2017年英语专四的作文讲评写作指导

1、第二段：先表示自己见解Stance:asfarasImconcerned,astome,frommyperspective,inmyview,personallyspeaking,frommypointofview再分条论证（灵便运用连接词）1.Firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast2.First,second,third3.Inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,lastbutnotleast4.Initially,besides,furthermore,lastbutnotleastxx：Inmyopinion,artif

2、icialintelligencewillenableourbrainstogetmorecreative.Admittedly,alotofworkhasbeendonebyintelligentmachines.Itseemsthatthefunctionofpeoplehasbeenweakenedandpeoplesbrainshavebeenreplaced.Asamatteroffact,thankstointelligentmachines,peoplecanexpandtheircreativeenergyandaddnewvarieties.Simplyspeaking,wh

3、enpeoplearefreefromtedious,repetive,sometimesevendangerouswork,workefficiencywillundoubtedlybeimproved.Asaresult,peoplecansparemoretimetodowhattheywantandpursuewhattheydreamof,whichisthepremiseofcreativity.Moreover,creativitystemsprimarilyfromknowledgeandthinking.Oncepeoplehavetheopportunitytodomore

4、thinkingandlearning,theirintelligencewouldbeenhancedratherthanweakened.第三段：enrichyourrestatement/expressyourhopes/givesuggestionsAllinall,inanutshell,tosumup,inbrief,inshort,insummary,inconclusionxx：1/2Althoughartificialintelligenceistheexhibitionofpeopleshighcreativepower,itshouldbenotedthatitislik

5、eadouble-edgedsword.Thesensiblechoiceistoembraceitsadvantagesandcopewiththeproblemsithasaroused.Thisiswhatanadvancedandrationalsocietyshouldbelike.合理利用模板及xx例句：Nowadays,itisaheatedlydiscussedtopicthat引出话题.Thisproblemismuchdebatedinthatitaffectsalmosteverybodyintheirdailylives.Para.2:Asforme,Iagreetot

6、heideathatbecauseitsadvantagesoutweigdisadvantages.TherearedozenofreasonsbehindmybeliefAsfarasIamconcerned,theopinionthatdsmoreweighthol.Foronething,论据一.原由一.Foranother,论据二.原由二.Inmypointofview,把标题变为陈述句.Therearenumerousreasonstosupportmyopinion.Oneoftheprimarycausesisthat原由一.Anotherreasonthatcanbeseenbyeverypersonisthat原由二.Agoodcaseinpointis举例证明二.Asacollegestudent,Ithinkthat论点.Tobeginwith,原由一.证明原由.AfurtherreasonwhyIsupportthisisthat原由二.Thereisagoodevidencetoshowthat证明原由二.Para.3:Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,aconc