读写任务型写作训练

1、读写任务型写作训练第1页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三读写任务型写作模板 标题第一段:第二段:第三段: 概括所给短文内容要点约30字过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点-理由 约120字总结句 约10字第2页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三标题标题是段落中心思想的精练表达形式。根据所写短文的内容，概括出中心思想然后加以提炼，拟定标题；Is time more valuable than moneyOn SmokingHow to make friendsHappinessIs watching TV a good thing?My view of money

2、/ time / pollutionMy attitude toward building a car factory第3页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三第一段：概括所给短文内容要点注意：利用原文中所给的语言材料，用自己的话来写；概括后的文章意思要通顺，行文要连贯。写作具体方法和要求:第一段概括要做到开门见山: 例如: According to the passage, we knowThis article is mainly aboutThe writer states that2. 第一段概括要抓住要点,语言精练: 第4页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分

3、，星期三 1. A fairly brief restatement, in your own words, of the main contents.2. A simple report back what the writer has said, no comments needed.3. Proper use of words and accurate sentence building.What is a good summary?第5页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三Common errors for a summaryToo brief, Too many 3.

4、Wrong selections 4.Quoting 5.Adding main ideas not expressedthe key details not standing outof key ideasoriginal sentencesvalue judgments of your owndetails,第6页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三第二段:过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点-理由开头用语：I do agree with the authorIn some way, I agree with , butThis opinion sounds right but i

5、s hardly practical.It is definitely not like that. As a matter of fact, From my personal angle aloneIn my opinion,From my personal point of viewAs far as Im concerned 第7页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三第三段最后一段 : 总结句开头用语：In conclusion,In short,To make a long story short,In general,In a word,In belief,On th

6、e whole,All in all,第8页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三Examples:1) All in all, the development of children is not only the responsibility of their parents, but also the responsibility of the whole society.2) In a word, smoking harms yourselves as well as your neighbors, so it should be strictly forbidden.3

7、) In conclusion, we value money but cant put money above everything else.第9页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三二、读写训练第10页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三读写任务阅读下面的短文， 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文Let children learn to judge their own work. A child learning to talk doesnt learn by being corrected all the time; if corrected t

8、oo much, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other peoples. In the same way, children learn to do all the other things. They learn to talk, run, climb, ride a

9、 bicycle by comparing their own behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even fewer chances for him to correct himself. They do it all for him. Teachers act as if the stud

10、ent would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was made to. Soon he becomes dependent on the teacher. Let the student do it himself. Let him work out, with the help of other children if he wants it, what this word mea

11、ns and what the answer is to that problem.写作内容1）概括短文的内容要点， 该部分的字数大约60词左右2）就“学生的学习错误该不该改正”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包括以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约60词左右； a)以英语学习为例，简述你学习过程经常出现的语言错误； b)你是如何看待自己的语言错误； c)你的老师如何对待你的语言错误； d)你对老师的做法持什么看法？为什么？写作要求你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。评分标准 概括的准确性、语言的规范性、内容的合适性以及篇章的连贯性。第11页，

12、共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三读写任务步骤:（一）审读阅读材料寻找作者的论点,论据和结论（二）概括原文观点转述作者的论点，论据和结论（三）提出自己观点赞成或反对（四）论证自己观点用事例论证自己的观点（五） 得出结论 第12页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三审读阅读材料，整理短文说理思路（找出短文的论点，论据和结论）：1.论点：Let children learn to judge their own work.任务（一）审读阅读材料第13页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三2.论据：1). A child learning to tal

13、k doesnt learn by being corrected all the time; if corrected too much, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other peoples. 正面论据2). In the same way, children le

14、arn to do all the other things. They learn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicycle by comparing their won behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. 正面论据3). But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even fewer chances f

15、or him to correct himself. They do it all for him. Teachers act as if the student would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was made to. Soon he becomes dependent on the teacher. 反面论据第14页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三3.

16、结论：Let the student do it himself. Let him work out, with the help of other children if he wants it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem.第15页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三任务（二）概括原文观点-客观简要地转述作者的论点，论据和结论：论点 Let children learn to judge their own work.Let children learn to decide if t

17、hey have any learning mistakes in their work.Childrens learning mistakes should not be corrected by their teachers.The writer says that childrens learning mistakes should not be corrected by their teachers.第16页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三论据1).+2). A child learning to talk doesnt learn by being correct

18、ed all the time; if corrected too much, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other peoples. In the same way, children learn to do all the other things. They le

19、arn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicycle by comparing their own behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. Children learn by comparing their behaviors, including speech, with those of more skilled people. 第17页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三论据3). But in school teachers

20、 never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even fewer chances for him to correct himself. They do it all for him. Teachers act as if the student would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was m

21、ade to. Soon he becomes dependent on the teacher. But in school teachers point out and correct their students mistakes for them too often, making the students dependent on them.第18页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三结论Let the student do it himself. Let him work out, with the help of other children if he want

22、s it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem.So children should learn by correcting their own mistakes and helping each other instead of having their mistakes corrected by their teachers.第19页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三任务（三）提出自己观点 -过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点(赞成或反对)-理由This opinion sounds right

23、 but is hardly practical. In real school learning situations, especially in learning a foreign language like English, without teachers correction all the way, beginners will repeat their mistakes without realizing it.第20页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三任务（四）论证自己观点-用事例论证自己的观点： a)以英语学习为例，简述你学习过程经常出现的语言错误； b

24、)你是如何看待自己的语言错误； c)你的老师如何对待你的语言错误； d)你对老师的做法持什么看法？为什么？I, for example, liked to use words (that are) too formal for a students composition. But.Now,第21页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三任务（五） 得出结论So teachers should be encouraged to correct their students mistakes as soon as possible.第22页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分

25、，星期三Students Mistakes Should Be Corrected By Their Teachers From the passage we know that childrens learning mistakes should be corrected by themselves. Children learn by comparing their behaviors, including their speech, with more skilled people . But in school teachers always point out and correct

26、 their students mistakes, making the students dependent on them. So children should learn by correcting their own mistakes and helping each other instead of having their mistakes corrected by their teachers. ( 65 words) 第23页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三 This opinion sounds right but is hardly practical

27、. As far as Im concerned, in real school learning situations, especially in learning a foreign language like English, without teachers correction all the way, beginners will repeat their mistakes without realizing it. I, for example, liked to use words ( that are ) too formal for a students composit

28、ion. But I never realized it until my teachers repeatedly replaced them with simple words. Now, I can write naturally in simple English. In conclusion, teachers should be encouraged to correct their students mistakes as soon as possible. 第24页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三We Need Teachers Help The author

29、 says that childrens learning mistakes should not be corrected by their teachers . He takes a child learning to talk as an example . And he believes that children would become dependent on the teacher if they were made to correct their mistakes with the teachers help. So children should be allowed t

30、o work out their problems all by themselves. It is definitely not like that. As a matter of fact , without the teachers help we cant make rapid progress. For example, my pronunciation was poor. I used to pronounce the word “ work” as “ worker”. I was worried about it very much. My teacher gave me a

31、lot of drills and I made the right change at last. So you see, what it would be like for us to learn English without teachers !第25页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三Should We Judge by Ourselves? The author argues that children should be allowed to learn to judge their own work. Children learn to do all the

32、things by comparing themselves with others, and make some adjustment slowly. However, once corrected to much, they will lose independence. So students should be encouraged to solve the problems on their own.第26页，共34页，2022年，5月20日，8点2分，星期三 In my opinion, in a way, the author is right. As far as Im con

33、cerned, making language mistakes is inevitable in school. Some of the mistakes, such as forgetting “s” or “ed”, can be easily found and corrected by students. But others, like grammar mistakes, can be corrected by more skilled people like teachers. Generally, I will try to reduce the number of mistakes while my teachers usual