2021高中英语Unit23ConflictSectionⅦWriting-投诉信教案8

1、2020_2021学年高中英语Unit23ConflictSectionWriting_投诉信教师用书教案北师大版选修82020_2021学年高中英语Unit23ConflictSectionWriting_投诉信教师用书教案北师大版选修8PAGE 2020_2021学年高中英语Unit23ConflictSectionWriting_投诉信教师用书教案北师大版选修8Unit 23 ConflictSection Writing投诉信eq avs4al(文体指导）投诉是人们日常生活中受到欺骗或不合理、不公平的对待时的一种积极有效的反映方式，而写投诉信是人们无法直接陈述或不便于直接陈述时所采取的

2、必要手段。投诉信通常是写给厂家、商店、消费者协会、报界或厂家、商店的上级主管部门，揭发产品质量的低劣、服务态度的糟糕，抱怨不应出现的情况或问题等，以求得解决的信件。写投诉信要实事求是地把问题讲清楚，态度要冷静，要写得有理有据，令人信服。做到有礼貌,不能恶语伤人。写投诉信时要注意以下几点:1.在投诉信件的右上角写投诉人的地址。下一行靠左边写受诉人的地址.2.接着靠左边写礼貌的称呼。3。引出主题.说明投诉原因，给出具体的信息，包括产品名称、销售服务、在何时何地购买物品及物品出现的问题等。附上保证书和收据的复印件。4.给出投诉要点。例如:（1）为什么这一产品的广告有不合实际、错误引导消费者的嫌疑。（

3、2)产品有什么问题.5.说明你的要求。如果没有满足你的要求，清楚地说明你想要进一步采取什么样的行动。6。正式结尾（Formal ending)投诉信的最常见结尾就是：I look forward to hearing from you.7.署名（Signing off)写完后应签名落款，写在结束语的正下方.eq avs4al（亮点句式)Dear.。称呼eq blc rc（avs4alco1(Im writing to you about.。which,I bought from。,Here are the copies of the guarantee，and the receipt.)eq

4、avs4al（开门见山，引出话题。）eq blc rc（avs4alco1(In your advertisement，you，claim that。.,However,the first time I went.。，However,after only one wash，the colour had faded.)说明产品的问题eq blc rc（avs4alco1(When I took.。.back to the shop，the assistant said。,She was not polite to me.。，She behaved in bad manners.。)）eq avs

5、4al(第一次索，赔的遭遇)eq blc rc(avs4alco1(I would like you to refund my ,money.。，Unless I receive a satisfactory, reply I will.，If you cant.。I will。.。)）eq avs4al(明确地提出,你的要求）eq blc rc(avs4alco1（I look forward to hearing from you.,Im waiting for your reply.)）结束语eq avs4al(写作任务）假设你是李宏玉，你的父亲半年前买了一部手机，使用一个月后就坏了，声

6、音太小，并且有噪音,有时候信号中断。你发现尽管机壳是新的，但从多种迹象可以看出那是一部翻新的旧手机.你曾多次找过商店经理,经理说等等看，可是已经等了5个月了。现在你给消费者协会写信，投诉此事，并要求全额赔偿。体裁书信时态一般现在时为主话题手机质量问题人称第一人称为主结构第一段：提出写信的目的；第二段：阐述投诉理由；第三段：阐述投诉遇到的问题。eq avs4al（遣词造句).对接单元词汇1guarantee保证书2receipt 收据3signal 信号4ask sb.to do sth。 要求某人做某事5a full refund 全额退款6look forward to 盼望；期望.巧用单元

7、句式、语法（一)完成句子1Although its cover is new， I think it is an old one that has been rebuilt尽管机壳是新的，我认为这是一部翻新的手机。2We waited for five months, but there was no reply我们等了五个月，但是没有回应.（二）句式升级1Im writing to you about the cellphone.My father bought the cellphone half a year ago。(用定语从句改写句子）Im writing to you about

8、the cellphone which my father bought half a year ago.2Something was wrong with it only a month later。(用强调句改写句子)It was only a month later that something was wrong with it。eq avs4al(妙笔成篇） 【参考范文】Dear Sir,Im writing to you about the cellphone which my father bought half a year ago。Here are the copies of

9、 the guarantee and the receipt.It was only a month later that something was wrong with it.It sounded little with some noise.When my father was calling me，the signal often stopped.Although its cover is new，I think it is an old one that has been rebuilt。I asked the manager about this.He just asked us to wait f