高考英语书面表达图画式作文专题指导-精讲版课件

1、本系列资料简介专题一 2012届高考英语书面表达（图画式作文）专题指导与练习讲评专题二 2012届高考英语书面表达（文字提纲式作文）专题指导与练习讲评专题三 2012届高考英语书面表达（图表式作文）专题指导与练习讲评专题四 2012届高考英语书面表达（开放式作文）专题指导与练习讲评实例二（2011年江苏卷）下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：描述照片内容，如情景、人物、 动作等等；结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。注意：可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所 给提示，作必要的发挥想象；词数150左右。开

2、头已经写好，不计 入总词数；作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.一、确立主题 The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, espec

3、ially from their own children.根据照片和文字说明（包括开头句和照片中的文字），我们可以确立表达的主题是“感恩父母，为妈妈减负”。体裁是议论文。认真看图，结合文字和图画，确立所要表达的主题是什么。二、提炼要点本题提炼要点的关键是结合文字（中英文）看懂照片所反映的内容。人物：小女孩和她的妈妈情景和动作：女儿为回家的妈妈拿包妈妈蹲着；两个人都面带笑容围绕确立的主题，仔细看图，初步列出图中的要点。写好本篇书面表达的关键是处理好题目中的第二点和第三点的要求。因此考生要根据这两点要求首先是结合自身实际的谈感想，其次是举例说明。全文要求字数150个左右，因此在谈感想时要更合理，

4、更具逻辑性的表述自己的观点是十分重要的。举例的过程中，应当注意例子的简洁明了，易于说明问题及应和自己的观点。三、发表感想及举例描述图片：一般来说“描述图片”应该包括人物和事情以及当事人和看到照片的人的感受。 1.遣词人物：a little girl and her working mom事情：The little girl :come to greet her working momhelp to remove the bag from moms shoulder .Mom：kneel down 感受：The little girl: be happyMom: be thankful and

5、delighted We（看照片的人）: be all touched .四、遣词造句2.造句A little girl comes to greet her working mom happily. The little girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder.The mom kneels down.The mom is thankful and delighted.Seeing this ,we are all touched.“联系实际谈感想”可以结合自身实际，说一下，自己有没有做到给父母减负。遣词什么人： my mom and I我

6、的做法（一般是贬义的）:seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels ,always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return造句I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels I always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return.“个人见解”则是根据“我的做法”给出相应的解决方式。这边还可以说一下自己将来准备怎么给父母“

7、减负”遣词Do my best to help with the everyday washing ,bedroom cleaning.try my best to prepare breakfast myself share mothers daily burden .造句I can do my best to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, I try my best to prepare breakfast myself,.I should share mothers daily burden. 连句成篇要过渡自然，对译

8、出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词或词语以使表达连贯，再加上文章开头和结尾的话照顾到文章的首尾呼应。本篇书面表达是典型的“三段式”。第一段题目已经给出，因此我们所要处理的就是第二段和第三段。第二段描述照片内容（如情景、人物、动作）等等。第三段结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想，并举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。五、连句成篇连句成篇1The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom happily. Realizing her mom must be very tired

9、 after a days work ,the little girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder .In response ,the mom kneels down to show how thankful and delighted she feels . 连句成篇2All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could do to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study,

10、 I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. 连句成篇3Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mothers daily burden. 结尾处来一个升华句：Bei

11、ng a good daughter outweighs being a good student.范文评析1（五档）The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mum. Realiz

12、ing her mum must be very tired after a days work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mum kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could do to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in m

13、y own study, I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mothers daily burden. The pi

14、cture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a “good” student. 第一内容要点齐全对照片的描述恰当到位。在“结合自身实际，谈感想，举例说明”中都点到为止，恰到好 处。第二高级词汇较多a touching moment，removefrom，In response，remindsof sth，totally engaged，do my bit，share，convinces me等等。 第三句型结构高级：范文共用了7个句子（不包括已经给出的开头句），全部是复合句。最长的句子为“But

15、, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return.”计31个字，占了整个书面表达字数的三分之一强。非谓语动词用得比较多：touching ，to greet ，Realizing，to remove，to show，to let，have the best，engaged，to help，washing，cleaning，pre

16、pare，so as to share，to be a good daughter等。囊括了非谓语动词所有形式：动词不定式，动词的-ing形式和过去分词。复合句中三大从句“名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句”都有。由此可见：非谓语动词和复合句的运用受到命题专家的青睐。第四行文结构紧凑：关联词（In response，But，or）和过渡句（All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could do to let me have the best.）的使用使得文章行文结构更加紧凑，上下文连贯，信息的准确传递水到渠

17、成。 特别是最后一句更是传神之作。 As is shown in the picture above,the plant is being ruined by too much watering. Perhaps, people do this out of good intentions, but good intentions may not necessarily bring about good results. Like the plant in the picture, children today receive too much care. For example, paren

18、ts tend to do almost everything for their children, from making beds to carrying school bags. By doing this, they are trying to show their love for their children in their best possible way. They believe what they do will make their childrens life easier and better. However, what children really nee

19、d is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that they can grow up to be more independent. Too much water kills a plant, and too much care spoils a child.实例一请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。注意：1.词数150左右。2.参考词汇：吊销驾照 revoke a driving license 1.认真读图，确立主题结合文字和图画，确立所要表达的主题是什么。四幅图记述了昨天发生在叔叔身上的事，

20、我们可以确立本篇书面表达的主题是：昨天叔叔酒后开车，出事故而受伤，被吊销驾照。2.围绕主题，提炼要点围绕确立的主题，仔细看图，初步列出每幅图的要点。第一幅图：与朋友聚会，喝酒 第二幅图：酒后驾车 第三幅图：出事故受伤 第四幅图：住院 。警察到场处罚。3.合理想象，补出要点将四幅图连起来并结合考虑每幅图中的各个细节进行想 象，将隐藏的要点补出来,使故事连贯。第一幅图：喝酒的地点（可能在朋友家，也可能在小酒馆），根据喝酒的地点确定是谁邀请谁。可能因为高兴叔叔酒喝多了喝醉了（为下文铺垫）第二幅图：根据他说的话：No problem可以推断：朋友劝他，他没听，坚持驾车回家。第三幅图：酒后驾车，可以想象

21、开车的情况：蜿蜒向前，撞树出事故。根据第四幅图可推断他没有死而是受了伤。警察到现场，将他送往医院。第四幅图：因伤势严重要住院几天；警察对他处罚吊销驾照。4.确定时态，译出要点确定表达时所用的正确时态，将围绕主题初选出的要点和经过合理想象补出的要点翻译出来。本篇书面表达是记述的昨天发生在叔叔身上的事，故用过去时态来表达。 第一幅图：Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends.He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers.As a result he got drunk.

22、第二幅图：After the meal,his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home,but he didnt listen to them,saying“No problem” and insisted on doing so.第三幅图：He got into the car and drove away.A few minutes later,he was widing his way in the street.And suddenly his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly inju

23、red but still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital. 第四幅图：He had to stay in hospital for several days because of being seriously injured. He was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked.5.连句成篇，过渡自然对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词或词语以使表达连贯，再加上文章开头和结尾的话照顾到文章的首尾呼应。My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterda