高考英语读后续写中的对话写作

1、高中英语读后续写中的对话写作一.利用对话描写需要注意的3个原则1.控制对话的比重，对话促进情节的发展，但不能代替故事情节，1到2处即可。即简短+地道+量少。2.对话内容应符合人物性格特点。3.对话内容应紧扣原文主题和中心。不要脱离文章主线，说一些不着边际的话。二.对话的3种表现形式1.对话标签在前She said, I would like to go with you, but I havent finished myhomework. 2.对话标签在后I would like to go with you, but I havent finished my homework. Shesai

2、d.3.对话标签在句子中间I would like to go with you, she said, but I havent finished myhomework. 注意对话标签在后或者在句子中间时（第2，3种情况），如果主语是名词，则可以倒装。而代词不可以倒装（said she是错误的）。I would like to go with you, but Ihavent finished my homework. saidEmily/Emily said.I would like to go with you, said Emily/ Emily said, but I haventfi

3、nished my homework.三、让你的对话标签不平庸的小技巧在对话标签中加入语气，嗓音，情感以及伴随动作，让你的描写更生动传神。1、添加恰当的介词短语表不同语气或嗓音in a/an+形容词+tone；in a/an+形容词+voiceI would love to， said Emily in a pleasant tone.愉悦的语气用的语气如 in a pleasant愉悦的/firm坚定的/rude粗鲁的/sad悲伤的tone也可以用in a tone of +名词的搭配如 in a tone of surprise/curiosity/impatience/regret/co

4、mmand命令/sarcasm讽刺I didnt mean to，she murmured in a low voice.小声地说道用的声音如 in a high /low / sweet/loud/soft /weak voice.I.dont thinkIm right for the part,Ireplied with embarrassment.2、用介词短语或者副词来表达情感I will never do that again，Ianswered firmly坚定地.=Firmly，Ianswered，Iwillnever do that again.可将副词提到句首介词短语有 i

5、n in surprise/shock/sorrow伤心/horror害怕with: with delight /excitement /embarrassment /pride/caution/care/patience/certainty坚定 等等副词有 firmly/excitedly/seriously/sincerely/slowly/regretfully等等3、添加一点动作描写小结在说的同时，可以加入伴随动作，即说话的同时（自己/别人）在做什么，用动作描写来辅助对话。可以用as引导的从句，非谓语，并列谓语以及with的复合结构。（1)Well, said the farmer,

6、as herubbed thesweat of the back of hisneck，此处在说的动作后，紧跟了as引导的状语从句，翻译成一边，一边。他一边擦脖子后面的汗水一边说好啊。(2)I want that one,the boy said,pointingto the little dog= Pointing the litle dog, the boy said,I want that one此处在说的动作后，紧跟了doing的非谓语结构，表伴随。(3)The farmer picked up the dog,knelt downand said in asoft voice,Its

7、 yours now.=The farmer picked up the dog andknelt down,saying,Its yours now.此处是拿起狗，蹲下并温柔地说的三个并列动作，可以用并列谓语，也可以用第二条中的非谓语。(4)With herhead down/With tears in hereyes, she said,Sorry.四、包含情绪的各种各样的说。1.喊叫 shout大喊;scream尖叫;yell大喊;exclaim惊叫（因高兴、愤怒、痛苦、惊讶等发生的喊叫）;cry out喊叫; call喊叫如 He yelled at her，You are an id

8、iot.2.问与答 ask询问; reply回复;answer回答;如She answered in a firm tone，That doesnt matter. 3.建议 propose; suggest; offer如 She offered，How about going to the beach this weekend? 4.其他的说 add补充说道=continue继续说道;retort反驳道; explain解释道;state陈述道; protest抗议道;sob哭诉道;agree同意地说;comfort安慰道;promise承诺道;assure保证道;insist坚持说;an

9、nounce宣布道;mumble/whisper/murmur/grunt嘟囔; stammer/stutter结巴地说如 After a slight pause，she added，Thank you.James comforted her, Dont worry about your son.表示说话的的不同词汇“It was great” criedAmy大声说Ohdear, Amygroaned.IllhavetoseeMrPeck.抱怨What are you doing?snappeda voice behind her厉声喝道Hedgehogs!bawledMr Peck.嚷道

10、Over there, snappedMr Peck, pointing with his nose.Amysnortedgently to the hedgehog.喷响鼻子;What are you talking about?whisperedMrs Harris.低声说Animals,indeed,sniffedMrPeck.Whatsortofanimals?不屑地说“excuse me-”began Amy“and whats more,”Mr Peck cut in,.插话学以致用：1.Mrs Read _ (希尔太太冷静地说), “Take her away to the red room and lock her in there.”2.“我不知道我在做什么,”她笑着说。“I didnt know what I was doing,” she said,_ (laugh).3.“我去给我们拿点咖啡，”她说着朝厨房走去。“Ill get us some coffee,” she said,_ (head) for the kitchen.4. “太好了,”亚历克斯平静地说，专注于他的盘子。“Thats nice,” Al