryactiveintheclassdiscussion.Shehasalreadybeenpopularwithallofthestudentsinourclass!WithMrs.Li’shelp,IhavemademuchprogressinEnglish.Thankyou,Mrs.Li!Thanksforhelpingandencouragingme!典例2上高中后的第一节英语课上,老师要求每个同学用英语做一分钟的自我介绍。请准备一份80~100词的发言稿,内容应涉及以下四个方面:1.家庭情况;2.学习上的强项与弱项;3.兴趣与爱好;4.对高中生活的期待。要求:1.内容反映自己的真实情况,但不得在文中提及真实的人名、地名和校名;2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。Hello,everybody,Nicetomeetyou.MynameisLiHuan.I’mfromRainbowHighSchool.写作思路一、审题本篇作文是一篇提纲作文,要求写作的内容是自我介绍,需要介绍的内容要点已经全部给出。考生需要做的就是把这些信息整合到一起,组成一篇完整的文章。此话题正是初中英语的重点话题之一,也是常考的写作话题之一。注意事项:1.本文是说明文,以一般现在时为主;2.本文是自我介绍,写作时以第一人称为主;3.写作注意包含所给提示的所有要点,不要遗漏。二、可用素材1.词汇:parents,member,brother,work,doctor,teacher,interest,hobby,begoodat,bepoorin,lookforwardto...2.句型:Bothmyparentsareworkingfarawayfromhome.AtschoolIamgoodatmath,physicsandchemistry.Iamgoingtoworktogetherwithmynewteachersandnewclassmates.I’mlookingforwardtomakingfriendswithyou.One

possible

version:Hello,everybody,Nicetomeetyou.MynameisLiHuan.I’mfromRainbowHighSchool.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Myfatherworksinacomputercompanyandmymotherisahousewife.I’mtheonlychildinmyfamily.

I’mgoodatmathandphysicswhichareinterestingforme.ButI’mweakingeography.Itisdifficultforme.Inmysparetime,Iliketoreadnovelsandplaysports.LuXunismyfavoriteauthorandIadmirethebasketballstar,YaoMing.Ihopetogetgoodgradesatseniorhighschool,andgetalongwellwithalltheteachersandclassmates.That’sall.Thanksalot!素养训练提高【1】(2018·安徽明光二模)近年来,人们非常关注学生的安全。很多学校为此取消了许多有意义的外出活动,如春游、夏令营、野餐等。假如你是育英中学的一名学生张硕,请给曾校长发一封电子邮件,就此发表自己的见解。要点如下:1.安全第一,但开展一些户外活动也是很有必要的;2.通过这些活动,学生不仅能增长知识,还能开拓视野;3.与大自然亲密接触,能增强同学们的环保意识;4.建议学校在活动之前教给学生一些安全常识,让学生学会保护自己和自救。参考词汇:outdooractivities户外活动;widenone’shorizon开拓视野注意:1.词数80~100;2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;4.邮件的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。DearMr.Zeng,I’msorrytotroubleyou.I’mZhangShuo,astudentfromYuyingMiddleSchool.I’mwritingtoyouaboutoutdooractivities.Could

you

please

organize

some

outdoor

activities

for

us?Of

course,safety

comes

first.But

it’s

necessary

for

us

to

take

part

in

such

activities.

In

my

opinion,we

can

learn

more

knowledge

and

widen

our

horizon

in

this

way.What’s

more,it’s

a

good

way

for

us

to

learn

to

protect

the

environment

by

staying

close

to

the

nature.And

we

can

get

on

well

with

our

teachers

and

classmates.

Why

not

show

us

some

safety

knowledge

before

these

activities?It’s

a

good

chance

for

us

to

learn

to

protect

and

save

ourselves.

Bestwishes!Yours,ZhangShuo【2】(2018·安徽安庆模拟)再过半年你将成为一名高中生,那么你应该怎样完善自己呢?请以“Howtobeanexcellentstudent”为题,写一篇英语短文。提示:1.遵守校纪校规(按时到校,不吸烟);2.养成良好的学习习惯(上课认真听讲、课后复习、学会放松等);3.与人沟通,学会分享,互相帮助;4.在家为父母做些力所能及的家务活(洗碗、打扫卫生等);5.保护环境,积极参与志愿者工作。要求:1.词数:80~100。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.必须包括全部要点,但不能逐词翻译,可适当发挥。How

to

be

an

excellent

studentI’mgoingtobeaseniorhighschoolstudent.How

can

I

be

an

excellent

student?First,I

will

follow

the

school

rules.I

will

go

to

school

on

time

and

I

won’t

smoke.Second,it’s

also

important

to

have

good

study

habits.I

will

listen

to

the

teachers

carefully

in

class.Third,I

am

going

to

learn

to

share

what

I

have

with

my

classmates

and

help

my

classmates.Fourth,at

home,I

will

try

to

help

my

parents

do

some

housework

because

they

are

very

tired

every

day.At

last,I

will

protect

the

environment

and

actively

participate

in

volunteer

work.

I

believe

I’ll

be

an

excellent

student

in

senior

high

school.

【3】(2019·预测)假如你是杨洋,目前正在美国学习,你在网上看到圣约瑟夫孤儿院(St.JosephOrphanage)正在招募暑假志愿者。请你根据以下招聘信息,给这家孤儿院写一封申请信。招募志愿者:1.工作时间:7月1日至8月31日,每周工作10个小时。2.工作范围:给孩子提供帮助;帮助老师组织班会等等。注意:1.词数80~100;2.不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearSirorMadam,IreadyouradvertisementontheInternetyesterday.I’m

writing

to

tell

you

that

I’d

like

to

work

as

a

volunteer

in

St.Joseph

Orphanage.

As

a

student,I

have

enough

free

time

during

the

coming

summer

vacation.So

I

can

work

ten

hours

per

week

during

the

requested

two

months.Besides,I’m

outgoing

and

careful.This

makes

it

easy

for

me

to

provide

care

for

the

children.What’s

more,I

can

also

be

a

good

helper

in

class.I

am

really

good

at

organizing

class

activities

since

I

am

a

leader

of

our

school’s

study

club.

If

I

am

lucky

enough

to

become

a

volunteer,I

will

try

my

best

to

do

the

job

well.

I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,YangYang【4】时间对每个人来说都是宝贵的,那么怎样才能更好地利用时间呢?请用英语写一篇题目为“HowtoSaveTime”的短文。内容包括:1.时间的意义和重要性;2.人们浪费时间的现象(至少3种);3.节省时间的方法(至少3个);4.号召大家节约时间。注意:1.词数80~100;2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。How

to

Save

TimeWe

have

ever

heard

of

“Time