英文满分作文：互联网替代线下的利弊

1、英文总分值作文：互联网替代线下的利弊作文题目：People today can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet. They dont need to do these face to face. Is it a positive or negative development?如今人们可以通过网络购物、办公及与他人沟通，他们不需要面对面做这些事情。 这是一个积极还是消极开展？思路解析这是一道利弊类大作文，讨论的是人们在互联网上购物、办公和交流的利弊。利 弊类的讨论需要明确表达利大于弊、弊大于利或者利弊均等。这道题目

2、看起来不 难，但在审题时需要注意,题目给出了三个限定范围：shop、work和communicate, 因此在具体分析时三个方面都需要提及，否那么回应不全面分数会低。首先来看好处，主要有两方面。一是帮助人们节省了通勤时间。无论是去商场购物、去办公室工作还是和别人见 面沟通，都需要花费一定时间在路程上，如果遭遇拥挤的交通情况，体验感也会 不佳。但是通过网络完成这些事情的话，完全可以节约出这局部时间用来做别的 事情。二是人们通过网络来完成这些事，可以不受到时间和空间的限制。大多数商场在 晚上10点后就不再营业，但是人们通过网络即使在凌晨依然可以下单购买想要 的东西。如果能够通过网络完成工作，意味着

3、人们可以选择在家里或者一个让自 己更舒适的环境进行工作，甚至在完成任务的前提下可以选择自己喜欢的时间段 办公，而不是非得穿着得体在办公室才行。对于那些分居异地的家人和朋友，可 能好几个月甚至一两年才能线下相聚，但是通过网络每天都有机会文字、语音甚 至视频的方式进行交流、维系感情。然后来看各自场景下的坏处。对于购物来说，网购时无法像线下亲眼看到或是直接试用实际的产品，文字、图 片和视频都可能误导甚至欺骗消费者，进而导致消费者买到与预期不符的东西。通过网络工作可能会遇到在办公室没有的各种干扰，比方家中小孩子的吵闹，或 是当事人在缺乏监督的情况下自控力缺乏，进而导致效率低下。同事之间因为无 法见面也

4、会缺少交流沟通，影响团队合作的效率依赖网络沟通，可能会使得人们忽略现实中陪伴的重要性，比方家人间一起吃饭、 游玩或做些别的集体活动，反而让人们产生疏离感。高分范文例如The Internet technology has allowed people to carry out numerous tasks, including shopping, without meeting others face to face. It is by and large a positive development, despite the potential impact on social connec

5、tions.The use of the Internet for daily communication can enhance productivity and yield economic benefits for individuals and companies alike. In this competitive world, efficiency is a lifeline for people and companies, as the faster they complete work, the bigger market they can secure. If they t

6、alk to clients and suppliers online, they can exchange messages easily, confirm details of an order and conduct business efficiently without travelling a long distance to meet each other. Similarly, by placing an order on e-commerce websites and having products delivered to homes, working people can

7、 cut the time for shopping and stay in the office if necessary to finish a project before the deadline. High levels of productivity can put them ahead of competitors and satisfy the needs of customers promptly, thereby winning more contracts and earning more money.Another benefit is that Internet-en

8、abled communication can reduce the need for transport and avoid pollution. The development of online communication tools, such as video chatting, has empowered people to talk to each other in real-time without experiencing any delay. They do not need to visit clients personally or shop in a brick-an

9、d-mortar store to buy what they want. This means that a growing number of people can work remotely or shop in the comfort of their homes, rather than driving or using public transportation to offices or high streets. Emissions from vehicles decline and the environmental problems arising from exhaust

10、 fumes can be mitigated or preventedOn the other hand, if Internet-based communication substitutes for face-to-face meetings, community activities, family life and interpersonal relationships can be under threat. There are some heavy users of telecommunication technology who become increasingly unso

11、ciable, as everything can be virtually carried out online, ranging from discussions of work-related matters to grocery shopping. They may not feel the need to socialise with colleagues or business partners or to communicate with shop attendants of convenience stores around the corner about the lates

12、t news of the neighbourhood. They even miss out the opportunity to enjoy a shopping trip with family, talking about what to buy and choosing gifts for special occasions. Technology may keep some people apart and foster a sense of isolation among them.In conclusion, I would perceive a drop in face-to-face communication as a positive trend given the economic and environmental benefits, although, for some people, they may feel disconnected from other members of community.相关词汇和语法结构yield economic benefi