英文地质论文写作中常见的问题演示

1、（优选）池国祥英文地质论文写作中常见的问题第一页，共五十四页。Importance of Publication- Scientific records- Communication with international community- Contribution to scientific advancement- Social-economic impacts- Career development写作过程也是科研的一部分：激发思维，推敲研究结果的意义。审稿和修改过程对科研有促进作用。第二页，共五十四页。英文地质论文写作的常见问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题其它问题投稿注意问题第三页，

2、共五十四页。科技论文写作的主要问题是论文结构及格式问题，而不是英文问题。结构好而英文不好的论文很容易修改，而结构不好的论文则很难改。第四页，共五十四页。Highlight 只说做了什么，没说发现什么Detailed petrographic work carried outImportant constraint on U mineralization recognizedXenotime coeval with uraninite in Athabasca BasinOnset of U mineralization related to volcanism and brine format

3、ion第五页，共五十四页。引言的核心是 What Why How不要把研究结果在前言里讲出来第六页，共五十四页。没有分清目的 (purposes) 和目标 (objectives)This paper aims to carry out detailed field, petrographic, stable isotope and fluid inclusion studies of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit.This paper aims to understand the mineralization conditions and processe

4、s of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit, through detailed field, petrographic, stable isotope and fluid inclusion studies.第七页，共五十四页。空洞的文献总结Empty Review: The sedimentary and stratigraphy of the Viking Formation have been studied by Smith (1978) and Walker et al. (1990). Little work has been done on dia

5、genesis, except a stable isotope study by Lee (1998). The petroleum system has been evaluated by Cook (1989), .Informative Review: The Viking Formation has been interpreted to have formed in a wave-dominated shoreface and transitional zones (Smith, 1978; Walker et al., 1990). A diagenetic study of c

6、alcite cements by Lee (1998) yielded d18O of -18 to -15%o (PDB), which were interpreted to indicate第八页，共五十四页。参考文献的引用不恰当有些地区前人已做了大量工作。但这不意味这你要引用所有工作。引用什么和不引用什么要得当。引用要放在恰当的地方。引用某文（或图）等于告诉读者“请看”。要把 Credit 给该给的人。第九页，共五十四页。Cite references in chronological orderThere are a number of previous studies in th

7、is field (Smith, 1999; Andes et al., 2001; Sun et al., 1988).There are a number of previous studies in this field (Andes et al., 2001; Smith, 1999; Sun et al., 1988).There are a number of previous studies in this field (Sun et al., 1988; Smith, 1999; Andes et al., 2001).第十页，共五十四页。For first author of

8、 the the same name, the order of listing references is single-author first, two-author second, and multi-author last (in chronological order)Li, S., 2011, Li, S., Anderson, K. and Wang, L., 2000, .Li, S. and Baker, A., 2003, .Li, S., Wang, N. and Zhu, C., 1989, .Li, S., 2011, Li, S. and Baker, A., 2

9、003, .Li, S., Wang, N. and Zhu, C., 1989, .Li, S., Anderson, K. and Wang, L., 2000, .第十一页，共五十四页。区域地质背景没有根据本文的内容进行取舍区域地质背景的介绍是很有讲究的。不能千篇一律地描述所有的地质背景，要根据本文的重点有所侧重。第十二页，共五十四页。现象或数据的描述与解释混杂在一起We have detected high concentrations of CO2 in the fluid, which is most likely derived from the mantle. However,

10、 some crustal CO2 has also been detected, as reflected by its carbon isotope composition. The ores are characterized by laminated structures, which are likely of syngenetic origin The syngenetic structures are commonly found in all the deposits in the study area, suggesting that these deposits are p

11、robably of SEDEX type. 第十三页，共五十四页。缺乏详细的地质描述第十四页，共五十四页。缺乏详细的岩相学描述第十五页，共五十四页。把前人或自己已发表的数据列在结果部分Data sourcesLiang et al. 2008Liang et al. 2008Zhu et al. 2011This studyThis studyThis studyThis study第十六页，共五十四页。展示数据的图表出现在讨论部分第十七页，共五十四页。展示数据的图表出现在讨论部分第十八页，共五十四页。5. Discussion5.1. Ages of mineralization5.2.

12、Sources of ore-forming components5.3. Ore precipitation mechanisms5.4. Ore genesis矿床类型不等于矿床成因:Ore genesis: Based on the geological and geochemical characteristics, this mineral deposit is considered to be a MVT deposit. 把矿床成因和矿床类型混肴第十九页，共五十四页。讨论部分没有与引言呼应，没有以事实为依据Introduction: This paper aims to unde

13、rstand the mineralization conditions and processes of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit, through detailed field, petrographic, stable isotope and fluid inclusions studies.Discussion: In this section we will focus on the origins of gold deposits in southwestern New Brunswick, especially on the role th

14、at crustal evolution may have played in mineralization.第二十页，共五十四页。讨论部分把在引言部分说过的话又说一遍Introduction: The origin of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit has not been well understood. Some researchers believe it formed from magmatic fluids, whereas others thought .Discussion: The origin of the Poplar Mountai

15、n gold deposit has not been well understood. Some researchers believe it formed from magmatic fluids, whereas others thought .第二十一页，共五十四页。讨论部分与结果部分小标题重复2. Results2.1 Oxygen isotopes2.2 Carbon isotopes2.3 Fluid inclusions3. Discussion3.1 Oxygen isotopes3.2 Carbon isotopes3.3 Fluid inclusions3. Discus

16、sion3.1 Sources of mineralizing fluids3.2 Ore precipitation mechanisms第二十二页，共五十四页。图例说明没有直接标在图例旁边第二十三页，共五十四页。参考文献格式没按要求作者没列全错字太多名字缩写不统一期刊名称缩写或不缩写不统一卷号及页码格式不统一多余的空格第二十四页，共五十四页。英文地质论文写作的常见问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题其它问题投稿注意问题第二十五页，共五十四页。“The” 的用与不用Jinding deposit is a large Zn-Pb deposit. There are many Sn deposi

17、ts in the southern Hunan. The Jinding deposit is a large Zn-Pb deposit. There are many Sn deposits in southern Hunan. There are many Sn deposits in the southern Hunan area. 第二十六页，共五十四页。“the”, “a” 及复数的使用要根据上下文而定“The” 含有“那个”或“那些”的意思第二十七页，共五十四页。没有必要的副词VeryDefinitelyObviouslyExtremely Strongly第二十八页，共五十四

18、页。放在句子前面，可有可无的的副词Basically, Actually, If fact, 第二十九页，共五十四页。不客观的肯定语气The deposit must have been formed from fluid mixing. The deposit may have been formed from fluid mixing. The deposit was likely formed from fluid mixing. 第三十页，共五十四页。不可数名词不能用复数This conclusion is supported by many evidences. This concl

19、usion is supported by several lines of evidence. Researches, equipments, 第三十一页，共五十四页。Zircon and zirconsWater and watersWork and works有些词可当可数名词或不可数名词，但意思不同第三十二页，共五十四页。“-” 与“ ”的区别Fault-controlledcm-sizedRegional-scaleIce-melting1020 cmquartzpyrite assemblageNESW trendingFigs. ac 第三十三页，共五十四页。The Huangl

20、ong FormationThe Huanglong and Qiziqiao formationsFormation 还是 formation？The Huanglong formationThe Huanglong and Qiziqiao Formations第三十四页，共五十四页。有些中文专业词汇可译为多个含义不同的英文词汇成矿：Metallogeny; Mineralization测试：Test; Analysis指示：Indicate; Suggest根据：According to; Based on包含：Contain; Include勘探：Prospecting; Explor

21、ation区： District; Area带： Belt; Zone矿体：Ore body; Orebody特征：Features; Characteristics第三十五页，共五十四页。不要用不同的名词描写同一个东西或地方The Shizishan orefield is located in the Lower Yangtze metallogenic belt. There are numerious Mesozoic granitic intrusions in the Shizishan district. Different types of mineralization occ

22、ur in the Shizishan area . The Shizishan deposit is interpreted to have formed from . 第三十六页，共五十四页。“between and ” 和 “from to ” 的区别25333644555677888990The Th values are between 25o and 90oC.The Th values range from 25o to 90oC.第三十七页，共五十四页。空间副词和时间副词Often, frequently, sometimes, occasionally 等表示时间概念的词不能

23、用来描述地质现象出现的普遍性或偶然性。正确的用词应该是 commonly, generally, locally, in places, 等等。Gold often occurs in fractures in quartz, but sometimes it occurs as inclusions in pyrite.Gold commonly occurs in fractures in quartz, but locally it occurs as inclusions in pyrite.第三十八页，共五十四页。避免过长或过短的句子过长的句子容易造成误解。过短的句子给人感觉信息量太

24、少，效率太低。长句短句相结合读起来比较舒服第三十九页，共五十四页。避免主动句和被动句反复交叉使用A number of mineral deposits have been discovered in the study area. Many researchers have studied the mineralogy and geochemistry of the deposits. However, the origin of the deposits has not been well understood.A number of mineral deposits have been

25、discovered in the study area. Many of them have been studied for mineralogy and geochemistry. However, their origin has not been well understood.第四十页，共五十四页。两个句子之间不能用逗号分开The Red Lake gold deposit is located in northwestern Ontario, it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage. The Red Lake g

26、old deposit is located in northwestern Ontario; it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage. The Red Lake gold deposit is located in northwestern Ontario, and it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage. 第四十一页，共五十四页。美式英语与英式英语不可混用Colour vs colorMetre vs meterCentre vs centerVapour

27、 vs vapor第四十二页，共五十四页。英文地质论文写作的常见问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题其它问题投稿注意问题第四十三页，共五十四页。不要用阿拉伯数字开始一个句子145 fluid inclusions were measured for homogenization temperatures, of which 98 were also measured for ice-melting temperature.One hundred and forty-five (145) fluid inclusions were measured for homogenization temper

28、atures, of which 98 were also measured for ice-melting temperature.第四十四页，共五十四页。数据的小数点用的不对The homogenization temperatures of the fluid inclusions range from 100.2o to 190.8oC, and the salinities range from 27.88 to 35.69 wt.% NaCl equivalent.The homogenization temperatures of the fluid inclusions ran

29、ge from 100 to 191oC, and the salinities range from 27.9 to 35.7 wt.% NaCl equivalent.第四十五页，共五十四页。不要用 10-6 做单位The concentrations of Cu and Zn in the porphyry are 33.8 10-6 and 45.6 10-6, respectively.The concentrations of Cu and Zn in the porphyry are 33.8 ppm and 45.6 ppm, respectively.第四十六页，共五十四页。英文地质论文写作的常见问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题其它问题投稿注意问题第四十七页，共五十四页。Submission f