雅思写作开头结尾写法探讨课件

1、雅思写作开头、结尾写法【探讨】 【主讲：牙哥】环球英语网校直播课堂 eng24雅思写作开头、结尾写法【探讨】 TR=Task ResponseCC=cohesion and CoherenceLR=Lexical ResourceGRA=Grammar &Accuracy雅思写作评分标准雅思写作评分标准3As an international tourist, one should always adhere to the local customs as a rule while the traveling. To what extent do you agree or disagree?T

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3、ar, simpleLess memorization, higher band scoreWithin 5 minutesParaphrase什么是好的开头 Clear, simple惨不忍睹版的开头-各种想吐Countrys health budget as a part of government budget is more and more concerned by government. Government spent much money or countrys health, like the public health service. In my opinion, rat

4、her than put enormous money to cure people, it is better to spend money on prevention how to get away from some disease. 惨不忍睹版的开头-各种想吐Countrys healt雅思写作开头结尾写法探讨课件雅思写作开头结尾写法探讨课件2022/9/26题目：exposure to international media, e.g. films, tv and magazines, has an impact on the local culture. to what exten

5、t do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 开头段：With the development of the global media industry, traditional custom has been influenced undeniably. Some people suggest that the information from other countries bring us much profitability to our current culture.Sample:2022/9/24题目：expo

6、sure to intern开头写法-AUniversities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 利弊提问方式开头写法-AUniversities and collegeA地主版开头For the last thirty y

7、ears or so, more emphasis has been placed on the way of offering qualifications, and it has been argued that acquiring qualification through distant learning from Internet will be more attractive than through studying in classroom . However, compared with professors, the Internet cannot communicate

8、with students sufficiently.A地主版开头For the last thirty yearA贵族版开头Qualification is linked to a persons academic performance. In the past, people had to spend much time in attending classes to pass the examination such as lawyer and architect vocational qualification. Nevertheless, It seems that a large

9、 number of people acquire relevant professional qualification via classes online easily at present. The advantages of this practice far exceed the disadvantages in my opinion.A贵族版开头Qualification is linked A平民版Nowadays, the distant learning through internet is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Y

10、et at the same time, whether we should offer qualification through distant learning has sparked much debate. Some people think studying in classroom is better, while others disagree. Personally, I am in favor of the former view.A平民版Nowadays, the distant lear1.Definition2.Past3.Now好的开头有逻辑，无模板！1.Defin

11、ition对比： 时间对比past, now, future 关系对比 individual, society对比：开头写法-BLearning a foreign language offers an insight into how people from other cultures think and see the world. The teaching of a foreign language should be compulsory at all primary schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this

12、 view? Agree or Disagree提问方式开头写法-BLearning a foreign languB地主版The recent years has seen a heated discussion over whether learning a foreign language is necessary. Some people suggest that all primary schools are obligated to include foreign language as an indispensable part of curriculum. This alleg

13、ation is flawed, as far as I am concerned. B地主版The recent years has seen B贵族版Language is linked to the identity of a nation, and speakers of a common language share many things, but does this give governments the right to restrict the way language is used or taught?B贵族版Language is linked to the Defi

14、nitionHoweverQuestionDefinitionB平民版In the present age, foreign languages are becoming increasingly essential in peoples daily life. But in the meantime, whether the teaching of a foreign language should be compulsory at all primary schools has aroused spirited discussion. Some people say that we sho

15、uld teach a foreign language in schools, while others disagree. As I see it, I find this view ill-founded.B平民版In the present age, foreig开头写法-CShould parents be obliged to immunize their children against common childhood diseases？Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their childr

16、en? AD=agree or disagree类型开头写法-CShould parents be obligeC地主版More emphasis, in recent years, has been placed on health problems for children. However, people are still at crossroads whether parents are obligated to immunize their children in order to prevent various medical complaints or they are ble

17、ssed with the right not to. C地主版More emphasis, in recent yC贵族版The issue of whether we should force parents to immunize their children against common diseases is, in my opinion, a social rather than a medical question. Since we are free to choose what we expose our bodies to in the way of food, drink

18、, or religion for that matter, why should the question of medical treatment be any different？C贵族版The issue of whether we shDefinition因&果QuestionDefinitionC贵族版2Some people argue that the state does not have the right to make parents immunize their children. However, I feel the question is not whether

19、 they should immunize but whether, as members of society, they have the right not to.C贵族版2Some people argue that thParaphrase转折&对比ParaphraseC平民版With the rapid development of science and technology, children are playing important roles in our lives. However, when it comes to whether parents should be

20、 obliged to immunize their children against common childhood diseases, people hold divergent views. Some people think the government should make parents do this, while others disagree. Speaking for myself, I agree with the latter view. C平民版With the rapid development开头写法-DIn many major cities of the

21、world, you will find large public buildings, both new and old. Do the advantages exceed its disadvantages? 利弊提问方式开头写法-DIn many major cities of D地主版 As the century continues, an increasing number of public constructions are being established in megacities globally. In this essay, I intend to compare

22、the benefits and drawbacks of this development.D地主版 As the century continuD贵族版A public building is a building that belongs in some way to the state./ The number of public buildings in any town or village will depend on the size of that community and its needs. / For example, you will usually find a

23、town hall of some sort, a school and a place of worship at the least. In larger communities there will be a police station, law courts, a library and maybe a theatre funded by the state.D贵族版A public building is a buiDefinition定性For ExampleDefinitionD平民版When involved in a dilemma of whether we should

24、 build so many public buildings or not, quite a few would deem that building public buildings is a good thing, but others, on the other hand, harbor a notion that this is a bad thing. Among numerous ingredients which influence the decision, there are several conspicuous aspects as follows.D平民版When i

25、nvolved in a dilemma烤鸭-对号入座贵族版:备考时间充足或6分及以上基础地主版:备考时间不足或4.5分-5.5分基础平民版：准备时间不充分，基础非常差， 建议背诵模板。烤鸭-对号入座贵族版:备考时间充足或6分及以上基础开头关键：在5分钟内写完paraphrase题目开头关键：在5分钟内写完改写练习【1】 题目Personal happiness is closely related to economic success.改写练习【1】 改写练习【1】题目 Personal happiness is closely related to economic success.改写

26、后的 Individual happiness is determined by the wealth he or she owns. 改写练习【1】题目改写练习【2】 题目Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school program. 改写练习【2】 题目改写练习【2】题目 Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school program. 改写后的It is justified for high schools to include voluntary work as an indispensable component of curriculum.High school students are encouraged to participate in voluntary work as a necessary part of courses. 改写练习【2】题目题目改写训练【3】 题目Schools should select their pupils according to their ac