读后续写练习写作指导 讲义-高考英语二轮复习

读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

When

Aiden

askedmetogowithhimona

camping

triptothemountains,Ithoughtitwouldmeanacottagewithawood-burningfireplaceandhotchocolate.Mycomfortableimageofcampingbecameanightmare(噩梦)whenAidenandhisolderbrother,

Lebron,showedupwithcampingsupplies-tents,rolled-upsleepingbags,andcanteens!Ididpackabackpack,asinstructed,butIhadnoideaweweregoingonsurvival

training!

Lebronhada

perfect

plan,andhehurriedmetogetinsowecouldleavethebusycitylifebehindus.Ahead,themountainsappearedbiggerthanIhadrememberedthem:thetreeswerelarger,andtheenvironmentwasmuchmoredangerous.Atleasttheweatherwas

amazing—cotton-candycloudsdottedthedeepbluesky.

Beforewebegan

hiking,LebronhadasleepingbagstuffedintomypackandtoldAidenandmeabouthikingrules.Thefirstpartoftheroadlookedeasy.Soon,thepathbecamenarrowerandrougher,forcingmetotalkless.Aswewenthigher,Icouldseetheroadzigzagging(蜿蜒)upthemountain.

“Itlookscloserthanitis,”Lebronsaid,readingmyfacialexpressions.“Thisisthemostdifficultpart…watchyourstep,nottheview.Looserocksandtreerootsmaketheroad

dangerous.”

Finally,wereachedthetop.Mylegsaching,Idroppedmypackandcomplained.“Notimetorest,”Lebronsaid,lookingupatthesky.Theweatherhadbeenwarmallday,anditfeltgoodtorelaxinthecoolwind.“The

weather

upherechangesquickly,andthatcoolairmeansastormisaroundthecorner.Weneedtosetupcamp.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

IthoughtLebronwaskidding,butwithoutdelaytheyworkedexpertly.

Lebron,sensingthatIwasscared,reachedinhisbackpackforcandies.

试题分析文本分析：1.人物：①Aiden：askedmetogowithhimonacampingtriptothemountains②Lebron：Aiden’olderbrotherwithrichexperienceofhiking;hadaperfectplan,andhehurriedmetogetinsowecouldleavethebusycitylifebehindus③I：hadnoexperienceofhiking,thinkingitwouldmeanacottagewithawood-burningfireplaceandhotchocolate2.主要情节：好朋友Aiden约我跟他和他哥哥Lebron一起去大山里徒步。我以为会是很舒适的一次旅行，我仅仅带了一个背包，哪里知道，这是一次极具挑战的噩梦般的徒步——不仅山高，而且大山里的天气变化无常。好在，Aiden和Lebron很有户外经验，他们带足了户外徒步需要的物品，对户外的天气变化也很熟悉！登上山顶，我准备歇一歇的时候，Lebron提醒说，风暴就要来了，我却不信。……3.续写可以写些什么：段1：①我的想法和心态（注意与开头句的衔接）②在Aiden和Lebron的努力下，帐篷很快就搭好了③果然不出所料，storm真的过来了（可以适当描写风暴来临时的场景）段2：①Lebron边递给我糖果，边尽力让我的害怕的情绪平静下来②storm更猛了，好在他们俩很有户外活动的经验。他们的冷静让我在这样危险的天气中能保持镇定③做任何事情，千万不能想当然，要做足准备（主题升华）下水作文

IthoughtLebronwaskidding,butwithoutdelaytheyworkedexpertly.Ididn’tcareaboutwhat

Legron

said,fortheblueskydottedbythecotton-candycloudsshowednosignsofawful

weather.IbeggedLebronand

Aidentoletmehavearest,enjoyingthecoolwind.Buttheywastednotimeandbegantosetupthe

camp.Soskilledweretheythatsoonalltheworkwasdonewiththeirgreatefforts.Hardlyhadtheyfinishedthe

perfect

workwhentherecamethestrongwindwiththeheavyrainpouringdown.(83words)

Lebron,sensingthatIwasscared,reachedinhisbackpackforcandies.Handingmethecandies,hecomfortedmeinacalmtune,saying

complainingbroughtnothingandthatprotectingourselveswasthebestchoice.Thefiercestormroaring,Icametokeepmyselfstillfromthat

dangerous

weather.Howchangeabletheweatherinthemountainswas!Thestormleftsoonandweexperienceda

survival

withnoonehurt.Itwasan

amazing

butscary

hiking,whichtaughtmenottotakeitforgrantedandtomakefullpreparationforthepossibledanger.(83words)参考范文

IthoughtLebronwaskidding,butwithoutdelaytheyworkedexpertly.Istoodaroundandpretendedtohelp,thunderrumblinginthedistance.Wehadjustfinishedputtingupthetentswhenithit.Thewind,thunder,andlightningwererelentless.

Lebron,sensingthatIwasscared,reachedinhisbackpackforcandies.Handingsomecandiestome,hestartedtoldussomestoriesabouthiscampingadventures.Buteachtimelightninglitupthetentandthethunderechoed,Ijumped.“Don’tworry.Summerstormspassquickly,”Leosaidtryingtocomfortme.“Andatleasttherainwillkeepthebearsaway,”hesaidwithateasingsmile,whichwaslesscomforting.Andasquicklyasthestormcameru