新疆维吾尔自治区巴音郭楞蒙古自治州和静高级中学2023学年高考英语考前最后一卷预测卷（含解析）

2023学年高考英语模拟测试卷考生请注意：1．答题前请将考场、试室号、座位号、考生号、姓名写在试卷密封线内，不得在试卷上作任何标记。2．第一部分选择题每小题选出答案后，需将答案写在试卷指定的括号内，第二部分非选择题答案写在试卷题目指定的位置上。3．考生必须保证答题卡的整洁。考试结束后，请将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。第一部分（共20小题，每小题1.5分，满分30分）1．Checkyourpapercarefullytosee________youhavemadeanymistakes.A．what B．which C．whether D．that2．Thelivingroomiscleanandtidy,withadiningtablealready__________foramealtobecooked.A．laid B．layingC．tolay D．beinglaid3．TherecentlyreleasedfilmKong：SkullIslandsuccessfully________theaudiencetotheadventurewithDolby3-Dtechnology.A．transportsB．adjustsC．transformsD．relates4．Ineedhelpnow!IhavetofixaleakingpipeinmybathroombutI’mnotsure______tobegin.A．whatB．whichC．whereD．when5．Wewerescaredtodeathwhenthefire______.Fortunately,itwasputoutbeforeitcausedmuchdamage.A．brokeout​​ B．cameoutC．gaveout​​ D．turnedout6．Backwardsomewhattechnologically________weareforthemoment,wehaveconfidenceinourabilitytocatchupintime.A．althoughB．ifC．asD．once7．Thewitnessanimportantdetailwhendescribingtheaccident.A．broughtout B．keptoffC．leftout D．raninto8．—TherearenorelativearticlesontheInternet.Whatshallwedo?—MyGod！Therearealwaysnotanyusefularticleswhenyouwant.A．one B．it C．that D．any9．Thegovernmentofficialsmettheworkersandengineersworkingonthestadium,most____weremigrantworkers．A．ofwhich B．ofwho C．ofwhom D．ofthem10．---Whydidn’tyouhelpthelittleboy?---Oh,hehadstruggledtohisfeet______Icouldrunoverandofferedanyhelp.A．before B．afterC．when D．since11．Kimberly______anarticle,sodon’tdisturbher.A．wouldwrite B．writes C．wrote D．iswriting12．The114colorfulclayWarriors____atNo.1pit,______inheightfrom1.8mto2m,haveblackhair,green,whiteorpinkfaces,andblackorbrowneyes.A．unearthed;rangingB．unearthing;rangingC．unearthed;rangedD．areunearthed;areranging13．ThankstoChinesepeople’shardworkandwisdom,Chinahas_____intothesecondlargesteconomy.A．evolved B．slipped C．extended D．shaped14．—YoushouldhavecometothepartylastSaturdayevening.Itwasreallyfantastic.—Butafriendanunexpectedvisittome.A．paid B．hadpaid C．wouldpay D．haspaid15．Youcangetoffthebusoneortwostops________andwalktherestofthewaytoworkeverydaysoastotakesomeexercise.A．moreearly B．earliest C．early D．earlier16．—ThemovieLalalandisawesome.It’sreallyapitythatyoudidn’tmakeit.—Sorry,I________.Iwastoobusythen.A．didn’tB．didC．wouldn’tD．would17．Usuallydoctorsareunderstandably________aboutnewmedicinesbecauseoftheuncertaintyoftheireffects.A．considerateB．logicalC．optimisticD．cautious18．Frankstudied_____EnglishlanguageinLondonforfouryears,sohegets____goodknowledgeofLondon.A．a;the B．/;/C．/;a D．the;a19．—ThemovieTillDeathDoUsPart《最爱》willbeonat8pm．Whataboutpickingyouupat7pm?—Allright．Iwillhavecomebackfromworkbythen,andIyouathome．A．willbewaitingfor B．willwaitfor C．havebeenwaitingfor D．amwaitingfor20．People________withanyonewhoisalwaystalkingabouthowwonderfulheis.A．fallin B．keepcompany C．catchup D．getfedup第二部分阅读理解（满分40分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。21．（6分）Saturday，22April,2017Wearecurrentlyonacamp-sitenearCalais,onourwaytotheUK,anditispouringwithrain.AsifgodswanttoprepareusfortheUKatallcosts.Asifwedon'tknowwhatrainis...Ourferrytothegreenisleswillleavetomorrowat10.30anddespitetherain,Iamreallylookingforwardtoit.Ithastakenusawhiletogethere,aswealreadyleftElChorroon4April.AfterrushingthroughSpainintwodays,however,wecametoaninevitableslow-downwhenweenteredFrance.Inevitable,asFrancehassimplytoomuchtoofferforus.SoassoonaswecrossedthePyrenees,ourdrivingsequencebecamesomethinglikedrivingafewkilometres,visitingacastle,drivingafewkilometres,takingpicturesofanicechurch,drivingafewkilometres,havingaquickpeekatafleasmarket,drivingafewkilometres,visitingamuseumetc.WhenweenteredBrittanytherealsightseeingstarted,inVannes,inLorient,inBrestandthenontoNormandy:LeMontStMichel,Bayeuxandfinally,finallytheD-Daybeaches.Ialwayswantedtovisitthese,forobviousreasonsIwouldsay,butmyfather,realisticashewas,calculatedthechancesthatitwouldrainaconsiderableamountofdaysofathree-weekholidayandalwaysdecidedagainstit.ButafewdaysagoIfinallysteppedontoGoldBeach(wheretheBritslanded)andIwasgreetedbytheNormansun.Abeautifulday.1、Itwas_____whenthewriterwasonhiswaytotheUK.A．pouringB．foggyC．snowyD．sunny2、Accordingtothepassage,thePyreneesmustbeaplacein_____.A．SpainB．FranceC．NetherlandD．Normandy3、WhichofthefollowingstatementisNOTtrue?A．Theyspent2daysinSpaintraveling.B．ThewriterthoughtFrancehasalotofplacestovisit.C．ThewriterthoughttherealsightseeingwasinE1Chorro,andinBrest.D．Thewriter’sfatherwasarealisticperson.4、Thepassageprobablycomesfrom_______.A．atraveljournalB．asciencefictionC．anewsreportD．afilmreview22．（8分）AsPhDresearchgoes,BrianWisendenmightbeenvied:watchingbabyfishswimmingswiftlythroughtheclearwatersintheCostaRicantropicaldryforest.Byrecordingtheirgrowthandnumbers,hehopedtolookattheirrisksofbeingeaten.Instead,hewitnessedsomethingstrange.Manygroupswereincreasinginnumbers.Inthesegroups,someweresmallerthanothers,suggestingtheyweren’tsiblings(兄弟姐妹).Wisendenhadaccidentallydiscoveredthatthefish,calledconvictcichlids,adopteachother’sbabies.Whywouldtheydothat,hewondered?Inthehumanworld,wethinkofadoptionasaselflessact.Butinnature,itspresenceispuzzling.Takingontheburdenofbringingupbabieswithnogeneticlinkwouldseemtoreduceananimal’schanceofsurvivaloratleastprovidenogain.Yet,adoptionissurprisinglycommoninthenaturalworld.Taketheeasterngreykangaroo.Between2008and2013,Wisendenfollowedthefatesof326babykangaroosintheWilsonsPromontoryNationalParkinVictoriaandrecorded11casesofpouch(育儿袋)swapping.Thecircumstancesbehindsomeoftheseadoptionsaren’tknown,butfourwerestraightswapsandanotherfouroccurredafteramotherhadlostherownbaby.Howcome?Beforeindependence,babykangaroosgothroughaperiodinsideandoutsidetheirmotherspouch.Followingout-of-pouchattempts,mothersnormallysnifftheiryoungbeforeallowingthembackin,butWisendensteamsuspectthatduringanemergencytheymayomitthesnifftest,allowingaweakbabytoquicklyclimbinbeforefleeingfromdanger.Someofnature’sadoptionsare,actually,drivenbyyoung.Inburrowerbugs(土蝽),forexample,femaleslayanestofeggsclosetothoseofunrelatedbugs.Motherbugstendtheirdevelopingeggsbeforetheyhatch,andthenfeed出firbabiesnutsfromweedymintplants.Findingnutsisacompetitivebusiness，sonoteverymotherbuggetsherfairshare.Andifthedeliveryrateisn’tuptostandard,cleveryoungmayabandontheirmotherstojoinabetter-fedgroup.Theconsequencesofadoptionfollowingmistakenidentitycanbehorrible.Thetruebabiesofadoptingmotherswereabandoned.Buiitcanhaveremarkablebenefits,notjustforadopteesbutalsoforadoptiveparents.1、WhatcanwelearnaboutWisenden’sresearchaboutbabyfish?A．Itwasbeyondhisexpectations.B．Itputmanyrarespeciesatrisk.C．Itshowedageneticsimilarityinfish.D．Itfoundanewwaytoprotectforests.2、Whatdoestheunderlinedword“omit”meaninthepassage?A．Confirm.B．Repeat.C．Adopt.D．Skip.3、Whywouldsomeburrowerhugsabandontheirmothers?A．Toliveinwarmernests.B．Toreproduce.C．Toseekforbetterparenting.D．Toadapttocompetitionearlier.4、Whatmaytheauthormostprobablytalkaboutnext?A．Thecausesofaccidentaladoption.B．Theprocessesofaccidentaladoption.C．Thedrawbacksofaccidentaladoption.D．Theadvantagesofaccidentaladoption.23．（8分）Ihavebeenwatchingmydaughtersplaysportssincetheywerefour,andhavebeenshockedathowsomeparentsinthecrowdbehave.Atsoccergames,whenmygirlswereveryyoung,parentswouldbescreamingattheirchildrentogettheirheadsintothegame,tocharge,to“get”anopposingplayer,orto“killit.”Iunderstandparentswanttoencouragetheirchildrenandtheirteam—butatsomepointitbecomestoomuch.MydaughterGraceisahighschoolandAAU(AssociationofAmericanUniversities)basketballplayerandaverygoodoneatthat.Duringarecentgame,aparentsittingnearmewasshoutingloudlytoherdaughter,standingup,expressingdispleasureaboutthewayherteamwasplayingand,duringhalftime,speakingloudlyaboutherpersonallife.Afterhavingherinmyearformorethanhalfofthegame,IwassoputoffthatIhadtomove.Admittedly,Iamthequietparentatgames.Iclapfortheschoolgirlswhentheymakewonderfulplays.Forthemostpart,however,Iremainsilent.Shoutingoutmakesthemnervous.IaskedGracetoweighinonthis,andshetellsme:“Someparentsbecomeextremelyemotionallyinvestedinsportsgames,whichcanbecomeaproblemfortheplayers.Theworstthingiswhenpeoplepointoutthat‘crazyparent,’andtheydon’tknowthat’syourparent.”Iamallforparentspectatorscheeringontheirchildrenandtherestoftheteam.ButIhopeyoucancheeryourchildrenoninapositiveway.Shoutingthingslike,“Where’syourhead?”“Goafterher!”isnot,inmyview,thewaytocheeronhighschoolstudentsoryoungerchildren.Ifyouhavenothingpositivetosay,holdyourtongue.Ifyoufindyourselfstrugglingtokeepittogether,getsomefreshairduringhalftime.1、Unabletostandthemothernearby,theauthor.A．toldhertoshutupB．foundanotherseatC．askedGraceforhelpD．refusedtotalktoher2、InGrace’sopinion,crazyparentsintheaudiencewillmakeplayersfeel.A．helplessB．impatientC．scaredD．ashamed3、Theauthorisagainstparentspectators.A．keepingsilentallthetimeB．sayingunpleasantwordsC．cheeringontheplayersD．leavingduringhalftime4、Whoaretheintendedreadersofthetext?A．Parents.B．Teenageplayers.C．Soccerspectators.D．Coaches.24．（8分）Myfatherwasalwaysagoodgardener.Oneofmyearliestmemoriesisstandingwithoutshoesinthefreshlytilled(翻耕的)soil,myhandsblackenedfromdiggingintheground.Asachild,IlovedfollowingDadaroundinthegarden,IrememberDadpushingthetiller(耕作机)aheadinperfectlystraightlines.Dadlovedgrowingallsortsofthings:yellowandgreenonions,watermelonsalmostasbigasme,rowsofyellowcom,andourfavorite―redtomatoes.AsIgrewintoateenager,Ididn’tgetsoexcitedaboutgardeningwithDad.Insteadofmagicallandofpossibility,ithadturnedintosomekindofprison.AsDadgrewolder,hisloveforgardeningneverdisappeared.Afterallthekidsweregrownandhadstartedfamiliesoftheirown,Dadturnedtogardeninglikeneverbefore.Evenwhenhewasdiagnosedwithcancer,hestilltookcareofhisgarden.Butthen,thecancer,bitbybit,invadedhisbody.Ihadtodothethingsheusedtodo.WhatreallyconvincedmethatDadwasdyingwasthestateofhisgardenthatyear.Therowsandrowsofmulticoloredvegetablesweregone.Tootiredtoweedthem,hesimplyletthembe.Heonlyplantedtomatoes.Forthefirstfewyearsafterhedied,Icouldn’tevenbeartolookatanyone'sgardenwithouthavingstrongmemoriespourovermelikecoldwaterfromabucket.Threeyearsago,Idecidedtoplantmyowngardenandstartedoutwithjustafewtomatoes.Thatmorning,afterbreakingupafairamountofsoil,somethingcaughtthecomerofmyeyeandIhadtosmile,Itwasmyeight-year-oldsonNathan,happilyplayinginthefreshlytilledsoil.1、Whydidtheauthorlikethegardenwhenhewasachild?A．Thegardenwasplantedwithcolorfulflowers.B．Thegardenwasjustfreshlytilledbyhisfather.C．Helovedwhathisfathergrewinthegarden.D．Heenjoyedbeinginthegardenwithhisfather.2、Whenallthekidsstartedtheirownfamilies,theauthor’sfather.A．devotedmoretogardeningB．turnedtootherhobbiesC．stoppedhisgardeningD．focusedonplantingtomatoes3、Whathappenedtothegardenwhentheauthor’sfatherwasseriouslyill?A．Theauthor’ssontookchargeofit.B．Noplantgrewinthegardenatall.C．Thegardenwasalmostdeserted.D．Itbroughttheauthoragreatharvest.4、Wecaninferfromthelastparagraphthat.A．theauthor’ssonplayedhappilyinthegardenB．theauthor’ssonremindedhimofhisownfatherC．theauthor’ssonwasverygladtohelptheauthorD．theauthor’ssonwillcontinuegardeningaswell25．（10分）Asalegallyblindstudent,thefirstdayofschoolholdsspecialmeaningforme.Alongwithexcitementandnervesovernewteachersandnewclasses,thatdayineachAugustalsoaffirmsmysenseofbelonging—asensethatlamclaimingarightjustasotherstudentsdowhenthey.boardtheschoolbusorwalktocampus.Sinceitwaspassedoverthirty-fiveyearsago,theIndividualswithDisabilitiesEducationAct(IDEA)hasrequiredstateandlocalschoolsreceivingfederalfundingtoprovidestudentswithdisabilitieswithafreeappropriatepubliceducation(FAPE).Currently,over6millionstudentsacrossthecountrywithvarioustypesofdisabilitiesbenefitfromtheIDEA'sprotections.Butparentsandschooldistrictshavecontestedexactlywhatthatactuallyrequires.Thecasearose,aftertheparentsofEndrewF.,astudentwithautism,decidedhisschoolwasnotdoingenoughtoeducatetheirson.Eachyearfrompreschooltofourthgrade,theschooldistrictrenewedEndrew'sindividualeducationgoalswithoutmakingsubstantial（大量的）changes.Thissuggestedtheplanwasfailingtohelpmakemeaningfulprogress.Eventually,Endrew'sparentsenrolledhiminaprivateschool,whereheimprovedsignificantlythroughanewplandesignedtoaddressspecificbehaviorsandgoals.Whenhisparentsattemptedtore-enrollEndrewinpublicschoolagain,thedistrictofferedaversionofitspreviousplan.TheschooldistrictarguedthatwassufficientbecauseitprovidedEndrew"some"educationalbenefit.IDEAempowers（使有能力）studentswithdisabilitiestoaimhighwithsupportfromschooladministratorsandinputfromparents.Forme,theActdidjustthat.Frompreschoolthroughtwelfthgrade,Ireceivedmyrighttoaccommodationssuchasenlargedpapers,aseatinthefrontoftheclassroom,andsupportfromvisionandmobilityspecialistsoutsidetheclassroom.Atthesametime,myparents,likeEndrew's,demandedthatmydisabilityshouldnotstopmefrombecomingindependent.Eachyear,theymetwithschoolofficialstoinsistonadjustmentstomylearningplanasnecessary.1、What'sthepurposeofParagraph1?A．Tointroducethethemeofthepassage.B．Toshowtheimportanceofthefirstschooldayfordisabledstudents.C．Toshowthedifferencebetweendisabledstudentsandhealthyones.D．Torevealtheauthor'ssympathytowardsdisabledstudents.2、Whatcanweknowfromthepassage?A．ParentsoftendoubtthebenefitofIDEA．B．TheIDEAhasmanydifficultiesinpracticing.C．Endrew'seducationgoalsremainthesameeveryyear.D．Disabledstudentscan'tmakeprogressinpublicschools.3、BytakingtheexampleofEndrew,theauthormeansto_______.A．discusswhethertheIDEAappliestochildrenwithautismB．argueEndrewisnotsuitableforstudyinginpublicschoolsC．illustratepublicschoolsshoulddomoretohelpdisabledstudentsD．showpublicschoolslackexperienceinhelpingstudentsmakeprogress4、What'stheauthor'sattitudetowardsIDEAaccordingtothepassage?A．Disapproving.B．Approving.C．Objective.D．Unconcerned.第三部分语言知识运用（共两节）第一节（每小题1.5分，满分30分）阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项．26．（30分）AgentlewindblewthroughJennifer'shair．Thegoldenredsunwas1．Shewasonthebeach，lookingupattheball．Shewasamazedbyits2，deepredinthemiddle，3fadingintoyellow.Shecouldhearnothingbutthe4andtheseagullsflyingupaboveinthesky．Theatmosphere5her．Afterallshehadbeenthrough，thisiswhatshe6．“It’sgettinglate，”shethought，“Imustgohome，myparentswillbe7whereIam．”Shewonderedhowherparentswouldreact，whenshegothomeafterthethreedaysshewas8Thesunhadsetbynowanditwasgetting9．Shetriedtoimaginehavingherfavorite10onuntilshesawherfrontdoorItseemeddifferent.11hadtakencareoftheoutsidegardenfordays．Shewas12:herfatherwasusuallysostrictaboutkeepingeverythingcleanandtidy,andnow…Itallseemed13．Shecouldn'tunderstandwhatwasgoingon．Sheenteredthe14．First，shewentintothekitchenwhereshesawa(n)15writtenbyherfather．Itsaid：“DearEllen，thereissomecoffeeready,Iwent16．”Ellenwashermotherbut—wherewasshe?Ontherightsideofthehallwaywasher17room．Shewentin．Thenshesawhermother,lyingonthebedsleeping．Her18lookedsotired，asifshehadn’t19fordays．Shewasreallypale．Jennyjustfellasleepbesideher．WhenJenniferwokeupshefoundsomething20．Shewasinhercosybedinhernightclothes．Itfeltsogoodbeingbackhome．Suddenlysheheardavoice．“Areyoufeelingbetternow,dear?Youknowyougotusvery,veryscared．”1、A．rising B．setting C．shining D．smiling2、A．shape B．shadow C．size D．color3、A．quickly B．partly C．softly D．probably4、A．waves B．boats C．trees D．sands5、A．relaxed B．puzzled C．disappointed D．interrupted6、A．understood B．considered C．needed D．regretted7、A．discussing B．finding C．asking D．wondering8、A．alive B．asleep C．missing D．hardworking9、A．sunny B．warm C．cold D．cloudy10、A．glasses B．hat C．skirt D．jacket11、A．Somebody B．Nobody C．Mother D．Father12、A．shocked B．scared C．exhausted D．comforted13、A．beautified B．rearranged C．deserted D．destroyed14、A．garden B．bedroom C．yard D．house15、A．book B．note C．article D．poste16、A．1ooking B．working C．fishing D．sightseeing17、A．own B．parents’ C．sister’s D．brother’s18、A．gesture B．body C．face D．eyes19、A．studied B．slept C．exercised D．moved20、A．different B．new C．precious D．dangerous第二节（每小题1.5分，满分15分）阅读下面材料，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。27．（15分）Whenastormiscoming,mostpeopleleavetheareaas1．(quick)aspossibleandhead2．safety.Butthereareafewpeoplewhowillgetintotheircarsandgostraightforthecenterofthestorm.Thesepeoplearewillingtorisk3．(kill)byfloodsor100-kilometer-an-hourwindsfortheexcitementofwatchingthestormcloseup.“Stormchasing”isbecomingan4．(increase)popularhobby,especiallyintheMidwestoftheUnitedStates,5．therearefrequentstormsbetweenMarchandJuly.AstormchaserbeginsthedaybycheckingtheInternetforthelatestweatherreports,andthendrivesupto1,000kilometerstowherethestormwillbeandwaitsforittodevelop.Althoughanyonecandoit,stormchasingisextremelydangerous.Thepowerofabigstormcanthrowacowintotheairordestroyawholehouseinseconds.Stormchasersarealsooftenhurtinaccidents6．(cause)bydrivinginaheavyrain.Ifyouarea7．(begin),itismuch8．(safe)tojoinagroupforstorm-chasingvacationsduringthestormseason.Eventhen,stormchasingisnotalladventureandexcitement.“Stormchasingis95%driving,”saysDanielLynch,whospendsmostofhissummerstorm-chasing.“Sometimesyoucansitaroundforhourswaitingforsomethingtohappen,andallyougetisblueskyandafewlightshowers.”9．,forstormchasers,itisallworthit.“Whenyougetclosetoastorm,itisthemostexcitingsightyouwilleverseeinyourlife,”saysJasperMorley.“Everystormis10．exampleofthepowerofnature,ItisthegreatestshowonEarth.”第四部分写作（共两节）第一节短文改错（满分10分）28．（10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、处错误及其修改仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Agoodfriendofmehadadog、Heloveditverymuchthatheregardeditlikehisbestfriend、Unfortunately,lastFridaythedogwaskilledbycar,whichmadehimbeheartbroken、Imustdidsomethingtocomforthim、Tocheerhimup,Iwentthroughallmyoldphotoandmadeanicepicturecollectionofhimandhisdog、Hopeful,itwillwork、IknewIcan’treplacehispetandbestfriendbutatleastIcanputasmileonhisfaceagain、ThatishowIshoulddoforafriend、Afriendinneedisafriendindeed、第二节书面表达（满分25分）29．（25分）假定你是李华，准备明年高考后去英国某大学留学学习英国文学，请根据以下要点写一封100词左右的申请信。可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。1.你选择该专业的原因；2.个人简介；3.表达信心和感谢。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2023学年模拟测试卷参考答案（含详细解析）第一部分（共20小题，每小题1.5分，满分30分）1、C2、A3、A4、C5、A6、C7、A8、A9、C10、A11、D12、A13、A14、A15、D16、A17、D18、D19、A20、D第二部分阅读理解（满分40分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。21、Manyscholarshipsrequirethatyouwriteanessayinordertobeconsideredfortheprizemoney.However,ifyouarethesortofpersonthathasaheadachewheneveryouhavetocompleteawritingassignment,thismaynotbethebestnews.Luckilyforyou,thereisnoreasontofearthescholarshipessay.Thefollowingtipscouldhelpyouconquerthisnot-so-easyaspectofthescholarshipapplicationprocess.Youshouldalwaysoutlineyouressays.Thisdoesnotjustapplytothescholarshipessays,either.Anoutlinehelpslendfocustoyourthoughtsandhelpsyoucreateapictureofthe“whole”thattheessaywillbecome.Judgescannottostandwhenyourwritingisloose,lackscoherence(连贯性)orwhenyoufailtoconnectyourmainpointstogether.Theywanttoseethatyoucansupportyourargumentwellwithclearandbriefexamplesandthattheseexamplesdo,infact,relatetothetopicathand.Ifyouhaveachoiceinthetopicyougettowriteabout,alwaystrytoselectsomethingyouarepersonallyinterestedin.Don'twritewhatyouthinkthejudgeswanttohear.Thiswillonlyamountinanessaythatreadslikesomeoneelse’s,whichisnotagreatwaytomakeyourselfstandout.Ifyoufeelboredwiththetopic,thenyouressaywillbeboringaswell.Makesureyourideafollowaclearandalogicalpath.Thismeanstheyareconnectedwellandthetransitions(过渡)easilyflowfromoneideatothenext.Likewise,trytostayawayfromtheobviousorthesadstory.Yes,collegewillbealife-changingexperience,butcanyouthinkofaninterestingreasonwhythisisso?Andyes,itisterriblethatyoulostafamilymemberatayoungage,butwhatdoesithavetodowithwinningthisscholarsh